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[Marcus H.]

Hammerspace as an esper ability seems farfetched though. Remember that there are certain "canon conventions" in making an ability, which includes a certain control of certain parts of the laws of physics. [Let's ignore Kakine this time. He's a special case and can be excluded because of his Dark Matter control.]

> First of all, there should be no Level 5 or higher espers who are natives of Japan. There should only be seven Level 5s, and higher level espers are either outside Japan or unknown, if not non-existent.

> I've just mentioned that laws and/or concepts of physics can be tweaked by espers, like the concept of inertia (abused by Equal Speed), vectors (Accelerator in a sense) and thermodynamics (broken by Uiharu Kazari). In my fanfiction series, I have an esper who controls pressure - and eventually forces. Space expansion appears to be a magical, not a scientific concept, but change of mass is permissible, as long as it is not a perpetual effect.

> Control of a certain element is permitted, as proved by Misaka Mikoto (iron) and Kinuhata Saiai (nitrogen).

> There are no such proofs to back this up, but there are currently no abilities in canon which augment a person's natural processes, like abilities which give superhuman strength or improves vision. Espers can only interact with objects outside of the human body, with the exception of Accelerator, which only uses an application of his ability.

> By the way, Gemstones can break any of these rules, because of the lack of information on how Gemstones are common with each other, and their nature as having inborn abilities.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Flere821

*clap clap clap* Pretty good fic Ashaman Though come to think of it... did we EVER see a shirtless Touma in the anime yet? >.> Cause from memory I don't think that has happened, even in Angel Fall...

*shrug* whatever, minor details of no importance I suppose.

Someone must have installed a spying camera, capturing pictures of Touma bathing...

... which reminds me of YET another 2ch fanfic I read a few days back.

Spoiler for 2ch you... you so creative >_<:

Title - [Mikoto] "I can't hold back anymore!"
JP Title if anyone Japanese literate wants to try reading, copy and paste this in your search (even Google will do): 実琴「もう我慢できないわ！」

Mikoto decides she can't hold back her "love" (you'll know what I mean in quotes as I describe this) for Touma and gets Kuroko to install spy cameras everywhere in Touma's house.

She spends her time 24/7 on the monitor (which is located in their dorm in Tokiwadai) fawning over Touma on the screen... in various ways (don't ask) which includes stealing Touma's undies. And whenever Index says something she goes yandere, going angry in the room (as to why the Dorm Supervisor doesn't give a damn about it was because she thought she was imagining things too much that she decided to take a medical leave).

A stressed Kuroko got broken when Mikoto broke the former's chair in one of her fits of getting angry over Index deredere'ing with Touma in one of her "Touma Time" (spying, d'uh), because the chair has so much sentimental value in it that when she got a new chair, she even gave a chair a name and got obsessed with it... poor Kuroko.

Back to Mikoto, she later decides to have Kuroko teleport her to Touma's house while Index was away for a night (for some reason, she's staying over at Komoe-sensei's house), much to the shock of Touma, and with her arrival, she almost got Touma suspicious to how she even knew he lost some of his belonging (undies, urk ) but managed to cover it.

After a happy time on the bed (oh well, it isn't what I thought, and definitely not what we're thinking, just sleeping next to each other, facing each other) she decides to stop her spying activities, destroys all spying equipment (much to the shock of Kuroko due to how much was spent on buying those) and confesses to Touma instead. Happy end for the two...

... while as for Kuroko, she's now broken enough to consider that chair she gave a nickname as a pet/human friend and went to introduce it to Uiharu and Saten, much to their... uh, unspoken horror.

... This is the reason you guys here writing in Fanfiction.Net are so much of a precious gem to me. At least, this is not as much as a mindr__e of yet another 2ch fanfic I rambled about here a few days back... and which blew my mind after reading it. As I said, even Gainax Endings are put to shame with that.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Marcus H.

> There are no such proofs to back this up, but there are currently no abilities in canon which augment a person's natural processes, like abilities which give superhuman strength or improves vision. Espers can only interact with objects outside of the human body, with the exception of Accelerator, which only uses an application of his ability.

X-ray vision dude...

[Marcus H.]

Except clairvoyance, and all "famous" psychic abilities. Forgot to add that, lol.

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

Someone must have installed a spying camera, capturing pictures of Touma bathing...

... which reminds me of YET another 2ch fanfic I read a few days back.

-snip-

Whoa....

2ch users are so.....disturbing

What's next, Mugino going yandere for Touma and kills anyone in her way?

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Whoa....

2ch users are so.....disturbing

What's next, Mugino going yandere for Touma and kills anyone in her way?

That'll have to be answered by a certain 4koma fanartist who threw Hamadzura out of the circle, and as a result Touma somehow got into there - and became ITEM's most beloved... chair.



... I'm still daring anyone to ask me about that mindr__ing 2ch fanfic I lamented about. Any takers?

Believe me, Mugino going yandere for Touma and killing anyone in her way to Touma makes much more sense if I were to make an average comparison of stuff I've seen so far.

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You know, I wanted to use an ability like that before after watching bakemonogatari...

Logically there's only two ways to change the weight of something- Either you change it's mass, or you alter gravitational acceleration.

I would suggest the latter... It'll be more acceptable in my opinion.





How do you intend to do this?

The "Extra Space" skill expands the capacity of a container with out expanding its size and mass , it expand the space inside the container or bag. got this idea form one the science channels on quantum mechanics , theory of relativity about space and time.

the analogy is the normal capacity of a back pack is 5 large size books, with "Extra Space" you can double the amount ... there are limitation for its an active skill.... the OC Daisuke does get tired if he use it constantly . for him over using it can be lethal for him

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by kaizerknight01

The "Extra Space" skill expands the capacity of a container with out expanding its size and mass , it expand the space inside the container or bag. got this idea form one the science channels on quantum mechanics , theory of relativity about space and time.

the analogy is the normal capacity of a back pack is 5 large size books, with "Extra Space" you can double the amount ... there are limitation for its an active skill.... the OC Daisuke does get tired if he use it constantly . for him over using it can be lethal for him

I recall that... I also recall they said that to expand or squeeze space would require the energy and mass of a star

[tsunade666]

I love that 4koma when Mugino is using Touma as a chair

I think the fanfic from 2ch are pretty normal. Well I usually go their to snoop around and everyone keeps getting derailed from original conversation and into nonsense but back into it again. Still normal -_-

Mugino blast away anything which are bigger than "hers" by a certain 4koma

[Asuras]

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Sounds interesting, but a bit sketchy. So that would mean if a Level 4 uses the drug, they would automatically rise up to a Level 7?

That doesn't make sense. Levels don't work that way. A Level 6 is stated to have a power that is on the level of God, what exactly would a Level 7 be? Also, it seems suspicious that Gakuen Toshi hasn't picked up on this drug. I suppose it's possible the US found it first, but still...

Also, there should be drastic side effects and specific limitations on who can use it, like the Crystallized Esper Essence has. Otherwise, it's too convenient.

The drug is limited to Level 5. And even then, it isn't as strong as most level 5's.

There is no bastion safe from the desirable eyes of its invaders.

There are side effects. Dependency. It must be taken every day lest one fall victim to across-the-board mental and organ failure.

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Plausible, but he never questions why he doesn't remember anything? Also, like others have said, 30 years of advanced technology makes a huge difference.

The mind is a strange thing; evident to anyone who's even seen the series. Memory non-existence doesn't mean that the brain necessarily feels something is missing.

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Wait, how come the US ESPers managed to invade Gakuen Toshi? The city is strict on whoever can come in since it doesn't want its information leaked out, so how can an entire essembly of ESPers be there? It's not easy to get in or out of AC, and the US being 30 years behind in technology would make it kind of impossible to try and pass without being detected.

Sounds interesting, with a solid plot. Be wary of making your OC too powerful and fix some things here and there.

After his house explodes, I'm sure you realize that without the drug, they are very weak.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

It could easy be limited to a certain level, after all there's only so much a human body can take. Perhaps it only works for the low levels? And at higher levels it does nothing? There's no way any other country could even come close to the power levels of Academy City's Espers.

I want to suggest something though, how about making the US espers fundamentally different from Academy City's AIM espers? We know the reason why Crowley went down that path, but just like the gemstones, power users come in all shapes and sizes. Maybe the American Espers wouldn't be AIM base?

That sounds positively right. I'll have to brainstorm something to explain it with. Which might take awhile.

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I recall that... I also recall they said that to expand or squeeze space would require the energy and mass of a star

I think in the theory of quantum mechanics there sub atomic particles that can act weird/strange that occur naturally in nature like 4 Dimesion effect, dark energy/dark matter , nuetrino that can pass though normal matter almost unchanged

the premise of Extra Space that some how taps in or finds a loop hole(s) in normal known physics

anyway is a fanfic ...... no need to strain our brain in the process

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by outerelf

Second: Academy City is only taking native Japanese Youths so far. There hasn't been a single foreign born (except for gemstones) that's gotten in. But I suppose that can be ignored.

Minor nit-picking: foreign students have been mentioned before, some in Tokiwadai. Tokiwadai was stated to accept foreign students in Vol8 (or 5?), and once almost sparked a international incident for refusing a member of a royal family (dunno which country though, but chances are it's not UK seeing the three princesses there are all over 24) entrance into their school.

[Miraluka]

All the princesses above 24, Vilian being the younger... how old is William? 25? I think he is at least below 30.

[Asuras]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Minor nit-picking: foreign students have been mentioned before, some in Tokiwadai. Tokiwadai was stated to accept foreign students in Vol8 (or 5?), and once almost sparked a international incident for refusing a member of a royal family (dunno which country though, but chances are it's not UK seeing the three princesses there are all over 24) entrance into their school.

Well then, I guess they don't need to sneak in.

[outerelf]

Hmmm... I wonder if this story could work in a midevil setting...

*has an image of Knight!Touma, Princess!Index, Ninja!Tsuchimikado* Probably not seeming how science is as big as the magic, but I suppose if you were to make the science people gemstone espers, or magicians...

I don't know what's wrong with me today. I can't seem to calm down.

[Ashaman]

Okay, so, when I finished Delta Force, I added an omake (the song below.) I was intending to be creepy, due to the list form chapter four, but it seems to have failed. What do you guys think?

Spoiler for Accel song:

You better watch out
You better not cry
Better not doubt
I'm telling you why
Accelerator is coming to town
He's making a list
And checking it twice;
Gonna find out Who's naughty and nice
Accelerator is coming to town
He sees you when you're sleeping
He knows when you're awake
He knows if you've been bad or good
So be good for your own sake!
O! You better watch out!
You better not cry
Better not doubt
I'm telling you why
Accelerator is coming to town
Accelerator is coming to town Kyukyahahahahah

On a related note, now I want to see Santa!Accelerator.

Either in Fic (Fluff overload is expected) or Pic form.

So, Yuki, is it possible you can provide me with the latter at least?

You do have quite the collection.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Well, not exactly a santa, but how about a badass reindeer?

[Miraluka]

Accelerudolf: Lets deliver those gifs Last Santa!!!

[Master Assassin]

... Oh wow. Today's find: a fanfic from 2ch featuring ITEM as Touma's... adopted sisters.

Spoiler for What what in the ????:

So the ITEM "siblings"... apparently Touya adopted them (strangely, Child Errors!? How did the writer even make that up!?), and Mugino is the eldest followed by Rikou, then Touma as the eldest son (third in line), followed by Frenda and Saiai.

All four of the sisters are bro-con for Touma, but as the Touma we knew, Touma only wants a normal girlfriend, not his "siblings."

Shiage? Where did he go? Dunno, but I guess he only appeared once in the fic, as a friend of Saiai's (and tried to calm down Touma who was unhappy with his presence at home by calling him Onii-chan ). Index? Ask me nothing, I knew nothing

... In the meanwhile... poor Mikoto (in the fic).

Touma, you sure spoil your "sisters" too much.

I find this rather... sweet.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

... Oh wow. Today's find: a fanfic from 2ch featuring ITEM as Touma's... adopted sisters.

Spoiler for What what in the ????:

So the ITEM "siblings"... apparently Touya adopted them (strangely, Child Errors!? How did the writer even make that up!?), and Mugino is the eldest followed by Rikou, then Touma as the eldest son (third in line), followed by Frenda and Saiai.

All four of the sisters are bro-con for Touma, but as the Touma we knew, Touma only wants a normal girlfriend, not his "siblings."

Shiage? Where did he go? Dunno, but I guess he only appeared once in the fic, as a friend of Saiai's (and tried to calm down Touma who was unhappy with his presence at home by calling him Onii-chan ). Index? Ask me nothing, I knew nothing

... In the meanwhile... poor Mikoto (in the fic).


Touma, you sure spoil your "sisters" too much.

I find this rather... sweet.

We'll need a translator for this.