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Alright, so Alex is initially strong enough to put up a good fight instead of getting his ass handed to him and he fights Chrono to a draw prior to the final battle. Quote:
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2008-06-05, 09:55 | Link #842 |
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*me slowly and groggily lurches in*
sigh...Boy, did I ever have a fun night last night...massive storm, the power went out, and I got about 4 hours of sleep all told... I'll do a breaker later...looks like there's plenty to go through. Including belated happy birthday to Hayate-chan. *tosses Hayate a watermelon* Looks like it's okay here, though. *yawns* Later...
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does whatever he wants.
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Wait till the unexpected third party in their little platonic pair comes along and things will get interesting... I was reminded of it upon re-reading my own chapter, but originally...no. It's in keeping with another motif in my fic, though, which I'll keep secret for now. Quote:
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Though I would not at all consider A's a very good example of battle tactics, and more like a whole chain reaction of ambushes, plus a lucky case of pitting people whom 'you can read easily against you'...Chrono is just that. Quote:
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*FFFFFLLLEEEEZZZZZ t3h wrath of Ian Fleming!!!!!* Quote:
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*and I think I've claimed purple as my scream color by now * I'm currently indexing my OCs for ghaz to put them up...so I won't write for a while. But since I've been ordered by FA to write fasta, I shall have to. *shrugs* Xena, out. |
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2008-06-05, 10:27 | Link #846 |
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Spoiler for Background Information: Albert W. Wily:
Name: Zero Alias: None Gender: Male Species: Artificial Human/Cyborg, Type-00A model Age: 15 Height: 6’4” Weight: 210 lbs Skin: Pale Hair: Blonde Eyes: Blue Device: None Magic System: Ancient Belka Ranking: AA Moral Alignment: Chaotic Good Theme Songs: “Vestige”, T.M. Revolution “Reason”, Tamaki Nami “Reclaimer”, Martin O’Donnell Spoiler for Character History:
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....you know, I just realized how pathetically short Zero's spell list is, even for someone with a spotty magical education.
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2008-06-05, 10:33 | Link #848 | |||
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2008-06-05, 10:37 | Link #849 | |
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@Goose: Caro's health drinks pack far more punch than 1000 of Shamal's...
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Certainly gave me loads of reasons for Inquisition action, but a part of me still wants Cthulu, so... *looks at Infernal Affairs plot flanked with doomsday villains* ...Iya, Iya. It's just writing style really. Too bad if you don't appreciate it. Yes. I noticed. Now get her off of me. -_-
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2008-06-05, 10:47 | Link #850 | ||
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I fear the day he tries one of Caro's >_< No, Chao definetely uses Greek. Negi uses Latin. Quote:
Aaaw, but she just wants to show she loves you. Kha: *death glare* Oh, allright. But she's such a good girl aren't you Cadia-chan? *pets Cadia's head* Cadia Zwei: Wai! Cadia is a good girl! *glomps Keroko-kun* |
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2008-06-05, 11:03 | Link #851 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
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If by military you meant crazy shit like Cameron, Alamo or even Stamford Bridge, I'll gladly take it over doomday villains any day.
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2008-06-05, 11:24 | Link #852 |
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Please watch ep24 again. he didn't steer them into a trap. He was trying to steer them away from it. The only way Regius' actions can be considered steering Zest's group into a trap is if he actually anticipated Zest's preemptive raid on the facility after telling him off and actually wanted him to do it.
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2008-06-05, 11:40 | Link #853 | ||||
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So much...bluecheesium . A very good read, sir. Looking forward to more, especially from that girl in the opening Quote:
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2008-06-05, 11:44 | Link #854 |
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This was suppose to be in yesterday... sigh. I need to work faster...
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Very nice! The beginning made it very interessting! I was a little twitching with the "Special Operative" Rank... I always had to think about my TSAB Special Forces. The fight was nice. :3 Quote:
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*nearly dies from laughting* Thank you! That was great! xD
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2008-06-05, 12:32 | Link #856 | |
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2008-06-05, 18:26 | Link #857 |
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Okay, so the A's timeline is more or less worked out (roughly), now let's hit the A's to Nanoha Incident Timeline.
The first five months following A’s leading up to the A’s Epilogue have already been mostly covered in the manga and the tail end of the anime. During this time, Hayate, Alex, the Wolks, and Nanoha and Fate assume their positions as cadets in their various positions, but they won’t actively begin acting as combat instructors, investigators, enforcers, etc for quite some time (6 years later, according to the StrikerS manga). Alex, wanting to stick with Hayate, joins the Wolkenritter in what the manga calls the “Special Investigations Assistance Department”, which I assume provides backup units for SIO officers in the field. Also, just for the record, Hayate doesn’t have an ambition to become a commander and operate on the back lines (nice cop-out there, 7Arcs), but a desire to fly in the skies with her beloved friends and family, facing and conquering all challenges together. Now, since the Nanoha incident takes place a few months after the girls join the TSAB, I’m going to assume one of their early assignments involves good old Jail, since the Type-IV gadgets are involved with the incident and I doubt Jail would use those for anything less than an absolute emergency. With Hayate able to use her spells to much greater effect than 7Arcs allowed her to, Hayate winds up taking a much more active role in the investigation, and eventually she and Alex trace Jail to his base, thinking from their investigation that they’re just after a simple arms dealer, not a mad scientist with an army of mechanized troops at his command. This goes with Vita’s talk in the StrikerS manga of the unexpectedness of the attack (“It was just supposed to be another day with her…”). In response to Hayate’s and Alex’s presence, Jail quickly evacuates what he can of his base and his most important resources, while scrambling Cinque and Tre to lead the Type-IVs against Alex and Hayate. The two are caught in an ambush and Hayate is critically injured by a barrage of Cinque’s Stinger knives, despite Alex’s best efforts at supporting and protecting her. Thus, the Nanoha Incident becomes the Hayate Incident. Alex pulls out, Jail escapes, and Hayate spends the next month in a coma. The aftershocks of this incident ripple outwards through the cast like an asteroid dropped into the Pacific Ocean. Alex gains Vita’s obsession with not failing Hayate again after an extended period of angsting about his failure. The Wolks as a whole are similarly affected. Fate still fails her Enforcer exam, though by a slightly smaller margin than she did in canon. Nanoha, however, takes it the worst. Nanoha passed over taking the mission Hayate had volunteered for since she believed Hayate wouldn’t have any problems with it. The important part, however, comes from the fact that while Hayate was out fighting Jail’s forces, Nanoha was focusing on her ambition to become a combat instructor with her continued intensive training. Around the same time Hayate is injured, Nanoha is ordered to see a physician after she passes out during a training exercise with her mentor. The exam reveals the extent of the strain her body is under, and Nanoha is immediately given a doctor’s order to cease and desist all training exercises to allow her body to recover. The point of all this is a single guilty thought running through Nanoha’s head; “If I had taken that mission instead of Hayate, she wouldn’t be in this condition now.” This forces her to rethink her priorities, and leads her to give up on her ambition of becoming a combat instructor, and instead finds a place in the hierarchy where she can be of assistance to both Fate and Hayate, most likely as an Intelligence Department Investigator like Acous (“The name’s Takamachi. Nanoha Takamachi.”). *EDIT* Note that the specific unit Nanoha joins isn't all that important in the long run, the point is keeping the Aces together and letting them operate as the invincible team that they've proven themselves to be. They don't necessarily have to be in the exact same unit acting under the same orders, but their roles have to at least complement each other. For instance, another idea of mine was to have Nanoha join the navy and eventually gain command over her own warship. Fate would be assigned as this ship's resident Enforcer, and Hayate and the Wolks would use Nanoha's ship as a base of operations. The problem with this is now Nanoha is relegated to a command position and is getting somewhat shafted, though not to the same extent that Hayate was.
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Considering the fact you're about tear off my head for even considering to involve Vita in Yakyuken, I think my fear is justified. |
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2008-06-05, 21:24 | Link #860 | |
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Not according to the OC Timeline on page 1.
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