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ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-01, 07:43

Hence I said the secondary girls will be paired with secondary Guys. Ichika and Rito still have their harem, albeit reduced in number. Ren (and Charles if he exist) isn't left behind too much either.

The guys and girls between the two verse has certain pattern of relationship between them, with the monorail actually being the visualization of crossover, that was the only thing separated the two institute.

Bokke means "Straight man". Usually apply in a comedic situation between two people or more.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 07:43

@eras: I broke out again! From the courthouse. Apparently Edgeworth wasn't willing that I share the details of his little tryst with "li'l" Franziska.

Don't pair honne with the perverted monkey dude! D:

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 07:43

@ Stratos - it's translated to straight man in english. Basically, someone says something stupid, and he rebuts with either words or force.

@ Senpai - You pairing up Dan with anyone other than Utsuho?

@ Demi - I thought he was with Kay Faraday? Ohhh, she's gonna be pissed

Anyway, I'm already contacting Gumshoe as we speak and he's on the way there.

HasuMasu · 2012-02-01, 07:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

The heck's a "Bokke"....?

The butt-monkey in a manzai performance.

EDIT: I think Eratas is talking about the Tsukkomi...

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 07:47

^ = the truth

Yachiyo · 2012-02-01, 07:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by detective-san

the butt-monkey in a manzai performance.

edit: I think eratas is talking about the tsukkomi...

holy @!#!@$#*(&!@(#&$!@##)(@*&$(*@#&%()!*&@#)(*&!@)$&!@ #$)(!&@$)(!@&#)(~!!!!!!

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 07:50

@eras: Gumshoe is a pretty cool guy. Did you know he likes jelly roles? Kay doesn't know everything about milesXD

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 07:50

@ Demi - Is Gumshoe there yet

Side note - When will you post the Gospel fic?

SIde note 2 - But Kay managed to do the one thing nobody else could: She blew her nose on Edgeworth's caravat and lived to tell about it! Also, she made Manfred Von Karma feel bad

Yachiyo · 2012-02-01, 07:52

I'm off to bed now. see ya guys!

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 07:54

@eras: Yeah, he's reding your post right now actually. Wait, he just left to get some more coffee beans.

The Gospel fic seems like a far off thing. I have a lot to deal with right now to be honest.

Manfred was always a softy. He just never showed it to anyone but little children

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 07:54

See ya later

@ Demi - Keep you Ramen away from him! He's been getting less and less food with every game

Side note - Why don't you post the prologue you already have? It has a good fight scene.

Side note - Yeah, I'm sure he felt real kind when he shot Edgeworth's dad because of a freaking penalty

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-01, 08:00

Saruyama and Honne? too Far-fetched. He's either into a tomboy girl, or a sadistic girl.
There's two Tomboyish girl in the I.S.A. side: Kiyoka and Shizune, pick your poison.
On aside note, Dan & Utsuho remains unchanged, though there will be 'distraction'.

Every guy mentioned will undergo an enhancement in attractiveness, performance, or both.

Third person POV be damned, it's hard to write in that form

Spoiler for LOL:

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 08:03

Why not just do First person? I'm switching to first person for FI. I have to be careful at who to switch to, though. If someone's lying, the POV can't be on them.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 08:05

@eras: It's cause Ema Skye's been taking all the budget for her snacks.

not that confident yet.

Little kids eras, little kids.

@zero: Thank you!

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 08:12

@ Demi - Are you sure it wasn't Franziska being her usual self and cutting his pay? (again).

Just try it. Fi was made when I was sleep deprived and practically copy pasted from before. Now look what happened.

Oh, so 10 year old Edgeworth being implicated for murder doesn't count as not being nice to a kid? Also, he's the main bad guy for the ace attorney series since he dicked over the Fey's (Causing their collapse and making Complete monster Dahlia), the Edgeworth's, and many people in his revenge even if he didn't mean to.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 08:19

Gumshoe said that the daily donuts were now all choco crunchies. Just as chocolatey, not as filling.

Meh, fine I'll give it a go

edgeworth grew up in 10 years.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 08:25

Be sure to give it a good summary

Make sure to make the Silverio Gospel the focus.

Really? He planned to do this while Edgeworth was still a child and the only reason he waited was fro dramatic Irony. Also, he made Edgeworth think he killed his dad (He knows this). Taking him down in Case 4 and Cross examining him in Investigations (Extremely hard in japanese:uhoh) was very satisfying

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 08:56

trial summary

:
Certain things seem inconsequential. A failed mission brings about a fateful meeting. An angel's fall lures and falls to another world. The curtain raises and both are hunted as existences too dangerous to leave loose.

Meh, he still took care of the kid.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-01, 09:06

Could you be a bit less metaphorical? Go for something like "After their final fight, was the Silverio Gospel truly beaten?" Etc etc.

Side note - Something's wrong with the archive right now. I can't access FI chapter 4 from the main page

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-01, 09:15

Mmmm dunno how

2012-02-01, 07:43	Link #20421
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hence I said the secondary girls will be paired with secondary Guys. Ichika and Rito still have their harem, albeit reduced in number. Ren (and Charles if he exist) isn't left behind too much either. The guys and girls between the two verse has certain pattern of relationship between them, with the monorail actually being the visualization of crossover, that was the only thing separated the two institute. Bokke means "Straight man". Usually apply in a comedic situation between two people or more. __________________

2012-02-01, 07:43	Link #20423
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Stratos - it's translated to straight man in english. Basically, someone says something stupid, and he rebuts with either words or force. @ Senpai - You pairing up Dan with anyone other than Utsuho? @ Demi - I thought he was with Kay Faraday? Ohhh, she's gonna be pissed Anyway, I'm already contacting Gumshoe as we speak and he's on the way there. __________________

2012-02-01, 07:50	Link #20428
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - Is Gumshoe there yet Side note - When will you post the Gospel fic? SIde note 2 - But Kay managed to do the one thing nobody else could: She blew her nose on Edgeworth's caravat and lived to tell about it! Also, she made Manfred Von Karma feel bad __________________

2012-02-01, 07:52	Link #20429
Yachiyo ~`Seito Kaichō`~ Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: ~`Afterlife`~	I'm off to bed now. see ya guys! __________________

2012-02-01, 07:54	Link #20431
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	See ya later @ Demi - Keep you Ramen away from him! He's been getting less and less food with every game Side note - Why don't you post the prologue you already have? It has a good fight scene. Side note - Yeah, I'm sure he felt real kind when he shot Edgeworth's dad because of a freaking penalty __________________

2012-02-01, 07:43	Link #20422
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@eras: I broke out again! From the courthouse. Apparently Edgeworth wasn't willing that I share the details of his little tryst with "li'l" Franziska. Don't pair honne with the perverted monkey dude! D:

2012-02-01, 07:47	Link #20425
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	^ = the truth

2012-02-01, 07:50	Link #20427
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@eras: Gumshoe is a pretty cool guy. Did you know he likes jelly roles? Kay doesn't know everything about milesXD

2012-02-01, 07:54	Link #20430
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@eras: Yeah, he's reding your post right now actually. Wait, he just left to get some more coffee beans. The Gospel fic seems like a far off thing. I have a lot to deal with right now to be honest. Manfred was always a softy. He just never showed it to anyone but little children

2012-02-01, 08:00	Link #20432
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Saruyama and Honne? too Far-fetched. He's either into a tomboy girl, or a sadistic girl. There's two Tomboyish girl in the I.S.A. side: Kiyoka and Shizune, pick your poison. On aside note, Dan & Utsuho remains unchanged, though there will be 'distraction'. Every guy mentioned will undergo an enhancement in attractiveness, performance, or both. Third person POV be damned, it's hard to write in that form Spoiler for LOL: Lying on his small-bed, now 15 years old, the boy reminded himself again what happened about two years ago. Sent to a military camp in German, admittedly composed of mostly female (and by no means ordinary female) made him a little traumatized, and devoid of close contact with girls. This in turn, gave him a trouble in case of love life. For him, it’s a great price to pay for incredible fighting prowess. Two years has passed, his physique has grown, yet softened by the peaceful time he spent in his homeland, Japan. He never doubted he would be the laughing stock of his comrades back then. Due to the orders from his father, he spends about three months in Nepal to regain the lost strength, picnic in the Himalaya, as his father said. Doesn’t change anything except made him more fierce, agile and rugged enough that he could swore there’s little boundary between normal human and demons. From the outside look, once can tell he’s just being a little adventurous… that is, after he undergoes reconstructive microsurgeries that heal pretty much 92% of the scar he received. Now, it’s been June, one month into summer, he returned to Japan and resume his new life as first year high school student. He already missed two months due to that, and it’s only due to connection he can resume it without problem. (Considering what kind of training his father dictates in said picnic, one could tell his school life wouldn’t be peaceful either.) Walking down the stair, he was greeted with the superfluous smell of delicious Japanese dish. He wasn’t exactly the best when it comes to judging culinary, but be damned if that doesn’t make most people felt hungry in an instant. Furthermore, one wouldn’t believe that the chef in question is 12-year old daughter of the Yuuki family, Mikan, his sister. “Excellent as always” “Where have you been?” “Just finished taking care of the laundry” he smiled cheerfully, the closest thing to a normal human in his family –in a psychological sense- would be his sister, and as such he treasured her very much. “Splendid indeed, anyway, you started the school by tomorrow right?” “Yeah, that would be the first time I met with Saruyama again” “Are you sure you’re just thinking about him?” Rito tilted his head, truthfully, he want to meet someone else, however, this person… he doesn’t even knew whether he’ll met her again. His hear suddenly felt a little ache, longing feelings buried deep under those memories about Spartan training and his fear of women. That was memories about his first love… Realizing her brother trapped in a state of daydream, she snapped her fingers, pulling him back into reality. “C’mon, you don’t need to be so broody” “Can’t blame me, I’m just ordinary high school student at heart” he groaned while enjoying his meal, they continuously chat about random things, and she, despite the mischief nature inherited from their mother, she’s also inherited her sharpened mind, wise enough not initiating topic related to girls. The bell is ringing, when Rito tried to pull something dangerous purely on instinct, she slapped his and shook her head. Both of them walked nonchalantly, even if Rito looks a bit too paranoid about something. Mikan assured she purposefully installed an intercom and alarm just in case. She saw something in great delight and smile. “Oh, it’s them” Something that made Mikan delighted, but Rito running for his life. The girls from his past, members of German Special Forces, Schwarzer Hase. All of them dressed in their black coat, formal attire. The tallest (and also oldest) one would be Clarissa Harfouch, Lieutenant, 22 years. Her black hair styled into side bangs, complementing her eyepatch. “Salute-” “Wait, Rito wasn’t here actually” the younger Yuuki interrupted what would be a formal greeting, because the person intended has run away. “That little shrimphead” the shortest one growled, her magenta-colored right eyes gleaming in anger as she realized what happened “And I thought he would be flattered I came to greet him after separated for a long time…” “Ah, Bodewig-san, you see—“ The Short girl, probably just one or two inch taller than Mikan herself stormed inside the house, not even bother to take her shoes off. Silver hair waving around due to her excessive speed, so much that all Mikan heard is loud taps than what would be heard from human’s running. Less than ten second after that, one would swear they can hear the sound of metals scratching against each other. Of which are accompanied by the scream of high-pitched boys and the roar of a growling girl, and then followed by them laughing madly, and then, it got worse as they heard glass breaking… “Okay, BOTH OF YOU PLEASE STOP NOW!” And a Kukri landed dangerously close to Clarissa’s foot, pierced through the well polished wooden floor… followed by two bodies intertwining in a grapple submission, trying to gain dominance. A pair of blades , Crocodile knife and a Trench knife respectively, clashed in an epic struggle of strength. “The hell is your problem?” “Is there’s a specific reason you’re avoiding us?” “Very specific alright! I’m afraid of you girls!” Blinked, the silver haired girl widened her eyes… A subtle, mocking sound escape the corner of her pale, soft lips…then kmorphed into a laugh. “What’s wrong with you? You’re afraid…” Until it was replaced by a frown of derision. “Pathetic” “Leave me alone” Pouting, he turned his face away “As if” A loud impact sound echoed as his cranium crashed onto hers, virtually sending the much smaller girl fly across the room, caught by her much older comrade. “I knew you would say that, Lieutenant Commander Laura Bodewig” “Tch, thickheaded as always” She twirled her knife and stored it on the pocket, located on her left hip. __________________

2012-02-01, 08:03	Link #20433
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Why not just do First person? I'm switching to first person for FI. I have to be careful at who to switch to, though. If someone's lying, the POV can't be on them. __________________

2012-02-01, 08:05	Link #20434
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@eras: It's cause Ema Skye's been taking all the budget for her snacks. not that confident yet. Little kids eras, little kids. @zero: Thank you!

2012-02-01, 08:12	Link #20435
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - Are you sure it wasn't Franziska being her usual self and cutting his pay? (again). Just try it. Fi was made when I was sleep deprived and practically copy pasted from before. Now look what happened. Oh, so 10 year old Edgeworth being implicated for murder doesn't count as not being nice to a kid? Also, he's the main bad guy for the ace attorney series since he dicked over the Fey's (Causing their collapse and making Complete monster Dahlia), the Edgeworth's, and many people in his revenge even if he didn't mean to. __________________

2012-02-01, 08:19	Link #20436
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Gumshoe said that the daily donuts were now all choco crunchies. Just as chocolatey, not as filling. Meh, fine I'll give it a go edgeworth grew up in 10 years.

2012-02-01, 08:25	Link #20437
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Be sure to give it a good summary Make sure to make the Silverio Gospel the focus. Really? He planned to do this while Edgeworth was still a child and the only reason he waited was fro dramatic Irony. Also, he made Edgeworth think he killed his dad (He knows this). Taking him down in Case 4 and Cross examining him in Investigations (Extremely hard in japanese:uhoh) was very satisfying __________________

2012-02-01, 08:56	Link #20438
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	trial summary: Certain things seem inconsequential. A failed mission brings about a fateful meeting. An angel's fall lures and falls to another world. The curtain raises and both are hunted as existences too dangerous to leave loose. Meh, he still took care of the kid.

2012-02-01, 09:06	Link #20439
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Could you be a bit less metaphorical? Go for something like "After their final fight, was the Silverio Gospel truly beaten?" Etc etc. Side note - Something's wrong with the archive right now. I can't access FI chapter 4 from the main page __________________

2012-02-01, 09:15	Link #20440
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Mmmm dunno how