Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

There's definitely progress, I'll say. Though then again, seeing the kind of action taking place seems to irk me a wee bit.(One of the primary reasons I use drones instead of human opponents)

Overall, slightly rocky plot flow but well within tolerance since the fight scenes make up for it(Not to mention that the fight scenes do play a part in the plot as well, am I right to say that?).

Especially these parts?

Spoiler for 'Clearing' the Training Facility:

Without hesitation, I armed and threw the Flash Bangs in the facility.

*BANG!* *BANG!*

We all bolted in after the second detonation.

"Eee-e-e-e…"

*Dadadadadadadadada.*

Even though we were behind cover from the Flash Bang's effect, it still disoriented a bit of our hearing as we stormed in; shooting down the disoriented Phantom Task's soldiers.

That takes care of them.

*Clop* *Clop*

*Vr-r-r-r-rm!*

Someone revved their Chainsaw Bayonet.

"Mrr-ra-a-a-a-a-a-ah-h-h-h-h-h!"

It was Ratchet and he began to bring it down on a soldier who we apparently missed…

*Rrr-e-e-er-r-r-r-r-r-r-r…*

*Grshsck!* *Gshck!* *Krck!*

Blood is splattering everywhere until his Chainsaw Bayonet cut through his attacker from his right shoulder to his left hip.

*Rr-r-r-r-r-r-eh-h-hrr…*

"Oh, that's just… that's just gross…"

Ratchet remarked as he's mostly covered in blood.

"Heh, here man."

Scourge tossed a rag to Ratchet so he can wipe the blood off of his face and armor.

Spoiler for 'Clearing' the Maintenance Shop:

After the series of detonations, the shop entered a moment of silence as we all looked over towards the back, seeing that it's cleared.

"Hold here…"

I broke out of cover and cautiously approached the back of the shop with my Saber in hand, just to be sure…

As I got over to the turned over workbenches, blood, guts and huge chunks of human body parts splattered and riddled the back part of shop.

*Frr-agh!*

A workbench had moved right next to me. I looked behind it, to find a Phantom Task soldier crawling, stomach down. His left leg was dragging as blood flowed out from his mid section, kind of surprising that he survived those Claymore detonations.

I walked up next to the crawling solder.

"Eergh!"

I kicked him in the mid section to flip him over.

"Drrgh!"

I jabbed my Saber's chainsaw bayonet into his chest.

*Vr-r-r-r-rm!*

Revved the chainsaw; messily mutilating him as bits and blood splatter everywhere, putting him out of his misery.

*Ergh!* *Ergh!* *Ee-er-ergh!*

"…"

After I shut down the chainsaw, I pulled it out while taking a quick scan around the maintenance shop before giving the all clear.

"You guys okay?"

Anyway, it's very late at my end here.

Good night...

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Especially these parts?

Spoiler for 'Clearing' the Training Facility:

Without hesitation, I armed and threw the Flash Bangs in the facility.

*BANG!* *BANG!*

We all bolted in after the second detonation.

"Eee-e-e-e…"

*Dadadadadadadadada.*

Even though we were behind cover from the Flash Bang's effect, it still disoriented a bit of our hearing as we stormed in; shooting down the disoriented Phantom Task's soldiers.

That takes care of them.

*Clop* *Clop*

*Vr-r-r-r-rm!*

Someone revved their Chainsaw Bayonet.

"Mrr-ra-a-a-a-a-a-ah-h-h-h-h-h!"

It was Ratchet and he began to bring it down on a soldier who we apparently missed…

*Rrr-e-e-er-r-r-r-r-r-r-r…*

*Grshsck!* *Gshck!* *Krck!*

Blood is splattering everywhere until his Chainsaw Bayonet cut through his attacker from his right shoulder to his left hip.

*Rr-r-r-r-r-r-eh-h-hrr…*

"Oh, that's just… that's just gross…"

Ratchet remarked as he's mostly covered in blood.

"Heh, here man."

Scourge tossed a rag to Ratchet so he can wipe the blood off of his face and armor.

Spoiler for 'Clearing' the Maintenance Shop:

After the series of detonations, the shop entered a moment of silence as we all looked over towards the back, seeing that it's cleared.

"Hold here…"

I broke out of cover and cautiously approached the back of the shop with my Saber in hand, just to be sure…

As I got over to the turned over workbenches, blood, guts and huge chunks of human body parts splattered and riddled the back part of shop.

*Frr-agh!*

A workbench had moved right next to me. I looked behind it, to find a Phantom Task soldier crawling, stomach down. His left leg was dragging as blood flowed out from his mid section, kind of surprising that he survived those Claymore detonations.

I walked up next to the crawling solder.

"Eergh!"

I kicked him in the mid section to flip him over.

"Drrgh!"

I jabbed my Saber's chainsaw bayonet into his chest.

*Vr-r-r-r-rm!*

Revved the chainsaw; messily mutilating him as bits and blood splatter everywhere, putting him out of his misery.

*Ergh!* *Ergh!* *Ee-er-ergh!*

"…"

After I shut down the chainsaw, I pulled it out while taking a quick scan around the maintenance shop before giving the all clear.

"You guys okay?"

Anyway, it's very late at my end here.

Good night...

Aye.

Also, good night! It's still 7:15PM here.

[demino_hellsin]

how old does one have to be to get a motorcycle license? Mostly in Japan I guess?

[ZeroXSEED]

16 for low-power moped/scooter and 18 for full-bore motorcycle.

[Eratas123]

Eighteen.......

[demino_hellsin]

Chifuyu and Gentaro are gonna have a "fun" talk about that when he asks her for one to use in combat :|

Also, would a comet based IS be cool?

[Eratas123]

Comet based?

[ZeroXSEED]

Well, I have one that based on either space station, lunar base, or alien space probe.

I'm not sure about cool, unless you talk about literal pun that a comet is mostly made of Ice.

[demino_hellsin]

Nah, just a stupid thought I guess

I'm conceptualizing it now...

[Eratas123]

Would you call a forcefull kiss rape?

[demino_hellsin]

yes... even more so if tongue is involved

Would the statement "My first love was an alien." cause violent reactions?

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Eras
Dunno, it certainly invasive (especially if tongue involved), but to what degree I can't be certain.

@ Demi
Depending on how common and acceptable the presence of alien is.

[Eratas123]

No, that would cause a "I'm gonna slowly back away now, okay, Mr. Crazy McCrazypants E.T Lover?"

[demino_hellsin]

Say that in IS-verse and I am curious as to what happens =))

[ZeroXSEED]

Best scenario: everyone took it as a joke
Worst scenario: see Eras' post.

[Eratas123]

Well, if ichika said it it would be more like "What!? You love an Alein more than me!? DIE!!!!!"

[demino_hellsin]

Then it's sad when you realize its true D:

[Eratas123]

Well, if Ichika said he liked a dude then it'd be more like "I-I-I-I didn't think h-he liked guys that way." Probably folowed by a nosebleed.

[demino_hellsin]

can anyone imagine Tabane doing something as crazy as leaving IS scattered around the globe in extremely hard to find places? as in she deliberately leaves the IS in dungeons ala RPG style...

[ZeroXSEED]

^ Considering her? Not too farfetched, but I don't think she has enough time to do that without major assistance.

slightly off topic: finally finished my first chapter of Naruto fic, and my sis STILL don't have spare time, sigh. I guess I will continue TLR Stratos instead. :|