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View Poll Results: How Was It? | |||
Great! | 3 | 37.50% | |
Bad... | 0 | 0% | |
I don't know | 5 | 62.50% | |
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2009-01-01, 22:07 | Link #1 |
Konata Rule's!
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Orlando
Age: 28
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My Story's
Hello. I have made these storys. I did NOT make the picture's though. By the way if it is bad, in your post,just post the positive things. i hope you Enjoy! Oh also, i will update some post's once in a while.^^
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Last edited by Yumi Chan; 2009-01-02 at 11:15. |
2009-01-03, 23:41 | Link #4 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2006
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I was bored and started reading this; I think the story's okay. Though I think there should be some things you should try to improve, like developing it more. I mean, like instead of saying "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends." you should use "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends. They've been friends since they were 2 years old." or something. And btw, the note that was left by Mrs. April, why was it directed to *just* Amanda and not the rest of the classroom too?
Oh yeah, instead of using the three options the poll has, why don't you make it like ranting it from 1 to 10? I think it'd be better. And sorry for all the criticism Keep on writing!
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