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agetreme · 2012-06-14, 10:25

.... damn no inspiration at the moment....

Currently, after revising my plan, it seems a little too far from IS universe.... will try to revise it to fit into the universe.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-14, 10:26

@ Demi - Who the hell's he pointing at?

@ Senpai - One person messes up colossally and pretty much screws an entire team over. The leader is trying to be nice and say it isn't her fault. Would it be a Kick the Dog if one of the others just says "You fucked us over, and now we just wasted our time because you tried to play hero"?

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 10:27

@zero: canned or bottle?

practicing ideas appreciate any feedback

@eras: at the girls in the dorm

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 10:33

@ Age
Remember the modesty

@ Demi
535ml bottle

Burt seriously, this is going to be insane.

@ Eras
Well, probably. Once again, I don't like thinking too complex and yes, I'd say it's something along that line.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-14, 10:45

@ Demi - You mean there are girls who saw him and he didn't get swarmed? What blasphemy is this!?

@ Senpai - I;'m using differing in tones. Irish practices Brutal Honesty and this allows him to make some good Shut up Hannibal moments, but makes him look like an ass when dealing with problems. ichika's the opposite, acting like The Heart for most of the time, but he looks like a douche when Madoka gives him a Hannibal Lecture.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 10:52

Cecilia: ohohoho my hair is positively fabulous today. The luster is much more vibrant than usual.

Houki: Too bad it's in such tiresome curls. Hair cannot be fully appreciated unless you let it down.

Rin: Not to mention that it definitely has to be black. A color reminiscent of velvety night reflecting twinkling starlight like mine!

Laura: When it comes to color my silver hair is better. It's exotic and c-c-cute!

Charlotte: But hair needs to be soft and well bodied as well. It has to appeal to all senses to be perfect.

Suddenly the five stop as they watch a young man being followed by Ichika. Normally they'd join ther beloved to spend time with him but they were preoccupied by the otjer boy. Or more like preoccupied with his hair which fell just a little past his shoulders and covered an eye in straight strands. The head of hair seemed alive in itself as it glistened under the sunlight, bouncing to the rhythm of the young man's steps. As he passed the girls, they caught a whiff of what could only be described as fresh dew grass and rain with a bit of wildflowers. They gawked.

Ichika: I'm telling you now, she won't give back your mousse

Gentarou: Like I care! My pompadour is a sign of my youth! I will protect at at all costs!

Rin: Am I the only one who feels like killing him?

Houki, Cecilia, Charlotte & Laura: *partial summons* not really

Eratas123 · 2012-06-14, 10:58

Uh...Rin has brown hair while Houki has black. Is she implying she thinks Houki's prettier?

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 11:02

I'm using the novel's descriptions. Houki's hair is black but Rin's was especially mentioned during intro so I assumed it was strikingly black hair

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 11:03

*spurt coke*

Eratas123 · 2012-06-14, 11:04

Uh....novel art has her as brown. Hell, my sig has her as brown:/

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 11:07

author artist dissonance I guess. That or executive meddling to make Rin and Houki more distinguishable from each other.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 11:12

Well, anime made Houki reddish brown and Rin dark brown, so yes it's pure dissonance (because Ichika's hair is black).

I'm going to use anime coloration for TLR Stratos.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 11:18

Oh yeah, Gentarou isn't cool or cute bishonen type. He's more oddball yankee type that is really friendly. So I don't think the girls would be instantly fawning over him. Least not until they get used to seeing someone in a gakuran and pompadour :|

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 11:24

....well, his face is actually good, his hair MIGHT be a turn off but remember, Rule 34 I.S.A. version, if it's a guy, someone, somewhere in the academy will dig him.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 11:35

at the very least I'd think he'd have a lot less pursuers than Ichika. Maybe I should mle a scene where Ichika complains that he's the only one who has to run away from teenaged girl stampedes which always seem to selectively unaffect Gentarou. Not that the kamen rider is complaining at this lifesaving phenomenon but he starts wondering why he's so unpopular with the girls.

Well I'ma sleep for now. Toodles.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-14, 12:10

Stuck on who to put in the mysterious council of mysteriousness:/ So far I have Rafael Dunoa, Te Professor, and the Sarashiki leader.

EthernalRain · 2012-06-14, 17:52

One more week... One more week, and I am finally free from school.

Freedom is within sight! And then I can finally devote time to getting the rewrite of Heart of the Machine to Season 2: Equilibrium within 2 months! And the original ain't even there yet!

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 18:17

Finally freed of the torture that is school eh? Congratulations

Sheer amount of character made me confused about the duel arrangement

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-14, 20:28

Why the hell I keep thinking of I.S. cape in spite of the sheer impracticalities? Though it's not those blowy heroic cape, more like foldable armor plating (Like Master Gundam, Deathscythe, or Dynames)

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-14, 20:38

Spoiler for what the hell?:

My 2nd shift for Charlotte's Rafael has that. I'ma call it the Sefer

2012-06-14, 10:25	Link #32301
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	.... damn no inspiration at the moment.... Currently, after revising my plan, it seems a little too far from IS universe.... will try to revise it to fit into the universe. __________________ Ara Han

2012-06-14, 10:26	Link #32302
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - Who the hell's he pointing at? @ Senpai - One person messes up colossally and pretty much screws an entire team over. The leader is trying to be nice and say it isn't her fault. Would it be a Kick the Dog if one of the others just says "You fucked us over, and now we just wasted our time because you tried to play hero"? __________________

2012-06-14, 10:33	Link #32304
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Age Remember the modesty @ Demi 535ml bottle Burt seriously, this is going to be insane. @ Eras Well, probably. Once again, I don't like thinking too complex and yes, I'd say it's something along that line. __________________

2012-06-14, 10:45	Link #32305
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - You mean there are girls who saw him and he didn't get swarmed? What blasphemy is this!? @ Senpai - I;'m using differing in tones. Irish practices Brutal Honesty and this allows him to make some good Shut up Hannibal moments, but makes him look like an ass when dealing with problems. ichika's the opposite, acting like The Heart for most of the time, but he looks like a douche when Madoka gives him a Hannibal Lecture. __________________

2012-06-14, 10:52	Link #32306
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Cecilia: ohohoho my hair is positively fabulous today. The luster is much more vibrant than usual. Houki: Too bad it's in such tiresome curls. Hair cannot be fully appreciated unless you let it down. Rin: Not to mention that it definitely has to be black. A color reminiscent of velvety night reflecting twinkling starlight like mine! Laura: When it comes to color my silver hair is better. It's exotic and c-c-cute! Charlotte: But hair needs to be soft and well bodied as well. It has to appeal to all senses to be perfect. Suddenly the five stop as they watch a young man being followed by Ichika. Normally they'd join ther beloved to spend time with him but they were preoccupied by the otjer boy. Or more like preoccupied with his hair which fell just a little past his shoulders and covered an eye in straight strands. The head of hair seemed alive in itself as it glistened under the sunlight, bouncing to the rhythm of the young man's steps. As he passed the girls, they caught a whiff of what could only be described as fresh dew grass and rain with a bit of wildflowers. They gawked. Ichika: I'm telling you now, she won't give back your mousse Gentarou: Like I care! My pompadour is a sign of my youth! I will protect at at all costs! Rin: Am I the only one who feels like killing him? Houki, Cecilia, Charlotte & Laura: partial summons not really Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-06-14 at 19:24.

2012-06-14, 10:27	Link #32303
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@zero: canned or bottle? practicing ideas appreciate any feedback @eras: at the girls in the dorm

2012-06-14, 10:58	Link #32307
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Uh...Rin has brown hair while Houki has black. Is she implying she thinks Houki's prettier? __________________

2012-06-14, 11:02	Link #32308
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I'm using the novel's descriptions. Houki's hair is black but Rin's was especially mentioned during intro so I assumed it was strikingly black hair

2012-06-14, 11:03	Link #32309
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	spurt coke __________________

2012-06-14, 11:04	Link #32310
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Uh....novel art has her as brown. Hell, my sig has her as brown:/ __________________

2012-06-14, 11:07	Link #32311
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	author artist dissonance I guess. That or executive meddling to make Rin and Houki more distinguishable from each other.

2012-06-14, 11:12	Link #32312
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, anime made Houki reddish brown and Rin dark brown, so yes it's pure dissonance (because Ichika's hair is black). I'm going to use anime coloration for TLR Stratos. __________________

2012-06-14, 11:18	Link #32313
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Oh yeah, Gentarou isn't cool or cute bishonen type. He's more oddball yankee type that is really friendly. So I don't think the girls would be instantly fawning over him. Least not until they get used to seeing someone in a gakuran and pompadour :\|

2012-06-14, 11:24	Link #32314
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	....well, his face is actually good, his hair MIGHT be a turn off but remember, Rule 34 I.S.A. version, if it's a guy, someone, somewhere in the academy will dig him. __________________

2012-06-14, 11:35	Link #32315
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	at the very least I'd think he'd have a lot less pursuers than Ichika. Maybe I should mle a scene where Ichika complains that he's the only one who has to run away from teenaged girl stampedes which always seem to selectively unaffect Gentarou. Not that the kamen rider is complaining at this lifesaving phenomenon but he starts wondering why he's so unpopular with the girls. Well I'ma sleep for now. Toodles.

2012-06-14, 12:10	Link #32316
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Stuck on who to put in the mysterious council of mysteriousness:/ So far I have Rafael Dunoa, Te Professor, and the Sarashiki leader. __________________

2012-06-14, 17:52	Link #32317
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	One more week... One more week, and I am finally free from school. *Freedom is within sight!* And then I can finally devote time to getting the rewrite of Heart of the Machine to Season 2: Equilibrium within 2 months! And the original ain't even there yet!

2012-06-14, 18:17	Link #32318
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Finally freed of the torture that is school eh? Congratulations Sheer amount of character made me confused about the duel arrangement __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2012-06-14 at 18:28.

2012-06-14, 20:28	Link #32319
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Why the hell I keep thinking of I.S. cape in spite of the sheer impracticalities? Though it's not those blowy heroic cape, more like foldable armor plating (Like Master Gundam, Deathscythe, or Dynames) __________________

2012-06-14, 20:38	Link #32320
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Spoiler for what the hell?: Chifuyu: Stupid Ichika opens a can of beer stupid girls she takes a deep drink then crushes it when it's empty stupid me. someone sits down beside her Gentarou: so what's up? Chifuyu: Gentarou! Why are you here? Gentarou: scratches his head I figured the girls wanted some quality time with Ichika so I gave them a little room. Chifuyu: skeptically opens another beer You're much too dense for that. Gentarou: Well yeah, they actually texted me. pulled out his phone with a message from each girl Chifuyu: sigh I'll need to talk to those girls again soon. Gentarou: So, what's eating you? Chifuyu: Hm? Nothing really. Gentarou: That's not what your expression was saying awhile ago. You were definitely grumbling about something. Chifuyu: I wasn't. Gentarou: Keeping stuff like that inside will make you look older than you are. Chifuyu: Do you want me to beat you up again? Gentarou: laugh That's more like it. An angry Chifu-chan looks better than that grumpy one. Chifuyu: Me? Grumpy? Gentarou: Uh yeah... you kind of looked like Miu-sempai from that one time during prom. Like you didn't get the partner you wanted to dance with you know? Chifuyu: Partner huh... Maybe. takes a drag from her beer Gentarou: So you were all grumpy cause of a guy? Chifuyu: spit take wh-what are you talking about? Gentarou: I heard you say maybe at the end Chifuyu: I did not curse you and your sharp ears Gentarou: Whoever he is, he must be a pretty lucky guy. Chifuyu: Hm... That's true. Gentarou: So who is he? Chifuyu: wha? Gentarou: who is he? Chifuyu: No one you know a little too quickly Gentarou: So someone I know? misheard Chifuyu: I said you don't know him. tries to smack Gentarou Gentarou: So I definitely know him. Dan? dodges a punch from Chifuyu that bartender guy? dodges another punch yeah, too old... how about Ichika? Chifuyu: stops mid-punch as her face turns tomato red and steams up A-a-aah... Gentarou: stares seriously? I uh... was joking you know. no response Well... this is awkward. Chifuyu: Is it strange? Do you find me strange? Gentarou: Hm? Chifuyu: I guess it would only be natural. All our lives, Ichika had been the only one on my mind. As the older sister, I knew that I had to take responsibility for raising him. I wanted him to grow up happy like any other kid. I didn't want him to go through what I had to. Working only for his sake with his happiness in mind I spent a lot of time away from home. When I came back and took a good look at him, I realized too late that the boy I looked after wasn't there anymore. In his place was a fine young man that I barely recognized. Before I could stop myself, I fell in love with him. Gentarou: thinking hard Well... I don't really approve of it. Chifuyu: sags I thought as much. Gentarou: But I'll support you. Chifuyu: I know... Wait what? Gentarou: I don't really understand your feelings. I don't really understand why you can't date your own brother either. But I do understand that you like him for real and that he makes you happy. So I'll support you. Chifuyu: But... I'm in love with my own brother... Gentarou: Doesn't really matter. If you want it with all your heart. Then go for it full force! Chifuyu: You're really an idiot you know. Most people would tell me that I'm weird and tell me that I should change. Gentarou: It's fine if I'm an idiot. You're my bud and I like you just the way you are. If anyone comes to make fun of what's important to you, call me and I'll beat the crap right out of them. Chifuyu: looks down at her beer Thanks... put beer down and stares up at the night sky My 2nd shift for Charlotte's Rafael has that. I'ma call it the Sefer