2007-08-04, 15:31 | Link #1 |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: In Maya world, where all is 3D and everything crashes
Age: 36
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~ KarumA's Shizzle Stuff =3
Welcome to my art topic, cheers took me a long time to make it and right now I'm not even finished On my page you'll find anime styled drawings i made, art projects from school, fiction ideas, western drawings and fan art Enjoy~ little side note: since my post exceeds the 500 000 character limit another post has been made in this topic as post n.o. 3 And the fiction post ups also hold drawings i made for the stories And yes that is my doggie :3 Latest drawing : non-title robo-bla Comments: Thought it would be neat to draw something robotic, but I wanted to add something special, for this reason I made the wires look like her hair, basically it’s an idea of her being a playmate that would be on sale, thus the code on her arm, I used metal plates for the breasts that spawn from her spine, I don’t like drawing things in a adult theme like that, I want to keep it normal ya know :P Added red to mark some area’s and open skin parts so you can se her robotic parts, also it indicates that she is still under construction or has been damaged and is so be repaired Spoiler for Anime-ish drawings :
Latest Anime-ish drawing : Comments: View: Latest drawing, non-title robo-bla Older Anime-ish drawings ( new – older ) : Comments: 1. An ink drawing I made while watching Dr. Phill, don’t really know what it is, a digital woman... I think, half of the times I don’t even know what I draw 2. This is what happens when you listen to the Rob Zombie album, American Music to Strip By, too many times... I didn’t draw her face on purpose 3. another plug suit idea, well a combat suit that is, in which crystals give the levitation and weapon abilities, the crystals give out digital like wings and can be used as whips, swords etc. the light it burns out has a laser function, so it cuts through whatever it comes in contact with Comments: 1. Was waiting for my test to begin in the hallway, so I drew a basic idea of a hover board, I didn’t want to draw an entire character, just a focus on the board and suit, thus the reason a added shadows to the face, only the reflection in the goggles is visible 2. Something random, I was sitting in class and I saw that someone drew a cat on my table... I decided to have a go at it and drew that Japanese clip monster around it, the brown dude with big teeth and round red eyes, I added a line from Dane Cook that I thought was pretty funny, “Sweet sour sauce on my pussy...” from his Burger King Drive-Through joke and a sign on a thread saying: Cat Eater, I made a picture of it, though not the best quality I know, sitting at your desk with a digital camera in your hands isn’t what she would call paying attention... 3. When I started drawing this I had a clear idea of what I wanted, however in the end I forgot and now eventually this was the result, my least favourite drawing of all >.< 4. This is a ink drawing I made during class, based up on a picture that inspired me to raw anime style a very long time ago, the picture was of Battle Angel Alita, it was of her falling apart, with wings in a scrap graveyard, I have it pasted on my Wall of Lame, in protest against my hideous wallpaper I started pasting my entire wall up with random pictures of things I like: photo’s, articles, drawings etc. Comments: 1. A drawing of an angel I made while waiting for my art class test, my teacher added up some points on my grade after seeing this drawing, I thought it would be a neat idea to chain the wings to her shoulders 2. Another drawing I like, a girl in the rain leaning against the wall behind her, simply something that popped in my mind while watching a music channel and hearing some Beyoncé while making it 3. This is another drawing I made while listening and watching the music channel, there was a 10x Christina Aguilera marathon and I was drawing this while listing to the song “Ain’t no other man” 4. A very old Night Elf armour design I made, it was a sketch first but I inked it later on, World of Warcraft again yes :P Spoiler for For art school projects:
Latest art school project : Comments: This was my last art assignment before summer, our teacher laid out several items on a table and we had to draw them on paper, the rule was use a lot of shade, only use your pencil and make sure it all fits on one piece of paper Older art school projects (new – older ) : Comments: This was another assignment I had for my other art class, our job was to just draw faces from every side, nothing difficult, just draw work Comments: The art assignment of my previous semester, our job was to take a picture from a magazine, enlarge a part and then make 3 other drawings of the same person but then change the situation In my case I took the cover of a magazine, with a woman sitting on a bench advertising her blouse for the winter collection (H&M I think it was), I made 3 changes, one was a female stripper, the next someone lying in the sun on the beach and last a vampire in a bath of blood There were also specific rules to these drawings, you had to sketch them out first and then paint them, as for the painting, the first painting you made had to be of the original picture but you could pick how to colour it in Two of them had to be in one colour and then tanned light and dark The last one had to be black and white The first two sketches are my sketches for the original and the vampire drawing, the other two are somewhere but don’t ask me where o.o; As for the paintings, first the original which I chose red and white for, second the stripper in blue, third the sun bather in green and last the vampire in black and white (my favourite of the four) Comments: For a short time I was stuck in the Desktop Publishing class, their pre assignment was to make a book cover for a horror book, bad thing was the teacher wouldn’t go with anything simple and wanted horror, corny horror that for sure that wouldn’t give you the creeps just giant bats, lightning etc. and yes it had to be about a house and he told us to give great focus to the letters (that is what that class is all about) Comments: This is one of my favourite drawings, which I had to photograph because it’s on my Wall of Lame, the assignment was to take a picture that showed shadow etc. and to draw it with pencil and then add in the shade with pencil, this is a drawing of a girl from a bikini advertisement I found on the internet, it was unfinished, but I still like the drawing Comments: I did a lot of moving around in classes and this was our Sign (sticker making bla) assignment in the start of this my school year in 2006, we had to make something that could be put on a T-Shirt, I made these two heads, based on a twin set of characters I made a long time ago, each representing good and evil, I made another one afterwards of a digital GAO GAO STEGOSUARUS version, too bad we didn’t press them on T-shirts (this drawing was also posted on my Wall of Lame) Spoiler for for western drabble and normal drawings :
Latest Western drawing: Comments: At some point this year I was bored with drawing anime style, seriously it’s been like what... 10 years since I started drawing anime styled pictures... but before I drew that I drew something entirely different and that is Marvel like, since back then I discovered the comics and later on Pokemon and DBZ, I was pretty good at drawing in that style and I just thought heck... lets make a sketch for old times sake, well this is it... I must say it worked out alright ^^ Spoiler for drabble drawings:
Drabble drawings are basically random things, stuff I draw during class or lunch time, sometimes they’re pre ideas of things I write but most of the times they’re just totally random... Latest drabble drawing : Comments: Nothing to say really, just a random thing I drew during Marketing (when I was still at school) Older (new – older ) : Comments: 1. Nothing to say about that one, just a funny idea of a head being fed its eye 2. Random Otome gunner design 3. Basically I was reading too much Shinn/Athrun fluff, those are sketches of the first time I drew the couple, I never drew Athrun before... hate his hair... 4. Something I drew after writing more See Destiny fanfiction, the side of Shinn’s head, inmy own style of course Comments: 1. An unfinished drawing I made during my wait time while gaming, didn’t colour the eyes, don’t remember why :P 2. Basically a funny idea I had from thinking too much, it’s a Kira Otome Freedom version, I hate the back cannons... based it upon a random drawing of Shinn being Dullindal’s Otome which I thought would fit in the Ridiculous Image Thread in the Gundam section, reason why I put it here, it isn’t anything official to me, drew it with pencil and inked it 3. this is a page in my Dutch book that I really like, it is a character design I did for my fiction Neko Mimi Valkyr, I don’t have a name for her yet, but she is a side character who basically does whatever she wants with her powers, however she doesn’t murder or anything, she’s still good but doesn’t care about the prophecy only herself 4. Random ink sketch of a gunner person, no comments there, like her suit though ;D Comments: 1. Sketch based upon my fiction story: Memory of a Dream, didn’t like the sketch thus it ended up here, basically it’s my main character getting a bullet blown in his shoulder, the force of the blow rips open a large hole 2. Fire elemental sketch, not much for comments just thought of World of Warcraft and elemental characters, based her on Night Elf’s with fire, outfit doesn’t exist in the game, just thought it would look awesome, might use it again later in one of my fictions 3. Again like the above but then an arcane elemental 4. Random Otome design, love her stance Comments: 1. Random faces and hair design for my Rewrite fiction 2. Drawing of a neko girl in an oversized sweater, wanted to ink it but never finished inking it 3. This is actually my first attempt on some Kairin fan-art for last Christmas, but I thought heck I would never be able to make a banner from it so I dropped the idea 4. More Kairin, just a sketch Spoiler for For Fan-art drabbles and drawings:
Latest Fan-art drabble Comments: Fanart for Code Geass, just some random drabble Older Fan-art drabbles and drawings ( new – older ) : Comments: All the above are from Code Geass 1. Lelouch masked with his geass eye bleeding the geass symbol standing for suffering, the mask stands for the mask he always wears towards his friends and the Black Knights 2. Lelouch and Suzaku drawn in the Lucky Star style :3 3. Lelouch neko sleeping, the cat uniform is from the series 4. another one but then happy with a fish cookie :3 Side note: Usually when I make up a story I first work it out in fanfiction, for this reason fanfiction links have been added to the following messages, if you do want to read them, then firstly don’t look at my spelling, the really old chapters have horrible spelling which I am too lazy to sort out XD, secondly if you want to read them please be aware of the spoilers that I have posted in the following spoiler tags for each story, I’ll have the links posted on top with the fanfiction.net summary I made and third, don’t PM me or tell me on this forums to update or tell me how horrible my spelling is, I know alright ^^ Spoiler for for fiction idea and drawings: not yet titled:
Fanfiction Title: The Melancholy of Shinn Asuke Shinn Asuka finaly finds himself some happines, too bad everything will be fcked up eventually because it isnt what it seems, Romance, Comedy, Angst and a school setting, ShinnxAthrun, light Yaoi, Based on Suzumiya Haruhi though not the same R&R The Melancholy of Shinn Asuka Spoiler for for future plot and the fiction idea behind it:
Basically I thought it would be cute to write a very mysterious romance series, I got this idea when I was watching Suzumiya Haruhi, as you can see from the fanfiction title, I don’t have a title yet for the fiction story thus I used this title so that people would know what it is based on, though the story line isn’t exactly like the Suzumiya series, it is one of the things that I didn’t want it to be What I want it to be about is a boy who is in a coma, but doesn’t know that he is in one. He wakes up without any memory of his real life, also with loss of his short term memory, he only knows who his family and that is about it, when he wakes up he finds that he just moved to a new town and that he doesn’t know anyone living around him, he goes to a new school where he meets lots of new people and somehow ends up with a debt to the after school film club, what I wanted to put in the story is comedy, mystery, romance and most of all good characters, I want him to interact with almost everyone of his class and several older students who all have their own background story and own problems, one is extremely shy and has never had real friends, the other lives on his own and needs to fend for himself with afternoon jobs to get some cash flowing, while the other is extremely rich and is soon to be forced to marry someone he doesn’t want to get around with and the list goes on like that, as the story continues puzzle pieces fall into place and he finds out that the world is just a dream world in which he is God and that everything that has happened is part of his own imagination (still have to think through the ending bla) and eventually it ends with him confessing his love to his dream world version of the person he likes and he wakes up, there it ends Spoiler for for fiction idea and drawings: Memory of a dream :
Memory of a Dream set after episode 42. Shinn lost his memory and gets onboard of Archangel, secrets are uncovered, people are kidnapped and the lives of 2 characters will be drasticly changed: ShinnxAthrun Spoiler for plot of the fiction version:
The fiction version of Memory of a Dream is a lot different than the one I first had in mind, which I used for the fanfiction, this one is darker and serious than the other and I want it to be stared by older characters, not the usual high school / university people you see in series, I also wanted it to be yaoi like, not too yaoi, I don’t like the hard core stuff and don’t worry I’m not going to use dirty stuff in this summary Okay, basically it is, like you might guess by now a romance story, well not completely... This is what my world looks like, its futuristic, floating cars etc. and androids have just been introduced to the world, no mass production yet but it is coming, robots have already taken over the work in factories but nothing other than that, what I mean is butler robots, robots to drive cars etc. also the world is different, the polar caps have melted and many parts of the world have been flooded, there are several gigantic cities left of which several do anything to make sure that global heating doesn’t get any worse, these cities are more modern and use every method to make sure that the global environment improves, I am not sure how to explain it but you know the drill, solar panels, strict rules over amounts of water and electricity however there are also countries how do nothing about them and they are filthy and rotten these two civilisations have been arguing with each other for ages of who should do what and ties between them are tense, I’m still thinking about that part The story follows the life of a detective, I don’t have a name yet, who is in his 20’s and tales his job quite serious, one day he’s tailing a bank robber through a tunnel when suddenly a mecha robot smashes into the front of his suspect’s car while driving, eventually they catch up, the mecha like robot (human size) talks about capturing the suspect for other reasons and the two of them argue, what eventually happened was that the suspect was driving a car that had a bomb inside it, mecha dude didn’t know nor did the detective, as it goes off mecha dude protects the detective but gets his suit damaged in return and detective guy sees his face for a split second before he takes off again leaving the detective with questions What follows is something strange, when our detective was younger he used to live in a fancy home, his family is quite rich that’s why and he was supposed to marry some girl from another family, what happened was the following, he fell in love with a guy, not anyone that his family knew but he ha to chose between the two and he chose wrong, he picked the girl, or that is at leased what his boy friend thought, lost in grief he finds out that his boy friend jumped in front of a train that evening, ever since that day he dumped the girl without saying why and started to live on his own, his family didn’t want him as soon as he said no to the marriage and eventually he became a detective, the thing that is strange is that the guy in the mecha suit looks almost exactly alike to his old boyfriend who is supposed to be dead and he goes further into the case Eventually he finds out a bit about the young lad and why he is in a mecha suit, he is a soldier for a special organisation who is the first to actually use robotic engineering together with humans to make a special group of soldiers that fight under no flag and who take out terrorists and other villains right under the government’s nose The guy who detective say in the tunnel was in fact his old boyfriend, who that night lay down on the tracks in front of a train, he lost his limps that night and before he could even argue and bleed to death he was taken in by the secret organisation and underwent the robotic treatment, he gained 2 new limps and his mind got modified so that he has telepathic abilities, ever since that day he has been working for the organisation together with a team of 6 other robotic engineered members, each of them has another story involving them being saved from death by the organisation and with each having different abilities depending on which part of their body has been modified, all of them have a mecha like suit and have different personalities and ages Eventually detective come sin touch with his old boyfriend and the organisation finds out, they set their own member up and he goes on the run with Mr. detective, the only person he knows in the world, eventually they find out that there is a lot more going on than meets the eye, I don’t have an ending yet, since it is a very complicated story, I’ll update once I have more ideas Drawings: Comments: 1. First sketch I made of what I wanted the mecha suit to be like 2. A cleaner version of the sketch 3. yet another one, don’t mind the colours Because the above designs looked too much Bubblegum Crisis to me I decided to come up with something different, the two sketches below are that result and I drew them both on my summer holiday with my friends, I still have to work them out better, since as you can see the below version is worn by a female and not by a male Comments: 1. The first drawing I made, more detailed, I think I’m going to take the arms off on the back or change them in one of the suits and don’t look at the gun :P its only a silhouette 2. Same suit but then in action with a giant laser like gun what I liked about the designs is the helmet, the mouth part, which covers the mouth and nose slides in two to the cheeks and the glass front that covers the eyes can slide upwards to the top of the head, there are lights on the side of the helmet, the heels, top of the hands and the shoulders, but I think I’m going change several parts of that. The glass front also shows messages etc. it isn’t just glass Comments: 1. My first sketch of the character in the suit, not my favourite drawing, it’s very old and yes it is Shinn once again :P 2. My least favourite drawing, since it is too skinny, it is more based on the fanfiction story with a slight mistake... I used the wrong eyes -_-; 3. A little better, I wanted a face shot though I should pay more attention to guns XD 4. Okay this one is my favourite anime drawing, love the legs, it is based on the fictional version and shows what I want the characters legs to look like after the robotic engineered treatment, mechanical legs and a metal structure following down his spine to enhance preformances Comments: 1. Random art I made for the story 2. A sketch of one of the characters I’m probably going to add, no info about him available yet Added both Neko Mimi Valkyr and Rewrite, part 3 of Rewrite will be added later Also added a fanart section EDIT: my post is too long lol The text that you have entered is too long (57243 characters). Please shorten it to 50000 characters long for this reason i'll put the last 2 fiction ideas in a lose post XD whahaha maybe a mod can stick it as post n.o. :3 but i dont mind since it is still post n.o. 3 Last edited by -KarumA-; 2007-08-05 at 10:05. |
2007-08-05, 09:37 | Link #3 |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: In Maya world, where all is 3D and everything crashes
Age: 36
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since my first post is too long i have to put my other parts in another post so that i dont cross the 500 000 characters rule
Spoiler for for fiction idea and drawings: Neko Mimi Valkyr:
Gundam Seed Neko Valkyr After strange encounters, Shinn grows cat ears and finds himself vending off alien like creatures who for some strange reason want to kill him.. Based on a fic I’m writing XD eventually ShinnxAthrun Spoiler for plot of the fiction version:
Alright when I started writing this I knew I wanted to do something with cats, but then with cat ears specifically, where I got the idea, well I was reading a doujin which involved cat ears :3 and it’s one of my favorites, once again it’s a yaoi idea, but like my other stories nothing extreme, I want to keep my work decent and not have it focused on the making out of two people of the same gender XD Okay where to start, once again the fictional version is a lot different from the fanfiction I am writing, for starters no Gundams or anything like that and a change in characters etc. My main characters are two guys, one is a student the other has cat ears, the students name is Kenji something something, I wrote it down somewhere, forgot where though -_-; and the neko guy’s name is Valkyr, well let us begin with Kenji then because that is where our story begins Kenji is simply put a student living in the suburbs in Tokyo, he lives with his grandfather who owns a small bookstore and is kind of well forced to take over the store as soon as he graduates, because his future is secured of what job he will have and where he will live Kenji is kind of slacking, more or less he doesn’t enjoy live and simply walks to school like a programmed robot while he just wants to go home, he’s not very social and never takes friends home, one day he is walking over a bridge, leans on the side to look down at the small water stream below him when suddenly a boy falls from the sky into the water, Kenji saves him, because the boy in unconscious and does CPR, suddenly the boy wakes up and starts slapping him for putting his lips on someone he doesn’t even know, Kenji finds out that the boy has cat ears and that by kissing him he has made a kind of contract for life, Kenji of course didn’t know this yet until the boy starts following him home, Kenji kicks the guy out of his house and returns to his normal live while being stalked by the boy, that is until a giant alien creature tries to kill him, his but gets saved by Valkyr and he finds out that Valkyr has cat ears, eventually Valkyr presses his lips on Kenji’s again and is capable of activating an armor with the basic weapons consisting out of claws, see the drawings for that Eventually Kenji finds out that when he preformed CPR on Valkyr that he absorbed what Valkyr calls the spirit of a cat, the power of his armor, in order to activate the armor he has to kiss Kenji and has to kiss him again to de activate the armor The reason why aliens try to chop of Kenji’s head is because he now holds the cat spirit within, the spirit is in fact a small piece of a God from another planet who broke apart and separated into small pieces each scattering over Earth and other planets, Valkyr originally got one of the pieces within him in the form of a cat, but more about Valkyr later, the reason why aliens are after the soul piece is so they can gain the power of it themselves, once the slave or master have been killed while holding the soul piece in their body the killer can obtain it and eventually collect the pieces until they become a God themselves, there are more people like Valkyr and all of them are looking for each other to gain the status of God Okay about Valkyr, he is a person who has lived with the gem within him for about 4 years, the gem which stayed in his body kept him young, meaning that he is in fact 4 years older than he looks and he ages slower than anyone else would because of the long period of time that he has kept the gem within himself and it has changed his entire body functionality, because he is the slave and has to do all the fighting, but he wasn’t always the slave, back before he gained the soul piece within himself he was a normal kid but he doesn’t remember anything of his live before he washed ashore, the first memory that he had was that he was lying on the beach, soaked with ocean water, by that time his hair had already darkened and he already had cat ears and a tail, he was brought in by a gentile woman, who was the first person whom he fell in love with and the first person he made a contract with, however as the aliens arrived they made a mistake, one of the soul bearers killed Valkyr’s master while he was in battle, his armor shattered due the lack of a master and he ran away, he has been running for 4 years ever since and was chased by them when he met Kenji, I haven’t fixed out the entire past before the soul shard part but I do have a link on how I wanted him to gain the ability, the shard first appeared like a normal cat and as he bowed down to pet it jumped into his stomach, over time he grew cat ears and a tail and slowly his eyes and hair darkened Okay about the world, about 4.5 years before the two characters meet there was a massive star rain around Earth that lasted 3 days, this star rain is in fact the God that split open his soul, the world is not too different from ours, no future technology nothing, the only difference is that the cities are larger and that many people can just barely come around with their income This is actually one of my favorite stories I came up with, because it is so cute =3 I might change the title, but I think it is fitting Drawings: Comments: 1. The very first design I made for this story when it comes to the battle armor, they’re all quite old I made them last year during fall when I first thought of this story, it is a basic over view of the armor, gloves and where I was tattoos to spawn when the soul shard is within Valkyr 2. Again an overview 3. And another in which he is boosting, one of the main attacks in the start is the breaking of the soul shards by which Valkyr is covered in flames, he then tackles in supersonic speed, which mostly causes him to rip through the enemies stomach Comments: 1. Pretty drawing :3 no comments 2. A nervous cat sketch, don’t really like but it is alright for a sketch 3. More of a chibi version of what I want to put in my fanfiction version 4. Got the idea of drawing this after watching Elfen Lied, the soul shard and Valkyr, in this case still Shinn because my design for Valkyr isn’t complete yet Comments: Basically a cover drawing or at leased something with that purpose, the wings are that of the split up God, the figure within is Valkyr Spoiler for for fiction idea and drawings: Rewrite:
The Black Gatomon Davis erased himself from the world during a time when Digimon start to get deleted by an unknown human person, his name: Black Gatomon, but what is going on and who is he? R&R please? This is actually the first story I ever came up with back in 2005, it is part of a trilogy, for this reason I’m putting the plot for each part in separate tags Spoiler for Rewrite part 1, plot for the fictional version:
Okay this is going to be very complicated, the first part of the trilogy is actually set right now, the third part is in the past and takes place before this one, but I start with the 2nd one, I still have to work out last names for the first and second part It starts in the current world, where something weird has happened, Rei is a kid who just disappeared out of existence, no one remembers him except for 11 other people, who went to the same school as he went or are just friends with him, they don’t know what is going on and what happened to him, one day he was there and the next he just vanished as if he never excited in the first place The world is in chaos as well, in the last year the amount of murders have increased dramatically and every time the same person is spotted at the crime and has never been caught in the last year, his name is Kage, a person who wears a mask and murders people in cold blood, sometimes leaving bodies completely ripped apart and mutated, the police are left with a mystery and Kage is wanted all over the world however no one has ever seen his face because he always wears a mask or his face was blurred for some reason Eventually one of Rei’s closest friends, Kazuo becomes involved by one of Kage’s assassination attempts at a museum where he witnesses something horrible, Kage ran in to murder a security guard who closing down the museum and was leading Kazuo outside, as Kage attacks the guard swells up and changes into a strange monster, Kage kills it and leads Kazuo away from the museum so they wouldn’t ask him questions, he then threatens him that he will kill him if he says anything and Kazuo is left standing alone in the middle of the street having a strange feeling of déjà vu Eventually Kazuo tells his friends about what happened, who almost all had different experiences with Kage in the past, or have them in the future, most of them drop the subject out of fear of being killed but Kazuo actually pushes on and investigates about the strange occurrences, eventually he becomes involved by Kage again and Kage gets injured badly, Kage is chased by the police, who thought Kazuo was a hostage and as Kage teleports away in a strange light Kazuo grips on to his arm, next thing eh knows he’s together with Kage in the middle of the sky above a forest and both fall down below, he finds out that they are in a park not far from his home place but he also finds out that Kage, who protected him from the fall and hit his head hard on one of the think branches, is in fact his long lost friend Rei Eventually Kazuo takes Rei home where he bandages him up, as Rei wakes up he finds that Rei is very silent and distant, completely opposite from what he was when he still knew him However Rei isn’t letting anything go on what is going on and what has happened to him and tries to kill him but finds that he is unable to, the two of them try and figure out who Rei was before and stop Viruses as larger ones start spawning through the gates The basic about part one is that most of the basic things come out, this is the start of the story and I’m not going to type everything out as to plot :P But this is what is actually going on, the 12 individuals that only know each other from school are in re incarnations of people from another dimension, but more about that later on that isn’t the main plot of this part and that info isn’t revealed in this part either The internet left a digital stream across the planet that has been linked to another dimension that has been taken over by viruses, these viruses come through the link in our world where they feed up on a human host until they are strong enough to come out, they feed up on emotions of people and the stranger they get the faster they mutate to the parasites original form, Rei was infected by one but because he holds the blood of Kuran (more info on that in part to and three) he did not mutate instead his body deleted himself and he faded to the underworld where all deleted data goes to be reused for another purpose, this Underworld is part of the other dimension linked open to our world, in this world Rei finds out that he was once a knight with special abilities that could alter shape, delete items and most importantly destroy these viruses, much like we use a computer he can rebuild buildings and delete items, a knight can do the same with solid material from our world, this is why there hasn’t been any mass destruction yet, he can also mess with people’s minds and change their memory, this is what blurs his face from other people and why he has never been caught, in the Underworld he is confronted by deleted viruses and eventually gets mind raped (whoo mind rape FTW), in his subconscious state he finds the gems that once belonged to Kuran and activates them, making him a knight, the gems placed themselves on the top of his hands and he was brought out of the world of the Underworld back to our dimension What Rei thought was an eternity was in our world just a few seconds, he crashes down in the living room again where he is found by his own parents, he tries to hide the gems from them and tries to forget that this event never happened, eventually he finds out that he has to destroy these viruses since their numbers grow and he slowly learn how to use his powers, he is able to summon two swords which can change into pistols at will and that is when he starts murdering these mutated creatures, the first time he is still sensitive about killing and eventually swears that he will never murder one again, this was his largest mistake, because one of the viruses regenerates and comes after him, attacking him at his home, Rei’s father was murdered in the process and when Rei destroyed the Virus and confronted his mother she stabbed him in the heart for being a monster, Rei survived the stabbing accident and now carries a scar over his heart, his mother lost her mind and eventually Rei erased himself from the world to protect the ones he loves and to assure his mother’s health, so that she can become healthy again, from that day on he turned into a killer that hunts for Viruses and isn’t known by anyone else in the world, but when Rei erased himself from everyone’s mind he didn’t know he would be unable to do so for the other 11 chosen children, they still remember him as the rest doesn’t Eventually Rei got struck by grief of loneliness and erased his own mind, making him more merciless than he used to be and more robotic in his mind, but something clicked when he met Kazuo and slowly his memory started to return, at the end of the first season he fights the Virus that mind raped him back in the Underworld and that once infected him, it ends with Kuran’s connection activating in Rei’s body when he is once again infected by the virus and is slowly mutating, the connection activates Kuran’s old knight armor and pushes the Virus out of Rei’s body, Rei then starts talking to Kazuo naming him Aikou, then passes out and regains his memories, what in fact happened was that his past life took over when the connection opened, he started to think like Kuran and called Kazuo Aikou because that was his name in his previous life It ends with Rei changing the world once again so that he can fit into it, he then lives again with his mother and returns to school Spoiler for Rewrite part 2, plot for the fictional version:
Part two is a lot deeper and focuses more on all 11 people than just one individual It starts of where part 1 has ended, Rei has met the 10 other people in part one but never really spoke to them, however they were attacked by the Virus that once infected him and he attacked them as well when he was taken over, they all witnessed him change into the Knight form and because Rei cant erase their memories for some strange reason he explained what was going on but never really asked them to get involved Eventually another Knight makes his appearance, and Kazuo remembers him quite well, his brother had a car accident and died in the hospital, or so he was told, his brother’s name was Hyuuga, who’s identity isn’t revealed until later but one of his eyes is a red cat eyes and his left hand is a claw like hand similar to what a mutated Virus looks like, Hyuuga starts tempting Rei, who starts acting strange because of it, his powers seem to change from time to time to a much darker kind, eventually Hyuuga goes after his little brother and attacks him, Rei shows up and is beat up badly, before Hyuuga can give the killing blow Kazuo steps in between and is killed, his body deleting in tiny fragments to the Underworld, Kazuo flips and when his other friends try to reason with him a symbol gets activated and opens a dimensional rift to another world, they get sucked in and Rei turns back to normal, by normal I mean that when he started to flip blood started to stream out of his eyes and he was deleting buildings, streets etc. at random They land in a abandoned city, the city is more like medieval with white buildings but it is locked in a box, literally, the city is surrounded by a gray wall, that also covers the ceiling, Rei in unconscious and the rest go in to investigate, this is where two of the 10 people activate their knight gems when the castle’s defense starts to attack them, Rei then finds out that he isn’t capable of using his gems properly after what happened and is hurt badly, since he cant boot up a repair program anymore he has to heal like a normal person, this is where Wataru, a young student from first grade who gained a Knight gem and Urara, a girl from Rei’s class take over Virus busting for a while, they return back to the real world through the teleportation pad Kazuo however isn’t dead, he was taken out of the Underworld by his brother and now resides in another dimension his brother made a long time ago, eventually he slowly gets brainwashed, his brother tells him about a story of the past, of how they were once Knights for the king of Annon a giant city that was being threatened by creatures called Viruses, the Knights defended the city until one of them turned dark, his name was Kuran, the angel of death... Kuran once killed him and destroyed the world, now with his gem in Rei’s possession Hyuuga has to make sure it gets destroyed before Kuran’s blood awakens and destroys yet another world, Kazuo starts believing this and gains his own Knight gem Hyuuga doesn’t remain still though, he leaves Kazuo for a while and when Rei is involved in an attack, that is taken care of by Wataru and Urara, he is taken into the Underworld by Hyuuga, who tells Rei that he is in fact Kazou’s older brother and because Rei has been playing too many games with a silly girl and his younger brother he decided to punish him, he rips of his right hand and his left eye then leaves him in the Underworld to the Viruses he once deleted Rei, hurt and once again mind raped gets saved by a ghost of a young girl, she doesn’t speak but takes care of him and makes sure he doesn’t die, Davis eventually sees her face and sees that her face is ripped open and covered with blood, her eyes are red like Hyuuga’s and eventually she gives him one of her eyes, it turns liquid and runs into his hole where it fills the hole but doesn’t become an eye yet, eventually she takes of her bracelet and attaches it to his wrist, where his hand was ripped off, the bracelet holds another Knight gem and she kisses him, causing it to awaken to get him out of the Underworld While the rest of the gang is looking in the boxed city they find a dimensional rift opening in the city and a huge blobbed creature comes out consisting of thousands of hands with one red eye, eventually they defeat it and find out that it is in fact Rei, who is badly injured, his hand reformed itself but is a little claw like and his eye looks like a burn wound, eventually it starts healing itself and he is left with a red eye As Rei is still healing he finds out that he now can’t use his powers anymore since they backfire on him and injure him more, he eventually meets up with Kazuo again who is lost between his two lives of his current one and the one from the past, he claims to always have loved Kuran and wants to awaken him so they can be together again and rapes him :x I have up until this point but it will end with Kuran awakening and killing Kazuo, Kuran / Rei then gets kidnapped by the government and that is where part 4 starts which I haven’t thought about just yet Spoiler for Rewrite part 3, also known as Crusaders, plot for the fictional version:
To be added later, my hand hurts lol and my spelling is turning horrible because I typed too much Drawings: Comments: Okay when I started making this story I wanted to do something with uniforms, but then I soon found out that the idea was already taken by D. Gray-man >.<; so I had to think of something else, which I did because I didn’t like it anymore later on Comments: 1. Okay this is the old armor design for Urara, it was a small sketch I made while waiting in front of an instance in World of Warcraft, but I made a better one later on which I am going to use 2. This is the armor I made several months after the first one was made, a lot of improvement and it is my final armor design for her Comments: Actually some basic drawing I made from a scene in the Black Gatomon fanfiction version, made somewhere in early 2005 Comments: 1. A character sketch for Crusaders 2. A sketch of what I want Kuran to look like, he looks more demonic and there is dried blood surrounding his eyes to his cheeks, he also has demonic wings and pointy ears =3 Comments: 1. This is the first sketch of a character I want to put in the fourth part, she is a Virus that stayed more human than any normal Virus, meaning she is of a stronger class than the others, her attitude is more like a wild woman, she wants to look nice, go out and have fun and if someone crosses her path she just kills them, she also does it when she doesn’t get what she wants or just to lose frustrations 2. A better drawing of her, showing her weapon as well, she has an axe that can throw out a laser like whip Added both Neko Mimi Valkyr and Rewrite, part 3 of Rewrite will be added later |
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