(L) Seirei Gensouki: Spirit Chronicles

[Mirable]

^pretty sure the part when Rio told everyone about he against harem idea, ever since then Roberto1 rudely talk down this novel whatever chance he got.

[CNine]

Originally Posted by Roberto1

some friends have been sending me spoilers on facebook, in addition to the ones you people have written here, and the truth is that I don't like the direction the story is taking, not even a little, I'm just waiting for jagt's summary to see if what I've been told it's true, if it's true I'm going to drop this novel for sure, my patience is exhausted.
a friend of mine recommended me "overlord", that novel is so much better than this one , I don't understand how a novel as bad as this one has come so far, seigensu only good vol is number 21, the rest is garbage.

No one going to stop you anyway, and it's the other way around, this series starting to become really good from volume 19 onward, before that is just romcom.

[Roberto1]

Originally Posted by Y Ddraig Goch

What direction in particular do you see the story taking that’s giving you red flags? Genuinely curious.

1.-celia's massive power up, not only as a magician but also as a warrior, seems very silly and unjustified to me, I am very delicate with power scales, that spell just broke the power scale of the series, because not only celia is going to have that power up, it will be all the girls of the pseudo harem, every single one of them.

2.- last chapter, miharu's dream, that´s bullshit, it's clearly a bait of the author, I don't think he's stupid enough to send miharu with the hero of fire like he did in the WN, he only writes that to make people think he will do it, that for me, it is a mockery, he is laughing at the readers, it's not funny to me.

3.-the lack of lore, I have barely read 5 volumes of overlord, and in those 5 volumes the lore of overlord is 4 times broader, bigger and better than the one in seigetsu, and I am just starting to read overlord, it cannot be that a novel with 22 volumes has so little lore, the only vol with lore in seigetsu is vol number 21, that's why that's the only good volume, I thought that after vol 21 we were already going to finally get the lore, but nothing, the damn author continues to waste time.

4.-I can't stand takshisa and renji anymore, their role as secondary antagonists has already tired my patience, (not to mention reis, of which I couldn't be more fed up), I just don't like those 2 and they don't have what it takes to be secondary villians, the author has a mania for not killing the characters who have already given everything they had to give, he greatly lengthens their arcs even though they no longer have anything to offer, takashisa and renji should be dead already, but I just can't see the end of the participation of these 2 and I can't stand them anymore

5.- I think that myself and many others could write this novel better, every time I see theories of what people thinks is going to happen on facebook or reddit I think "damn, that would have been better than what author gave us"

I could expand much more, but I don't want to bore you gentlemen, this novel for me is rubbish, trash, scum etc, one of the worst novels i have ever read, the only good volume is number 21, that vol was so good that it seemed that another author wrote it, one author that does actually have a hint of talent, Yuri Kitayama is one of the
worst authors I've had the misfortune to read.

[nekodamashii]

Originally Posted by Roberto1

1.-celia's massive power up, not only as a magician but also as a warrior, seems very silly and unjustified to me, I am very delicate with power scales, that spell just broke the power scale of the series, because not only celia is going to have that power up, it will be all the girls of the pseudo harem, every single one of them.

2.- last chapter, miharu's dream, that´s bullshit, it's clearly a bait of the author, I don't think he's stupid enough to send miharu with the hero of fire like he did in the WN, he only writes that to make people think he will do it, that for me, it is a mockery, he is laughing at the readers, it's not funny to me.

3.-the lack of lore, I have barely read 5 volumes of overlord, and in those 5 volumes the lore of overlord is 4 times broader, bigger and better than the one in seigetsu, and I am just starting to read overlord, it cannot be that a novel with 22 volumes has so little lore, the only vol with lore in seigetsu is vol number 21, that's why that's the only good volume, I thought that after vol 21 we were already going to finally get the lore, but nothing, the damn author continues to waste time.

4.-I can't stand takshisa and renji anymore, their role as secondary antagonists has already tired my patience, (not to mention reis, of which I couldn't be more fed up), I just don't like those 2 and they don't have what it takes to be secondary villians, the author has a mania for not killing the characters who have already given everything they had to give, he greatly lengthens their arcs even though they no longer have anything to offer, takashisa and renji should be dead already, but I just can't see the end of the participation of these 2 and I can't stand them anymore

5.- I think that myself and many others could write this novel better, every time I see theories of what people thinks is going to happen on facebook or reddit I think "damn, that would have been better than what author gave us"

I could expand much more, but I don't want to bore you gentlemen, this novel for me is rubbish, trash, scum etc, one of the worst novels i have ever read, the only good volume is number 21, that vol was so good that it seemed that another author wrote it, one author that does actually have a hint of talent, Yuri Kitayama is one of the
worst authors I've had the misfortune to read.

1- Celia didn't become Alfred Emar, she just overpowered some knights, everybody overpowers knights in this story, they exist to be overpowered. And she did it with a spell that copies the swordsmanship of champions I think. She just has stage one sharingan I guess, anyone good with the sword can toy with her.

2- If you're reading this story, then you signed up for this. Besides it will be fun to read, Miharu will probably remember Rio, get a powerup and might even mop the floor with takahisa.

3- Nah, it's not like your point is invalid but we got a good amount of lore in vol21, although personally I would have preferred vol22 has Rio/Aishia/Sora go deep into investigation, lore and ancient stuff, maybe even meet a real antagonist and the girls to be left to fend for themselves.

4- Patience young padawan, patience. Renji is just a hired muscle, Takahisa just kidnapped a girl in vol 10 fisco. I don't see why they should die, but yeah Reiss kinda overstayed his welcome.

5- I sometimes feel like author could take our advice sure, but you have no idea how hard it is to write a story, the we you talk about most likely wouldn't even get past the world building.

Man if this is giving you stress, stop reading it. Then again, you would have stopped long ago if you could huh.

ps: overlord's author said he's axing it in 2 vols because of piracy of the novel or sth, lol he probably got bored of writing it, so if you're gonna read that...

pps: what's seigetsu?

Originally Posted by CNine

No one going to stop you anyway, and it's the other way around, this series starting to become really good from volume 19 onward, before that is just romcom.

Yeah this is totally where the fun starts, as long as the author doesn't regress into filler tea parties and neglect the interesting plot and MC, sorta what he did in v22 tbh, but I guess we can't have them all be vol 20/21.