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[vic-vic]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 28:

Nothing…

Vita couldn’t keep the tears from forming in her eyes as that word ran through her head. Nothing…

But, it couldn’t be, Reinforce said that the Protection Program would come back and corrupt her again and make her hurt Hayate.

All for nothing…

Vita closed her eyes, tears falling freely from them as she punched a nearby door. “All for nothing?! It can’t be!!” She screamed, her small body trembling in anger. “How could it?! She gave her life to save us, all of us, and it was for nothing?!” She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Signum looking at her, her leader’s eyes were shaded by her hair. “Signum…”

“You are a knight, Vita, one who is sworn to uphold your duty to your master at all times and keep your composure.” Signum’s voice was softly, almost monotone, causing Vita to hiccup a few times as she tried to stop herself from crying anymore. “However…” She lifted her head up, and Vita could see tears forming in her eyes. “It is appropriate to cry, in this instance.”

Trembling, Vita suddenly hugged Signum and cried into her abdomen. She couldn’t help it, she needed to vent somehow, and she just couldn’t hold it in anymore.

It helped when Signum was rubbing her back and feeling the same emotions she was.

When they recovered from this, neither would bring it up again and would deny it if anyone said anything, but for now, it was a time of mourning of a fallen comrade, one who fell senselessly.

They would deal with these “Materials” at a later time, when their heads were clearer.

(---)

Looking at Yami as she lay on the bed, well, the only bed, he had taken a few sheets to making hammocks in the room so that Seikou, Rai and himself could at least have a place to sleep when they were tired, Yuuno wondered just what he was going to do. He knew that the Materials were dangerous, and pretty self-serving, and yet…

Yami shifted slightly and opened her eyes to look at him, her face was rather calm as she looked up at him. “What are you looking at?” She asked, her voice soft and curious.

Yuuno shook his head at her. “Just someone who can’t get out of bed right now.”

“Who’s fault is that?” She asked, before shaking her head and slumping against the bed. “Can you help me?”

He blinked a few times as he looked at her, her eyes were shifting around before she looked at him, her previous arrogance was gone, revealing a rather… nervous and timid looking girl in her place. “Yami?”

“I don’t like asking for help… But you helped Material-S, so, help me… Please..?”

(---)

Einhart Stratos ignored the sweat that was rolling down her body as she continued working with the heavy weights in the Nakajima’s mini-gym. But even as her body worked, her mind was elsewhere. Heck, she didn’t even protest when Nove took over Touma’s combat training.

Ever since she saw the images of those women on the TV that got everyone in an uproar, a part of her realized that this was the beginning of the end. The peace would be shattered and those three mages would bring about a new darkness to this world that would dwarf that of Ancient Belka.

She was terrified of what possibilities lay in store should those women reach Mid-Childa but at the same time, she was somewhat excited for this opportunity for she saw this as a chance for redemption. She would do what her ancestor could not and protect everything she held dear with her fists. If she could do that, then the ghosts that haunted her lineage could be put to rest and she could look towards the future.

After her last repetition, she replaced the barbell and took the towel next to her to wipe off the sweat. As she headed to the kitchen to get a glass of water, she saw Touma limping in from the backyard. “Touma-kun?”

“Oh… hey, Einhart… looking good as always… ow…” He moved his body in the nearest chair by the kitchen table so he could rest.

She briefly blushed from his little compliment on her appearance before clearing her throat to regain composure. “I see that Nove-sensei’s working you hard,” commented Einhart softly.

“Yeah. Strike Arts is pretty hardcore,” said the boy while he slowly caught his breath.

“Perhaps but it‘s not as intense when compared to Kaiser Arts.” She took a seat right next to Thoma as he laughed a little.

“Heh… I guess…”

“I could show you sometime.” She looked at him closely, getting a blush from him. “It is… Very intense and we’d have to be even closer.”

Touma blushed as images came to his mind before shaking his head as Einhart tilted her head to look at him curiously. “Ah, um, sure… Just let me recover first.”

She smiled at him and nodded. “Sure.” A small part of her mind suddenly became super deformed, and started squealing with its hands right up to its mouth as it wiggled around happily. “Tomorrow then?”

“Sure.” He chuckled nervously as she smiled at him. For some weird reason, he felt that he was doomed, and not just from the butt-kicking he was probably going to endure.

(---)

Roughly an hour later, Seikou raised an eyebrow as she looked at Yuuno and Yami, Yuuno looked incredibly relaxed, though exhausted and Yami… “You look like you had fun.”

“That’s none of your business.” She blushed and turned away. “But, yes, it was enjoyable…” She smirked at Seikou and stretched. “I haven’t felt this energized in a long while.”

“I see.” Seikou nodded and looked at Yuuno. “I will need energy soon as well…”

Yuuno shook his head and readjusted his glasses. “I don’t think that I can help anymore for today. At least wait until tomorrow.” He sighed when Seikou nodded, but he could see the disappointment in her eyes. “Anyway…” He blinked as the ship suddenly seemed to stop. “What’s going on?”

“I don’t know, Yuu-nii, suddenly the controls went “WHEE!” and started glowing red before flying off into another direction.” Rai crossed her arms and pouted, <I>she</I> wanted to be the one to make the ship glow red and go off in random directions, it wasn’t fair!

“This isn’t a good thing, Rai.” Yuuno shook his head and sighed. “Looks like one of the engines blew a fuse or something. I’ll go check it out.”

“Okay!” Rai grinned as she leaned back in the chair. “Ne, ne, Yami-chan.”

“Call me ‘Your Majesty‘,” grumbled Material-D before giving the Fate replica her attention. “What do you want?”

Rai grinned at her. “Yuu-nii’s nice, huh?” When Yami rolled her eyes at the blue haired woman, Rai pouted and spun around in her chair. “You’re no fun.”

Yami ignored her, sat down in front of the console and smiled softly with her eyes closed. That had been… Rather enjoyable, she would need to do it again… She turned to look at Rai and Seikou before shaking her head. ‘After he’s taken care of them.’ She thought to herself. Yami might have been a bit of a brat and self-serving, but she really did care about Seikou and Rai and not much else.

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It`s nice to see Yami tender and vulnerable side. So, Yuuno already scored Seikou and Yami, now only one left it`s Rai-chan.

Fow some reason, to me at last, Material-S looked more interesting to watch that Aces.

[Megaolix]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 28:

Nothing…

Vita couldn’t keep the tears from forming in her eyes as that word ran through her head. Nothing…

But, it couldn’t be, Reinforce said that the Protection Program would come back and corrupt her again and make her hurt Hayate.

All for nothing…

Vita closed her eyes, tears falling freely from them as she punched a nearby door. “All for nothing?! It can’t be!!” She screamed, her small body trembling in anger. “How could it?! She gave her life to save us, all of us, and it was for nothing?!” She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Signum looking at her, her leader’s eyes were shaded by her hair. “Signum…”

“You are a knight, Vita, one who is sworn to uphold your duty to your master at all times and keep your composure.” Signum’s voice was softly, almost monotone, causing Vita to hiccup a few times as she tried to stop herself from crying anymore. “However…” She lifted her head up, and Vita could see tears forming in her eyes. “It is appropriate to cry, in this instance.”

Trembling, Vita suddenly hugged Signum and cried into her abdomen. She couldn’t help it, she needed to vent somehow, and she just couldn’t hold it in anymore.

It helped when Signum was rubbing her back and feeling the same emotions she was.

When they recovered from this, neither would bring it up again and would deny it if anyone said anything, but for now, it was a time of mourning of a fallen comrade, one who fell senselessly.

They would deal with these “Materials” at a later time, when their heads were clearer.

(---)

Looking at Yami as she lay on the bed, well, the only bed, he had taken a few sheets to making hammocks in the room so that Seikou, Rai and himself could at least have a place to sleep when they were tired, Yuuno wondered just what he was going to do. He knew that the Materials were dangerous, and pretty self-serving, and yet…

Yami shifted slightly and opened her eyes to look at him, her face was rather calm as she looked up at him. “What are you looking at?” She asked, her voice soft and curious.

Yuuno shook his head at her. “Just someone who can’t get out of bed right now.”

“Who’s fault is that?” She asked, before shaking her head and slumping against the bed. “Can you help me?”

He blinked a few times as he looked at her, her eyes were shifting around before she looked at him, her previous arrogance was gone, revealing a rather… nervous and timid looking girl in her place. “Yami?”

“I don’t like asking for help… But you helped Material-S, so, help me… Please..?”

(---)

Einhart Stratos ignored the sweat that was rolling down her body as she continued working with the heavy weights in the Nakajima’s mini-gym. But even as her body worked, her mind was elsewhere. Heck, she didn’t even protest when Nove took over Touma’s combat training.

Ever since she saw the images of those women on the TV that got everyone in an uproar, a part of her realized that this was the beginning of the end. The peace would be shattered and those three mages would bring about a new darkness to this world that would dwarf that of Ancient Belka.

She was terrified of what possibilities lay in store should those women reach Mid-Childa but at the same time, she was somewhat excited for this opportunity for she saw this as a chance for redemption. She would do what her ancestor could not and protect everything she held dear with her fists. If she could do that, then the ghosts that haunted her lineage could be put to rest and she could look towards the future.

After her last repetition, she replaced the barbell and took the towel next to her to wipe off the sweat. As she headed to the kitchen to get a glass of water, she saw Touma limping in from the backyard. “Touma-kun?”

“Oh… hey, Einhart… looking good as always… ow…” He moved his body in the nearest chair by the kitchen table so he could rest.

She briefly blushed from his little compliment on her appearance before clearing her throat to regain composure. “I see that Nove-sensei’s working you hard,” commented Einhart softly.

“Yeah. Strike Arts is pretty hardcore,” said the boy while he slowly caught his breath.

“Perhaps but it‘s not as intense when compared to Kaiser Arts.” She took a seat right next to Thoma as he laughed a little.

“Heh… I guess…”

“I could show you sometime.” She looked at him closely, getting a blush from him. “It is… Very intense and we’d have to be even closer.”

Touma blushed as images came to his mind before shaking his head as Einhart tilted her head to look at him curiously. “Ah, um, sure… Just let me recover first.”

She smiled at him and nodded. “Sure.” A small part of her mind suddenly became super deformed, and started squealing with its hands right up to its mouth as it wiggled around happily. “Tomorrow then?”

“Sure.” He chuckled nervously as she smiled at him. For some weird reason, he felt that he was doomed, and not just from the butt-kicking he was probably going to endure.

(---)

Roughly an hour later, Seikou raised an eyebrow as she looked at Yuuno and Yami, Yuuno looked incredibly relaxed, though exhausted and Yami… “You look like you had fun.”

“That’s none of your business.” She blushed and turned away. “But, yes, it was enjoyable…” She smirked at Seikou and stretched. “I haven’t felt this energized in a long while.”

“I see.” Seikou nodded and looked at Yuuno. “I will need energy soon as well…”

Yuuno shook his head and readjusted his glasses. “I don’t think that I can help anymore for today. At least wait until tomorrow.” He sighed when Seikou nodded, but he could see the disappointment in her eyes. “Anyway…” He blinked as the ship suddenly seemed to stop. “What’s going on?”

“I don’t know, Yuu-nii, suddenly the controls went “WHEE!” and started glowing red before flying off into another direction.” Rai crossed her arms and pouted, <I>she</I> wanted to be the one to make the ship glow red and go off in random directions, it wasn’t fair!

“This isn’t a good thing, Rai.” Yuuno shook his head and sighed. “Looks like one of the engines blew a fuse or something. I’ll go check it out.”

“Okay!” Rai grinned as she leaned back in the chair. “Ne, ne, Yami-chan.”

“Call me ‘Your Majesty‘,” grumbled Material-D before giving the Fate replica her attention. “What do you want?”

Rai grinned at her. “Yuu-nii’s nice, huh?” When Yami rolled her eyes at the blue haired woman, Rai pouted and spun around in her chair. “You’re no fun.”

Yami ignored her, sat down in front of the console and smiled softly with her eyes closed. That had been… Rather enjoyable, she would need to do it again… She turned to look at Rai and Seikou before shaking her head. ‘After he’s taken care of them.’ She thought to herself. Yami might have been a bit of a brat and self-serving, but she really did care about Seikou and Rai and not much else.

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Ahhh... the innuendo. Could be an easy mistake to make, but I'm pretty sure Yuuno wouldn't be exactly relaxed if he actually did it.

However, that part with Einhart... Frankly, why? What's the point of making her like the Numbers (+Subaru and Ginga) towards Touma? We know Vivid still didn't tell us much about her and where it will go, making her the same as the rest doesn't make me happy at all.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Megaolix

Ahhh... the innuendo. Could be an easy msitake to amke, but I'm prettys ure Yuuno wouldn't be exactly relaxed if he actually did it.

However, that part with Einhart... Frankly, why? What's the point of making her like the Numbers (+Subaru and Ginga) towards Touma? We know Vivid still didn't tell us much about her and where it will go, making her the same as the rest doesn't make me happy at all.

It's more like... She has a minor crush on Touma... or at least, likes him, and she just wants to get his attention, so...

She ends up emulating the Nakajima sisters somewhat, not as aggressive as they are, but she's just trying to get him to notice her over the boobilicious (save Cinque) Nakajima sisters.

Not an easy thing to do, all things considered.

[Megaolix]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

It's more like... She has a minor crush on Touma... or at least, likes him, and she just wants to get his attention, so...

She ends up emulating the Nakajima sisters somewhat, not as aggressive as they are, but she's just trying to get him to notice her over the boobilicious (save Cinque) Nakajima sisters.

Not an easy thing to do, all things considered.

Now that makes sense. Perhaps you could include that in the story? Else more like me will get the wrong idea about it.

[Tempy]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

It's more like... She has a minor crush on Touma... or at least, likes him, and she just wants to get his attention, so...

She ends up emulating the Nakajima sisters somewhat, not as aggressive as they are, but she's just trying to get him to notice her over the boobilicious (save Cinque) Nakajima sisters.

Not an easy thing to do, all things considered.

This kinda reminds me of Mai Kobayashi and Latune Subota from Super Robot Wars OG, where they emulate their mutual crush's mannerisms such as shouting out special attacks in order to garner his attention. Their original personalities were shy, quiet types, much like Einhart. In comparison, Ryusei Date (the girls' crush) is very hotblooded and YEEEEEEEEEAH! Just like certain Nakajimas.

Ohoho.

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Clowns. Clowns are good. Clowns are always good.

Sometimes I wonder if I should be feeding your addiction...

It's actually kinda funny. Infinity tends to blow Center Ring out of the water in terms of reviews on FF.net, but Center Ring get a vastly warmer reception here on AS. I appreciate that. Gives me incentive to keep doing both.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 28:

Nothing…

Vita couldn’t keep the tears from forming in her eyes as that word ran through her head. Nothing…

But, it couldn’t be, Reinforce said that the Protection Program would come back and corrupt her again and make her hurt Hayate.

All for nothing…

Vita closed her eyes, tears falling freely from them as she punched a nearby door. “All for nothing?! It can’t be!!” She screamed, her small body trembling in anger. “How could it?! She gave her life to save us, all of us, and it was for nothing?!” She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Signum looking at her, her leader’s eyes were shaded by her hair. “Signum…”

“You are a knight, Vita, one who is sworn to uphold your duty to your master at all times and keep your composure.” Signum’s voice was softly, almost monotone, causing Vita to hiccup a few times as she tried to stop herself from crying anymore. “However…” She lifted her head up, and Vita could see tears forming in her eyes. “It is appropriate to cry, in this instance.”

Trembling, Vita suddenly hugged Signum and cried into her abdomen. She couldn’t help it, she needed to vent somehow, and she just couldn’t hold it in anymore.

It helped when Signum was rubbing her back and feeling the same emotions she was.

When they recovered from this, neither would bring it up again and would deny it if anyone said anything, but for now, it was a time of mourning of a fallen comrade, one who fell senselessly.

They would deal with these “Materials” at a later time, when their heads were clearer.

(---)

Looking at Yami as she lay on the bed, well, the only bed, he had taken a few sheets to making hammocks in the room so that Seikou, Rai and himself could at least have a place to sleep when they were tired, Yuuno wondered just what he was going to do. He knew that the Materials were dangerous, and pretty self-serving, and yet…

Yami shifted slightly and opened her eyes to look at him, her face was rather calm as she looked up at him. “What are you looking at?” She asked, her voice soft and curious.

Yuuno shook his head at her. “Just someone who can’t get out of bed right now.”

“Who’s fault is that?” She asked, before shaking her head and slumping against the bed. “Can you help me?”

He blinked a few times as he looked at her, her eyes were shifting around before she looked at him, her previous arrogance was gone, revealing a rather… nervous and timid looking girl in her place. “Yami?”

“I don’t like asking for help… But you helped Material-S, so, help me… Please..?”

(---)

Einhart Stratos ignored the sweat that was rolling down her body as she continued working with the heavy weights in the Nakajima’s mini-gym. But even as her body worked, her mind was elsewhere. Heck, she didn’t even protest when Nove took over Touma’s combat training.

Ever since she saw the images of those women on the TV that got everyone in an uproar, a part of her realized that this was the beginning of the end. The peace would be shattered and those three mages would bring about a new darkness to this world that would dwarf that of Ancient Belka.

She was terrified of what possibilities lay in store should those women reach Mid-Childa but at the same time, she was somewhat excited for this opportunity for she saw this as a chance for redemption. She would do what her ancestor could not and protect everything she held dear with her fists. If she could do that, then the ghosts that haunted her lineage could be put to rest and she could look towards the future.

After her last repetition, she replaced the barbell and took the towel next to her to wipe off the sweat. As she headed to the kitchen to get a glass of water, she saw Touma limping in from the backyard. “Touma-kun?”

“Oh… hey, Einhart… looking good as always… ow…” He moved his body in the nearest chair by the kitchen table so he could rest.

She briefly blushed from his little compliment on her appearance before clearing her throat to regain composure. “I see that Nove-sensei’s working you hard,” commented Einhart softly.

“Yeah. Strike Arts is pretty hardcore,” said the boy while he slowly caught his breath.

“Perhaps but it‘s not as intense when compared to Kaiser Arts.” She took a seat right next to Thoma as he laughed a little.

“Heh… I guess…”

“I could show you sometime.” She looked at him closely, getting a blush from him. “It is… Very intense and we’d have to be even closer.”

Touma blushed as images came to his mind before shaking his head as Einhart tilted her head to look at him curiously. “Ah, um, sure… Just let me recover first.”

She smiled at him and nodded. “Sure.” A small part of her mind suddenly became super deformed, and started squealing with its hands right up to its mouth as it wiggled around happily. “Tomorrow then?”

“Sure.” He chuckled nervously as she smiled at him. For some weird reason, he felt that he was doomed, and not just from the butt-kicking he was probably going to endure.

(---)

Roughly an hour later, Seikou raised an eyebrow as she looked at Yuuno and Yami, Yuuno looked incredibly relaxed, though exhausted and Yami… “You look like you had fun.”

“That’s none of your business.” She blushed and turned away. “But, yes, it was enjoyable…” She smirked at Seikou and stretched. “I haven’t felt this energized in a long while.”

“I see.” Seikou nodded and looked at Yuuno. “I will need energy soon as well…”

Yuuno shook his head and readjusted his glasses. “I don’t think that I can help anymore for today. At least wait until tomorrow.” He sighed when Seikou nodded, but he could see the disappointment in her eyes. “Anyway…” He blinked as the ship suddenly seemed to stop. “What’s going on?”

“I don’t know, Yuu-nii, suddenly the controls went “WHEE!” and started glowing red before flying off into another direction.” Rai crossed her arms and pouted, <I>she</I> wanted to be the one to make the ship glow red and go off in random directions, it wasn’t fair!

“This isn’t a good thing, Rai.” Yuuno shook his head and sighed. “Looks like one of the engines blew a fuse or something. I’ll go check it out.”

“Okay!” Rai grinned as she leaned back in the chair. “Ne, ne, Yami-chan.”

“Call me ‘Your Majesty‘,” grumbled Material-D before giving the Fate replica her attention. “What do you want?”

Rai grinned at her. “Yuu-nii’s nice, huh?” When Yami rolled her eyes at the blue haired woman, Rai pouted and spun around in her chair. “You’re no fun.”

Yami ignored her, sat down in front of the console and smiled softly with her eyes closed. That had been… Rather enjoyable, she would need to do it again… She turned to look at Rai and Seikou before shaking her head. ‘After he’s taken care of them.’ She thought to herself. Yami might have been a bit of a brat and self-serving, but she really did care about Seikou and Rai and not much else.

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Bah, too out of it to think of specific comments. Good chapter

[shiroi mahotsukai]

It seems Yuuno is getting his fair share of action. This folks has proven that for every good thing that happens to you, a not-so-good thing happens. Sure he might have scored but you've got to remember who with.

Great chapter once again, I really liked D's tsundereness it makes some things that wouldn't usually be predictable from her, completely unexpected when they happen.

(D is the Hayate replica right? I can never remember.)

[Megaolix]

I would love to know something: Why some of you are thinking Yuuno actually did it? You seriously think he would be as calm and relaxed as he was after this if he actually did it?

[00-Raiser]

Yeah, he didn't score, I'm sure he just did the same thing he did to S.

[shiroi mahotsukai]

But it sounds like he did and that makes all the difference, let the imagination run wild... okay I misread it, it's one am.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Moczo

Sometimes I wonder if I should be feeding your addiction...

I can quite any time I want to!

It's actually kinda funny. Infinity tends to blow Center Ring out of the water in terms of reviews on FF.net, but Center Ring get a vastly warmer reception here on AS. I appreciate that. Gives me incentive to keep doing both.

Well, I think it also helps that Center Ring began on AS and grew from there, so a lot of the readers who comment have gotten a chance to see it develop and grow, whereas Infinity didn't originally develop in the FFT (as far as I know), so it's a little harder to comment on it unless you also follow it on FF.net. Which I've been meaning to do for the longest time, actually...

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by shiroi mahotsukai

But it sounds like he did and that makes all the difference, let the imagination run wild

And that's precisely the point.

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I can quit any time I want to!

The first step is admitting you have a problem.

Except I'm technically your dealer in this scenario, so I guess I should be telling you that you don't have a problem, then offering you a free hit. Y'know, to keep you hooked.

I'll get right on that, I swear. I'm not a very motivated clown-pusher.

Well, I think it also helps that Center Ring began on AS and grew from there, so a lot of the readers who comment have gotten a chance to see it develop and grow, whereas Infinity didn't originally develop in the FFT (as far as I know), so it's a little harder to comment on it unless you also follow it on FF.net. Which I've been meaning to do for the longest time, actually...

Yeah, I'd assume that to be the reason too. Infinity was well along before I ever started posting here, whereas Center Ring started up after I began. Plus, you guys have a quirkier sense of humor than the average FF.net reader, most likely, which I've got to believe helps...

And I don't blame you for not following Infinity, honestly. It is kind of a large story, so I imagine it can be sort of hard to get into without a big chunk of free time to get started with. Hell, I'd probably have a hard time following it if I weren't the one leading it.

[Satashi]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6186724/3/

Mothers and Daughters chapter 3! NSFW~

(BTW anyone here play Starcraft II? My name is Kimiko, code number: 590 )

[Rising Dragon]

The backlog I have on FFT-related stuff is getting ridiculous. >.> I have so much to do and read and blaaaahhh.

Originally Posted by Satashi

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6186724/3/

Mothers and Daughters chapter 3! NSFW~

(BTW anyone here play Starcraft II? My name is Kimiko, code number: 590 )

I have a 7-hour guest pass for the game, but I'm waiting for my ex-girlfriend to tell me when to play it since she was the one who gave me the pass in the first place.

[MeisterBabylon]

Looks like the tsundere-led Zerg infested this thread as well...

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by shiroi mahotsukai

It seems Yuuno is getting his fair share of action. This folks has proven that for every good thing that happens to you, a not-so-good thing happens. Sure he might have scored but you've got to remember who with.

Great chapter once again, I really liked D's tsundereness it makes some things that wouldn't usually be predictable from her, completely unexpected when they happen.

(D is the Hayate replica right? I can never remember.)

D - Yami/Darkness, the Hayate replica.

S - Seikou/Starlight, Nanoha Replica.

L - Rai/Lightning, Fate Replica.

The letters are their "elements" that are based on the originals..

Hayate - Darkness

Nanoha - Starlight

Fate - Lightning

[shiroi mahotsukai]

I will do my best to remember that, thank you.

[XenahortCharybdis]

Originally Posted by Tempy

This kinda reminds me of Mai Kobayashi and Latune Subota from Super Robot Wars OG, where they emulate their mutual crush's mannerisms such as shouting out special attacks in order to garner his attention. Their original personalities were shy, quiet types, much like Einhart. In comparison, Ryusei Date (the girls' crush) is very hotblooded and YEEEEEEEEEAH! Just like certain Nakajimas.

Ohoho.

Lol. Nice one there...I think it's Latooni, though.
Like...

Spoiler for Latooni~:

...Yeah, Latooni.

And that reminds me, hotblooded practically runs in the blood of ALL the Nakajimas, except that their place on the Kyosuke <-----> Ryusei Hotblood Spectrum varies quite widely, with Subaru being WAY on the right, and Cinque being somewhat more on the left (it could be argued that way, at least).

...Hmmm, and...

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