Kiraware Kenshi no Isekai Tensei Ki

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by DoomCalibur

Spoiler for His cruel destiny:

A completely similar circumstance as Ikki from Rakudai except that Uruguay died once. His previous life left Uruguay a trauma about being alone. Despite wanting to be love by someone, he still afraid that when he accepts someone's kindness, his cruel destiny may end up hurting that person. He even once thought that all the girls wh cared for him simply because he was pitiful and that they might come to hate him if he become a nuisance to them as well. What a dilemma........ This guy is a serious case.......
By the way in case anyone doesn't know about this, the author has already planned to make him walk on the path of a Shura.

Spoiler for Question:

What does it mean to walk on the path of a Shura? He goes into the dark side?

@amatsunagi and obnuchious
Can I have a link or title of those two novels?

[DoomCalibur]

Originally Posted by Layrelsky

Spoiler for Question:

What does it mean to walk on the path of a Shura? He goes into the dark side?

@amatsunagi and obnuchious
Can I have a link or title of those two novels?

Ehhh.... The path of Shura is way of life where people are bound to keep taking on hardship after hardship alone with no one to help.... The path of solitude whose ending will grant you the true happiness.....Or that was what I understood from many manga and LN i read.......

[dragon1412]

You forget to translate this line 学校でも家でも、俺は誰からも興味を持ってもらえなかった。
That point is as far as i goes for the TLC but from what i see, pretty impressive TL you have there.

P.S: there is no need to spoiler tag this point, The path of Shura is commonly mentioned in Japanese Martial art, in particularly samurai. This is due to back in the day of warring era, pretty much all samurai( actual one, you know, the one who wear armor, holding spear, knife, in a war, not the flashy one the movie depicted them) have trained for war. The Japanese's old martial art is heavily war-oriented. Now, when the war is over, they knew nothing except fighting, and among them, there is a few of them who still get affected by the mentality at war and the reality of only knew how to kill, thus began killing and mass slaughtering for the sake of becoming stronger. Due to a certain few extreme individuals who perform this act excessively, they are referred as Shura ( a type of Demon) hence the name of path of Shura. If that might be a bit much in, just think that it mean people who kill a lot for the advancement of their skill.

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by dragon1412

You forget to translate this line 学校でも家でも、俺は誰からも興味を持ってもらえなかった。
That point is as far as i goes for the TLC but from what i see, pretty impressive TL you have there.

P.S: there is no need to spoiler tag this point, The path of Shura is commonly mentioned in Japanese Martial art, in particularly samurai. This is due to back in the day of warring era, pretty much all samurai( actual one, you know, the one who wear armor, holding spear, knife, in a war, not the flashy one the movie depicted them) have trained for war. The Japanese's old martial art is heavily war-oriented. Now, when the war is over, they knew nothing except fighting, and among them, there is a few of them who still get affected by the mentality at war and the reality of only knew how to kill, thus began killing and mass slaughtering for the sake of becoming stronger. Due to a certain few extreme individuals who perform this act excessively, they are referred as Shura ( a type of Demon) hence the name of path of Shura. If that might be a bit much in, just think that it mean people who kill a lot for the advancement of their skill.

Oh lol can't believe I missed that. Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the feedback

[amatsunagi]

Originally Posted by Layrelsky

Spoiler for Question:

What does it mean to walk on the path of a Shura? He goes into the dark side?

@amatsunagi and obnuchious
Can I have a link or title of those two novels?

here's the code:
n1357x and n4220br

ncode.syosetu.com/x/
just change x to code.

[xzpwnz]

I'm not good with depressing novels :c

[Layrelsky]

Chapter 1 is up!

I've made a website since it's easier to ask for proofreading there compared to asking for comments in googledocs

Anyway here's the site link
https://amanies.wordpress.com/kirawa...kai-tensei-ki/

I'll try to improve the site when I have time.

[dragon1412]

usual question : Machine TL or human TL .

[ndiezel]

Originally Posted by dragon1412

usual question : Machine TL or human TL .

I thought it was you who was always detecting MTL. No?

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by dragon1412

usual question : Machine TL or human TL .

But you praised his translation earlier how is it MTL?

[dragon1412]

Originally Posted by ndiezel

I thought it was you who was always detecting MTL. No?

lol, that was a joke, and besides, normally i don't actually check the TL, the only time i done so when their is a few glaring problem even in English, like the word counts only worth 1/2 of the actual length in Isekai Mahou or clear problem with meaning like in Sayonara ryusei or Seirei Gensouki, even in English you can see the problem.

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by dragon1412

usual question : Machine TL or human TL .

Well for the sake of answering it, I know basic japanese grammar but my problem is with memorizing kanji. So I'm basically using http://www.romajidesu.com/translator/ and dictionaries to know the kanji word per word. I also use google if I'm not familiar with the grammar structure that was used. And if I really don't understand what the heck is the sentence saying, then I'll use TA to translate it. So I guess it's a mix of machine and human TL, although 90% of it is human TL.

On a side note, I realized how difficult it is to translate accurately. It takes a time to understand the sentence, and once you understood it, it takes time to translate it to english, and even after that you'll have to edit it to make it better readable.

[dragon1412]

That's common problem, understanding the sentences is easy enough, the problem is how to find correct words that express it, though i recommended Rikai since it just poped out much faster.
On to the story, i haven't exactly read this one yet so how would you rate it tragedy, is it closer to Antimagic or Black bullet or better yet Urobutcher ???

[makarich]

Originally Posted by obnuchious

darn... that is sad .... correction, freaking depressing . . . .

this reminds of me that other WN... Junon -something... in which the MC was being completely bullied by his entire class ...well, only one person was doing the actual bullying while the other student/classmates were enjoying the scene (including his supposed best friend)... and then for 'fun', he was thrown out of the window from the second floor . . . of course, he died and got a new life in a new world ... BUT ... just like in this WN (Kiraware), the other world also has the [double black] fear mentality and he was also literally physically oppressed by his family while still a young child (broken bones, strangled, slapped hard, malnutrition ...and what not...)

. . . . . ok, great... now am feeling depressed from recalling that . . . .

Now I'm curious. Please remember the name of this novel. And even if he had such bad childhood, does it gets better later? Or later it was just as depressing...

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by dragon1412

That's common problem, understanding the sentences is easy enough, the problem is how to find correct words that express it, though i recommended Rikai since it just poped out much faster.
On to the story, i haven't exactly read this one yet so how would you rate it tragedy, is it closer to Antimagic or Black bullet or better yet Urobutcher ???

It's has a friendship similar to Antimagic and there are also mysteries which hint of a dark development, and similar to Black Bullet in a way that shit things suddenly happen. The author even teases you with his end notes during those chapters, and I'd like to punch him for doing that

Originally Posted by makarich

Now I'm curious. Please remember the name of this novel. And even if he had such bad childhood, does it gets better later? Or later it was just as depressing...

Amatsunagi already answered that,

Originally Posted by amatsunagi

here's the code:
n1357x and n4220br

ncode.syosetu.com/x/
just change x to code.

And yeah it gets better...but when it rains it just freaking pours down.

[True Assassin]

Awesome plz continue translating who ever it is Can anyone name whos group translating this cool novel cause it really caught my attention and i can relate to this story cause it happens in real life except to the part where you reincarnate lol

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by True Assassin

Awesome plz continue translating who ever it is Can anyone name whos group translating this cool novel cause it really caught my attention and i can relate to this story cause it happens in real life except to the part where you reincarnate lol

Glad you liked it. I'm just translating on my own and I'm not part of any translation group.

[True Assassin]

Originally Posted by Layrelsky

Glad you liked it. I'm just translating on my own and I'm not part of any translation group.

Huh? Your not on a group xD why not make a group =3

[Layrelsky]

Originally Posted by True Assassin

Huh? Your not on a group xD why not make a group =3

Well I guess I'd like to work by myself for now.

Anyway, here's chapter 2.

[Okashira]

I noticed this updated after a while. finally caught up. The author is indeed a complete and absolute sadist

Spoiler:

The MC confesses some of the passionate love filled romance stories(?) that he went through thanks to his sister in front of the harem. Big Mistake!

The author clearly stated that "the first part has ended", and it certainly gives that feeling now that Urg discovered a proper motivation to propel himself forward rather than something vain and selfish like "being acknowledged".



edit : ROLF!!!!!!! The author listed the girl's fetishes in their character profiles