Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character

[sunchips18]

Originally Posted by theBrotherGrimm

Hey all! Its been a while since I posted a new character (been busy with school). Anyway here he is

Name: Daiichii Yugito (Daiichii means "First Place")
Nickname: the "Tamer of the Jinchuuriki"
Gender: Male
Age: 38
Date of Birth: August 6
Hair Color: Dark Blonde
Eye Color: Brown
Blood Type: B
Village of Birth: the Hidden Cloud
Village currently living in: unknown
Ninja Rank: S-rank criminal
Elemental Affinity: Lightning, Water
Ninjutsu: 8/10
Genjutsu: 6/10
Taijutsu: 10/10
Summoning Contract: Electric Eel
Strengths: Close range combat, Large amount of chakra, and Extensive knowledge of jutsus
Weaknesses: Genjutsu, Chakra control, and himself (will explain later)
Weapons of Choice: Kunai, Exploding tags, and the Triton of Shimanagashi (will explain later)
Academy Grad Age: 11
Chuunin Exam Age: 13
Jounin Age: 19
ANBU: 27
Raikage nomination: 35
Missions Completed
D-Rank: 83
C-Rank: 146
B-Rank: 523
A-Rank: 415
S-Rank: 8
Kekkai genkai: none

Spoiler:

Daiichii Yugito was an elite, honorable ninja of the Village Hidden in the Clouds. Born during a thunderstorm, Daiichii was born to the Yugito clan along with his twin sister Nii. He was given the name Daiichii which meant "First Place" and his sister was named Nii meaning "Second Place". The names of the twins stuck with them during their childhood. In everything that he did, Daiichii would always be at the top with Nii always in a close second. Even in the area of the shinobi, Daichii would outshine his sister. This sibling rilvary began to take its toll on Nii as her brother became a Chuunin before her and received more recognition from their parents. At that point Nii wished only for enough strength to beat her brother.
One day while wandering in the valleys, Nii came across an unusual sight, a cat with two tails. The cat walked to Nii, stopped right in from of her, and stared into her eyes. She at once felt another presence in her mind and new it was that of a demon; it was coming from the cat in front of her. The demon knew of Nii’s desire to beat her brother and promised to give her all the power in the world with the condition that she become its new host (the cat was old and about to die). She accepted the offer immediately and in a burst of purple chakra the 2-tailed demon entered Nii.
Days passed and everyone in the village noticed a sudden change in Nii. She could now run fast, was stronger, and had more stamina than before. One night, Nii ran out of the village to the mountains outside of it. She had recently been struggling with the demon inside her and now she could no longer suppress it. When she felt alone, a flame of purple chakra enveloped her and exploded destroying the surrounding mountains. Everyone in the village heard the explosion and the Raikage sent out several squads to find the source of it. The ninja returned an hour later holding an unconscious Nii. Medical specialists examined the body of the girl and discovered the demon while testing her brain activity. The Raikage summoned the council of elders to discuss the current events. The council advised the Raikage to allow the Jinchuuriki to remain in Nii’s body as it could be used as a possible weapon in a future war. The Riakage agreed, and the demon remained in Nii.
Weeks passed, Nii suffered physically and mentally as the Jinchuuriki slowly began to take over her body. Daiichii noticed his sister’s pain and was feeled with sorrow for his sister. If only he had known of his sister’s desire to be noticed for her successes he would have no doubtedly allowed her to beat him. Days passed and Nii’s condition worsened, Daiichii had to act quickly or the village and his sister would be destroyed. He had heard of a legend from his grandfather about a legendary weapon called the Triton of Shimanagashi that had the power to surpress the chakra of the Jinchuuriki. According to the tale, when the tailed beast were unleashed from their prison and began causing chaos in the world, the gods created the triton to suppress the power of the demons by stealing their chakra. For such a powerful weapon, there would need to be a powerful shinobi to wield it. The gods placed the triton on top of a mountain and surrounded that mountain with a continuous lightning storm to keep those unworthy from obtaining the weapon. Shinobi from all over the world came to mountain but all were killed in their attempts to achieve the triton; because of this the existence of the triton was degraded from fact to myth in order to keep more ninja from dying. Daiichii journeyed to the mountain, climbed it, and obtained the triton! The village was stunned at the young shinobi and his success (some even thought he was a god). Daichii used the triton and suppressed the chakra of the two-tailed beast.

I’ll write more about this later. LOL it’s a lot of info. Hope you enjoyed. Please rate thank you!

awsome,,,,,

[Narutojutsumaker]

I've got some new jutsus, Oikoshi uses them.

Name:Iki Te
Type:Not really one...
Rank:B-Rank
Effect:By rolling out the huge scroll on his back, if any ninjutsu is used on him, a hand of chakra comes out at no expense of chakra to him and absorbs some of the attack. It's good if you're fighting against a far-range person.

Name: Doro taihou
Type:Earth
Rank:B-Rank
Effect:Creates a large cannon-like structure made of dried mud and fires heavy, cannonball-sized balls of mud. They are powerful, but slow.

Name: Dorokawa
Type:Earth
Rank:C to B, sometimes A-rank
Effect:Pushes chakra out of many pores, makes mud, and turns into a large shell to protect him.

Name: Doro hitoya
Type:Earth
Rank:B-rank
Effect:Makes an orb of hard, dried mud from the palm of the hand around the target.

Name:Kikantou
Type:Mirror kekkei-genkai
Rank:A-Rank
Effect:Makes a mirror shard that is very sharp and can deflect any jutsu to a certain degree. The shard is small, but can deflect larger things than it.

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by Narutojutsumaker

What about mine? Is it good? No one ever uses the earth affinity, I've noticed.

I object to this statement. I have four or five characters that use earth element techniques. I just posted them a LONG while back. Want to see them?

[The_Dark_One]

Hello all whom might know me briefly or not at all.
Looking back through the pages, some very nice stuff. Like the crow-techniques, I must admit even if it does indeed reak of itachi-ness.

Perhaps I'll make a new OC...
Anyway, whens the next contest? I feel like competing in it now. and maybe this time I'll add "pretty pictures" to give me a chance, hm?

[Narutojutsumaker]

Originally Posted by Spectacular_Insanity

I object to this statement. I have four or five characters that use earth element techniques. I just posted them a LONG while back. Want to see them?

Oh, whoops. Well, there's a TON of pages in here, and I'm too lazy to read them all.

But, do you think my character is good?

[theBrotherGrimm]

Originally Posted by Keikan

This character was for the September comp. so I thought I would post it here now.

General:
Name: Sen Akihiro (Surname, First Name)
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 186cm
Weight: 85kg
Village: Missing-nin (Iwagakure)
Clan: -
Surviving Clan/Family Members: -

Kekkei Genkai: -
Kekkei Genkai ability: N/A

Appearance:
Hair: Short black hair. At the back it is tied into a small ponytail.
Eyes: His eye’s are affected by a genetic mutation, they have no pupils and are blood red (think Hyuuga cross Kyuubi).
Clothes: Wears black, orange or red battle kimonos, usually with blood splatter on them (not a pattern, real blood). Wears a pair of dark sunglasses over his eyes.

Personality:
Ahikiro is serious and has some serious anger issues due to his childhood. Doesn’t talk much, prefers to slice and dice.

Ninja Info:
Strengths: Sword play, ninjutsu, his eyes (can see like it is day at night and can see through genjutsu)
Weaknesses: Taijutsu (useless without his swords), his eyes (can’t see at daylight or in bright light)
Affinity: Metal (Kinton) and Heat (Kaonton)
Summoning Pact: -
Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, senbon, demon-windmill shuriken, long sword (to scale) and short knife (to scale).
Ninja Rank: Missing-nin (was Jounin)
Team: -
Missions Completed Successfully:
D-Rank: 231
C-Rank: 103
B-Rank: 25
A-Rank: 7
S-Rank: 2

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kaonton: Kinzoku Kaon no jutsu (Heat Release: Metal Heating jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Heats metal almost to melting point in a second with a touch.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Using too much chakra can melt the metal.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kaonton: Kaon Settou no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Stealing jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Takes the heat from objects around Akihiro.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Hurts friends.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Hagane Suji no jutsu (Metal Release: Steel Muscle jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Hardens and strengths muscles, makes them really hard to cut.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Too much chakra and they can turn to steel permanently.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Katana Henshu no jutsu (Metal Release: Sword Mutation jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Changes the shape, size and style of a any blade that Akihiro is touching at his will.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Uses lots of chakra otherwise the blade turns back to normal.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kaonton: Kaon Tama no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Ball jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Compresses lots of heat into a ball that Akihiro can thrust or throw at enemies.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Could burn Akihiro.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Kinzoku Sesshoku no jutsu (Metal Release: Metal Touch jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: A-Rank
Effect: Turns anything or anyone to metal as long as Akihiro is touching it.
Advantages/Disadvantages: With not enough chakra could only partially turn an object to metal.
Hand Seals:

As well as the usual jutsu.

Brief Life Story:
Usual story of someone with a genetic deformity; parents abandoned him, picked on, dismissed as worthless, forced his way back, showed them all. You know the usual.

Nice Character!!! Do you know who won the contest in September? By the way, Happy Birthday Jiraiya! We miss you pervy sage!

[Mitsu]

I think DanTheMan did, but Zaku hasn't said it yet. He hasn't even put in all the votes :/

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by Mitsu

I think DanTheMan did, but Zaku hasn't said it yet. He hasn't even put in all the votes :/

Zaku doesn't seem to be around at the moment. I haven't seen him around much lately, come to think of it. It's probably time to start the next contest already.

[Mitsu]

Originally Posted by Spectacular_Insanity

Zaku doesn't seem to be around at the moment. I haven't seen him around much lately, come to think of it. It's probably time to start the next contest already.

Yeah I think is time. Maybe we will have to skip this months contest. D: Oh, well he does have a life off the computer anyway.
I'm haveing a hard time finishing my characters mainly just their pasts though... *sigh*

[Mitsu]

Sorry for the double post but, I have a new character that was related to Akazi-san. I have a question, do you think music helps you create characters? I haven't tried using music before but people says it works.


Name: Awai Itetsu
Age/Date of birth: 27/ July 7th
Gender: Female
Blood type: A
Village: tasogare
Personality: She was happy, cool, very caring and of course energetic. She was also very artistically and musically inclined. Awai was also very funny and would cheer up her teammates if they loose hope, she also encouraged to the sick and injured that they would turn out fine.
Favorite food: pockey
Least favorite food: Raw fish
Favorite Song: Her own
Least favorite song: Country music
Favorite color: Black
Least favorite color: Pink, blue
Strengths: Water, speed, ninjutsu
Weaknesses: Genjutsu, Fire, Language
Little bit about her:
She was married to Akazi Kitaru, the leader of the Kuroame group, and gave birth to Mitsu Kitaru two years later after marriage. She lived and died happily in her sleep, because Akazi didn’t have the guts or cruelty to kill her while she was awake. He cared to much for her. She was smothered to death.
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Ninja Info

Rank: Chunin
Missions: 57
Kills: 7
Ninjutsu: 5/5
Genjutsu: 2/5
Taijutsu: 4/5
Not much is known about her ninja history


-
Looks:
Weight: 67
Height: 5’4”
Hair: Long silky green/blue hair
Face: Awai’s face is soft looking, which is what she is with her face taking care of the features of a calm soft nice girl.
Eyes: Awai’s eyes are about the same color as her hair but a darker green like emerald green.
Neck: She wore a choker necklace that had a purple jewel hanging from it that was made by Akazi.
Upper body: She wears a green and purple mini dress that’s normal cut.
Lower body: She wore black long skinny pants with pink stripes
Feet: raggedy tennis shoes that were blue.
Her past is unknown. Why? Because I’m to lazy to make one, or draw a picture.

[sunchips18]

Originally Posted by theBrotherGrimm

Nice Character!!! Do you know who won the contest in September? By the way, Happy Birthday Jiraiya! We miss you pervy sage!

did he die in the manga? was it the fight with pein? or is it an user?

[faiz blaster]

This is a little something that I had planned to use in a fanfic. The project is now long dropped due conflict with cannon, but since the idea behind this just too awesome to just throw away, I decided to post it here.

Spoiler for Seven Nights:

Name: Nanatsu no Yoru (lit. in seven nights)
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Users: Saininki clan (deceased)
Description: Ages ago, the Shinobi lands were tormented by the constant presence of supernatural creatures. At that time, many ninja clans were left in charge of dealing with the problem and exterminating the demons. But the capacities of supernatural creatures that are like extensions of nature are inherently above that of humans that can only manipulate nature to an extent, so alternative solutions other than the ordinary forms of combat needed to be sought.

Most of the clans performed their tasks by developing Kinjustu that allowed them to match the powers of the demons, while a few opted for taming the demons and using their powers against them. But only one of those clans, the Saininki, was against both paths for it either did not created efficient combatants in sufficient numbers (for the case of the Kinjutsu) or it was ideologically incompatible with what they were trying to do (the "taming" case). Instead the Saininki chose to breed physically outstanding individuals and train them in ordinary Jutsu and assassination-techniques that anyone could master until a level in which they posed a threat to the demons. Although an apparently insane plan, generations after their first attempts, the constant pursue of the clan was rewarded with the manifestation of a Kekkei Genkai.

Now, while the basic concept of a Kekkei Genkai is "a technique or ability inherent of a lineage", Nanatsu no Yoru is nothing of the sort. In fact, it only creates a tendency in the members of the Saininki to be more physically fit than your average ninja and gives easier to them to learn Justu and other bodily skills. The true value of this Kekkei Genkai lies in its ability of "conveyance of expertise". With it, a child of the Saininki clan receives the proficiency that its parents had with any Jutsu in the form of instinctive knowledge. Now while that does not grant instant mastery of said Jutsu, it greatly facilitates and enhances its learning processes. In short a member of the Saininki can grasp any Jutsu that one of his ancestors had already mastered in half of the normal time while showing results two times better. The name comes from the fact that, with the help of it, even advanced skills such as elemental conversion can be mastered in just seven nights of training.

However, for the latter generations of Saininki, Nanatsu no Yoru proved itself to be both a blessing and a curse, for the amount accumulated knowledge became so great that it started to interfere with the mentality of the members of the clan. In some, it caused the individual to have violent tendencies that would cause him to fight and use their inherent skills at anytime possible. In the worst cases, the a instinctive knowledge would cause the manifestation a second personality who would be invariably bloodthirsty and destructive. That second personality was commonly referred in the family as Satsujinki (another reading of the kanji that composes the clan's name, meaning "demoniac killer").

Currently, all known members of the Saininki clan are deceased, so there are no users of this Kekkei Genkai.

If you want, feel free to use this in any of your works. I left some details vague on propose exactly for the sake of that.

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by faiz blaster

This is a little something that I had planned to use in a fanfic. The project is now long dropped due conflict with cannon, but since the idea behind this just too awesome to just throw away, I decided to post it here.

Spoiler for Seven Nights:

Name: Nanatsu no Yoru (lit. in seven nights)
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Users: Saininki clan (deceased)
Description: Ages ago, the Shinobi lands were tormented by the constant presence of supernatural creatures. At that time, many ninja clans were left in charge of dealing with the problem and exterminating the demons. But the capacities of supernatural creatures that are like extensions of nature are inherently above that of humans that can only manipulate nature to an extent, so alternative solutions other than the ordinary forms of combat needed to be sought.

Most of the clans performed their tasks by developing Kinjustu that allowed them to match the powers of the demons, while a few opted for taming the demons and using their powers against them. But only one of those clans, the Saininki, was against both paths for it either did not created efficient combatants in sufficient numbers (for the case of the Kinjutsu) or it was ideologically incompatible with what they were trying to do (the "taming" case). Instead the Saininki chose to breed physically outstanding individuals and train them in ordinary Jutsu and assassination-techniques that anyone could master until a level in which they posed a threat to the demons. Although an apparently insane plan, generations after their first attempts, the constant pursue of the clan was rewarded with the manifestation of a Kekkei Genkai.

Now, while the basic concept of a Kekkei Genkai is "a technique or ability inherent of a lineage", Nanatsu no Yoru is nothing of the sort. In fact, it only creates a tendency in the members of the Saininki to be more physically fit than your average ninja and gives easier to them to learn Justu and other bodily skills. The true value of this Kekkei Genkai lies in its ability of "conveyance of expertise". With it, a child of the Saininki clan receives the proficiency that its parents had with any Jutsu in the form of instinctive knowledge. Now while that does not grant instant mastery of said Jutsu, it greatly facilitates and enhances its learning processes. In short a member of the Saininki can grasp any Jutsu that one of his ancestors had already mastered in half of the normal time while showing results two times better. The name comes from the fact that, with the help of it, even advanced skills such as elemental conversion can be mastered in just seven nights of training.

However, for the latter generations of Saininki, Nanatsu no Yoru proved itself to be both a blessing and a curse, for the amount accumulated knowledge became so great that it started to interfere with the mentality of the members of the clan. In some, it caused the individual to have violent tendencies that would cause him to fight and use their inherent skills at anytime possible. In the worst cases, the a instinctive knowledge would cause the manifestation a second personality who would be invariably bloodthirsty and destructive. That second personality was commonly referred in the family as Satsujinki (another reading of the kanji that composes the clan's name, meaning "demoniac killer").

Currently, all known members of the Saininki clan are deceased, so there are no users of this Kekkei Genkai.

If you want, feel free to use this in any of your works. I left some details vague on propose exactly for the sake of that.

Indeed, one of the most unique Kekkei Genkai I've seen posted on the thread. The concept is interesting, and the amount of detail you put into it is likewise impressive. The idea that a Kekkei Genkai could arise over time through selective breeding was pretty cool, though its side effects were unfortunate for the members. I think it made sense that up until this point there are no *known* members left. It leaves room for a survivor or two.

Anyway, great job. I believe there's a Naruto fanfic thread if you want to post there. It might take a bit of digging in the forum because no one has posted there in months.

[The_Dark_One]

No Zaku, hm?
Ah well, I'll set my imagination running anyway, contest or not.

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Name: Camlin Zeido
(The name "Camlin" is a celtic word meaning "Crooked line")
Gender: Male
Age: 16

Appearance:
Long blonde hair which is wildly messy, making it look like some kind of crude mane, like such of a lion. He has strange piercing eyes, both of which are oddly enough bright orange. He is of average height and build, and tends to walk, talk, and stand casually 24 / 7.
He wears a pair of large, blue-tinted goggles at all times, but prefers to rest them on his forehead unless he actually has to use them, such as when in a desert. His clothes are an odd mix; a traditional, large white shirt that is clean, and tidy- but is a tad to big for him and the sleeves far surpass his hands, hiding them. Combined with scruffy, modern jeans which have oil stains and such in them. He also wears a black belt with a simplistic and large iron buckle, and wears matching pairs of ornate leather gloves and boots.

Home:
None - (Traveler / Merchant / Mercenary)

Personality:
Camlin is fickle. He loves life, making friends, and playing about in general, but at the same time is attracted to fighting, and to war itself. He is intrested and seduced by the idea of killing- whether justly or not- the very concept of murdering innocents not really bothering him. But, he does not act on such thoughts- and tends to be more neutral; not committing crimes, but neither being a good citzen, nor an honorable shinobi.

Motto:
"Respect and honor doesn't pay the bills, does it?"

Now- the prime factor, the clan Camlin belongs to.
The Zeido Clan:

Spoiler for Clan Info:

Background / History:
This large family spans into the thousands, and far surpasses the numbers or any other network, arguing to be the biggest clan in all the land, and rightly so. However, this clans main strength- the power in their numbers- is also their greatest flaw. It means that no village can fully house them or accomidate them- and the Zedio clan refuses to be seperated or to be split apart. So, they travel- making the entire clan a traveling village, going from land to land and from town to town, to trade and aqquire resources, deal and negotiate, train their young at the schools and have them compete in exams when need be, and stuff of such ilk.

The clan has because of this become famous for the exotic goods they aqquire on their constant journies, and destinations. They have become accustumed to their nickname of "The Gypsy clan", as it really does fit the bill.
Usually when they set up camp at larger villages and cities, they tend to have great festivals and parties, this meaning the clan is pretty much constantly partying and merrymaking except when travelling to the next festival and trade site.

But, away from this lighter, happier side of things is the Clans best, and most secret trade. This darker trade is the one of bodyguarding, or assasination.
Towns, clans, families - anyone, can come to the Zeido clan with a task they need sorted, and so long as they can pay the Gypsy clan will do the work no questions asked.
Older members are usually set the killing tasks, whilst the younger are mostly set the guarding ones. As well as this, the clan has slowly bred selected members to obtain the best candidates for certain tasks. For example, shinobi's who are best at the art of stealth have been selected to create the best assasins, and down the line it appears this technique and bloodline order has appeared to of worked. Camlin himself has quickly become a renowned Bodyguard throughout many lands, after protecting poultry farmers to princesses from various enemies without question nor fault- and a main factor of this is of course his heritage, and the fact hes descended from the best defenders of the Zeido clan.

Unique Ability / Kekke Genkai:
(The ritual):
This bloodline limit is one of the oddest of them all. The babe starts with no gift- no ability, and in order to initiate it the clan performs an ancient ritual.
The newborn child - of at most 5 days (any more and the chance of inheriting the kekke genkai is impossible), is placed by itself in a large area.
This spaces ground is littered with runes and ancient writings passed down in the clan, and when or if the baby the looks at these writings the technique initiates. In a circle around the baby, various weapons, of all shapes and sizes are stuck into the ground forcefully. Swords, Pikes, Axes - you name or think it, and its there. All these weapons are crafted with the upmost care, and are usually of the highest quality. Some weapons are passed down from ancestors, and are legendary within the clan.
This is where destiny kicks in, persay. The baby will be willed toward one of these weapons in particular, crawling toward it whilst its eyes glow a ghostly white. Once it reaches its chosen weapon, the steel or metal in it also glows this sickly shade of white, to show all around that this tool is the one that is bound to the babe.

(The effect):
Now the weapon has been selected, it is bound to the child- permenently. The child will grow up with that weapon, never using any other, not even throwing knives or shuriken, otherwise the binding and bloodline trait is broken forever.
The child however will show extreme power with that weapon- learning how to use it thrice as fast as any grown shinobi could. The weapon becomes another limb for the child, and extension of their soul as it were. Usually the weapon is named, and if the child has rich parentage or high standings, the weapon is crowned with jewels and made to look extrodinary. However, its is still deadly.

Depending on the class of the weapon, the child may use certain kinds of jutsu, only taught within the clan and NEVER taught to outsiders.
Also, the childs nature plays a vital role in how they are taught and what skills they use. They're weapon usually matches that anture in some way, and compliments it. (For example, and thin and light katana would probably be destined to be bound to a wind-natured child, whilst a heavy mace would be more prone to be bound to an Earth-natured one.)

Summary:
To explain it simply, after a ritual is completed after the childs birth, they are spiritually bound to a weapon. They learn amazingly quickly with this destined weapon, becoming profficently good with it unnaturally fast. They can surpass any other shinobi in skill if they use the same tool, and can use custom-made and unique jutsu with it, although their choice is limited.
The drawback is that if they ever use any other kind of weapon, such as a differant sword, or even kunai & Shuriken, the binding between them and their weapon is broken, and all their bloodline inherited skill and proficiency is lost, and alot of, if not all of they're jutsu cannot be used any more.

Weapon: Two handed Greatsword, named "Rageburner"
Camlin was found bound to a large greatsword after the ritual, surpring many as the larger weapon was not expected to be partnered with such a relatively small boy. Even at 16, the blade is as large as his and then some. However, Camlin ignores this and still finds himself weilding the blade with astounding ability, cleaving through hordes of enemies like mere butter within seconds.

Camlin has decorated the blade by burning the hilt black, and encrusting it with precious rubies. the end has been tampered with, so that it may be easier to cut through groups of enmies. Camlin holds and rests it on his shoulder, usually using his free hand for a thumbs up or down sign, and puts it in his jean pocket casually. This posture is ussually misinterpreted as some sort of taunt.

Spoiler for Sword pic:

Natural affinity : Fire
Jutsu:

Name: "Fire style : Molten Blade"
Effect: Camlin lets his fiery chakra flow into Rageburner, causing the blade to become red hot, and be able to burn as well as cut. An added bonus is that it glows, making it double as a tempoary torch as such.
Drawback: Doesnt drain alot of chakra, but nevertheless requires constant input.

Name: "Fire style : Wildfire Blade"
Effect: Rageburner's main blade bursts into a large flame, which seems to mimic the propotions and looks of the blade, but with the exception of being twice as large. This technique allows Camlin to have a larger range in his swing, and casuing the blades strikes to be even more dealy and powerful. Wildfire is stronger than Nolten Blade by far, and requires the latter to be active before it can be activated.
Drawbacks: The blade becomes slightly heavier and slower, and needs alot more chakra than molten blade.

Name: "Zeido Technique : Fire Style, Inferno Massacre"
Effect: Camlin can summon up to two fiery, floating swords to his aid, which appear to look exactly like rageburner, and can inflict the same amount of damage each. they copy the original blades movements, and strikes the same targets it strikes in the same way unless Camlin wills them to attack something else.
Drawbacks: The swords are easily destroyed by water techniques, and arent very smart. Also, they require a substantial amount of chakra each to create- limitting Camlin currently to only two active at once.

Name: "Zeido Technique : Fire style, Skyfire Blade"
Effect: Powerful jets of flame erupt from Rageburner, turning it into a very strange, makeshift rocket. After alot of practice with this technique, Camlin has learnt to "surf" the air on his blade, soaring through the air on his blade using this intresting travel-technique. The speed of this technique is almost twice as fast as the average ninja, and being able to soar above any obstacle is a very prudent bonus.
Drawback: Drains alot of chakra, very quickly. Camlin can only travel so far before his entire chakra supply is depeleted in mere minutes.

Name: "Ultimate Zeido Fire Technique: Titans Uproar"
Effect : Purging Rageburner into the earth, Camlin sends a powerful force down through the earth throuh the blade. After around a minute or so, the molten mantle of the earth itself cries in upheaval as camlin upsets the very balance by shoving near-all his fire chakra into it. Because of this, a gigantic surge of lava explodes upwards, bursting through the crust and destroying the battlefield and landscape. This technique has a 100% chance of killing any mortal enemy and decimating any village or structure under a lake of molten lava, which is so large in radius it is in fact unescapble even if the opponent did try to run when Camlin activted it. However, this also means Camlin himself cannot escape, meaning this technique is one hundred percent suicidal, and to only be used as a last resort.

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there you go.
I may do more Zeido clan members of differant weapon / nautres as examples later on, depending on how you all react to this one.
I'll be watching.
-Dark

[sunchips18]

Originally Posted by The_Dark_One

No Zaku, hm?
Ah well, I'll set my imagination running anyway, contest or not.

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Name: Camlin Zeido
(The name "Camlin" is a celtic word meaning "Crooked line")
Gender: Male
Age: 16

Appearance:
Long blonde hair which is wildly messy, making it look like some kind of crude mane, like such of a lion. He has strange piercing eyes, both of which are oddly enough bright orange. He is of average height and build, and tends to walk, talk, and stand casually 24 / 7.
He wears a pair of large, blue-tinted goggles at all times, but prefers to rest them on his forehead unless he actually has to use them, such as when in a desert. His clothes are an odd mix; a traditional, large white shirt that is clean, and tidy- but is a tad to big for him and the sleeves far surpass his hands, hiding them. Combined with scruffy, modern jeans which have oil stains and such in them. He also wears a black belt with a simplistic and large iron buckle, and wears matching pairs of ornate leather gloves and boots.

Home:
None - (Traveler / Merchant / Mercenary)

Personality:
Camlin is fickle. He loves life, making friends, and playing about in general, but at the same time is attracted to fighting, and to war itself. He is intrested and seduced by the idea of killing- whether justly or not- the very concept of murdering innocents not really bothering him. But, he does not act on such thoughts- and tends to be more neutral; not committing crimes, but neither being a good citzen, nor an honorable shinobi.

Motto:
"Respect and honor doesn't pay the bills, does it?"

Now- the prime factor, the clan Camlin belongs to.
The Zeido Clan:

Spoiler for Clan Info:

Background / History:
This large family spans into the thousands, and far surpasses the numbers or any other network, arguing to be the biggest clan in all the land, and rightly so. However, this clans main strength- the power in their numbers- is also their greatest flaw. It means that no village can fully house them or accomidate them- and the Zedio clan refuses to be seperated or to be split apart. So, they travel- making the entire clan a traveling village, going from land to land and from town to town, to trade and aqquire resources, deal and negotiate, train their young at the schools and have them compete in exams when need be, and stuff of such ilk.

The clan has because of this become famous for the exotic goods they aqquire on their constant journies, and destinations. They have become accustumed to their nickname of "The Gypsy clan", as it really does fit the bill.
Usually when they set up camp at larger villages and cities, they tend to have great festivals and parties, this meaning the clan is pretty much constantly partying and merrymaking except when travelling to the next festival and trade site.

But, away from this lighter, happier side of things is the Clans best, and most secret trade. This darker trade is the one of bodyguarding, or assasination.
Towns, clans, families - anyone, can come to the Zeido clan with a task they need sorted, and so long as they can pay the Gypsy clan will do the work no questions asked.
Older members are usually set the killing tasks, whilst the younger are mostly set the guarding ones. As well as this, the clan has slowly bred selected members to obtain the best candidates for certain tasks. For example, shinobi's who are best at the art of stealth have been selected to create the best assasins, and down the line it appears this technique and bloodline order has appeared to of worked. Camlin himself has quickly become a renowned Bodyguard throughout many lands, after protecting poultry farmers to princesses from various enemies without question nor fault- and a main factor of this is of course his heritage, and the fact hes descended from the best defenders of the Zeido clan.

Unique Ability / Kekke Genkai:
(The ritual):
This bloodline limit is one of the oddest of them all. The babe starts with no gift- no ability, and in order to initiate it the clan performs an ancient ritual.
The newborn child - of at most 5 days (any more and the chance of inheriting the kekke genkai is impossible), is placed by itself in a large area.
This spaces ground is littered with runes and ancient writings passed down in the clan, and when or if the baby the looks at these writings the technique initiates. In a circle around the baby, various weapons, of all shapes and sizes are stuck into the ground forcefully. Swords, Pikes, Axes - you name or think it, and its there. All these weapons are crafted with the upmost care, and are usually of the highest quality. Some weapons are passed down from ancestors, and are legendary within the clan.
This is where destiny kicks in, persay. The baby will be willed toward one of these weapons in particular, crawling toward it whilst its eyes glow a ghostly white. Once it reaches its chosen weapon, the steel or metal in it also glows this sickly shade of white, to show all around that this tool is the one that is bound to the babe.

(The effect):
Now the weapon has been selected, it is bound to the child- permenently. The child will grow up with that weapon, never using any other, not even throwing knives or shuriken, otherwise the binding and bloodline trait is broken forever.
The child however will show extreme power with that weapon- learning how to use it thrice as fast as any grown shinobi could. The weapon becomes another limb for the child, and extension of their soul as it were. Usually the weapon is named, and if the child has rich parentage or high standings, the weapon is crowned with jewels and made to look extrodinary. However, its is still deadly.

Depending on the class of the weapon, the child may use certain kinds of jutsu, only taught within the clan and NEVER taught to outsiders.
Also, the childs nature plays a vital role in how they are taught and what skills they use. They're weapon usually matches that anture in some way, and compliments it. (For example, and thin and light katana would probably be destined to be bound to a wind-natured child, whilst a heavy mace would be more prone to be bound to an Earth-natured one.)

Summary:
To explain it simply, after a ritual is completed after the childs birth, they are spiritually bound to a weapon. They learn amazingly quickly with this destined weapon, becoming profficently good with it unnaturally fast. They can surpass any other shinobi in skill if they use the same tool, and can use custom-made and unique jutsu with it, although their choice is limited.
The drawback is that if they ever use any other kind of weapon, such as a differant sword, or even kunai & Shuriken, the binding between them and their weapon is broken, and all their bloodline inherited skill and proficiency is lost, and alot of, if not all of they're jutsu cannot be used any more.

Weapon: Two handed Greatsword, named "Rageburner"
Camlin was found bound to a large greatsword after the ritual, surpring many as the larger weapon was not expected to be partnered with such a relatively small boy. Even at 16, the blade is as large as his and then some. However, Camlin ignores this and still finds himself weilding the blade with astounding ability, cleaving through hordes of enemies like mere butter within seconds.

Camlin has decorated the blade by burning the hilt black, and encrusting it with precious rubies. the end has been tampered with, so that it may be easier to cut through groups of enmies. Camlin holds and rests it on his shoulder, usually using his free hand for a thumbs up or down sign, and puts it in his jean pocket casually. This posture is ussually misinterpreted as some sort of taunt.

Spoiler for Sword pic:

Natural affinity : Fire
Jutsu:

Name: "Fire style : Molten Blade"
Effect: Camlin lets his fiery chakra flow into Rageburner, causing the blade to become red hot, and be able to burn as well as cut. An added bonus is that it glows, making it double as a tempoary torch as such.
Drawback: Doesnt drain alot of chakra, but nevertheless requires constant input.

Name: "Fire style : Wildfire Blade"
Effect: Rageburner's main blade bursts into a large flame, which seems to mimic the propotions and looks of the blade, but with the exception of being twice as large. This technique allows Camlin to have a larger range in his swing, and casuing the blades strikes to be even more dealy and powerful. Wildfire is stronger than Nolten Blade by far, and requires the latter to be active before it can be activated.
Drawbacks: The blade becomes slightly heavier and slower, and needs alot more chakra than molten blade.

Name: "Zeido Technique : Fire Style, Inferno Massacre"
Effect: Camlin can summon up to two fiery, floating swords to his aid, which appear to look exactly like rageburner, and can inflict the same amount of damage each. they copy the original blades movements, and strikes the same targets it strikes in the same way unless Camlin wills them to attack something else.
Drawbacks: The swords are easily destroyed by water techniques, and arent very smart. Also, they require a substantial amount of chakra each to create- limitting Camlin currently to only two active at once.

Name: "Zeido Technique : Fire style, Skyfire Blade"
Effect: Powerful jets of flame erupt from Rageburner, turning it into a very strange, makeshift rocket. After alot of practice with this technique, Camlin has learnt to "surf" the air on his blade, soaring through the air on his blade using this intresting travel-technique. The speed of this technique is almost twice as fast as the average ninja, and being able to soar above any obstacle is a very prudent bonus.
Drawback: Drains alot of chakra, very quickly. Camlin can only travel so far before his entire chakra supply is depeleted in mere minutes.

Name: "Ultimate Zeido Fire Technique: Titans Uproar"
Effect : Purging Rageburner into the earth, Camlin sends a powerful force down through the earth throuh the blade. After around a minute or so, the molten mantle of the earth itself cries in upheaval as camlin upsets the very balance by shoving near-all his fire chakra into it. Because of this, a gigantic surge of lava explodes upwards, bursting through the crust and destroying the battlefield and landscape. This technique has a 100% chance of killing any mortal enemy and decimating any village or structure under a lake of molten lava, which is so large in radius it is in fact unescapble even if the opponent did try to run when Camlin activted it. However, this also means Camlin himself cannot escape, meaning this technique is one hundred percent suicidal, and to only be used as a last resort.

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there you go.
I may do more Zeido clan members of differant weapon / nautres as examples later on, depending on how you all react to this one.
I'll be watching.
-Dark

so let me get this straight. Their hand is stuck to the weapon forever? How would he be able to surf if his hand is stuck to the sword?

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by sunchips18

so let me get this straight. Their hand is stuck to the weapon forever? How would he be able to surf if his hand is stuck to the sword?

Really carefully. It takes excellent strength and balance.

[The_Dark_One]

Originally Posted by sunchips18

so let me get this straight. Their hand is stuck to the weapon forever? How would he be able to surf if his hand is stuck to the sword?

nope. The connection between the Shinobi and his weapon is more spiritual than phsyical.
Basically, it means that if he ever used a differant weapon, the original would get "offended" and the pact would break, meaning that shinobi's kekke genkai is gone permently.

[wolfrider122]

oh i have one there is a boy named Ekino saranomu , He lived in the hidden leafe villiage until he was five, until one day this dude apeared at his home and killed his whole family, after that he wandered the villiage until he met a girl named taikanok she trained him until he was 14 but he didnt know that the girl he met was working with the dude who killed his family, so the girl one day attacked him, and almosed killed him, he unleashed a chakra force so powerful it blew up the girl, a month later he met ...... naruto ! the two were friends but naruto , and the boy didnt know that the chakra force the boy unleashed had caused a horrid creature to awaken in Ekinos body...... so thats my character oh and here is the jutsu he can do for now he can only do kage no bunshin(shadow clone)

[sunchips18]

Originally Posted by The_Dark_One

nope. The connection between the Shinobi and his weapon is more spiritual than phsyical.
Basically, it means that if he ever used a differant weapon, the original would get "offended" and the pact would break, meaning that shinobi's kekke genkai is gone permently.

oh. sorry i can be slow sometimes.

[sunchips18]

well i guess i'd do one. here it is.

name: Dara Hongaru
village: mist
village he is in currently: unkown
age: 14
appearence: he often dresses in a black shirt with a red cross on the back and jeans. He has blond wild hair and bue eyes.

Spoiler for back ground story:

One day a kid was born in the mist village hospital to the Dara clan. While he was born the doctors said he had no gift for ninjutsu and the chance of him getting his kekkei genkai were very low. However he proved them wrong one day when he was practicing at the ninja academy. Angered by one of the kids he unleashed his power and badly injured the kid. Unfortunatly because of this he was kicked out of the academy and was ignored buy all of his clan. Even his parents ignored him. Angered by the act of his village and clan he ran away at the age of 8. The night he ran way he killed his parents in their sleep. He is nice to most people unless they say anything about the mist village or the Dara clan. Unless he's known them for a while he'd send them to the hospital. He usually runs around the countrys with his best friend Udi Yamuto. He makes a living by acting as a sort of assasin for various people.

Spoiler for clan and kekkei genkai:

The dara clan was one of the first clans in the mist village. They were feared throughout the village for their uniqe kekke genkai and fearce fighting style. Their kekke genkai is called the Uniobtsu. They aren't born with it. they get it when they're around a week old. on that day they are sent to the forest. The baby stays still and is surrounded by animals with a scroll right next to it. Then once the baby is intriged by a animal it crawls towards it. the baby then touches the animal and absorbs it. the baby starts gloing red eyes. it crawls towards the scroll and puts it's hand on it. that is when the animal is sealed in the body. Once the user unleashes it's animal it gets a burst of chakra and the animals personality. with the kekei genkai they are able to use special justsus that match the animal. Hongaru did this when nobody knew it. he has the tiger.

Jutsus:

tiger style claw of death
Rank: S
desription: Forcing chakra into his palm Hongaru is able to make claws out of chakra. He dashes towards his oponent stabbing them with the claws. The jutsu causes the body to disinegrate
backfires: uses up a lot of chakra and if used to early it could leave him with little to no chakra
kiose no jutsu(summoning jutsu) Toba
Rank B-A
desription: Hongaru summons the giant tiger Toba. the tiger uses massive attacks that can destroy whole villages with one move if it wanted to.
backfires: the beast refuses to do stuf sometimes and has caused hongaru to fight off whole clans to pay off his dept of failing a mission
Katon: gokakyu no jutsu(firestyle fire ball justsu)
Rank: C
tiger style total tiger mimic
Rank: A
description: hongaru can turn into the almost full form of the tiger. His eyes turn red, he becomes very hairy, his teeth become very sharp, and his nails sharpen. He kills his oponent with no hesitation as he has only little personality of his own.
drawback: IF a comrrade is near he would kill them to. it destroys his skin and regenerates it at such a high speed that it shortens his life.

well that's all for now. I'll write more later p.s. sorry for double posting