2012-03-16, 07:49 | Link #26141 |
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There's something called suspension of disbelief. It's okay to have unrealistic things now and again. For example:
Irish takes a tentacle from Arachne, remains standing and still had the energy to fight. Later on, a bunch of thugs knock him down with one punch. I just use the suit as a flimsy handwave.
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2012-03-16, 07:55 | Link #26142 |
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Well, my belief is that the looser the suspension the better. Of course that' just my personal preference.
The closest thing to suspension of disbelief would be the guys ability to control I.S., each of which has different process but the same essential element of origin.
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2012-03-16, 08:06 | Link #26146 |
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1. Twincest (established)
2. Romance (not at that point yet) 3. Characted development (admittedly, lack of this) 4. Drama (boy howdy) 5. Mecha (obviously) 6. Techwank (also obvious, sci fi after all) 7. Action (self explanatory) 8. Side plot & Back-stories (war, politic, social and shit like that)
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2012-03-16, 08:11 | Link #26147 |
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Not what I meant. It has:
Clone twins with a psychic connection. A sex change that works perfectly and erases the users memory. Super soldiers Whatever oddity the US world already has and Perverts. You're worried about the suspension? Uh, might wanna check the story.
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2012-03-16, 08:17 | Link #26148 |
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That's why I'm not keen of pulling yet another one without explanation. For one rule of cool and wizard stuff I have to pull wall of text, and I enjoyed every second of it.
The more explanation, if acceptable, the LESS suspension of disbelief it caused. If there's any mistake, then it's a fault of my flawed philosophy.
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2012-03-16, 08:43 | Link #26153 |
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Here' this might give you some tips on romance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9fsd...eature=related
Please watch.
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2012-03-16, 09:09 | Link #26160 |
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If you're talking about barrier void claw, then it'll pass through the fist like paper (unless it has anti-beam mechanism). However in case of Reiryaku Byakuya (explicitly different ability) it'll only neutralize both.
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