Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[OrderNorChaos]

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 6:

Again shadows were running through the castle. Instead of two persons, three were running, one of them carrying a little girl in her arms. With no sight of resistance the rescue was going smoothly.

This is too easy… Where are the guards?

“Wait,” Fate ordered. She had decided to take the little girl in her arms, as she had the enough strength to carry the girl and keep running as if nothing happened.

“What is it Sis?” the princess asked. Although she was royalty, she was as fast as Nanoha, making them not waste time on waiting for her to catch with them.

“We cannot leave through the main door. Paltina soldiers are waiting for us.”

“How do you know that, Lord Fate?” Nanoha asked. Again the valkyrie was showing signs of omniscient.

“There.” she said as she signaled a wall. Looking at the wall, there were only four words there, but the message was understandable.

A…bu…h

A terran mage must have placed this message. …So none of the myrmidons survived?

“If we try to leave through the front, the soldiers will attack us. Since we don’t know how many they are, we can’t be sure if we can take them all. There is the possibility of going through the underground passage, but we don’t know if that is a safe route,” Fate stated.

“What should we do then Sis?”Alicia asked. Nanoha noticed that the princess was calm, something that she didn’t expected from her.

Has she been in this kind of situation before?

“Lord Fate,” a voice was heard, “you are alright” In the other end of the aisle, two myrmidons were staring directly at them. One had red hair and blue eyes, the other had pink hair and blue eyes.

“Erio, Caro you survived,” the knight happily said as they got nearer.

“Lady Takamachi,” the pink haired myrmidon hugged the knight.

They were here? How could I not notice… oh right I was sleepy.

“Were you with the others?” Fate asked to Erio

“No, we were returning from the library. We saw your silhouettes and decided to follow you.” He redirected to the princess “Apologies for not introducing myself princess, I am Erio Mondial, myrmidon of the Holy Church of the Goddess.” He bowed to the princess.

“Let’s leave introductions for later,” the princess said, as she saw that the pink haired got out of her embrace and opened her mouth. “So what are we going to do Sis?”

Spoiler for Decision 6:

A) We try to go through the front

B)We take our chances with the underground passage

Spoiler for R/S:

Erio and Caro have been added to the R/S

Yuuno 5
Fate 3
Alicia 2
Erio 2
Caro 4

Big, green. Continue sleeping now

I choose B

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Laith

Spoiler for Esperando:

Nanoha Takamachi es una muchacha de apenas dieciséis años. Su cabello café y largo era lo que mas se notaba a simple vista, sus ojos azules miraban al cielo desde la azotea de la escuela. Estaba aburrida, ya que esperaba que ella llegara.

- ¿Cuánto mas va a tardar? – se preguntaba a si misma. No era raro que ella la hiciera esperar unos cuantos minutos, pero ya había pasado bastante tiempo. Nanoha no era una persona impaciente, cierto hacia las cosas un poco deprisa y tal vez se ponía ansiosa si las cosas no estaban cuando ella lo espera, pero cuando se trataba de ella, Nanoha solía esperar mucho mas de lo normal, pero eso no significaba que la esperaría todo el día.

El reloj marcaba las tres cuarenta y cinco de la tarde. Si su memoria no le fallaba, ella había estado esperando por aproximadamente cuarenta minutos.

- ¿Qué tanto espera? – La impaciencia empezaba a invadir a Nanoha. No era común que ella la hiciera esperar demasiado.

Minutos pasaron y ella aun no llegaba. Volvió a mirar su reloj, las cuatro en punto.

-Ya estuvo – dijo Nanoha desesperada –. Me voy – Levantándose de su cómodo lugar, Nanoha se dirigió a la puerta hacia las escaleras cuando esta se abrió. Una rubia de ojos rojos aparecio detrás de esta. La rubia jadeaba, indicando que había corrido desde donde quiera que ella viniera.

-Lo… siento – dijo ella entrecortadamente –. Hayate… me necesitaba… - En sus ojos se veía la culpa de haberla hecho esperar –. Perdón – Ella inclino su cabeza en gesto de disculpa.

Toda la impaciencia, frustración y enojo que Nanoha tenia en ese momento desapareció como por arte de magia, o mejor dicho, por culpa de la ternura de la persona que estaba en frente suyo.

-No te preocupes Fate – Nanoha dijo con una sonrisa –. No tardaste mucho – Era una mentira pero eso no le importaba a Nanoha. Después de todo la espera siempre trae recompensas.

- Lo siento, lo siento – Ella repetía sin importar que Nanoha la había perdonado. Sabiendo que ella seguiría así, Nanoha tomo la barbilla de ella entre su mano y, levantando su cara, unió sus labios con los de ella, haciendo que esta guardara silencio. Segundos, que le parecieron minutos a Nanoha, pasaron y se separaron. Ella se había sonrojado gracias a la acción de Nanoha

- Ves – Nanoha sonrió –. No hay problema – Sus manos se deslizaron por la cintura de ella. Ella sintió como tímidamente, los brazos de ella rodearon su cuello.
Esperar siempre valía la pena.

Explanation later
Translation later
Sleeping now

¿Qué es esto? ¿fanfiction en español? Me pregunto si lo habrás escrito tú (queriendo decir que sabes el idioma), o si te lo habrá encomendado alguien...
De todas formas, creo que es una tierna escena, no me esperaba el beso del final. Quedó muy bien. Me encanta leer este clase de cortos ^^

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 6:

Again shadows were running through the castle. Instead of two persons, three were running, one of them carrying a little girl in her arms. With no sight of resistance the rescue was going smoothly.

This is too easy… Where are the guards?

“Wait,” Fate ordered. She had decided to take the little girl in her arms, as she had the enough strength to carry the girl and keep running as if nothing happened.

“What is it Sis?” the princess asked. Although she was royalty, she was as fast as Nanoha, making them not waste time on waiting for her to catch with them.

“We cannot leave through the main door. Paltina soldiers are waiting for us.”

“How do you know that, Lord Fate?” Nanoha asked. Again the valkyrie was showing signs of omniscient.

“There.” she said as she signaled a wall. Looking at the wall, there were only four words there, but the message was understandable.

A…bu…h

A terran mage must have placed this message. …So none of the myrmidons survived?

“If we try to leave through the front, the soldiers will attack us. Since we don’t know how many they are, we can’t be sure if we can take them all. There is the possibility of going through the underground passage, but we don’t know if that is a safe route,” Fate stated.

“What should we do then Sis?”Alicia asked. Nanoha noticed that the princess was calm, something that she didn’t expected from her.

Has she been in this kind of situation before?

“Lord Fate,” a voice was heard, “you are alright” In the other end of the aisle, two myrmidons were staring directly at them. One had red hair and blue eyes, the other had pink hair and blue eyes.

“Erio, Caro you survived,” the knight happily said as they got nearer.

“Lady Takamachi,” the pink haired myrmidon hugged the knight.

They were here? How could I not notice… oh right I was sleepy.

“Were you with the others?” Fate asked to Erio

“No, we were returning from the library. We saw your silhouettes and decided to follow you.” He redirected to the princess “Apologies for not introducing myself princess, I am Erio Mondial, myrmidon of the Holy Church of the Goddess.” He bowed to the princess.

“Let’s leave introductions for later,” the princess said, as she saw that the pink haired got out of her embrace and opened her mouth. “So what are we going to do Sis?”

Spoiler for Decision 6:

A) We try to go through the front

B)We take our chances with the underground passage

Spoiler for R/S:

Erio and Caro have been added to the R/S

Yuuno 5
Fate 3
Alicia 2
Erio 2
Caro 4

Big, green. Continue sleeping now

'A' seems dangerous enough for me, but they're already expecting the fight there so it wouldn't work too well if we were going for the "¡I'm saving your life... again!" scenario.
In the other side, the underground passage seems mysterious, I think that a plot device of the type "being in the wrong place at the wrong time" could happen there, so it seems like the most promising choice. I'm going for B.

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo

[Laith]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

¿Qué es esto? ¿fanfiction en español? Me pregunto si lo habrás escrito tú (queriendo decir que sabes el idioma), o si te lo habrá encomendado alguien...
De todas formas, creo que es una tierna escena, no me esperaba el beso del final. Quedó muy bien. Me encanta leer este clase de cortos ^^

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo

Pues para la sorpresa de muchos, incluyendome, decidi escribir algo en español... para ver si podia escribir en español pero creo fallo horriblemente, y eso q es mi idioma natal.

And as promised the translation. Wanted to know if I could write in spanish but... i guess i fail.

Spoiler for Waiting:

Nanoha Takamachi is a girl of sixteen years old. Her long, brown hair was her most noticeable feature, her blue eyes looking at the sky, from the rooftop of the school. She was bored waiting for her to arrive.

“How long is she going to take?” She asked herself. It was nothing strange that she made her wait a couple of minutes, but to take this long was new. Nanoha was not an impatient person, true she made thing as fast as she could and she got anxious if things weren’t in time, but when in come to her, Nanoha could wait more than the normal, though that didn’t mean she was going to wait all day.
The clock announced the quarter to four. If her memory was correct, she had been waiting for forty five minutes.

“What is she waiting for?” the impatience started to invade Nanoha. It was not common that she made her wait so long.

Minutes passed and she hadn’t arrived. She looked back at her clock, four o’clock.

“That’s it” Nanoha said “I’m leaving” Standing up from her comfortable position, Nanoha started to walk to the door, when it opened. A blonde with red eyes appeared behind this. The blonde panted, indicating that she had ran to arrive as fast as she could.

“So…rry” She said between breaths “Hayate… needed me…” In her eyes the guilt of making her wait could be seen “Sorry” She bowed her head in a gesture of apology.

All the impatience, frustration and anger that Nanoha felt, disappeared magically, or rather, because of the cuteness of the person in front of her.

“Don’t worry Fate” Nanoha smiled at her “You didn’t take much” It was a lie but that didn’t matter to Nanoha. After all rewards came to the one that waits.

“Sorry, Sorry” She repeated, even after Nanoha had forgiven her. Knowing that she was going to keep doing that, Nanoha took her chin in her hand and, raising his face with her, she joined their lips together, making her silent. Seconds later that felt like minutes for Nanoha they separated. She was blushing thanks to Nanoha´s action.

“See” Nanoha said “No problem” Her hands slowly surrounded her waist. Nanoha felt how, shyly, she put her arms around Nanoha´s neck.

Waiting is always worthy.

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Laith

Pues para la sorpresa de muchos, incluyendome, decidi escribir algo en español... para ver si podia escribir en español pero creo fallo horriblemente, y eso q es mi idioma natal.

¿Eh...?

¿Por qué crees que fallas horriblemente? La realización de la idea en un formato de corto me parece perfecta. Si te preocupas por el uso del idioma, salvo un tilde en un "más" me parece que no hay ningún otro error, se lee todo muy fluido y natural. Eso es más de lo que normalmente se le puede pedir a tu fic promedio de la sección en español de ff.net, así que felicitaciones por animarte a escribir esto y que te haya resultado tan bien. A mí me encantó.

No seas tan autoflagelante y sigue escribiendo como lo has estado haciendo hasta ahora, te aseguro que lo haces bien.

Take care and keep smiling

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 6:

Again shadows were running through the castle. Instead of two persons, three were running, one of them carrying a little girl in her arms. With no sight of resistance the rescue was going smoothly.

This is too easy… Where are the guards?

“Wait,” Fate ordered. She had decided to take the little girl in her arms, as she had the enough strength to carry the girl and keep running as if nothing happened.

“What is it Sis?” the princess asked. Although she was royalty, she was as fast as Nanoha, making them not waste time on waiting for her to catch with them.

“We cannot leave through the main door. Paltina soldiers are waiting for us.”

“How do you know that, Lord Fate?” Nanoha asked. Again the valkyrie was showing signs of omniscient.

“There.” she said as she signaled a wall. Looking at the wall, there were only four words there, but the message was understandable.

A…bu…h

A terran mage must have placed this message. …So none of the myrmidons survived?

“If we try to leave through the front, the soldiers will attack us. Since we don’t know how many they are, we can’t be sure if we can take them all. There is the possibility of going through the underground passage, but we don’t know if that is a safe route,” Fate stated.

“What should we do then Sis?”Alicia asked. Nanoha noticed that the princess was calm, something that she didn’t expected from her.

Has she been in this kind of situation before?

“Lord Fate,” a voice was heard, “you are alright” In the other end of the aisle, two myrmidons were staring directly at them. One had red hair and blue eyes, the other had pink hair and blue eyes.

“Erio, Caro you survived,” the knight happily said as they got nearer.

“Lady Takamachi,” the pink haired myrmidon hugged the knight.

They were here? How could I not notice… oh right I was sleepy.

“Were you with the others?” Fate asked to Erio

“No, we were returning from the library. We saw your silhouettes and decided to follow you.” He redirected to the princess “Apologies for not introducing myself princess, I am Erio Mondial, myrmidon of the Holy Church of the Goddess.” He bowed to the princess.

“Let’s leave introductions for later,” the princess said, as she saw that the pink haired got out of her embrace and opened her mouth. “So what are we going to do Sis?”

Spoiler for Decision 6:

A) We try to go through the front

B)We take our chances with the underground passage

Spoiler for R/S:

Erio and Caro have been added to the R/S

Yuuno 5
Fate 3
Alicia 2
Erio 2
Caro 4

Big, green. Continue sleeping now

B sounds more fun.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 6:

Again shadows were running through the castle. Instead of two persons, three were running, one of them carrying a little girl in her arms. With no sight of resistance the rescue was going smoothly.

This is too easy… Where are the guards?

“Wait,” Fate ordered. She had decided to take the little girl in her arms, as she had the enough strength to carry the girl and keep running as if nothing happened.

“What is it Sis?” the princess asked. Although she was royalty, she was as fast as Nanoha, making them not waste time on waiting for her to catch with them.

“We cannot leave through the main door. Paltina soldiers are waiting for us.”

“How do you know that, Lord Fate?” Nanoha asked. Again the valkyrie was showing signs of omniscient.

“There.” she said as she signaled a wall. Looking at the wall, there were only four words there, but the message was understandable.

A…bu…h

A terran mage must have placed this message. …So none of the myrmidons survived?

“If we try to leave through the front, the soldiers will attack us. Since we don’t know how many they are, we can’t be sure if we can take them all. There is the possibility of going through the underground passage, but we don’t know if that is a safe route,” Fate stated.

“What should we do then Sis?”Alicia asked. Nanoha noticed that the princess was calm, something that she didn’t expected from her.

Has she been in this kind of situation before?

“Lord Fate,” a voice was heard, “you are alright” In the other end of the aisle, two myrmidons were staring directly at them. One had red hair and blue eyes, the other had pink hair and blue eyes.

“Erio, Caro you survived,” the knight happily said as they got nearer.

“Lady Takamachi,” the pink haired myrmidon hugged the knight.

They were here? How could I not notice… oh right I was sleepy.

“Were you with the others?” Fate asked to Erio

“No, we were returning from the library. We saw your silhouettes and decided to follow you.” He redirected to the princess “Apologies for not introducing myself princess, I am Erio Mondial, myrmidon of the Holy Church of the Goddess.” He bowed to the princess.

“Let’s leave introductions for later,” the princess said, as she saw that the pink haired got out of her embrace and opened her mouth. “So what are we going to do Sis?”

Spoiler for Decision 6:

A) We try to go through the front

B)We take our chances with the underground passage

Spoiler for R/S:

Erio and Caro have been added to the R/S

Yuuno 5
Fate 3
Alicia 2
Erio 2
Caro 4

Big, green. Continue sleeping now

B is my choice!

Maybe these might be useful for coming up with ideas for stories?

Spoiler for ...:

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Previously On Secret Ambition

Secret Ambition
Scene 7

Spoiler for Scene 7:

“Yes!”

Hayate looked startled then she clapped her hands together, “Perfect! With two recruiters we'll get twice the members!”

“R-Recruiters?”

“Well yeah we can't have a club with only two members silly. We need at least 4.”

“EH?!?!”

“Go forth and get us members!”

“Y-yes Yagami-san.”

“Not Yagami-san. BOSS!”

“Yes... boss...”


1st vi- potential member, Nanoha Takamachi

I found Nanoha on the roof, eating lunch mercifully alone. “Ah Nanoha-san.”

“Hmm? Ah Yuuno-kun,” She smiled up at me, “Can I help you?”

“I was wondering,” I drew circles with my foot, suddenly realizing it was like I was about to ask her out. “Uh... I mean... Are you in any clubs?”

Nanoha took a bite of her rice and looked thoughtful, “Hm...” She waved her chop sticks in the air. “Nope. Nya ha ha, actually this friday's the dead line before they put me in the... study bug club,” she looked off to the side as if this was the equivalent of the tell the world you have nothing better to do club.

“Then will you... will you join Yagami-san's cosplay club with me!”

“Hayate-chan's? Mm,” Nanoha nodded. “Sounds fun.”

My smile grew against my own will. “Great I'll see you later then!” I stopped at the door. “But Nanoha-san...”

“Yes?”

“Where are Arisa and Suzuka?”

Nanoha looked up, baring a face I recognized but couldn't place, “they're... getting lunch.”

I nodded and started down, it was then that it hit me. Her face had been the same as Fate's and the Yagami's when I had asked them questions too.


2nd vi- potential member, Fate Testarossa

I found Fate inside our class room where she was eating her lunch by the window. She looked up when I entered. “Harlaown-san?”

“Testarossa-san I know we don't know each other very well but I was wondering if you were in a club already.” I must have looked like a freak asking her like this.

“No,” Fate shook her head, “I'll probably join a club as a ghost member.”

“If you don't have a club then... why not join the Cosplay club.”

Fate turned bright red, “c-cosplay... I don't know. I'd be pretty embarrassed.”

“Testarossa-san...” I approached her desk, “Please... I promise I won't let Hayate do anything to you, you don't want.”

She made a small noise, “You're so embarrassing.”

I looked down, completely red, rubbing the back of my head, “Sorry about that... I-I didn't mean-”

Fate started to giggle, “it's really cute.” She made another noise and looked down.

That made me even more embarrassed so we were both staring at the floor.

She was the one to break the silence, “I-I think I'd like that...”

“Eh?” I looked up to find her still looking at the ground.

“I'd like to be around you more-” She quickly realized what she was saying and corrected it, “And Takamachi-san and Yagami-san so...” She looked up at me, “I accept your offer.”

“Thank you I'll see you later then?”

Fate nodded, “Yeah.”

As I left I realized that she had looked happy and still managed not to smile.


~~

Hayate high fived me as I told her my progress. “We have enough for a club now.” In her eagerness she tackled me, well she more of tackled me. And the fact of the mater was I was incapable of supporting her weight so we toppled over, right into classic harem anime position one.

She was on top of me, well more like holding herself over me, as she had managed to release me the second she realized we were falling. However, she hadn't stopped her face from stopping just inches from my own.

“We should probably move...” Hayate said after a minute.

“Y-Yeah,” I was finding it really really hard to think with Hayate over me. “I think... you have to move first.”

“Oh yeah,” she jumped up just missing stepping on me. She offered a hand to me, helping me stand.

“So I'll see you later,” I couldn't look her in the eye.

“Yeah bye!” She ran off.

I hit my head against the wall, I was such a moron.

~~~

I didn't talk to anyone much for the rest of the day, club activities wouldn't start 'til later in the week so I was still free after school, however I simply went home and went through the rest of my day tiredly.

~~

“Oi... Yunno! Wakey wakey!”

I cracked open an eye, “Chrono-nii...? It's midnight. And get that out of my eyes.”

Chrono waggled the flashlight in front of me before moving it. “Milk. Get it.”

“Why me?”

“'Cause you're the youngest,” Chrono yawned, “Now go forth and get.”

I was such a push over. “Yeah yeah. I'll get it.”

~~

My trip to the convenience store was mercifully uneventful. I didn't want any trouble in the middle of the night. All I wanted was to sleep. Armed with my milk I made my way home down the barely lit street.

“Yuuno~”

My ear twitched, “What was that?” I looked around.

“Yuuno~”

“Come on out!” I looked around the empty street.

“He he he.” The sound of sweeping fabric hit my ears.

I turned. There was a girl behind me, standing under a lamp post. Her long hair was done up in long pigtails but other then that there was no mistaking her. “Testarossa-san?”

She giggled and came forward, leaving the light behind her, “'Testarossa-san' is my sister. Yuu~no~” She looked like Fate but she certainly didn't act like her at all. Not even a little. The girl with Fate's face came closer to me, and though my every instinct told me to run far and fast I couldn't move an inch. She stopped just before out bodies would have touched, “You, can call me,” She leaned up, just brushing my ear, “A-li-ci-a.”

The next thing she did was so fast I didn't have a moment to react. This girl, Alicia moved down slightly and pressed our lips together.

The milk hit the ground.

A. Okay... hot girl kissing me... this may not be so bad...
B. Woah woah woah! Gotta stop this! Gotta stop this now!
C. I'll just calmly explain that we really shouldn't be doing this... I just have to stop her...

Spoiler for Relationships:

Relationships:
Nanoha: 3- Friendship~
Fate: 2- Friends
Hayate: 3- ... Yuuno-kun...
And

Spoiler for Unlocked:

Alicia: Unlocked!
Alicia: 4- So this is Yuuno yum :3

Note that there are still only 3 paths ;3
Friendship:
Vice: 5- Best buddehs forevah!
Griffith: 2- Friendship
Zafira: 10 - brothers can't be lowered
Chrono: 10 - Brothers can't be lowered
Arisa: -3 He's in Nanoha's way!
Suzuka: 0 Well he looks like a nice boy
Vita: -4 Hayate's mine!
Signum: 0 mm...
Shamal: 1 Awww he's adorable!
Arf: 0 I don't trust him around Fate just yet.

In case you're wondering all the girls got a point that round ^^;; And by the way there were two other scenes that could have come at the end of this scene had other choices been made along the way (though that doesn't mean they won't happen... and I'm saying no more then that)

Oh god. Yuuno/Alicia makeoutage is adorable but I have a feeling it'll end badly if we don't end it RIGHT NOW. Soooo...

I vote C because B has no votes, so I gotta get this to end.

[Tempy]

I too vote for C.

[TheShinySword]

Current votes
A: IIIII
C:III
2 hours til closing
A cause I'm a rebel

[Evil Rick]

Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union, Chapter 11

Well, here it is, another chapter of NROTU, now this is to shortest chapter at the moment (28 pages) but it's also probably one of the most importantas on the fic, yes, in this chapter, the fate of Vita is revealed, plus other important thing, so, don't be tricky don't check all the pages before start reading it, otherwise you'll spoil a great end

Spoiler for Intro:

Spoiler for Preview:

Full download link

http://www.badongo.com/file/11376666

Enjoy!

Oh, one more thing, in the next chapter, another revelation will be made, in chapter 12 of NROTU, the true identiny of the hodded woman who asists the Emperor (as I said, a character that you all know very well XP)

NOTE: Oh, yeah, the surprise on this chapter is one of the things I had planed since I started this project, coments will be really apreciated for this chapter, Thanks in advice

[illidan182]

I vote for C Tss... i'm not too late am I?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

I vote for C Tss... i'm not too late am I?

not at all

Vote

A: IIIII
B:
C: IIII

1 hour and 30 minutes left

[Sassy_Bread]

Hope I'm not too late!

C~! Damn, Yuuno is fickle minded. Better stop that! XD

And B. The kids are gonna die if they go through the front.

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

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Maybe these might be useful for coming up with ideas for stories?

Spoiler for ...:

I think it would be better if you wrote those yourself....OR asked Satashi to do them.

[Keroko]

I'm actually working on one with the Little Knight Mother pic. I'm just a tad swamped at the moment to actually work work on it. >_<

[TheShinySword]

Voting's closed it seems we have another tie

A: IIIII
C: IIIII

My choice

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Hmm...crack...crack... >_>

Spoiler:

Nanoha knelt down next to the small table and groaned. Her head was quick to come to rest on the smooth, laminated surface as another painful groan escaped her throat. The injury on her left arm wasn't helping either. A moment of distraction came from the sound of the door opening followed by footsteps.

"Are you doing better, Nanoha?" A moan was given as an answer. "Let me take a look at your arm."

The girl offered no resistance as Fate removed her long-sleeved shirt to get at the injury. A quick look showed it to be more of a large bruise with a few scratches, nothing too serious. A shiver went through Nanoha as the air conditioner kicked on again. Even though they both had their shirts off leaving their tops covered by the short undershirts, Nanoha was the only one who seemed to notice the temperature drop.

She watched as her friend reached into the first aid kit she brought with her and pulled out a roll of bandages. The white material was wrapped around her injury, with Fate using her teeth to hold onto one end. When she was satisfied that she had protected the damaged skin from further infection, the blond gave the ends one last tug to apply a bit of pressure. Nanoha winced from the sudden pain but said nothing as Fate tied off the bandage for the moment.

"Is that better, Nanoha?"

"Un, thanks Fate-chan. Although this is kinda your fault..."

The blond pouted, "Whatever do you mean?"

"I still can't believe you won that game! And how did you ever think of such a thing?"

"But you looked so cute, Nanoha. And all those girls seemed to agree, too."

"I still can't believe you had me pretend to be a boy..."

Fate grinned, recalling the horde of girls chasing after her 'male' friend while exclaiming how handsome and cute 'he' was. Though that also led to her current injury. Keeping 'his' eyes on the girls chasing 'him' rather than the approaching stairs was not a very good idea.

With another groan of pain, Nanoha pulls the thin strap of her top from her shoulder off. She gestures to the bandages wrapped around her chest. "Can I take these off now? Can't believe you made me bind my chest, too..."

The blond chuckled. "But we had to go for realism."

"Just wait till you have to and see how much you like it."

"You mean if you win. And it was only for a few hours. It's not like it would stunt your growth."

Nanoha sighed. "Just help me take these off..."

Kekekeke

*RUNZ*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Hmm...crack...crack... >_>

Spoiler:

Nanoha knelt down next to the small table and groaned. Her head was quick to come to rest on the smooth, laminated surface as another painful groan escaped her throat. The injury on her left arm wasn't helping either. A moment of distraction came from the sound of the door opening followed by footsteps.

"Are you doing better, Nanoha?" A moan was given as an answer. "Let me take a look at your arm."

The girl offered no resistance as Fate removed her long-sleeved shirt to get at the injury. A quick look showed it to be more of a large bruise with a few scratches, nothing too serious. A shiver went through Nanoha as the air conditioner kicked on again. Even though they both had their shirts off leaving their tops covered by the short undershirts, Nanoha was the only one who seemed to notice the temperature drop.

She watched as her friend reached into the first aid kit she brought with her and pulled out a roll of bandages. The white material was wrapped around her injury, with Fate using her teeth to hold onto one end. When she was satisfied that she had protected the damaged skin from further infection, the blond gave the ends one last tug to apply a bit of pressure. Nanoha winced from the sudden pain but said nothing as Fate tied off the bandage for the moment.

"Is that better, Nanoha?"

"Un, thanks Fate-chan. Although this is kinda your fault..."

The blond pouted, "Whatever do you mean?"

"I still can't believe you won that game! And how did you ever think of such a thing?"

"But you looked so cute, Nanoha. And all those girls seemed to agree, too."

"I still can't believe you had me pretend to be a boy..."

Fate grinned, recalling the horde of girls chasing after her 'male' friend while exclaiming how handsome and cute 'he' was. Though that also led to her current injury. Keeping 'his' eyes on the girls chasing 'him' rather than the approaching stairs was not a very good idea.

With another groan of pain, Nanoha pulls the thin strap of her top from her shoulder off. She gestures to the bandages wrapped around her chest. "Can I take these off now? Can't believe you made me bind my chest, too..."

The blond chuckled. "But we had to go for realism."

"Just wait till you have to and see how much you like it."

"You mean if you win. And it was only for a few hours. It's not like it would stunt your growth."

Nanoha sighed. "Just help me take these off..."

Kekekeke

*RUNZ*

Little did Fate know >.>

5 years later
Nanoha: TT-TT they just won't grow
Fate: Heh...
Nanoha: It's all your fault!
Fate: >.> oops?

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Little did Fate know >.>

5 years later
Nanoha: TT-TT they just won't grow
Fate: Heh...
Nanoha: It's all your fault!
Fate: >.> oops?

So Fate likes DFC?

>_>

<_<

Elsewhere...

Yuuno: How can she look better than me as a guy?! ;_;

[NorthernFallout]

Extremely random and not really related to anything.
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"What we've got here is a Mil Mi-24 capable of gunning you down in under a sec with its specially designed mana converting gattling gun, capable of shooting hundred spheres per second. It's also equipeed with a mana destroyer upgrade which can blow up a house in a blink.
You two will be flying this thing and your lives depend on it. Treat it as you would an old friend, with honor and compassion. Take down these damn infected things and get back here in one piece.
That's all, you'll be leaving in fifteen minutes."

"Yes, sir!"

Death Rage
Mechanical Imports sponsored by USSR

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

So Fate likes DFC?

>_>

<_<

Elsewhere...

Yuuno: How can she look better than me as a guy?! ;_;

*Yuuno and Nanoha walk down the street*
Random woman: Oh what a handsome couple
Yuuno: A-ah
RW: What a handsome young man *looks at Nanoha*
Nanoha:...
RW: And a pretty Young lady
Yuuno: ...
RW: *walks off*
Yuuno+Nanoha: *Both find corners to mope about their issues in*

Shesh between Nanoha's complex about her chest and Yuuno's complex about his bishieness they'd be perfect together ^^;;;;

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