Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[lil-d01]

Haruka will be there right? Because Shizuru needs someone in her year to tease on, and get organised around.

THE WORLD NEEDS MORE HARUKA~! And Yukino of course, but she's not an otome.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

[rkriku]

so is Natsuki gonna be the principle or a student?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

OBJECTION!!!

*SLAMS HAND ON TABLE*

I DEMAND MORE!!!

Good presentation so far :3 I like what I'm seeing, but I'll withhold a full judgment until I see a completed chapter.

[lil-d01]

Aww, I wanted to imagine Hayate being an Otome. D:

Like ghazghkull said, good so far. =)

Though who is this certain principal? ^^" *waits for completed chapter*

[Kagerou]

I'd comment...
But I know nothing about the crossover >.<

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

interest reaching unhealthy levels

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

Spoiler for When Saint X deploys Superweapons:

SATASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~

WAHT THE HELL ARE YOU PLANNING TO DO NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW?

You will not proceed with that unless you ask my permission or ideas!!!

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

*Sets both Mai Hime and Mai Otome to torrent.*

Damnit, now I've gotta see the series for this to make sense.

Oh, well. Not doubting it's quality or anythin'.
Keep it comin' Sata-chan.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by lil-d01

Aww, I wanted to imagine Hayate being an Otome. D:

Like ghazghkull said, good so far. =)

Though who is this certain principal? ^^" *waits for completed chapter*

Hayate as an Otome....now that's sexy :3

Originally Posted by Saint X

Spoiler for When Saint X deploys Superweapons:

SATASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~

You will not proceed with that unless you ask my permission!!!

*Grabs a Thunder Hammer and smashes SaintX to smithereens*

Shut up and let him/her write!

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Hayate as an Otome....now that's sexy :3



*Grabs a Thunder Hammer and smashes SaintX to smithereens*

Shut up and let him/her write!

Shaddap!

*Smithereens kill ghaz*

I was the first person to have thought of a Nano/Otome xover but work was taking its toll on me.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3781741/...me_Daisen_HiME : that's the Otome/Nano xover

Kha has the Nano/Otome xover... the other side of the same story

I'll be back!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

I took a different, and more OCfied approach (includes Keroko's Keroko, Kha's Kha and SaintX's Captain Kyla assisting the Aces. >.>), but that's cos the mission's different fundamentally.

Looks good so far; but be careful not to fall into the Fanservice Trap. Mai Otome lacked oomph because the plot was lost somewhat, and many things weren't explained. Mai Hime was just plain bad. LolResurrection = [PHAIL] IMO.

If I knew that Shizuki/Natzuru was so popular here, I'd have gotten FileS 3 underway instead of cloistering myself into the OC thread. Curse you Satashi! Now I feel like working on it again...

[panther_munchy]

Spoiler for Castle. Part 2...1 if you treat the last part as a prologue:

"At least nine were killed and twelve injured in another attack on the Allied Forces' bases, this time off the West Coast. It was the fifth time in two weeks that this has occurred, with each attack lasting between five to seven minutes. There does not appear to be a fixed pattern in the choice of location, but official reports have suggested that all were committed by the same person, who was using a variety of bladed weapons..."

Click.

"...rumors have circulated regarding this mysterious assailant, who has yet to express any demands. Even their gender is unknown as each attack occurred too quickly for security cameras to capture footage that could be used to trace the person, dubbed 'Flash' in some circles..."

Click.

"...this recent wave of violence against Allied military bases has led to questions by various parties about the security level at camp, as well as the ability of defense forces in counteracting acts of terrorism..."

Click. The television screen went blank.

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"Let's take this outside," Alicia said, "This place has been wrecked more than enough already. People do need to make a living, you know."

The red beast let out a dreadful bark of a laugh, before tearing through the remains of the tent entrance, muttering all the while about foolish pride.

"...Alicia..."

The blonde was quiet for a long moment, before her lips curled into a smile. "It'll all work out somehow. And...sorry for the mess."

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They faced each other in the sand, blazing heat twisting the air until everything looked more than a little distorted.

A deep sigh. "Arf. Does Fate know that you're here?"

As though a hidden trigger had been struck, the wolf-thing - Arf - let out a mad roar, leaping at its opponent. "YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO USE THAT NAME!"

She dove away, though just barely. Arf's speed and size did not match up in the least. "And why wouldn't I, exactly? She's my sister."

"Some sister!" Turning in mid-air, the huge canine lunged once again. "You don't even know what a state she's gotten into because of you!"

Alicia's eyes widened in shock. "...what?!"

The blow connected, Arf's claws sinking deeply into her torso.

A loud piercing sound cut through the air. It took moments before any of them realized that it was that of Nanoha screaming.

Blood was spurting out from the open wound, spattering Arf's orange-vermilion fur. The animal's rage seemed to have subsided with seeing the damage done. Panting deeply, it stared at Alicia as if not truly aware of what was happening before its eyes.

Running forward panickedly, uncaring as to what she could - or could not, as the case may be - do, only that Alicia was probably dying and she could not be standing there...Nanoha was shocked once again when she saw the blonde's wound slowly closing.

"What - how..." Arf's words trailed off as it seemed to turn blurry around the edges, flickering like a poor video image, before wisps of smoke swirled around its very self. In less than the time it took to blink, there was nothing left of where a large canine beast had been astride its prey.

Gazing down at her travelling cloak - which still had blood on it - Alicia let out another deep sigh. "It looks like I have some explaining to do..."

Part 1 (prologue?) is here.

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Not sure exactly on ages right now. I need Nanoha and Fate to be coral when they are placed into the school.

Then they'd need to be 14 or less. That's the enrollment age for Corals. I suppose you could get away with reporting a fake age on the admission records, but do remember not to let Nanoha and Fate mention their real ages in that case. Also,
if they were 17 and this is intended to be part of the Strikers timeline, Hayate ought to be busy with the preparations for RF6 and not really available. Heck, it that was the case, they'd be living and working on Mid full-time by now.

“We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Semantics thing. But this should be either a military alliance or outright admission into the Bureau.

“Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Should that be "they've dubbed it the 'Otome System'?"

"That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... "

Those would be called "diplomats", Hayate.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by rkriku

so is Natsuki gonna be the principle or a student?

Student. I debated the possibilities on each but found that being a student would leave more opportunities open for interaction and plot movement.

Originally Posted by lil-d01

Aww, I wanted to imagine Hayate being an Otome. D:

Like ghazghkull said, good so far. =)

Though who is this certain principal? ^^" *waits for completed chapter*

Said principle isn't someone we know and love. I needed someone who would make a contract with the T.S.A.B. They won't play a large role.

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

interest reaching unhealthy levels

XDD!

Originally Posted by Kagerou

I'd comment...
But I know nothing about the crossover >.<

Mai Otome is pretty nifty ^^ It's tottally about lesbians

Originally Posted by Saint X

Spoiler for When Saint X deploys Superweapons:

SATASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~

WAHT THE HELL ARE YOU PLANNING TO DO NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW?

You will not proceed with that unless you ask my permission or ideas!!!

Sorry >.< I don't want to take someone elses ideas T_T I'd feel bad. I have most of the main things planned out right now ^^

Originally Posted by Krinen

*Sets both Mai Hime and Mai Otome to torrent.*

Damnit, now I've gotta see the series for this to make sense.

Oh, well. Not doubting it's quality or anythin'.
Keep it comin' Sata-chan.

I was told HiME was better then Otome but I think Otome is the best by far. I'd say to watch Otome first but I think most of the charm it gets is from the HiME background ><

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

Then they'd need to be 14 or less. That's the enrollment age for Corals. I suppose you could get away with reporting a fake age on the admission records, but do remember not to let Nanoha and Fate mention their real ages in that case. Also,
if they were 17 and this is intended to be part of the Strikers timeline, Hayate ought to be busy with the preparations for RF6 and not really available. Heck, it that was the case, they'd be living and working on Mid full-time by now.



Semantics thing. But this should be either a military alliance or outright admission into the Bureau.



Should that be "they've dubbed it the 'Otome System'?"



Those would be called "diplomats", Hayate.

I have ages already taken care of ^^

As for other things, this is a crossover and an AU becasue of it. So some things can't be explained specifically.

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Krinen

*Sets both Mai Hime and Mai Otome to torrent.*

Damnit, now I've gotta see the series for this to make sense.

Oh, well. Not doubting it's quality or anythin'.
Keep it comin' Sata-chan.

Watch HiME first, and Otome gets about fifteen levels of funny after watching it. Just make sure that you REALLY got HiME before you progress to Otome.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for beginning:

I gasped lightly when my cell phone started vibrating in my briefcase. Across the room from me I saw Nanoha quickly reach into hers as well, followed shortly by Hayate shoving her hand inside the bag hanging by her side. All three of us at the same time could only mean one thing: A mission. I discreetly peeked into my bag and saw my phone lit up and demanding to be answered. “T.S.A.B.” was flashing across the screen and I licked my lips. Fortunately for us the bell rang to signal the end of the school day and the three of us took off as fast as we could without looking suspicious. When we all assembled on the roof we took out our phones and answered. Three conversations went on at the same time but the end result was the same: Report to the briefing room for an assignment. It seemed as if we were going to be given a long distance mission again, on some remote planet accented by a blue star near it's moon.

Dream Wing
By:
Satashi

Echoing came down the hallways as the three Aces made their way to the briefing room assigned to them for this current mission. The large regal hallways of the T.S.A.B's main office building towered around them but the three didn't seem nervous as the others around them. Several people stopped in their tracks to salute the three. Already they were famous enough to earn nicknames despite only being seventeen years old. Ranks were passed as if they were nothing to the group, mage level far above people twice their age. Their skills were almost legendary, making soldiers think twice before even engaging them in conversation. Their heels clicked when they reached their target door, eyes firm and dedicated.

Nanoha's stomach growled loudly. “I'm hungry...”

Fate facepalmed. “I told you to eat something before we came...”

“Come on,” Hayate nodded at them and opened the door to lead her friends in. “We're here!” She declared merrily when she saw Chrono and Lindy sitting in chairs across the single table in the room. “Sorry we are a tad late, we had to wait for class to end.” Once they were close enough she stopped to salute them both before sitting with her partners.

Chrono nodded lightly towards them. “Glad to have you all here again.” Leaning forward, he got to the points. “As you may have guessed, we have a mission for you three. This is one that will really push what you have learned.”

Nanoha crossed her legs to try and get comfortable in the stiff chair. “What is it?”

Lindy drank from the small cup of tea in front of herself before replying to the question. “We have had an offer to merge military powers with a non-administrated planet.”

Hayate blinked as this soaked in. “What does that have to do with us?”

Fate leaned back in her chair. “We're not going to have to fight them to prove our power are we?”

“Kind of,” Chrono responded. “We don't know much about this planet other than that it uses a... rather unique form of combat.”

Nanoha's interest was perked at hearing that. “Oh?”

A nod. “Yes. We have dubbed it 'The Otome System' for the time being.”

Lindy took the small silence after that to explain. “The headmaster of a certain school on this planet has contacted us showing interest. It would appear as if this school trains the most powerful warriors on their planet. We need you three to investigate this for us.”

Hayate thought about what was said while Nanoha and Fate looked at each other questioningly. “But...” She stopped her question until she received a nod to go ahead with it. “That is normally handled by officalls dedicated to the relationships between planets... Why are we needed?”

Chrono gave her a light smile. “The headmaster there can't risk her school finding out about this. The details will be given once you accept.”

“Our jobs?” Fate pondered aloud.

The male smiled as the other two girls looked at him expectingly. “Fate, you're job is to infiltrate the school where the training takes place and test how powerful the 'Otome system' is. Your combat experience and fine judgment of character is key to getting a firm grasp on exactly what this technique is. Nanoha,” His eyes turned to the instructor. “You will be her partner and will be responsible for dissecting all the abilities you encounter. From there you will teach Fate how to use said moves to ensure that she gets the full effect of what we will be experiencing.” Looking to the side a little more, he rested his gaze on the final Ace. “And Hayate, your job will be the most important. You will be working outside of the school gathering any and all information you can. You will guide your two partners from afar as well be in control of this entire operation. It will be up to you to work with to insert them into the school and ensure that they stay safe. This will be your first completely solo mission. Once you are dropped off on the planet 'HiMe' it will be entirely up to you.”

The three girls looked at each other in turn before nodding to confirm it. “We accept,” Hayate stated firmly.

A small flick of his wrist sent envelopes to each female. “Here is your additional information,” He smiled to himself. “I knew I could count on you three.”

That's what I have so far. Thoughts?

My thoughts: Well... it sounds as though you actually figured out a way to get this to work. Good job, also: I'm not really sure how the Gakuenchou would contact the TSAB... perhaps it should be vice-versa?

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Watch HiME first, and Otome gets about fifteen levels of funny after watching it. Just make sure that you REALLY got HiME before you progress to Otome.



My thoughts: Well... it sounds as though you actually figured out a way to get this to work. Good job, also: I'm not really sure how the Gakuenchou would contact the TSAB... perhaps it should be vice-versa?

Right then. Will do. (Thank god HiMe's done first.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Sorry >.< I don't want to take someone elses ideas T_T I'd feel bad. I have most of the main things planned out right now ^^

*gags SaintX and ties him up*

You are mistaken; I merely gave SaintX the licence to start working on my idea. Feel free to work on your's; if you must then I give YOU the licence to work on a Nanoha Otome xover. Our's is definitely AU to yours so I've no worries of continuity. And I'm not afraid of chronological issues; people will know that I posted the first chapter way before Dream's Wing hit the press.

Do us proud, like you always had, Satashi-sama!

Originally Posted by Satashi

I was told HiME was better then Otome but I think Otome is the best by far. I'd say to watch Otome first but I think most of the charm it gets is from the HiME background ><

Which is kinda sad, for I found Hime rather distasteful, what with that resurrection... It was good until the ending let the whole damn joint down. Made me watch Otome smirking instead of enjoying it.

Otome >> Hime IMO, though both kinda fail in different ways...

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

My thoughts: Well... it sounds as though you actually figured out a way to get this to work. Good job, also: I'm not really sure how the Gakuenchou would contact the TSAB... perhaps it should be vice-versa?

Actually after thinking, I'm going to re-do a bit.... Going to have the TSAB find the otome school after looking into the gems for being lost logia. After seeing them in action they are going to observe to see if they are worth making a treaty with. Makes more sense that way!

I'll re-do the opening bit and repost it later

Originally Posted by Kha

*gags SaintX and ties him up*

You are mistaken; I merely gave SaintX the licence to start working on my idea. Feel free to work on your's; if you must then I give YOU the licence to work on a Nanoha Otome xover. Our's is definitely AU to yours so I've no worries of continuity. And I'm not afraid of chronological issues; people will know that I posted the first chapter way before Dream's Wing hit the press.

^^; I had no idea you were doing it. I don't think anyone is really going to care if there are two stories of it around. I did that little spoof a while ago about one and people seemed to like it so that's what brought this on.

I was planning on doing a short today but my damn father ruined my mood again. So maybe by lunch I'll be able to.

[Jimmy C]

HiME and Otome are examples of the Sunrise series "trainwreck" in action after all. Along with GSeed Destiny.