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Old 2013-02-08, 23:05   Link #37521
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Forgot to link this up in honour of Iron's update.
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Old 2013-02-08, 23:14   Link #37522
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^One question: Why didn't you use Yuuno's FDB?
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Old 2013-02-09, 09:55   Link #37523
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^One question: Why didn't you use Yuuno's FDB?
Cuz Yuuno pwned so hard that he didn't need his FDB?

On a gameplay note, I usually save FDBs either as a combo breaker or use them when I can guarantee a lengthy hit confirm combo when the opponent is stunned. In Yuuno's case, it would normally be the latter.
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Old 2013-02-09, 16:40   Link #37524
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Cuz Yuuno pwned so hard that he didn't need his FDB?

On a gameplay note, I usually save FDBs either as a combo breaker or use them when I can guarantee a lengthy hit confirm combo when the opponent is stunned. In Yuuno's case, it would normally be the latter.
Huh, interesting.

THe reason why I'm asking is different though.
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Old 2013-02-11, 14:08   Link #37525
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Cookie to mean to write a snippet of a pairing?
...I may consider it. But you are more likely to be given a freshly baked digital cookie of the gods.

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I'm expecting them to dress up in some ridiculous costume. Like trenchcoat and sunglasses.

... Wait, what? The ride's about to end? You're not gonna pull the Time Skip ending are you?
Lulz. I can see that.

And no, no Time Skip ending junk. There will be advancement in time by significant degrees, but I don't plan on going suddenly poof into the future straight from this chapter.
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Old 2013-02-12, 21:38   Link #37526
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Thanks for waiting, everyone.

ViVid

Revolution 1-10

Revolution 11

Revolution 12

Revolution 13

Revolution 14

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Revolution 15:
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Old 2013-02-12, 21:56   Link #37527
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Thanks for waiting, everyone.

ViVid

Revolution 1-10

Revolution 11

Revolution 12

Revolution 13

Revolution 14

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Revolution 15:
Spoiler for MST3K review:
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And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
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Old 2013-02-13, 01:36   Link #37528
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And it turns out that she can be woken from a kiss
Arashi: No.
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Old 2013-02-14, 13:32   Link #37529
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Right. Been itching to do this once in a while.

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But the universe wasn't really unfair, she thought, and her mouth quirked. It just didn't give much of a damn one way or the other.
- The Short Victorious War, David Weber

Spoiler for X: END GAME:

Spoiler for Epilogue: Unforgiven:

Spoiler for Author Afterword:
Actually, yeah, you'd better be back, man. It's been fun doing this to you every once in a while. Still is.

So.

Here we go.

The Rambling Review of
Nanoha - Unforgiving

AKA This Very Fitting Title

Spoiler for Main Body Here, Leave Your Ears At the Door If Needed. A crap-ton of spoilers. It's not going to sound very nice. It isn't, but that's just between us I guess.:


He's the first.

Hmmm. Who next? Maybe I'll stop by the Romance Junction for a bit, see how that goes.

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Old 2013-02-15, 22:39   Link #37530
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
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Old 2013-02-16, 08:10   Link #37531
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
Casualties abound. Will rip out arms and hearts for this trachery.
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Old 2013-02-16, 12:48   Link #37532
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
Noo! Please do not sleep forever. We crave more of your work. A millennia is fie, but not forever.

Well ignoring my ranting, that was a really good chapter. The fighting was good and the dialogue was excellent. Getting more into the 'baddies' heads worked really well for this chapter and it shows just how... dangerous Nanoha can really be, interestingly enough.

And way to go doods. They had it all good to go. But nope! They will regret this. For a very long time...
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Old 2013-02-16, 13:41   Link #37533
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Noo! Please do not sleep forever. We crave more of your work. A millennia is fie, but not forever.

Well ignoring my ranting, that was a really good chapter. The fighting was good and the dialogue was excellent. Getting more into the 'baddies' heads worked really well for this chapter and it shows just how... dangerous Nanoha can really be, interestingly enough.

And way to go doods. They had it all good to go. But nope! They will regret this. For a very long time...
Chrono and Lindy's heads ripped off, Vita's arm ripped off, Signum's thigh pierced with a postlamp, Arf's head exploded in goop and the rest of the TSAB redshirts mutilated. Yuuno as Amaterasu's pet ferret.

Susu: Yep, totally regretted it.
Tsuku: ....
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Old 2013-02-17, 17:27   Link #37534
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
I swear, by the end of this Tsuku is going to go weirdly yandere over Nanoha.

"I must kill her, she confuses me! But wait, it's a pleasant sort of confusion, I want more of it!"

Kidnap, remove Raising Heart and keep captive to figure out Nanoha

And then at the last penultimate chapter, Enlil needs a new body and grabs Nanoha's, whereupon much beamspam and friendship and one very conflicted Tsuku will result.
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Old 2013-02-18, 00:18   Link #37535
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Oh well, I want to present you guys with a project of mine I have been making. A crossover fanfic with Mahou Senki Lyrical Nanoha Force and The Punisher, from Marvel. I ask you what you guys thought of the idea in the Crossover thread and now is only fair to show you what I did with it. The little problem is that is in Spanish. English is not my first language and I don’t have the skills to write a fanfic that will make any sense so in Spanish it is. For those of you that can read it I will like to hear what you think for those of you who can’t… I have been thinking on making it in English again but I just never get down to it. I will see what I can do.

El Ciclo de Saros
(The Saros Cycle)


The fic goes about the Force manga setting but this one change when Frank Castle gets involve in the case of the Silver Cross, joining the fight between the SD6 and the Hückebein Family. In this world Castle is a mage that once served in the TSAB as Enforcer but went rogue when his family was kill 20 prior the events this events and he has been killing criminals since then. And now Punisher is going after the Eclipse Drivers while Nanoha and the rest try to resolve their own, at the same time Thoma runs away from them and the Hückebein family.
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Old 2013-02-18, 15:25   Link #37536
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
Hey, remember the last time we interrupted Nanoha while she was fighting Tsukiyomi, and she then made it her top priority to murder her?

Let's do that again!
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Old 2013-02-18, 23:31   Link #37537
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Hey, remember the last time we interrupted Nanoha while she was fighting Tsukiyomi, and she then made it her top priority to murder her?

Let's do that again!
Because it worked SO WELL the first time, amirite?

The sad part is, both times it was a very reasonable decision to make, based on their perspectives.

They didn't realize that Susa and Tsuku were holding back, and they didn't realize that Nanoha's plan might actually be working.


On the other hand, Tsukuyomi had figured out that she needed to keep Nanoha too far away to hear her speak, and seemed to be keeping her on the ropes. All Tsuku had to do was keep that up until Nanoha passed out from blood loss. (Remember the shoulder wound?)

Fate had also lost the initiative to Susa, and showed no signs of getting it back.

The crazy plan COULD have worked, but no one can truly say it WOULD have. And now, the answer is lost, since the other heroes crashed the party before the end.


The ambiguity might actually be best, depending on how the author intends to end the story.



One thing I really like is acknowledging that Nanoha shouldn't have been Fate's equal during the final duel in the first season, as well as acknowledging Nanoha's other great strength:

Befriending. The TRUE befriending, where she listens, and talks, and gets into your head, and tries to see things from your side while also getting you to see things from her side.

Dirty Belkan jokes aside, Nanoha rather IS the diplomat who carries a spear.

Honestly, the whole business is basically psychological warfare. Amaterasu is very familiar with that...

...She just probably seldom considered how to use to STOP fights, as opposed to starting them or aggravating them.
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Old 2013-02-19, 00:47   Link #37538
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Good god, this turned out longer than it ever should have, but...

New Infinity right here.

I'm gonna go, like... sleep. Forever.
Geez, Nanoha or Fate REALLY needs to take Lindy, Hayate and the rest of the TSAB crew back in the alley and go, "Yo dawg, I need you to stop pokin' your nose all 'bout in our biz, you gonna get us got!" Or something.
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Old 2013-02-19, 08:53   Link #37539
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Well, it depends whether you think Tsuku maybe wanting to kill Nanoha is better than her definitely trying to. Which she's going to now.
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Old 2013-02-19, 21:07   Link #37540
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I'm hating my muse currently. It just handed me another story idea--I've got enough already, dammit!
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