2012-01-24, 08:37 | Link #19382 |
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@ Stratos - Again, it makes sense from a story perspective, but not from a meta perspective. Readers tend to look at things from the view of outside the story, so in justifications don't always work. This is why we said Inami was stealing too much spotlight earlier last year. He got involved with the canon cast's problems, but they don't in his. There's a reason in story, but it looks like he's just hogging it from the readers perspective.
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2012-01-24, 08:47 | Link #19383 | |
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Thing is, seeing as how they don't even give jack about Phantom Task after Ichika almost got shot and Cecilia being stabbed in the arm by a hostile IS. I really don't know what else would shift this guys off their harem antics aside from a blatant asspull. (Which is also one of the things I would to request for your help with, but since you brought it up now. I guess we could work something out)
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2012-01-24, 08:48 | Link #19384 |
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@ Demi
Seems like I'm wrong after all. Indeed the new packet turned the Revive custom into standard Rafale in appearance, but with extra pair of barrier generator. Meaning that Rafael Revive Custom does lose some speed and acceleration but especially maneuverability, for double defense coefficient (both energy barrier and physical armor).
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2012-01-24, 08:53 | Link #19386 |
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@ Stratos - I have no problem with (You have an in story reason, most authprs don't even have that) I also agree that them not giving two shits about Ichika nearly getting shot was annoying as well. I remedy this in Shadow by having Ichika become more expesed to danger by the beginning of the story so he knows how to deal with it and react. I don't knpw how you'll change it, though. I barely see Ichika at all in your fic.
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2012-01-24, 08:58 | Link #19387 | |
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I'm thinking if I should pop in a drone or two during the summer festival to spark their involvement with his endeavour.
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2012-01-24, 09:05 | Link #19389 |
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@ Demi - Nice one
@ Stratos - Drones ain't gonna cut it since Ichika's faced about 2-3 of them by the time the nearlu got shot and he still didn'r care. You need to have him fight living pilots or he won't change. Maybe that's what separates him from Inami: Inami fights drones, Ichika fights pilots. @ Senpai - Did you get the PM?
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2012-01-24, 09:21 | Link #19393 | |
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And yes. As it is now, that's what separates the two male protags from each other. The type of enemies they go up against. (Though it'll eventually reach the point where Inami faces off against living Praxidike pilots so... yeah)
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2012-01-24, 09:38 | Link #19394 |
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Working on second draft...
Why the first draft is logically flawed: A wanderer don't have a fixed address, so technically it is impossible for any mail to reach them in time. Second draft rewind time back a little, detailing the meeting. Edit: Hopefully I can finish the second draft by tonight.
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2012-01-24, 09:40 | Link #19395 |
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@ Stratos - If you have Inami fight against the same enemies, then the differences become moot. You CAN'T give everything to one character There has to be a balance or the story suffers. Ichika can fight people with stolen IS' like M or something.
@ Treme - Good luck.
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2012-01-24, 09:56 | Link #19397 | |
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The canon cast(except for Cecilia) are pretty much segregated until after summer, where normal lessons resume and they'll have more interaction with the OC duo, especially Tsurugi who's now a fellow IS pilot. Also, is the barrier shield level the same for all IS units (600-800~) or do they vary, especially amongst Personal units?
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2012-01-24, 10:13 | Link #19399 | |
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You can say that the difference between speed and defense type is that speed type unit has +1 defense (1 SP per 1 Damage absorbed) while defensive unit has +3 or more (1 SP per 3 damage) or in some case, multilayer defense. *RUUUUNZZZZ*
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2012-01-24, 10:25 | Link #19400 | |
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