SOTM 2010 - October (Autumn!) - Entry Thread

[JuJuBeez]

^agreed, the white makes it look kind of winter-ish

[Haladflire65]

My first try (not sure what to stick with yet, so I'll just throw this out here)

[ganbaru]

Originally Posted by Cyz

Really nice. If you can, instead of a white light -- how 'bout something orange-ish to give it a little autumn sunset feel? Either way it looks good.

Something more like that ?


I reduced the light and made it more orange-ish. I used thoses white brush more by habitude than anything else. C&C are welcome.

[Cyz]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Something more like that ?


I reduced the light and made it more orange-ish. I used thoses white brush more by habitude than anything else. C&C are welcome.

^ No, I was thinking of something Haladfire used for his sig entry above you.

[Hooves]

Originally Posted by Cyz

^ No, I was thinking of something Haladfire used for his sig entry above you.

I agree, the white seemed a little distracting from the autumn look of the signature.

[Mittwoch]

I made this from scratch only with the girl as a b/w stock [it took me 92 layers to get to this], it might not look like something, but I made a manip and then shrank it and fixed it to be like a signature. It's just my first draft, not final entry.



C & C please 3.

[Suomi]

Originally Posted by Mittwoch

I made this from scratch only with the girl as a b/w stock [it took me 92 layers to get to this], it might not look like something, but I made a manip and then shrank it and fixed it to be like a signature. It's just my first draft, not final entry.



C & C please 3.

Ohhh. That is so freaking...wow. That's awesome beastly.

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Something more like that ?


I reduced the light and made it more orange-ish. I used thoses white brush more by habitude than anything else. C&C are welcome.

I like it. However I do agree that something is missing and the light still could be more of an orange rather than an orangeY color.
A quote. I shall help you think of one because I think that;s what it needs.

Originally Posted by Haladflire65

My first try (not sure what to stick with yet, so I'll just throw this out here)

Nice start! Love the render (mooooore cute guys. <3) and the colors, though they may be a bit oversaturated and bright. Perhaps tone it down just a little?
I also like the semi-hidden effects.
Oooooh if you can you should try a fall ish Masha sig...
edi: question about mine. Is it not orange enough?

[Haladflire65]

Thanks for the C&C, Sworn

My ver. 2.

Spoiler for No. 1 for comparion:

[Hooves]

@Haladflire65: Oh you fixed his right shoulder looks alot better to me

[Cyz]

Here's my try for the theme:



^ Ugh, I really hate putting text because I suck at it.

[Suomi]

it's lovely cyz. My only complaint is the s in memories is a little hard to see and the green area on the right.
9.7/10

[milan kyuubi]

V2


c&c? Please

Spoiler for previous version:

[Hooves]

Nice milan kyuubi

C&C: I like how you added the leaves to the newer version. But its a little hard to see them.

[Urei]

Here's my draft... after painful hours of staring at the graphic. Anyways, love any C&C

[Daniel E.]

Originally Posted by Urei

I think it's great.

A little bit more color could help, but that's about it.

My favorite entry so far.

[ganbaru]

@ Haladflire65, it's better to keep his shoulder showing, it was eye-catching, not in a good way.
@ Cyz, as said before the ''s'' of memories is kind of hard to see, I I would try to show more the fall scenery.
@ milan kyuubi, maybe changing the color of the added leafs, I can'T really tell them apart.
@ Urei ,why this color iunsted of a more autumn-like one ?

Originally Posted by Cyz

^ No, I was thinking of something Haladfire used for his sig entry above you.

You where talking about a photo-filter?
My fourth version, C&C are welcome.

EDIT, my 5th version, with a quote from a poem of Edgar Allan Poe:

[Chiu_fan]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

My fourth version, C&C are welcome.

EDIT, my 5th version, with a quote from a poem of Edgar Allan Poe:

I love both the 3rd(clearer image) and 4th(sunset feeling) versions; as for the 5th version, try using a shorter passage, one which captures the essence of autumn maybe?

[Urei]

V.2



Changed the color setup a bit, just to match the autumn feel. Mellowed a bit the color range and lessened the brightness of the violet. Also, the grains are not visible much better which turned out to be an additional bonus of this change. Thanks for all the opinions Any C&C?

Spoiler for Previous Version:

@ganbaru - 5th version is the best though I can see that the glow might prove to be a tad too much for some poeple.
@milan kyuubi - V2 is better though I still have problems with sharpness and the font
@Cyz - I think it looks good but as ganbarou said, the 's' is not visible well enough.

[rikikai]

Originally Posted by Urei

V.2



Changed the color setup a bit, just to match the autumn feel. Mellowed a bit the color range and lessened the brightness of the violet. Also, the grains are not visible much better which turned out to be an additional bonus of this change. Thanks for all the opinions Any C&C?

It's very lovely!
what the real image ?

[milan kyuubi]

Changed the text a little and sharpened the background.

V3