Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Chapter 55
Vatican Knights
Spoiler for The way to America:
I awoke in Pink's infirmary, a bit confused I quickly standed up, lots of bends around my body, at least now I could use both of my eyes
"You better return to bed young lady" I turned and saw Pink walking at me
"Or should I sat... Vatican Paladin Vivio Valentine?"
"Vatican Paladin? You mean..." I said at the time Pink putted me again in bed
"Yes, you beat the Mace of Doom, now you are a Vatican Paladin, your rank is now the same that Raphael and Sky" I smile appear on my face
I jumped on my bed, raising my arms, I just couldn't belive it
"Wow, relax, I just fix that" Pink said pointing at my leftarm who had recived the fire from the No Faces in the Mace, I was no sure of what Pink had done but I feeled like new
"You cured me in so short time?"
"He, well... to be honest, you had passed a week asleep here"
I was speakless
"A week?! But... but I... they go to America... without me? Karil!" I was really freaked out
"Vivio, Vivio! Relax, no one had leave the quartels yet, Dr. Van Hellsing is preparing all, the entire army of the Vatican Knights will go to America"
"When?"
"Today in something like... 2 hours"
"WHAA?!" Once again I quickly standed up
"You have to be kidding! I had nothing ready... Were is my Axe?! And my clothes?! Were..." Pink putted her finger my lips
"Don't worry, Karil alredy fixed all that, your Axe and weapons are ready, and I have your clothes right here"
"Karil? She do all this... for me? Even after I... after I hitted her?"
"Silly girl" Pink said "Karil ahd been ehr all the days, she slept here, she ate her, all the time with you, in this moment Sky called her, she is unable to hate Vivio, even more to hate you" I felt a warm sensation in my heart, I still keeped with me my biggest treasure, my dear friend Karil"
"By the way" Pink added " Karil and Jasper are now under your orders"
"Really?!"
"Yes, Sky fixed all, he is very happy to have you now in the Vatican Paladins, now let me bring you your clothes, America is waiting for ours"
Pink bringed me my clothes, I quickly got dressed and walk out, all man in the Vatican Knighst Quartels were moving, Pink was right, the entire Vatican Knights were going to America, ready to face the White Devil and her minions who seemed to be growing in number
I was looking for Karil, but I didn't saw her in any place, we go to the yard, among the crowd I spoted her
"Karil!" I screamed, she turned and saw me, like a thunder, she ran at me and jumped over me, we both falled, she was very exiting
"Vivio! You are okay, I knew you culd do it!" She said at the time she huged me with strenght
"Yes, yes I'm fine I...can you... forgive em?"
"Don't even said that!" She huged me every stronger
At the distance I also saw Jasper, I raised my hand, but he just looked at me and gave me his back, I was shocked
"He has been very strange lately" Karil said, we both standed and I prefered to don't touch the theme
"Vivio Valentine" A voice said, I turned and saw Sky, smilig at me
"Sky..."
"Congragulations, now you are a Vatican Paladin, Nanoha will be in big troubles"I couldn't help ut laugh
"Let's go Vivio, the car that will take us to the ship is ready, America is waiting for us"
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
You are really working hard on Vampire Fate, don't?
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
I consider this a cliffhanger. XD
Can't wait to read the entire thing. Amazing job as always.
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
*looks up* Maron-chan? *blinks and sniffs inspectively* No, but indeed a reference. Its always interesting to find out what other worlds people have traveled to. *Not literally and in case anyone gets confused I'm not talking about the characters*
Fenris:*soft, echoing voice* Kaiser-sama?
Vivio: *looks up from her tea party, several of the dolls sighing in relief, thankful that unlike one unfortunate member of their number they are not lying decapitated on the table while the child eats their stuffing* Yes? I'm a little busy, I could really use some ketchup, or maybe some peanut butter.
Fenris: There's no time for that my liege. Nanoha-san and Fate-san have arrived home and found the babysitter's body in the toilet. It didn't go down like we thought it would.
Vivio: Crap, what do you suggest?
Fenris: We must use the escape pods. You go first Kaiser-sama and I'll divert their attentions.
Vivio: Thank you, Fen-chan. *walks to an oversized teddy bear and looks it in the eyes. suddenly it springs to life, swallowing her whole and proceding to jump out the window and onto the street below before running away*
Fenris: Kaiser-sama will be safe once she reaches the door to Monnowabbah land. Now to just.....
*the door is kicked down and Fate and Nanoha enter, looking mad*
Fenris: Oh....shit, forgot to install the metal door. Thanks Kaiser-sama, thanks alot.
A small short to fufil the lack of a certain pairing
Spoiler for Rooftop- ZafiraxArf (Zarf):
“So what are you doing out here?” Arf silently closed the roof’s door, keeping most of the noise from below out. Even though they were slowly progressing into the late hours of the night it wasn’t dark on the roof, the light from the surrounding buildings saw to that.
Zafira turned his head to the side, meeting Arf’s eyes. The guardian beast had found a way to sneak out of the loud and rowdy party going on below him and onto the roof. He’d started the evening out dressed in a full suit but he’d long shed his jacket and somewhere along the line his shirt had come untucked. His tie too threatened to fall off, being looped around his neck did him no good in the formal department. “Ah. Arf.” The wolfman returned to leaning against the rail and looking up at the sky.
She shook her head, “It’s your party.” She moved closer to him, not quite beside Zafira but close enough.
“It’s their party not mine,” he didn’t look down. “And I’m not fond of crowds anyway.”
Arf sighed and leaned on the railing beside him, looking up as well, trying to see just what it was he was looking at so intently. “It’s just the moon.” Arf saw nothing special about it, it was true they were wolf familiars but this moon was nothing more then a tiny crescent, nothing that would interest Zafira. There weren’t many stars to look at either. For all their technological advances Midchilda could do nothing about light pollution, the stars were all but blocked from view.
“I’m trying to remember what this sky looks like,” Zafira had a nostalgic look in his eyes, like he was remembering something long passed.
Arf giggled, “Well you’ll see it again.”
“I don’t remember the other skies. Is it so bad to want to remember this one?” His
expression didn’t change, he remained his solemn self.
Arf remembered vaguely that none of the Wolkenritter remembered their past lives very well. But she couldn’t fathom why Zafira would be thinking about that sort of thing now. “Why are you…?”
“This is our final life. We are allowed to live our lives out with our master,” he paused and furrowed his brow, “So I don’t want to forget a single moment.”
“Wow… that’s deep.” Arf sighed, “But there are some things—”Someone—“I wouldn’t mind forgetting.”
Zafira looked at her from the corner of his eye. He couldn’t do so for too long because the low cut dress Arf was wearing had a tendency to distract him. He did notice, however, that she suddenly seemed uncomfortable. A change of subject seemed in order, “So why did you leave the party?”
“I just couldn’t take it any more.”
Zafira looked at her and raised an eyebrow before returning to moon watching. “I thought you liked noisy events and they have meat don’t they?”
She turned a rosy color and stuck out her tongue, “It’s not that you big oaf. It’s just you know,” she seemed to deflate, her ears flattened and her tail lowered. “Everyone’s leaving again and I’ll be left here… so I… I don’t really want to celebrate it.”
“We’re not leaving because we want to.”
She looked up at him, trying to look determined and serious. “I know that.”
“Then why?” he looked down, this time holding his gaze.
“But what if everyone forgets about me?” Tears formed in the corners of her eyes.
“What if I don’t matter to anyone?” They started to fall. “What if I’m left all alone?”
Zafira straightened.
Arf’s ears twitched.
Before Arf had time to react Zafira had her penned against the railing.
“Zafira what are you doing?” Arf was utterly confused and very red.
“Do you want me to come back?” His face was serious just like it always was.
“Well of course I do!”
“And do you want me to remember you?”
“Yeah.”
“Then,” He too had turned red, “trust that I’ll come back,” completely scarlet from his ears to his nose. “That we’ll all come back. No matter what.” He backed up letting Arf stand. He looked away.
Arf thought for a moment. “Hey Zafira,” Arf called out his name.
He turned.
Almost as quickly as he had penned her, Arf leaned up and kissed Zafira. She bashfully smiled at the sight of the wide eyed, near comatose Zafira. She folded her hands behind her back, backing up towards the roof’s door. “Then I guess I have no choice but to wait huh?” Arf disappeared back into the building.
Zafira stood there, silent, contemplating and he smiled. Nothing in the world would be able to keep him from coming home.
and the alternate ending
Spoiler for omake:
Vita: Where'd that dog get off to we need to leave.
Signum: Did you check the roof?
Vita: *goes to the roof*... oi Zafira
Zafira: *comatose* ... kiss... kiss...
Vita: What are you going on about?
Zafira: kiss...
Vita: *eyetwitch* Graf Eisen.
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION]
*Zafira becomes a speck in the sky*
Access: Look at her, a prisoner of the gutter,
Condemned by every syllable she ever uttered. *points at V!F* By right she should be taken out and hung,
For the cold-blooded murder of the English tongue.
Fate: Well actually we're speaking fren-
Access: Heavens what a noise!
*laughs so hard her Cloak of Lurkibility fell off*
oh crap!
*pulls it back on*
Also loving Survivor: Lyrical
XD
Sorry for the long wait, but Marksman Tales Chapter 2 "Incident" is now released.
Ooh! I wonder who's attacking. I can't wait for more.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
*snorts some Shine Dust*
Whew!...
*starts seeing things*
(This short dedicated to TSS's crack)
Spoiler for I blame TSS:
Vivio smiled brightly at her friends as they came off the dance floor at their senior prom. Her hair was a little out of place from the hours of dancing, and cheeks flushed from being too hot. As she fanned herself, a cup of punch was offered to her from her date/guardian and she took it gratefully. "Thank you, Zafira."
The blonde's eyes rolled as her friends all squealed....again... over the muscular man in the tux next to her. Zafira's coat was taken off already, being too hot from the mass of people in the large ballroom. The top few buttons were undone to reveal his chiseled chest and his bow tie was undone but still hanging around his neck. Slowly he turned to inspect Vivio's group of friends/founders of the Zafira Fan Club. A quick wink was sent their way, making one girl faint on the spot.
A song started playing and one of his dog ears twitched. Tail wagging, he looked at Vivio and told her, in a very serious tone, what he was about to do. "Exscuse me, Vivio. I need to go bring sexy back."
The man turned and walked forward, people clearing the path to the center of the dance floor like the parting of the red sea. The crowd looked at him expectingly as he prepared himself, and his head jerked up quickly as the beat that he was looking for came.
Bringing his hands up, the wolf, guardian of Vivio, and highly ranked military war machine.....
broke out intoa perfect copy of the Thriller dance.
I wish I could go to prom with Zafira. And Thriller makes a come back once again.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
Inspired by a doujin I just got
Spoiler for NSFW:
Fate smiled as she saw herself looking at the hovering screen in front of her. The screen had the word "recording" on the lower right and followed her as she leaned back. "Nanoha," She cooed out seductively, "Since I'm going to be gone for a while... I thought I'd give you something to keep yourself occupied..."
Leaning back, Fate slowly parted her legs and reached down. "Enjoy... the show, Nanoha..." Slowly she winked and licked her lips while working her pants down.
~**~
"Thanks for stopping by," Nanoha smiled brightly at Lyndy as she opened the door to her house. Vivio was held against her hip and looking at Lyndy curiously. "Too bad you didn't know Fate had to leave this morning."
"It's fine, I am glad to see you as well, and Vivio too." Lyndy ruffled Vivio's hair and got a giggle. "Thanks for inviting me for dinner."
"Sure thing," Nanoha blinked and looked at the floating monitor on her kitchen table. "Oh look, Fate left me a video message before she left. She normally tells me she loves me and leaves it for me when she goes off."
"Want me to leave the room?"
Nanoha laughed. "No, how embarrassing could it possibly be?" Her finger pressed play.
Oh good, I thought you were actually going to keep writing to see Lindy's reaction. That's embarrassing. Poor Nanoha.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil Rick
@Thread: Good news, Kai the Reaper is back
Really? YAY! Let's have a party. I want some more Medieval Nanoha.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black_Wolf
Hey Guys,
Not posted in a while, will edit if get time to go back, all the stuff looks really good. Satashis teaser had me and hehe most embarrasing that could happen? new doctor pepper slogan anyone?
Also requested by Ilya for NictoryxPlant Randomness XD Dont expect too much, i cant say plants are my best pairings!
Spoiler for Magical Plant:
“Ah, another day of school finishes” Nictory throws off her school bag in her room and chucks it into the corner. She sits down at her computer ready to log onto Mibbit wondering what shiny crack and Satashi teaser’s she missed. Tucking a stray strand of brown hair behind her ear she waits for her computer to boot up and starts munching on some haribo from her desk. As she looks around in boredom her eyes land on an unfamiliar item in her room. Sitting upon her window sill seemed to be a plant of some sort. As she got closer it looked like it moved slightly, she saw a label in it, she tried to read the name “Dionaea muscipula” but had no clue what it was.
It was quite big, around a foot long from its plant pot, with what looked to be a large oval bud or something on the top. As Nictory started to eat another haribo from her bag the plant suddenly moved! The bud opened and grabbed the haribo from her hand seemingly chomping it in satisfaction. Nictory stared in disbelief O.o “What the Hell!!” the label had dropped from the pot after the movement, it now read “Venus Fly Trap” suddenly everything clicked, it didn’t matter if it didn’t make any sense. The plant had stolen Nictory’s precious haribo, now she was angry!
Nictory then proceeded to pick up the plant, carefully out of reach and legged it downstairs out into her garden. Placing it in the middle of her lawn she contemplated how to best deal with this haribo thief.
Suddenly, the plant moved again and opened its mouth, “why did you move me from my nice window sill?” Nictory stared, wide eyed, “you---you—you can TALK!” the plant looked amused if anything. “Of course I can talk, I’m a magical plant” as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. “But you stole my Haribo!” “ah that well I needed something to eat, not many insects in your room, being magical drains me a lot more you see.” Seemingly satisfied with the answer Nictory tried another question. “Well if your so magical, what can you do?” This seems to perk the interest of the plant. “Well I do have one awesome magical power……I can manifest the power of Yuri!!” The plant takes a prominent pose while Nictory’s eyes light up!! “You can manifest Yuri?!?! Ok well can you manifest Fate and Nanona, or or Signum and Fate, Satashi and Angel no WAIT WAIT Naolin and Wan Wan!!!” Nictory has stars in her greeny brown eyes. The plant looks at the Haribo remaining in the bag, “Very well, supply me with the remaining Haribo in your bag and I shall do as you ask.” Nictory eagerly agrees and shoves the rest of the bag into the Venus fly traps mouth. All of a sudden the surroundings go dark, a deep green magical circle appears beneath it and it starts chanting words.
All of a sudden Nictory finds herself back in the garden with a bit of paper in her hands. The paper was a printed version of some Wannao crack by Illidan. Nictory facepalms. “That’s not what I meant when I said manifest YURI!!!” “I never said what form, stupid human mis interpreting higher beings!” Now Nictory was mad, she had no Haribo, and no Wan Nao crack. Pulling out her cell phone she dials Illidan. “Hey Illidan I’m calling in that offer of coming to my door with every weapon you own, yeah its important.. cheers bye” Nictory looked at the plant menacingly. “Oh crap…”
Nice! I wish I had a magical plant...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black_Wolf
This is the Crack script from IRC that was the beginning of this :
EPIC KHRACK BATTLE!! HAJIME!!!
Spoiler for Illidan Vs Wolf Part 1:
Black_Wolf
It was night time, illidan had long ago finished work and was currently polishing his mighty weapons collection. Thinking it was about time he made his nightly rounds he slowly slipped in to his ninja costume and strapped a katana to his back and kunai to his legs.
Perching on his window he makes his way out into the night. He hears a disturbance and goes to investigate. He sees a girl being pinned up against the wall, he dives in to save the poor lass. At the last minute the girl dives out the way and the attacker turns to Illidan easily predicting his strike. As the attacker calmly dodges Illidan and knocks him out he hears the attackers last words.
“I heard you have been writing crack about me Illidan, I am not pleased, it is time for retribution.” And then Illidan fades out of consciousness. “What are we going to do with him mistress Naolin?” the girl asks. Vampire!Naolin simply shrugs, “just a little lesson my dear Wan Wan just teach a little lesson” as the two carried Illidan off into the night.
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Illidan
Vampire!Naolin and her partner, Wanwan, carried Illidan back to their lair, which was just really a beat up apartment that Wanwan currently lived in. The two ladies lay’d the man on Wanwan’s bed as they went to the kitchen to make some food. “I wonder if he’ll really so it, Naolin my darling.” Wanwan rubbed against the Vampire who stood in front of the open fridge.
“I don’t know, but I’m sure he will do it if… we give the right motivation.” Naolin shot back to the other girl as she backed away and went to go take care of the male.
Illidan shook his head as his senses began coming back to him, he noticed the presence of another walking towards him, and his eyes shot open, but his limbs were unable to move, “What do you want with me…?” Illidan spoke quietly at the dark haired girl who walked closer to him and ran her fingers through his short spiked hair.
“I want you…” The girl paused as the vampire from before walked out of the kitchen and into the bedroom, joining the two humans. Wanwan looked over to Naolin who nodded together.
“We want you to write a crack fic about us, but a lemon instead of what you usually do. We… are willing to persuade you to do it also.” The vampire spoke quickly, getting her point across. Illidan lay there, too shocked to speak a word. The two women began stripping themselves in front of the man, and lay a top him after wards.
Curses in the night were heard, but ignored from the bedroom window, as Nictory and Black_Wolf hung from the roof, spying on the women and the man they now played with. “I… really wish I didn’t write that fic to give him more ideas now, huh Nictory?” Black_Wolf spoke softly, as Nictory glared at the trio. It’s hand was raised and struck Black_Wolf, who fell from the five story building ************************************************** ****************
Black_Wolf
Illidan woke up the next morning, tied to the bed in Wan Wan’s apartment, naked as the day he was born, he found the shackles that bound him released. He slowly got up and looked at his surroundings. On the side was a note it read. “Dear Illidan, I hope we got the message across last night, but just in case you don’t play nice I have placed various contingency plans in place”
Illidan looked under the note and found various Polaroid photos of him dressed up in various bishounen outfits as well as a device strapped around his (Fill in the blank)
Illidan worriedly turns the note over. “Apart from the obvious blackmail I have attached a monitoring device to you, if you wish to get any ‘release’ hehe you better write that crack fiction quick” yours, Vampire!Naolin
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Illidan
Illidan sat upon the bed, wondering what the hell he was going to do. The device wasn’t as cold as he thought it would have been any other day, so the man climbed out of the bed, setting the Polaroid’s back on the nightstand, which had countless compromising photos of Naolin, and Wanwan, as well as the ones of himself dressed in cosplay.
“Well… at least I’m still good looking in those photos.” Illidan chuckled to himself as he picked up the cell phone that lay on the ground, and started dialing numbers. “Hey, what’s up Tss? Oh not much, here, but I got a new project to work on, I’ll tell you the details in a sec.” The conversation went on and on for about an hour.
“But check it, contact Satashi and Kha for me. I’m going to use their assistance to make the greatest crack fiction ever!” The phone talk ended, and Illidan closed the small communication device. The male picked up all the clothing that belonged to him and walked out the front door, making sure to write down the address for later ‘fun’
Illidan jumped onto the railing and leaped off onto another building. He landed a little strangely, which caused a brick to come lose and fall to the ground, along with some of the Kunai on his leg. He looked over the edge and just shrugged, continuing on his way home.
But just below Illidan lay Black_Wolf, who lost consciousness from the fall the night before. Consciousness returned, but didn’t last long. Knives fell all around the person sitting in a pile of garbage in the ally, freaking him/her out into moving father into the cesspool. A whistling sound made it self known and Black_Wolf looked upwards, only to see a brick fall onto his/her face, knocking them out once again.
“How… stupid can you get Wolf?” Nictory just stood and watched the show, giggling as much as a plant could.
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Black_Wolf
Black Wolf had just got out the shower, after recovering from last nights farce of a practical joke. Illidan had won this round, but it was not over. Going to the kitchen he pours some miracle grow in some water and hands it to Nictory whose sitting at the table before sitting down with some coffee. “We need to pay Illidan back Nictory, Think, your supposed to be the brains you’re a ****** plant!”
Hours later, Black Wolf was spying on Illidan, it seems he had got TSS, Satashi and Kha together to write the supposed crack, the ONE crack…….
“hmm Satashi, whats your take on the lemon scene, from your V!Fate experience what would be the best way to do this, would Naolin be the dom?”
“I think Wan Wan may have a masochistic side and Naolin may like it, it may be reverse outside the bedroom, but I think Naolin likes Wan Wan to make all the moves…”
Black Wolf chuckles to himself as he sneaks in through the window and takes Illidans Mobile phone and note of where Vampire Naolins address. A little while later Black Wolf and Nictory find themselves at Naolin’s front door. Wan Wan opens it with a smile. “What can I do for you?” Nictory pipes up, “actually we were hoping we could do something for you, you see we happen to know someone has some rather, revealing pictures of you and your mistress in, certain undress” Nictory flashes the collection stolen from Illidan and Wan Wan blushes slightly letting the strangers into her apartment.
“Whose there Wan Wan?” “Ah mistress, it seems these two have some business with you.” “is that so?” Black Wolf calmly sits down, and shows Naolin the photos while also pulling a document from his jacket. “It seems Illidan has not been true to his word” Black Wolf sniggers to himself, Nictory’s idea of showing Naolin fake crack is genius!! It was typed up by Black Wolf showing Naolin and Wan Wan in compromising Tentacle scenes.
Naolins eyebrow twitched. It seems Illidan has not learned his lesson. “Wan Wan, bring me the remote control” “ Yes mistress” a click was heard followed by a loud explosion and a terrifying girly scream of Illidan which faded into the night.
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Illidan
Illidan snickered to himself, as the explosion down the street went off. “Well… good thing that idiot took the wrong phone,” Illidan turned around in the chair and looked at Angel who was grinning happily on the other side of the room. “Oh yeah, Angel. Thanks for getting that thing off me. I owe you a lemon of Sataurial some time.” The man smiled and went back to work.
A few hours later, Illidan, Kha and Satashi stood up, having finished their outline for the story. “Hey Illidan, what ever happened to that guy who snuck in?” Satashi asked as Angel came back into the room with their jackets.
“Oh, he got a tracker placed on his back when he snuck in, you don’t think I would be that dumb right?” Illidan sat back in his seat and pressed the Esc button on his keyboard three times, causing the fake wall to rotate around and show the large computer system that had the bleeping red dot of Black_Wolf.
“Revenge is just a b***h, isn’t if wolf?” Illidan spoke to his screen and leaned forward. “You are defiantly not prepared for what’s coming.” The man picked up the phone from his pocket and dialed Naolin’s number. “Hello Naolin… Your device, it failed its job, and the man standing in front of you this second stole form me, and is handing you forged papers from Nictory, his plant.” Illidan hung the phone up.
Miles away, Naolin closed her phone, and stared back at Black_Wolf, who just handed her a stack of papers. The vampire goddess turned and stared deep at Black_Wolf, “Do you know what I do to people who lie to me… little boy?” She walked forward slowly.
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Vampire!Fate. The Vampire's past finally revealed!
( please don't let this leak out top anyone other than AS members, as FF.N hasn't made it there yet.)
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@_@ 8,716 words......wtf!
Anyway, please post all comments adn stuff here so I can see them easier ^_^ Enjoy~
<3 Angel. Thanks for all the help!
Awesomeness, I can't wait to see the rest of part two. It took me a little while to figure out the guy's name was Access.
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
Prologue
Spoiler for Prologue:
Hayate sighed. It was her birthday but the day was slowly fading away into nothingness and without a single special thing happening. She spun around in her office chair. It was tough being the commander but she had been given about a month’s leave. All of Riot Force Six did as a month was needed to reassign them all. Hayate’s dream was over for the moment, until she could manage to achieve it again.
A folder slid under the door. It was unlabeled, mysterious and quite possible dangerous.
Hayate grinned.
And very interesting.
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“It sure was nice of Hayate to invite us on a month long boat trip,” Yuuno leaned on the railing of the boat, the back of his suit’s jacket flapping in the wind.
Vita leaned over the railing for a different reason, “gonna be sick.”
Yuuno rubbed the girl’s back as she emptied the breakfast they had had into the sea. “There there there there.”
“This is suspicious,” Signum sighed and shook her head. “I can’t help but think master Hayate is up to something.”
Shamal giggled and held a hand up to her face, “You shouldn’t be so suspicious Signum.”
Signum eyed the doctor. A look of realization came over Signum’s face. “You know something don’t you.”
Shamal shrugged, “Don’t worry about it Signum.”
Signum shivered nothing good could come of this trip.
“Ah Arf,” Zafira stepped forward trying to move closer to the other familiar. He’d been trying for a while now to approach her but one thing or another kept interrupting him. But now nothing was in his way. Nothing at all.
“Zafira!”
Oh yes there was one thing.
Vice locked Zafira’s head in a headlock like hug. “How’ve you been you big oaf?”
“Get. Off,” Zafira grunted.
“Can do,” Vice grinned. “So Hayate even let dogs come along huh?”
“I’m a wolf.”
“Riiiiigggggtttttt~”
“Isn’t this fun!” Subaru stretched her arms out towards the sky. “Ne~ Tia-Tia where are we going?”
“I don’t know. Don’t ask me again and don’t call me Tia-tia!” Tiana smacked Subaru over the head.
Subaru sniffed, “Tia!” She hugged/tackled her friend. “We’re being moved to different units.”
Tia blushed. “Why are you bringing something like that up?”
He pointed, trying to be as inconspicuous as possible, at the two people in the corner. “I can see Lutecia but… wasn’t Zest killed?”
Caro blinked, Zest and Lutecia were indeed chatting off to the side. Caro shrugged, “Well he came back to life once already so I guess he just… came back again?” She nodded furiously. "Yeah that's it. That's definitely it Erio!"
“Mm I see,” Erio nodded, not sure if she was serious or not.
“Hey Admiral,” Verossa ran a hand through his bangs. “Were you standing here and reminiscing about the good old days old man?”
Chrono crossed his arms, “I’m only twenty five.”
“They say having kids adds an extra ten years and since you have twins…”
“TWENTY FIVE DAMN IT!”
“Finally we get to show our faces,” Arisa stretched up towards the sky, “After a whole freakin’ season.”
“What are you talking about?” Her purple headed companion tilted her head to the side.
“Nothing nothing at all,” Arisa waved her hands around as she tried to maintain the forth wall.
“Isn’t this great,” Hayate snuck up behind them surprising both of them and making them cross their arms across their chests.
“Ah Hayate!” The both turned around making sure there were no opportunities for a sneak attack.
“Nya ha ha I guess since they don’t get to see you much they haven’t built up immunity,” Nanoha, followed by Fate and Vivio, walked up to her lifelong friends.
“You talk like I’m a disease,” Hayate giggled.
“Commander!” Griffith poked his out the cabin’s door. “The sun is starting to set!” He disappeared back inside.
“Oh is it time already?” Hayate picked up Vivio. “I’ll be borrowing Vivio don’t worry she’ll be fine.” Hayate dashed inside.
Vivio’s mamas blinked.
“Kidnapping?” Nanoha looked to Fate. “Is that kidnapping?”
“I’m not sure.”
The sound of metal scraping around started to ring out. Along with… something resembling laughter. “Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho!” Hayate and Vivio rose up on a metal rotating platform. “Hello friends and coworkers.”
“Hi Mama!” Vivio waved down.
“Hayate what are you doing?” Nanoha yelled up.
“I’m afraid I told a little fib,” Hayate looked coy. “Just a little one.”
A lever popped up from her platform.
“Now don’t worry you’ll all be perfectly safe,” She giggled, “I think so at least.” Tug. She pulled down the lever, instantly the deck of the boat flung the people on it to the nearest island.
Every single one of them yelled the same thing. “HAYATE!”
Hayate turned to Rein, who was now floating around and holding a camera. “Hello people of Midchilda,” Hayate held her arms wide open.
“This is Survivor: Lyrical!”
Claim the next part while you can.
And Thanks to Ilya for the logo.
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Page claim for Ilya's logo and Hayate's birthday 'cause it's still the 4th here. Happy birthday Commander! *salutes.* May the army keep growing.
LOL! Hayate is the evil genius behind it all. This is a random question but: is Survivor!Lyrical filmed live?
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Originally Posted by Evil Rick
Chapter 55
Vatican Knights
Spoiler for The way to America:
I awoke in Pink's infirmary, a bit confused I quickly standed up, lots of bends around my body, at least now I could use both of my eyes
"You better return to bed young lady" I turned and saw Pink walking at me
"Or should I sat... Vatican Paladin Vivio Valentine?"
"Vatican Paladin? You mean..." I said at the time Pink putted me again in bed
"Yes, you beat the Mace of Doom, now you are a Vatican Paladin, your rank is now the same that Raphael and Sky" I smile appear on my face
I jumped on my bed, raising my arms, I just couldn't belive it
"Wow, relax, I just fix that" Pink said pointing at my leftarm who had recived the fire from the No Faces in the Mace, I was no sure of what Pink had done but I feeled like new
"You cured me in so short time?"
"He, well... to be honest, you had passed a week asleep here"
I was speakless
"A week?! But... but I... they go to America... without me? Karil!" I was really freaked out
"Vivio, Vivio! Relax, no one had leave the quartels yet, Dr. Van Hellsing is preparing all, the entire army of the Vatican Knights will go to America"
"When?"
"Today in something like... 2 hours"
"WHAA?!" Once again I quickly standed up
"You have to be kidding! I had nothing ready... Were is my Axe?! And my clothes?! Were..." Pink putted her finger my lips
"Don't worry, Karil alredy fixed all that, your Axe and weapons are ready, and I have your clothes right here"
"Karil? She do all this... for me? Even after I... after I hitted her?"
"Silly girl" Pink said "Karil ahd been ehr all the days, she slept here, she ate her, all the time with you, in this moment Sky called her, she is unable to hate Vivio, even more to hate you" I felt a warm sensation in my heart, I still keeped with me my biggest treasure, my dear friend Karil"
"By the way" Pink added " Karil and Jasper are now under your orders"
"Really?!"
"Yes, Sky fixed all, he is very happy to have you now in the Vatican Paladins, now let me bring you your clothes, America is waiting for ours"
Pink bringed me my clothes, I quickly got dressed and walk out, all man in the Vatican Knighst Quartels were moving, Pink was right, the entire Vatican Knights were going to America, ready to face the White Devil and her minions who seemed to be growing in number
I was looking for Karil, but I didn't saw her in any place, we go to the yard, among the crowd I spoted her
"Karil!" I screamed, she turned and saw me, like a thunder, she ran at me and jumped over me, we both falled, she was very exiting
"Vivio! You are okay, I knew you culd do it!" She said at the time she huged me with strenght
"Yes, yes I'm fine I...can you... forgive em?"
"Don't even said that!" She huged me every stronger
At the distance I also saw Jasper, I raised my hand, but he just looked at me and gave me his back, I was shocked
"He has been very strange lately" Karil said, we both standed and I prefered to don't touch the theme
"Vivio Valentine" A voice said, I turned and saw Sky, smilig at me
"Sky..."
"Congragulations, now you are a Vatican Paladin, Nanoha will be in big troubles"I couldn't help ut laugh
"Let's go Vivio, the car that will take us to the ship is ready, America is waiting for us"
She's better!!! Karil and her are still friends as well. But what's up with Jasper? Is he mad at her, or jealous because she is a Paladin?
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
A small short to fufil the lack of a certain pairing
Spoiler for Rooftop- ZafiraxArf (Zarf):
“So what are you doing out here?” Arf silently closed the roof’s door, keeping most of the noise from below out. Even though they were slowly progressing into the late hours of the night it wasn’t dark on the roof, the light from the surrounding buildings saw to that.
Zafira turned his head to the side, meeting Arf’s eyes. The guardian beast had found a way to sneak out of the loud and rowdy party going on below him and onto the roof. He’d started the evening out dressed in a full suit but he’d long shed his jacket and somewhere along the line his shirt had come untucked. His tie too threatened to fall off, being looped around his neck did him no good in the formal department. “Ah. Arf.” The wolfman returned to leaning against the rail and looking up at the sky.
She shook her head, “It’s your party.” She moved closer to him, not quite beside Zafira but close enough.
“It’s their party not mine,” he didn’t look down. “And I’m not fond of crowds anyway.”
Arf sighed and leaned on the railing beside him, looking up as well, trying to see just what it was he was looking at so intently. “It’s just the moon.” Arf saw nothing special about it, it was true they were wolf familiars but this moon was nothing more then a tiny crescent, nothing that would interest Zafira. There weren’t many stars to look at either. For all their technological advances Midchilda could do nothing about light pollution, the stars were all but blocked from view.
“I’m trying to remember what this sky looks like,” Zafira had a nostalgic look in his eyes, like he was remembering something long passed.
Arf giggled, “Well you’ll see it again.”
“I don’t remember the other skies. Is it so bad to want to remember this one?” His
expression didn’t change, he remained his solemn self.
Arf remembered vaguely that none of the Wolkenritter remembered their past lives very well. But she couldn’t fathom why Zafira would be thinking about that sort of thing now. “Why are you…?”
“This is our final life. We are allowed to live our lives out with our master,” he paused and furrowed his brow, “So I don’t want to forget a single moment.”
“Wow… that’s deep.” Arf sighed, “But there are some things—”Someone—“I wouldn’t mind forgetting.”
Zafira looked at her from the corner of his eye. He couldn’t do so for too long because the low cut dress Arf was wearing had a tendency to distract him. He did notice, however, that she suddenly seemed uncomfortable. A change of subject seemed in order, “So why did you leave the party?”
“I just couldn’t take it any more.”
Zafira looked at her and raised an eyebrow before returning to moon watching. “I thought you liked noisy events and they have meat don’t they?”
She turned a rosy color and stuck out her tongue, “It’s not that you big oaf. It’s just you know,” she seemed to deflate, her ears flattened and her tail lowered. “Everyone’s leaving again and I’ll be left here… so I… I don’t really want to celebrate it.”
“We’re not leaving because we want to.”
She looked up at him, trying to look determined and serious. “I know that.”
“Then why?” he looked down, this time holding his gaze.
“But what if everyone forgets about me?” Tears formed in the corners of her eyes.
“What if I don’t matter to anyone?” They started to fall. “What if I’m left all alone?”
Zafira straightened.
Arf’s ears twitched.
Before Arf had time to react Zafira had her penned against the railing.
“Zafira what are you doing?” Arf was utterly confused and very red.
“Do you want me to come back?” His face was serious just like it always was.
“Well of course I do!”
“And do you want me to remember you?”
“Yeah.”
“Then,” He too had turned red, “trust that I’ll come back,” completely scarlet from his ears to his nose. “That we’ll all come back. No matter what.” He backed up letting Arf stand. He looked away.
Arf thought for a moment. “Hey Zafira,” Arf called out his name.
He turned.
Almost as quickly as he had penned her, Arf leaned up and kissed Zafira. She bashfully smiled at the sight of the wide eyed, near comatose Zafira. She folded her hands behind her back, backing up towards the roof’s door. “Then I guess I have no choice but to wait huh?” Arf disappeared back into the building.
Zafira stood there, silent, contemplating and he smiled. Nothing in the world would be able to keep him from coming home.
and the alternate ending
Spoiler for omake:
Vita: Where'd that dog get off to we need to leave.
Signum: Did you check the roof?
Vita: *goes to the roof*... oi Zafira
Zafira: *comatose* ... kiss... kiss...
Vita: What are you going on about?
Zafira: kiss...
Vita: *eyetwitch* Graf Eisen.
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION]
*Zafira becomes a speck in the sky*
Aww, so cute!! The omake was funny. Vita's reaction... Arf must be sad now that Zafira has become a speck in the sky.
Hayate sighed. It was her birthday but the day was slowly fading away into nothingness and without a single special thing happening. She spun around in her office chair. It was tough being the commander but she had been given about a month’s leave. All of Riot Force Six did as a month was needed to reassign them all. Hayate’s dream was over for the moment, until she could manage to achieve it again.
A folder slid under the door. It was unlabeled, mysterious and quite possible dangerous.
Hayate grinned.
And very interesting.
---
“It sure was nice of Hayate to invite us on a month long boat trip,” Yuuno leaned on the railing of the boat, the back of his suit’s jacket flapping in the wind.
Vita leaned over the railing for a different reason, “gonna be sick.”
Yuuno rubbed the girl’s back as she emptied the breakfast they had had into the sea. “There there there there.”
“This is suspicious,” Signum sighed and shook her head. “I can’t help but think master Hayate is up to something.”
Shamal giggled and held a hand up to her face, “You shouldn’t be so suspicious Signum.”
Signum eyed the doctor. A look of realization came over Signum’s face. “You know something don’t you.”
Shamal shrugged, “Don’t worry about it Signum.”
Signum shivered nothing good could come of this trip.
“Ah Arf,” Zafira stepped forward trying to move closer to the other familiar. He’d been trying for a while now to approach her but one thing or another kept interrupting him. But now nothing was in his way. Nothing at all.
“Zafira!”
Oh yes there was one thing.
Vice locked Zafira’s head in a headlock like hug. “How’ve you been you big oaf?”
“Get. Off,” Zafira grunted.
“Can do,” Vice grinned. “So Hayate even let dogs come along huh?”
“I’m a wolf.”
“Riiiiigggggtttttt~”
“Isn’t this fun!” Subaru stretched her arms out towards the sky. “Ne~ Tia-Tia where are we going?”
“I don’t know. Don’t ask me again and don’t call me Tia-tia!” Tiana smacked Subaru over the head.
Subaru sniffed, “Tia!” She hugged/tackled her friend. “We’re being moved to different units.”
Tia blushed. “Why are you bringing something like that up?”
He pointed, trying to be as inconspicuous as possible, at the two people in the corner. “I can see Lutecia but… wasn’t Zest killed?”
Caro blinked, Zest and Lutecia were indeed chatting off to the side. Caro shrugged, “Well he came back to life once already so I guess he just… came back again?” She nodded furiously. "Yeah that's it. That's definitely it Erio!"
“Mm I see,” Erio nodded, not sure if she was serious or not.
“Hey Admiral,” Verossa ran a hand through his bangs. “Were you standing here and reminiscing about the good old days old man?”
Chrono crossed his arms, “I’m only twenty five.”
“They say having kids adds an extra ten years and since you have twins…”
“TWENTY FIVE DAMN IT!”
“Finally we get to show our faces,” Arisa stretched up towards the sky, “After a whole freakin’ season.”
“What are you talking about?” Her purple headed companion tilted her head to the side.
“Nothing nothing at all,” Arisa waved her hands around as she tried to maintain the forth wall.
“Isn’t this great,” Hayate snuck up behind them surprising both of them and making them cross their arms across their chests.
“Ah Hayate!” The both turned around making sure there were no opportunities for a sneak attack.
“Nya ha ha I guess since they don’t get to see you much they haven’t built up immunity,” Nanoha, followed by Fate and Vivio, walked up to her lifelong friends.
“You talk like I’m a disease,” Hayate giggled.
“Commander!” Griffith poked his out the cabin’s door. “The sun is starting to set!” He disappeared back inside.
“Oh is it time already?” Hayate picked up Vivio. “I’ll be borrowing Vivio don’t worry she’ll be fine.” Hayate dashed inside.
Vivio’s mamas blinked.
“Kidnapping?” Nanoha looked to Fate. “Is that kidnapping?”
“I’m not sure.”
The sound of metal scraping around started to ring out. Along with… something resembling laughter. “Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho!” Hayate and Vivio rose up on a metal rotating platform. “Hello friends and coworkers.”
“Hi Mama!” Vivio waved down.
“Hayate what are you doing?” Nanoha yelled up.
“I’m afraid I told a little fib,” Hayate looked coy. “Just a little one.”
A lever popped up from her platform.
“Now don’t worry you’ll all be perfectly safe,” She giggled, “I think so at least.” Tug. She pulled down the lever, instantly the deck of the boat flung the people on it to the nearest island.
Every single one of them yelled the same thing. “HAYATE!”
Hayate turned to Rein, who was now floating around and holding a camera. “Hello people of Midchilda,” Hayate held her arms wide open.
“This is Survivor: Lyrical!”
Claim the next part while you can.
And Thanks to Ilya for the logo.
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Page claim for Ilya's logo and Hayate's birthday 'cause it's still the 4th here. Happy birthday Commander! *salutes.* May the army keep growing.
Haha, nice prologue. Let's see what we all can come up with next.
Quote:
Originally Posted by TheShinySword
A small short to fufil the lack of a certain pairing
Spoiler for Rooftop- ZafiraxArf (Zarf):
“So what are you doing out here?” Arf silently closed the roof’s door, keeping most of the noise from below out. Even though they were slowly progressing into the late hours of the night it wasn’t dark on the roof, the light from the surrounding buildings saw to that.
Zafira turned his head to the side, meeting Arf’s eyes. The guardian beast had found a way to sneak out of the loud and rowdy party going on below him and onto the roof. He’d started the evening out dressed in a full suit but he’d long shed his jacket and somewhere along the line his shirt had come untucked. His tie too threatened to fall off, being looped around his neck did him no good in the formal department. “Ah. Arf.” The wolfman returned to leaning against the rail and looking up at the sky.
She shook her head, “It’s your party.” She moved closer to him, not quite beside Zafira but close enough.
“It’s their party not mine,” he didn’t look down. “And I’m not fond of crowds anyway.”
Arf sighed and leaned on the railing beside him, looking up as well, trying to see just what it was he was looking at so intently. “It’s just the moon.” Arf saw nothing special about it, it was true they were wolf familiars but this moon was nothing more then a tiny crescent, nothing that would interest Zafira. There weren’t many stars to look at either. For all their technological advances Midchilda could do nothing about light pollution, the stars were all but blocked from view.
“I’m trying to remember what this sky looks like,” Zafira had a nostalgic look in his eyes, like he was remembering something long passed.
Arf giggled, “Well you’ll see it again.”
“I don’t remember the other skies. Is it so bad to want to remember this one?” His
expression didn’t change, he remained his solemn self.
Arf remembered vaguely that none of the Wolkenritter remembered their past lives very well. But she couldn’t fathom why Zafira would be thinking about that sort of thing now. “Why are you…?”
“This is our final life. We are allowed to live our lives out with our master,” he paused and furrowed his brow, “So I don’t want to forget a single moment.”
“Wow… that’s deep.” Arf sighed, “But there are some things—”Someone—“I wouldn’t mind forgetting.”
Zafira looked at her from the corner of his eye. He couldn’t do so for too long because the low cut dress Arf was wearing had a tendency to distract him. He did notice, however, that she suddenly seemed uncomfortable. A change of subject seemed in order, “So why did you leave the party?”
“I just couldn’t take it any more.”
Zafira looked at her and raised an eyebrow before returning to moon watching. “I thought you liked noisy events and they have meat don’t they?”
She turned a rosy color and stuck out her tongue, “It’s not that you big oaf. It’s just you know,” she seemed to deflate, her ears flattened and her tail lowered. “Everyone’s leaving again and I’ll be left here… so I… I don’t really want to celebrate it.”
“We’re not leaving because we want to.”
She looked up at him, trying to look determined and serious. “I know that.”
“Then why?” he looked down, this time holding his gaze.
“But what if everyone forgets about me?” Tears formed in the corners of her eyes.
“What if I don’t matter to anyone?” They started to fall. “What if I’m left all alone?”
Zafira straightened.
Arf’s ears twitched.
Before Arf had time to react Zafira had her penned against the railing.
“Zafira what are you doing?” Arf was utterly confused and very red.
“Do you want me to come back?” His face was serious just like it always was.
“Well of course I do!”
“And do you want me to remember you?”
“Yeah.”
“Then,” He too had turned red, “trust that I’ll come back,” completely scarlet from his ears to his nose. “That we’ll all come back. No matter what.” He backed up letting Arf stand. He looked away.
Arf thought for a moment. “Hey Zafira,” Arf called out his name.
He turned.
Almost as quickly as he had penned her, Arf leaned up and kissed Zafira. She bashfully smiled at the sight of the wide eyed, near comatose Zafira. She folded her hands behind her back, backing up towards the roof’s door. “Then I guess I have no choice but to wait huh?” Arf disappeared back into the building.
Zafira stood there, silent, contemplating and he smiled. Nothing in the world would be able to keep him from coming home.
and the alternate ending
Spoiler for omake:
Vita: Where'd that dog get off to we need to leave.
Signum: Did you check the roof?
Vita: *goes to the roof*... oi Zafira
Zafira: *comatose* ... kiss... kiss...
Vita: What are you going on about?
Zafira: kiss...
Vita: *eyetwitch* Graf Eisen.
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION]
*Zafira becomes a speck in the sky*
Nice job, Zafira got it goin'. Too bad for him if the other ending is true though.
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Originally Posted by Fenris Blacwell
My poor attempts at crack.
Fenris:*soft, echoing voice* Kaiser-sama?
Vivio: *looks up from her tea party, several of the dolls sighing in relief, thankful that unlike one unfortunate member of their number they are not lying decapitated on the table while the child eats their stuffing* Yes? I'm a little busy, I could really use some ketchup, or maybe some peanut butter.
Fenris: There's no time for that my liege. Nanoha-san and Fate-san have arrived home and found the babysitter's body in the toilet. It didn't go down like we thought it would.
Vivio: Crap, what do you suggest?
Fenris: We must use the escape pods. You go first Kaiser-sama and I'll divert their attentions.
Vivio: Thank you, Fen-chan. *walks to an oversized teddy bear and looks it in the eyes. suddenly it springs to life, swallowing her whole and proceding to jump out the window and onto the street below before running away*
Fenris: Kaiser-sama will be safe once she reaches the door to Monnowabbah land. Now to just.....
*the door is kicked down and Fate and Nanoha enter, looking mad*
Fenris: Oh....shit, forgot to install the metal door. Thanks Kaiser-sama, thanks alot.
The word I found extremely funny here was "escape pod" and it's a god-damn teddybear LOL. Good job.
OH and my primary computer with all my files on must be repaired so I can't do a new banner. It sucks.
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Vampire!Fate. The Vampire's past finally revealed!
( please don't let this leak out top anyone other than AS members, as FF.N hasn't made it there yet.)
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@_@ 8,716 words......wtf!
Anyway, please post all comments adn stuff here so I can see them easier ^_^ Enjoy~
<3 Angel. Thanks for all the help!
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Originally Posted by Satashi
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
I Think WOW, doesnt quite cover this one. Quite possibly the best V!Fate to date. Great to see Fate develop from being the young vampire to a lady It was nuts to see her lose her first pair of fangs at the end, but as you said a very valuable lesson. Really looking forward to the second part.
Just to make sure i got it correctly, The English king is the one who has hired the paladins and not the French army as England were wiping the floor with France before JoA appeared? i got confused as in the story:
Quote:
The tides were starting to waver in the favor of the king we didn't want it to. In an attempt to finish everything once and for all, he enlisted the aid of a renegade group known as 'Paladins'.
Whereas in the teaser Fate is JoA and walking among paladins in the French army. I know that a paladin could possibly mean a type of knight, but from the teaser it looks like these paladins are the renegades that hunt demons.
Just wanted to check what you meant.
As for the teaser... Joan Of Arc!!!! I know the history so *waits to see what Satashi plans for near the end *
Vampire!Fate. The Vampire's past finally revealed!
( please don't let this leak out top anyone other than AS members, as FF.N hasn't made it there yet.)
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@_@ 8,716 words......wtf!
Anyway, please post all comments adn stuff here so I can see them easier ^_^ Enjoy~
<3 Angel. Thanks for all the help!
That's just brilliant.. can't wait for the next part.
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
Prologue
Spoiler for Prologue:
Hayate sighed. It was her birthday but the day was slowly fading away into nothingness and without a single special thing happening. She spun around in her office chair. It was tough being the commander but she had been given about a month’s leave. All of Riot Force Six did as a month was needed to reassign them all. Hayate’s dream was over for the moment, until she could manage to achieve it again.
A folder slid under the door. It was unlabeled, mysterious and quite possible dangerous.
Hayate grinned.
And very interesting.
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“It sure was nice of Hayate to invite us on a month long boat trip,” Yuuno leaned on the railing of the boat, the back of his suit’s jacket flapping in the wind.
Vita leaned over the railing for a different reason, “gonna be sick.”
Yuuno rubbed the girl’s back as she emptied the breakfast they had had into the sea. “There there there there.”
“This is suspicious,” Signum sighed and shook her head. “I can’t help but think master Hayate is up to something.”
Shamal giggled and held a hand up to her face, “You shouldn’t be so suspicious Signum.”
Signum eyed the doctor. A look of realization came over Signum’s face. “You know something don’t you.”
Shamal shrugged, “Don’t worry about it Signum.”
Signum shivered nothing good could come of this trip.
“Ah Arf,” Zafira stepped forward trying to move closer to the other familiar. He’d been trying for a while now to approach her but one thing or another kept interrupting him. But now nothing was in his way. Nothing at all.
“Zafira!”
Oh yes there was one thing.
Vice locked Zafira’s head in a headlock like hug. “How’ve you been you big oaf?”
“Get. Off,” Zafira grunted.
“Can do,” Vice grinned. “So Hayate even let dogs come along huh?”
“I’m a wolf.”
“Riiiiigggggtttttt~”
“Isn’t this fun!” Subaru stretched her arms out towards the sky. “Ne~ Tia-Tia where are we going?”
“I don’t know. Don’t ask me again and don’t call me Tia-tia!” Tiana smacked Subaru over the head.
Subaru sniffed, “Tia!” She hugged/tackled her friend. “We’re being moved to different units.”
Tia blushed. “Why are you bringing something like that up?”
He pointed, trying to be as inconspicuous as possible, at the two people in the corner. “I can see Lutecia but… wasn’t Zest killed?”
Caro blinked, Zest and Lutecia were indeed chatting off to the side. Caro shrugged, “Well he came back to life once already so I guess he just… came back again?” She nodded furiously. "Yeah that's it. That's definitely it Erio!"
“Mm I see,” Erio nodded, not sure if she was serious or not.
“Hey Admiral,” Verossa ran a hand through his bangs. “Were you standing here and reminiscing about the good old days old man?”
Chrono crossed his arms, “I’m only twenty five.”
“They say having kids adds an extra ten years and since you have twins…”
“TWENTY FIVE DAMN IT!”
“Finally we get to show our faces,” Arisa stretched up towards the sky, “After a whole freakin’ season.”
“What are you talking about?” Her purple headed companion tilted her head to the side.
“Nothing nothing at all,” Arisa waved her hands around as she tried to maintain the forth wall.
“Isn’t this great,” Hayate snuck up behind them surprising both of them and making them cross their arms across their chests.
“Ah Hayate!” The both turned around making sure there were no opportunities for a sneak attack.
“Nya ha ha I guess since they don’t get to see you much they haven’t built up immunity,” Nanoha, followed by Fate and Vivio, walked up to her lifelong friends.
“You talk like I’m a disease,” Hayate giggled.
“Commander!” Griffith poked his out the cabin’s door. “The sun is starting to set!” He disappeared back inside.
“Oh is it time already?” Hayate picked up Vivio. “I’ll be borrowing Vivio don’t worry she’ll be fine.” Hayate dashed inside.
Vivio’s mamas blinked.
“Kidnapping?” Nanoha looked to Fate. “Is that kidnapping?”
“I’m not sure.”
The sound of metal scraping around started to ring out. Along with… something resembling laughter. “Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho!” Hayate and Vivio rose up on a metal rotating platform. “Hello friends and coworkers.”
“Hi Mama!” Vivio waved down.
“Hayate what are you doing?” Nanoha yelled up.
“I’m afraid I told a little fib,” Hayate looked coy. “Just a little one.”
A lever popped up from her platform.
“Now don’t worry you’ll all be perfectly safe,” She giggled, “I think so at least.” Tug. She pulled down the lever, instantly the deck of the boat flung the people on it to the nearest island.
Every single one of them yelled the same thing. “HAYATE!”
Hayate turned to Rein, who was now floating around and holding a camera. “Hello people of Midchilda,” Hayate held her arms wide open.
“This is Survivor: Lyrical!”
Claim the next part while you can.
And Thanks to Ilya for the logo.
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Page claim for Ilya's logo and Hayate's birthday 'cause it's still the 4th here. Happy birthday Commander! *salutes.* May the army keep growing.
Hahaha.. Hayate is a psycho after all hahah
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Originally Posted by Satashi
One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...
Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi
Hark! I bring to all of thee ideas that hath spawned in IRC and need loving parents to nurture them.
1. Rock Band Wolkenritter -- Are we still waiting for a Guitar Hero? Or do we want a Rock Band? See the rise of a newly formed group, playing from lowly basement stages to places as grand as Cranagan City Concert Hall. With Zafira on the drums, Shamal on keyboard, Vita on guitar, and Signum on bass guitar, these Knights will show the world the strength of Ancient Belka with the POWER OF ROCK! However with rivals as strong as The Aces and Riot Force Six, will our intrepid musicians be able to break out from the darkness of obscurity and become LEGENDS? Guest Stars include but not limited to: Nightwish, Rhapsody, Dethklok, and of course, Dragonforce.
2. Magical Girl Lyrical Idolm@ster -- Hayate Yagami, Fate Testarossa, Nanoha Takamachi. These three girls have been discovered to be the next generation of JPOP idol stars. Under the youthful but patient guidance of Producer Yuuno Scrya, these young ladies will learn the tricks of the trade and discover their true selves. The recording company CEO Chrono and his assistant Acous are very interested in this young talent, and they hope that The Ferret can transform these three girls into Idol material. Yet already established stars like Carim and the Sun and Moon, Arisa and Suzuka, make breaking into the scene difficult. Can our girls make it big and become the Idol of Idols? Go My Way~
Spoiler for Relevant:
Decide the Destiny!
Heaven or Hell!
Let's Rock.
EDIT: I put more info.
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Last edited by Tempy; 2008-06-05 at 05:34.
Reason: More refined ideas
Hark! I bring to all of thee ideas that hath spawned in IRC and need loving parents to nurture them.
1. Rock Band Wolkenritter -- See the rise of a newly formed rock band, playing from lowly basement stages to places as grand as Cranagan City Concert Hall. With Zafira on the drums, Shamal on keyboard, Vita on guitar, and Signum on bass guitar, these Knights will show the world the strength of Ancient Belka with the POWER OF ROCK!
2. Magical Girl Lyrical Idolm@ster -- Hayate Yagami, Fate Testarossa, Nanoha Takamachi. These three girls have been discovered to be the next generation of JPOP idol stars. Under the guidance of Producer, Yuuno Scrya, these young ladies will learn the tricks of the trade and discover their true selves. The recording company CEO Chrono and his assistant Acous are very interested in this young talent, and they hope that The Ferret can transform these three girls into Idol material.
Spoiler for Relevant:
Decide the Destiny!
Heaven or Hell!
Let's Rock.
Really fun idea =D
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Saber - Signum - Serenn
Life is a thing most of us take for granted. Until we lose someone that we charish, are we forced to realize that things will never always be the same.
Hmm... ok, This is my first attempt writing angst... I usually write poetry so if it sucks it sucks...
Spoiler for Angst??:
It has been two years now, two years since they took her away from me. Fate thought back about the incident. Why wasn't I there to protect her? Fate couldn't but look at the scenery where her whole life crashed down on her.
The wind started to blow around her making her blond hair fly freely in the wind. She finally took a deep breath and stared into
the sunset, the rays slowly carressed her face. I can't but wish this will be the last. She looked up at the everlasting
sky and feelt her longing get stronger. I want peace, I want silence... but it's nowhere to be found. She closed her
eyes and let out a sigh. Nanoha, please give me a sign, tell me this will be the end, tell me to come join you.
She feelt herself fall to her knees while tears started to roll down her cheeks. My mind and my body pleads for it's release...
I want nothing more than peace and silence...
Hmm... ok, This is my first attempt writing angst... I usually write poetry so if it sucks it sucks...
Spoiler for Angst??:
It has been two years now, two years since they took her away from me. Fate thought back about the incident. Why wasn't I there to protect her? Fate couldn't but look at the scenery where her whole life crashed down on her.
The wind started to blow around her making her blond hair fly freely in the wind. She finally took a deep breath and stared into
the sunset, the rays slowly carressed her face. I can't but wish this will be the last. She looked up at the everlasting
sky and feelt her longing get stronger. I want peace, I want silence... but it's nowhere to be found. She closed her
eyes and let out a sigh. Nanoha, please give me a sign, tell me this will be the end, tell me to come join you.
She feelt herself fall to her knees while tears started to roll down her cheeks. My mind and my body pleads for it's release...
I want nothing more than peace and silence...
Hmm... ok, This is my first attempt writing angst... I usually write poetry so if it sucks it sucks...
Spoiler for Angst??:
It has been two years now, two years since they took her away from me. Fate thought back about the incident. Why wasn't I there to protect her? Fate couldn't but look at the scenery where her whole life crashed down on her.
The wind started to blow around her making her blond hair fly freely in the wind. She finally took a deep breath and stared into
the sunset, the rays slowly carressed her face. I can't but wish this will be the last. She looked up at the everlasting
sky and feelt her longing get stronger. I want peace, I want silence... but it's nowhere to be found. She closed her
eyes and let out a sigh. Nanoha, please give me a sign, tell me this will be the end, tell me to come join you.
She feelt herself fall to her knees while tears started to roll down her cheeks. My mind and my body pleads for it's release...
I want nothing more than peace and silence...
*image of Nanoha cupping a feel on Fate and whispering to her*Sometimes Nanoha mama will whisper into Fate-mama's ear and Fate mama would blush very dark.
*Image of Vivio being handed over to Hayate, who's smiling with open arms to take her* I don't know why but when it happens, I am always told to go over and play at aunt-Hayate's place while they go to a toy store.
*Image of Fate and Nanoha, in a store, discussing while holding various objects that are blurred out* I want to go to the toy store too but they say I'm too little.
*Vivio looking at bunny* I want to grow up and play with all those toys too!
*Hayate in background with purple wavy lines above her* no you don't, Vivio-chan....
Hmm... ok, This is my first attempt writing angst... I usually write poetry so if it sucks it sucks...
Spoiler for Angst??:
It has been two years now, two years since they took her away from me. Fate thought back about the incident. Why wasn't I there to protect her? Fate couldn't but look at the scenery where her whole life crashed down on her.
The wind started to blow around her making her blond hair fly freely in the wind. She finally took a deep breath and stared into
the sunset, the rays slowly carressed her face. I can't but wish this will be the last. She looked up at the everlasting
sky and feelt her longing get stronger. I want peace, I want silence... but it's nowhere to be found. She closed her
eyes and let out a sigh. Nanoha, please give me a sign, tell me this will be the end, tell me to come join you.
She feelt herself fall to her knees while tears started to roll down her cheeks. My mind and my body pleads for it's release...
I want nothing more than peace and silence...
Well that's it...*runs and hides*
As I mentioned on IRC, I think your poetryskills had a factor in this. I get the feeling~~
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Originally Posted by Satashi
funny stuff to counter tear-jerkers.
Diary of Vivio: fan fiction edition.
Vivio has two mamas.
*image of Nanoha cupping a feel on Fate and whispering to her*Sometimes Nanoha mama will whisper into Fate-mama's ear and Fate mama would blush very dark.
*Image of Vivio being handed over to Hayate, who's smiling with open arms to take her* I don't know why but when it happens, I am always told to go over and play at aunt-Hayate's place while they go to a toy store.
*Image of Fate and Nanoha, in a store, discussing while holding various objects that are blurred out* I want to go to the toy store too but they say I'm too little.
*Vivio looking at bunny* I want to grow up and play with all those toys too!
*Hayate in background with purple wavy lines above her* no you don't, Vivio-chan....
2008-06-04, 21:47
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And Thriller makes a come back once again. 
