Bleach Fan-Fiction Thread

[Langus]

Originally Posted by Hagoshod

You shouldn't go through life judging everything by other people's opinions, you know.

It's worked pretty well so far. Success can be had when you choose your friends (and writing genres) wisely.

[Hagoshod]

Originally Posted by Kallen4life

quite an amusing discussion

It really brings out the true nature in people, doesn't it?

Originally Posted by Langus

It's worked pretty well so far. Success can be had when you choose your friends (and writing genres) wisely.

It won't work forever. At some point, you'll have to make the decision to become an individual.

[Alchemist007]

He's a 26 year old teacher. I don't think there's much he hasn't done in ways of decisions like that. And this is completely off topic now. There's no need to delve into Langus' criteria for choices he makes, if he doesn't feel so inclined to read your story, you can't really make him.

[Hagoshod]

I suppose you're right. And now I have a deep, philosophical discussion on my reasoning behind this story going on at the Junk Guild, so I'm cool.

[Langus]

Originally Posted by Alchemist007

He's a 26 year old teacher. I don't think there's much he hasn't done in ways of decisions like that. And this is completely off topic now. There's no need to delve into Langus' criteria for choices he makes, if he doesn't feel so inclined to read your story, you can't really make him.

True say!

But you're right...

Gonna walk off into the sunset on this one. Cheers!

[Hagoshod]

I'm so unappreciated in my time. :/

[Kallen4life]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4970664/...ered_b_bDown_b

FANTASTIC fic .. I'm @ 32/36 ch. now

VERY big though - 550k+ words


it's a billion trillion times better then canon, it has A REAL bloody WAR omg (^^), proper vasto lorde (remember the whole stronger then a captain deal ? want to see Primera live up to it's name ? new Segunda Etapas ?), conspiracies, betrayals and reasons for it, characterization, everything you ever wanted in Bleach .. everyone gets to do something


in terms of proper serious epic fics it's easily one of the very best I've ever read anywhere, much less just Bleach





P.S. has a little romance (basically just mentioned, but I dunno what'll happen in the end .. it's no big spoiler, so can name em here - Ichiruki & Byakuya/Yoruichi), but mostly it's plot and action


P.S.S. the Gin thing in the heading is probably because Gin gets a lot of 'screen-time' (for good reasons) and Rukia is because he spends a lot of time tormenting her (and she herself gets to do a lot as well .. in fact she's possibly the main character, but hard to say - everyone and their Grandma get to bathe in the spotlight) .. not even remotely Gin/Rukia shipping


canon up until the ~HM rescue arc (somewhat) .. the war itself is completely different

[Kyero Fox]

Im TRYING to come up with a name for my OC's sword, its release is "Defend and Strike ____" and the shiki is a sword and a shield (medieval like), gives him great defence and such, but his bankai jumps his defence to a whole new level.

His Bankai covers him in armor, more mystical sword and shield, and the main ability of his bankai is that what ever he blocks, aslong as he is blocking it, he can strike back Just as hard, if not a little harder.

lets say if Konomaru's bankai strikes down on him, if he blocks it, he can strike back as powerful as the attack, this is how he beats Kenpachi.

But i cant come up with a name ><, my OC's name is Vahan (means SHield)

[Alchemist007]

Name a word in English you would want there, I'll try to give you some Japanese names that would sound good for it.

[Chiisai Kuma]

hold on.... were allowed to ask for help for bleach OCs on thisthread?! *goes to dig up the many problems ive had with my oc Shun numata*

[Kyero Fox]

Originally Posted by Alchemist007

Name a word in English you would want there, I'll try to give you some Japanese names that would sound good for it.

Paladin maybe? Knight?

@Kuma - Fanfictions and OC's are pretty much the same thing...

[Alchemist007]

Kishi would be knight.
I might go with Eiyuu - hero/paladin.

[Chiisai Kuma]

right my friend has been having trouble coming up with a look for his OC's shikai and im not letting him touch my idea of bladed tonfa's
his oc's zanpacto name is "Kaminari taka-Lightning Hawk" and some of the rough ideas he has were
;Take Flight Kaminari taka!

Tsubasa no shōgeki- the shock of the wings
;Bankai! Tsubasa no shōgeki!
Kaminari taka no tsume-claws of the lightning hawks
;Bankai! Kaminari taka no tsume

he wants his oc to be crap at kido yet good at shumpo, and shumpo baced attacks, i suggested gauntlets of sorts he refused, he sugested 2 longswords, i dismissed the idea usuing logic (logic in bleach LOL)

I am however faced with the oppisite problem, i have the design, i just dont have names, its an eletric type like his (he got the idea from me) two bladed tonfa's. The blade is straight with the handle produced sideways attached to the blunt edge of the blade sideways if you can imagine.

[Kyero Fox]

Here he is. the knight of SS.

Spoiler for Lengthy OC stuff:

First Name: Vahan
Last name: None (Discarded it due to family problems.
Race: Shinigami.
Birthday: 9th september.
Apparent Age: early 30's
Gender: Male.
Height: 6'1ft
Weight: 160
Likes: Western Armor/ weapon designs
Dislikes: Irresponcible people, pranksters, sweet food.
Secret: Scared to lose anyone.
Personality: Serious but kind, easy to anger when someone threatens innocents.
History: W.I.P.

Professional Status

Occupation: Shinigami.
Previous Occupation: None, orphan.
Team: Captain of division 9.
Partner : Lieutenant Shinoda Matsunami.
Base of operations: Seireitei.

Personal Status

Education: Shinigami academy.
Relationship: None.
Friends: Shinoda Matsunami
Rival/enemy: Saito Izanosuke (Matsunami's brother and Vahan's old Captian.)

Zanpakuto

Name: Kishi
Spirit: a Large Knight with a female voice.
Type: Western Sword and Shield.
Appearance: Regular katana with silver hilt wrap and gold hilt guard.
Carried on: Right hip.
Sheeth: White
Tsuba: W.I.P
Shikai command: Protect and Serve, Kinshi.
Shikai appearance: Western Sword and Shield.
Shikai special ability: Grately increased Poise and defence, able to cast kido by a swing of his sword.
Bankai name: Eiyuu Kishi (Hero Knight)
Bankai appearance: Covered in a Western Knight like armor, along with his sword and shield.
Bankai special ability: Invincible Poise (No attack makes him flinch or stagger, no matter the strength of the attack. He will take the damage tho, If it gets past his shield) Brings the meaning "the best offense is a great defence" the a whole new level. Any Melee attack blocked by his shield is redirected to his sword and strikes back with the same strength that was blocked. No restraint kido's work agains't him.
Reiatsu color: Silver
Inner world appearance: a Castle

Powers and abilities

Sword handling: Advance
Shunpo: Excellent but is handicapped in his bankai form.
Kidou: Average knowledge. Focused more on protection Kidou.
Spiritual power: Captian level.

*Battle Stats*
* Offense:65
* Defenses:100
* Agility:40
* Reiatsu/Kido:100
* Intelligence:75
* Physical Stamina: 100
* Total: 475/600

[Chiisai Kuma]

oh sweet mother of mercy you got zanpakuto-leader to do an oc art piece for you!!!! How much did that one pic cost you?!?!?
(btw im on yourdA page rite now )

[Mr. DJ]

pretty cool

[Kyero Fox]

and now my Fullbringer OC

Spoiler for Description:

Name Shinjuro Sakunoshin
Kanji
Romaji


Characteristics
Race - Fullbringer
Birthday - September 6th
Age - 29
Gender - Male
Height - 6'1"
Weight - 110 pounds
Eyes - Gray
Hair - Black
Blood Type AB+


Professional Status
Affiliation - Khrysis
Previous Affiliation None
Occupation - Unknown
Previous Occupation - Lead game designer
Team - Khrysis
Previous Team none
Partner Unknown
Previous Partner Unknown
Base of Operations Khrysis Base


Personal Status
Marital Status - Single
Relatives - Father & Mother Deseased
Education - Collage
Status - Active

Powers
Signature Skill - Fullbring



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Shinjuro Sakunoshin: Is a Fullbringer inleague with Khrysis, Those who know him outside of the organization
Would think he is just some buisness man or a Geek, They would never guess he was a human with a strange
Power.

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-Appearance-

Shinjuro is usally seen with a Black Over coat that goes down to his ankles. Under it he usually wear's a game
reference t-shirt and Black jeans. He is pretty pale and a slim figure. He usually walks with his hands in his
overcoat pockets and a smirk on his face. His hair is pitch black and pretty long, going past his shoulder its
tied up in the back into a pony tail that he keeps over his shoulder to his chest. His front hair goes is much
Shorter, and keeps his right bangs down over his right eye. He is never without his glasses since his vision
isn't too great. He can see decently without them but to be able to see further he needs his glasses.



-Personality-

Friend's would say he's a pretty nice guy, never really selfish but never selfless. He's usually calm and corrects
his friends if they make a mistake in some way. He is easy to make laugh, with even some of the corniest jokes. His
Enemies would call him a total wise ass and smug person. But that's because he knows he's smarter than most people.
Calling them on their bluffs and weaknesses. His favorite thing to do against enemies is correct their speech if they
get all heated and mix up their words to piss them off and throw them off their concentration.

In combat he is a very strategic person. Perhaps even on par with Aizen, Minus the crazy. He often stays 5 steps ahead of his
enemies in combat and likes to tell them that their current plan is most definally gonna fail.



-History-

Shinjuro's mother was attacked during her and his father's date. Luckly a shinigami was able to save them before she was killed.
Their memory of it was blurry with all what happened and eventually forgot about it. He was born into a moderately wealthy family
who never really had trouble with money. He was put in the best schools and had the best tutors. When he was in high school he easily
passed his classes. But he didn't enjoy being smart on history or any of that. Most of his attention was towards Chess. He was quite
obsessed with it, he went to every championship he could, and won. he was a chess master. While he excelled in chess and in school
he didn't have the best of luck with bullies in the school, who of course pick on the nerds and weaker kids. He always put up with
it and ignored them. Till in the last week of high school he accidently opened his mouth and offended one of the bigger bullies
Walking home one day the big bully and some of his friends cornered shinjuro and started to push him around, and some times rough
him up. All the emotions he supressed during the bulling made him snap for a split second, Releasing his fullbringer abilities for
the first time as his chess board opened up and one of the pieces fell out. Once it hit the ground it shattered and flashed blinding
the bullies. By the time they could see clearly a large hand punched one of the students several meters back. breaking their nose and
a rib. The bullies freaked out by the large stoney figure and ran. When Shinjuro stood up and looked at the figure he reconized its shape.
It closely resembled that of a Brook piece from chess, the one piece that fell and shattered. before he could say anything it reverted
back into the piece and jumped into his hand. he stared at it and shook his head and putting it in the case before he ran home, hoping
not to get arrested for one just happened.

After he high school he started to realize he had a special power. He honed his ability and realized he could summon strange creatures
resembling pieces of a chess game. By collage he had learned what he could about it without combat. He could summon every piece except
the king piece. It was only when he was attacked by a hollow that he realized what the king mode did. The fight also caught the attention
of other fullbringers.


-Powers, Traits and Abilities-

High Intellect and Strategy: Thanks to his Chess obsession Shinjuro is able to keep 5 steps ahead of his opponet and quickly study the person's
Strengths and abilities as he watches them.

Average Spirtual preasure: Shinjuro isn't physicly or spirtually powerful, In combat he relies on his summons to fight rather than him self...Except
For king mode.

Silver Tongue: Should this be here you say? Yes it should. Having a silver tongue can help just about everyone, Luring a enemy or causing them
to grow frustrated or sad can help him in combat just as any other ability or power would. Normally he wouldn't try to make someone cry, but
if they are a person of evil intentions, he will make a exception.



=Fullbring=


Chess Master: Shinkuro has the ability to summon strange creatures resembling pieces of a chess game. Pawn,Rook,Knight,Bishop,Queen and King,
each with their own ability and Health, some more than other and only one piece is able to be summoned at a time. Like in chess the enemy must
work its way to the king to win. Shinjuro is protected by a force field, Unpenatrable through any means unless the enemy is at a much much stronger
strength than himself.

Pawn: The weakest of summons, But its unique power gives Shinjuro extra time to read his enemy and test their strength. While stronger than
a normal human. it can easily be taken down. Its actual ability is many lives, 8 to be exact.

Knight: Resembling a knight of medieval times it is the faster and more agile piece, Armed with a sword and decent amount of health it charges its foe with presision and agility.

Rook: A large Castle tower like creature, It is stationary to the ground and can move slowly along the ground and is 3 stories tall. It posesses increadable strength but is pretty slow. But
Do not underestimate it because its stationary to the ground. The rook is able to fire its large arms like a missle in a straight angle, Relying on its size to hit the opponet. if Missed the
Arms deconstruct into bricks and flies back to its body.

Bishop: Resembling a noble it wields a staff and is the avarage human size. It's ability makes it able to fly and cast magic like attacks such as fire balls, ice lances or lightning bolts.
its flying speed is nothing special, Only to keep its self distanced from the enemy.

Queen: as in chess it can do all the movies the lesser pieces can. It appearnce resembles a queen of course, but in a mecha type appearance. it wields a long staff with a long blade at one end
and a orb on the other end. It is definaly the most deadly of the pieces as it is in Chess its self. It's able to cast magic, has great speed and strength. Not as powerful as the stand alone pieces
But the mix of powers makes it much deadlier.

King: Unlike the other pieces it does not have its own form. Instead once all the pieces have been defeated, the shield that protects Shinjuro breaks. But not before enfusing all the powers of the pieces
into Shinjuro him self, Drasticly changing his appearance. Much like the queen he can use all abilities. But is much stronger. Able to use the pieces abilities at full power, maybe even stronger. But unlike
the queen piece, He also shares the same ability as the pawn pieces. He is able to take 8 fierce attacks before falling, Putting him in Check stage. Sripping his powers and leaving him helpless.

[Chiisai Kuma]

0_0.
you..........
from now on i MUST consult you on OC making.

[Ko mi nam]

wOW COOOOL

[Kyero Fox]

>_> He's not THAT great. Just somethin i thought up while rewatching some Code Geass scenes.