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ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 05:09

Hmm, I wonder if I should tread around the bush.

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 05:15

Huh?

Word Limit add

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 05:20

Y'now, increasingly unyouthful attitude between the main pair...

The problem is that means I have to kick it up to M rating, sheesh.

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 05:31

Just don't make it blatant. You can imply the characters having sex: Just don't show it. Hell, when I was younger Gundam Seed showed up on CARTOON NETWEORK. They didn't even bother censoring Flay seducing Kira or Nichol's death; they just cut away at the last second.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 05:36

^ this

Maybe I'll just use Mirage Colloid and sneaking past the radar.

Admittedly, it's EXTREMELY FUNNY that 100% of shonen fanfiction should be classified as MA, because we have explicit violence described all the damn time.

Quote:

T
Suitable for teens, 13 years and older, with some violence, minor coarse language, and minor suggestive adult themes.

M
Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with non-explicit suggestive adult themes, references to some violence, or coarse language. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions.

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 05:42

Human's tend to be stupid; you can gore someone in a fictional and sometimes real media and no one will bat an eye at it. But when a freaking virtual nipple flashes on screen for a microsecond you get the immediate red flag.

Hell, this happens with sex related things at all. You know the Regular Show? Characters are shown getting into crazy shit and getting hurt with no problems, but the presence of ONE condom for ONE split second was enough for the episode to be re-drawn.

Anyway, is there any estimate when I can get the picture? I'll update the cover for it.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 05:43

Tonight

Maybe 2-4 hour, sorry, I'm kind of busy right now.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:00

Ummm

This is the best I can do for the moment, if you're not satisfied I'll do extra for sure.

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:01

Shit, that's almost perfect! Can I ask just a couple more things?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:05

Sure, go ahead

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:08

1. Can you make the eyes yellow? Sorry.

2. Remove the cast? Both his arms are bandaged but he still moves around and swing a sword.

3. Change the shirt? Nothing fancy, but something like a Renaissance era shirt that commoners would wear.

Also, what fic do you need checked? Is it the KH one?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:19

Maybe the slider one, but it's unfinished to say at the least.

As for KH, I have stuff to consider, but I put it on hold for now. So either way, you can relax or write your own.

Ah, the cast

Anyway, how about the neck?

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:24

@ Senpai - How big is it? And am I allowed to add words?

Can you remove it as well? This is medieval time so he doesn't have those yet. Also, here: http://assassinscreed.wikia.com/wiki...rotherhood.png

Something to base the clothes on.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:34

What do you want to add?

Also to give contrast, I give a lush beige (y'now, those mud-drenched slave-like clothes) instead of gray shirt.

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:40

As adding details and character actions. I won't change the plot

Also, can you keep it Gray or White? It's supposed to look neutral colored so dirt and much are noticeable on it.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:44

If you want I'll entitle you co writer. Blitz do this sort of work too. It helped me MUCH.

Sure thing, should I add traces of blood (and how much)?

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:48

Sure, but what about the Wincest story? That's been going on for a while now.

Nope, but could you add just the barest traces of burnt skin making its way past his eye and arm bandages? Just redden the skin and it should be enough.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 06:55

Which one? ST is pout on hold until Blitz say anything, and I'm in no mood for rapey-rapey

PHEW! I finished at last...

Eratas123 · 2013-01-21, 06:58

The longer one. Has Blitz contacted you at all about it these past months?

SWEEETTT! Though I can't help but get the feeling that's supposed to be a female

Was the original pic not male or is he just drawn in a pretty way?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-01-21, 07:01

Nope, I'll wait until April or May and see if he pop up somehow. (That means ~1 year hiatus) If not, then I'll continue the draft by myself (and hope you have time to help)

It was a girl, but the picture itself is VERY boyish compared to rest (as you can see in the first one I posted)

2013-01-21, 05:09	Link #39821
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hmm, I wonder if I should tread around the bush. __________________

2013-01-21, 05:15	Link #39822
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Huh? Word Limit add __________________

2013-01-21, 05:20	Link #39823
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Y'now, increasingly unyouthful attitude between the main pair... The problem is that means I have to kick it up to M rating, sheesh. __________________

2013-01-21, 05:31	Link #39824
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Just don't make it blatant. You can imply the characters having sex: Just don't show it. Hell, when I was younger Gundam Seed showed up on CARTOON NETWEORK. They didn't even bother censoring Flay seducing Kira or Nichol's death; they just cut away at the last second. __________________

2013-01-21, 05:42	Link #39826
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Human's tend to be stupid; you can gore someone in a fictional and sometimes real media and no one will bat an eye at it. But when a freaking virtual nipple flashes on screen for a microsecond you get the immediate red flag. Hell, this happens with sex related things at all. You know the Regular Show? Characters are shown getting into crazy shit and getting hurt with no problems, but the presence of ONE condom for ONE split second was enough for the episode to be re-drawn. Anyway, is there any estimate when I can get the picture? I'll update the cover for it. __________________

2013-01-21, 05:43	Link #39827
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Tonight Maybe 2-4 hour, sorry, I'm kind of busy right now. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:00	Link #39828
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ummm This is the best I can do for the moment, if you're not satisfied I'll do extra for sure. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:01	Link #39829
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Shit, that's almost perfect! Can I ask just a couple more things? __________________

2013-01-21, 06:05	Link #39830
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Sure, go ahead __________________

2013-01-21, 06:08	Link #39831
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	1. Can you make the eyes yellow? Sorry. 2. Remove the cast? Both his arms are bandaged but he still moves around and swing a sword. 3. Change the shirt? Nothing fancy, but something like a Renaissance era shirt that commoners would wear. Also, what fic do you need checked? Is it the KH one? __________________

2013-01-21, 06:19	Link #39832
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Maybe the slider one, but it's unfinished to say at the least. As for KH, I have stuff to consider, but I put it on hold for now. So either way, you can relax or write your own. Ah, the cast Anyway, how about the neck? __________________

2013-01-21, 06:24	Link #39833
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - How big is it? And am I allowed to add words? Can you remove it as well? This is medieval time so he doesn't have those yet. Also, here: http://assassinscreed.wikia.com/wiki...rotherhood.png Something to base the clothes on. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:34	Link #39834
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	What do you want to add? Also to give contrast, I give a lush beige (y'now, those mud-drenched slave-like clothes) instead of gray shirt. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:40	Link #39835
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	As adding details and character actions. I won't change the plot Also, can you keep it Gray or White? It's supposed to look neutral colored so dirt and much are noticeable on it. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:44	Link #39836
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	If you want I'll entitle you co writer. Blitz do this sort of work too. It helped me MUCH. Sure thing, should I add traces of blood (and how much)? __________________

2013-01-21, 06:48	Link #39837
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Sure, but what about the Wincest story? That's been going on for a while now. Nope, but could you add just the barest traces of burnt skin making its way past his eye and arm bandages? Just redden the skin and it should be enough. __________________

2013-01-21, 06:55	Link #39838
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Which one? ST is pout on hold until Blitz say anything, and I'm in no mood for rapey-rapey PHEW! I finished at last... __________________

2013-01-21, 06:58	Link #39839
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	The longer one. Has Blitz contacted you at all about it these past months? SWEEETTT! Though I can't help but get the feeling that's supposed to be a female Was the original pic not male or is he just drawn in a pretty way? __________________

2013-01-21, 07:01	Link #39840
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nope, I'll wait until April or May and see if he pop up somehow. (That means ~1 year hiatus) If not, then I'll continue the draft by myself (and hope you have time to help) It was a girl, but the picture itself is VERY boyish compared to rest (as you can see in the first one I posted) __________________