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KiNA · 2009-03-10, 02:02

Rejected.

Please see the description post on why I rejected yours

ryuukazi · 2009-03-10, 02:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marina

First version:

CnC please.

i think side pics dont count though Marina

Marina · 2009-03-10, 02:03

boo

I was hoping her hair was covering up enough of her lower face *sobs*

Question, are these safe?

KiNA · 2009-03-10, 02:16

The 2nd one is.

**Solace** · 2009-03-10, 02:29

Posting here for approval since KiNA is in a rejecting mood.

KiNA · 2009-03-10, 02:31

What is that annoying white line?

No I'm not rejecting yours

.. Just curious of that line.. And I dont know, its quite flat .

**Solace** · 2009-03-10, 02:32

Sec I'll link sauce.

I tried a few things to not make it stand out so much, but since everything else was so dark I didn't want to just color over it. I can try a few things to blend in the render more though.

KiNA · 2009-03-10, 02:39

LOL.. its her arm? @.@

It sure as hell dont look like arm in your sig

Usami Haru · 2009-03-10, 04:03

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marina

@Usami Haru - I really like the sig, but to be honest, I don't like either border. I wonder what it would look like with a lighter color border...

D:

Yeah, I'm having some trouble with the border...but borderless looks worse

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Spoiler for Color version:

Spoiler for First versions:

Quote:

I really like the background and the position of the character, but it looks kinda plain to me...

felix · 2009-03-10, 04:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

I like the border on this one.

Oh and... Can you pm me the source, I can not seem to find it anywhere.

**Solace** · 2009-03-10, 04:14

It's in this post:

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=119

Larthak · 2009-03-10, 04:19

Final Entry

Ended up making a few pixel edits (comparison [here]). >_<

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sacchin

2nd draft. Not the "Death the Kid" entry.

Spoiler:

Nice one. I really like the background(s), is the part on the right like that on purpose? The position of the render is great but the text is kinda hard to read, other than that, I think it has a lot of potential.

Seconded. It is readable, but...it can be better.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

Which border looks better?

Spoiler for pics:

I like the second one a little more... (Any other C&C is also appreciated of course)

Yeah, the second one fits in better in this case. Somehow, the colored versions don't appeal to me. Nice job with the fonts btw.

Marina · 2009-03-10, 04:20

@usami haru - I like version 1 of your colored borders

Kana Futayo · 2009-03-10, 06:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

Nice one. I really like the background(s), is the part on the right like that on purpose? The position of the render is great but the text is kinda hard to read, other than that, I think it has a lot of potential.

Thanks. The right side (the parasol) is actually like that on purpose because it's included on the render.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Larthak

Seconded. It is readable, but...it can be better.

Thanks for telling.

v2

Spoiler:

ganbaru · 2009-03-10, 10:09

My first participation to the SOTM, C&cC appreciated.

(My second idea, I know than KINA wouldn't had accepted thie first.)

Spoiler for first idea:

LKK · 2009-03-10, 11:05

Version 8 with 2 font options. (I repositioned the text as well.)

Font 1

Font 2

Spoiler for version 7 for reference:

Comments?

@ ganbaru
I like your entry. If there was one thing that I would recommend fixing, it would be the integration of the girl (whose name I've forgotten) into the picture. The edges between her and the background are too abrupt for my tastes, especially on the left between her and the farm scene.

White Manju Bun · 2009-03-10, 11:10

@Usami: I like the first one.
@Sacchin: Text is better but I still think its too light.
@ganbaru: Nice but there is no e at the end of future...(unless its suppose to be spelled that way)
@Sensei: I like the top one better.

Urei · 2009-03-10, 11:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by LKK

Version 8 with 2 font options. (I repositioned the text as well.)

Font 1

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I prefer this one. It goes better with the whole signature and it's clearer

Evil Rick · 2009-03-10, 11:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by Endrance

gotta have your animation fix huh

My current try...still getting use to using something other than photoshop

Hmmm.... looks kinds blured, don't?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deathkillz

What I meant is that you can add some lighting to one side of the siggy (the top left corner looks like a good place, especially since there is a star there). You can make the render stand out or blend into the background more that way and add some depth ^^'

Another update on mine, version 5

I can't think on anything that's missing on this sig.

Quote:

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

How's this?

V4

I'm speakless

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marina

Hey! I like this one, Can I use it too?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Solace

Posting here for approval since KiNA is in a rejecting mood.

Looks cool

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

I think this one is the better

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sacchin

I don't know, the bg doesn't catch me at all

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

My first participation to the SOTM, C&cC appreciated.

Actuallym I think this one is pretty cool

But what about the "futur" text?

Quote:

Originally Posted by LKK

Font 1

Comments?

This font looks good

ganbaru · 2009-03-10, 14:24

second version, I corrected my text ( I had mixed my english with my french

) and changed some details

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LKK Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Virginia, USA Age: 62	Version 8 with 2 font options. (I repositioned the text as well.) Font 1 Font 2 Spoiler for version 7 for reference: Comments? @ ganbaru I like your entry. If there was one thing that I would recommend fixing, it would be the integration of the girl (whose name I've forgotten) into the picture. The edges between her and the background are too abrupt for my tastes, especially on the left between her and the farm scene. __________________ Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous Last edited by LKK; 2009-03-10 at 11:12. Reason: added comment to ganbaru

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