2011-11-20, 16:32 | Link #8601 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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To me, Byaku shiki personification is pretty easy and straight forward. If you watched ZOE anime, the one with Dolores, I pretty much think it's the same character although I think BS as a person, would be a little bit more mature than the pink Orbital Frame.
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2011-11-20, 16:53 | Link #8605 |
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Imouto Shiki: Ichika-nii, can you sign this?
Ichika: Um...sure. What is it? IS: Just something I really want. *Innocent look* I: *Reads It* Wait a minute....this is a marriage contract! IS: Yep! I: Where did you get-Nevermind, I'm not signing this. IS: But you said you would~. I: No means no! IS: I-Ichika-nii doesn't love me~ I: H-Hey! Calm down- IS: Waaaaaaah~ I: Alright, I'll sign it! Just please stop crying. IS: I love you Ichika-nii~ I: *sigh* I love you too.... IS: Just as planned. I: Did you say something? IS: Of course not, you're just imagining things.
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2011-11-20, 16:54 | Link #8606 | |
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@Eratas: That makes her too devious lol. xD
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2011-11-20, 17:03 | Link #8607 |
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IF we substitute everyone with their older counterpart, but roughly at same age......
Natasha: "How dare you to ignore me, Natasha Fairs!" Chifuyu: "Yoshi, you miss the kendo training again....as punishment..." Squall: "I'll kill you...." Yoshi:
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2011-11-20, 17:11 | Link #8608 |
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@ Blitz - Don't forget, she knows everything about Ichika, being his IS and all. So much potential there
@ Zero - Does the Orimura Bloodline attract Yandere's or something? All they'd have to do is reverse engineer their genes and it would be the ultimate biological weapon in the world! Side note - Replace Natasha, Chifuyu, and Squall with Cecilia, Houki, and Rin
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2011-11-20, 17:22 | Link #8609 | |
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Created specifically to utilize the new type of space exploration craft, back when it was still a concept lol, so I.S. are created to suit Ichika and Madoka, not vice versa... While being adult suck, there's merits as well.
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2011-11-20, 17:28 | Link #8610 |
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@ Zero - Of course adults have it better! They can have se- *Bludgeoned to unconciousness*
A bomb made from their genes would be the ultimate weapon: It makes any woman around them act like a bunch of Yuuno's. Side note - I'm wondering whether I should make the relationship between Irish and Tatenashi platonic instead of romantic. It would work either way since both are the only one's who don't climax before the climax. Going to school, be back in 30 minutes.
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2011-11-20, 18:44 | Link #8613 |
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Officially, no harem. It's all Love triangle.
First, back when Squall was straight (Pfftt) it was Chifuyu and Squall. Now it's Natasha and Chifuyu, maybe Maya, but much like Ran to Ichika, she really has no convincing reason to fell for Yoshi besides Rule of Cool (Pfftt). Yeah, I don't want Yoshi to be Relationship sue.
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2011-11-20, 18:49 | Link #8614 |
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I don't like writing Harem either. That's why all the IS stories I have focus on either one heroine or one pairing at a time.
So is Squall still gunning for him? Side note - I think Maya's more attracted to Chifuyu than to Yoshi or Ichika. Notice she was glad about "being Chifuyu-san's sister in law" more than anything when she go into that "situation".
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2011-11-20, 19:00 | Link #8615 | ||
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Probably, depend on the result of compromise of Yoshi's backstory. She may flirt with him (for old sake or just to torment Chifuyu/ Natasha), but of course she'll stay with Autumn either way. Quote:
Maya might fall for Chifuyu considering the horde of lesbian fangirls she had, but if Maya did, she'll act like she doing it to Ichika, interpreting each and every action of Chifuyu as lewd and sexual, and there's no chance they can be casual friend/ Senpai-Kohai like depicted in the Canon.
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2011-11-20, 19:10 | Link #8618 |
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@ Zero - Most likely professional since bar goers tend to have the same relationship with bartenders in real life: Not exactly a friend but casual enough.
Now I need a reason as to why they'd trust someone who's never had extended contact with males to basically hold the leash of an "enfante terrible" (Maybe they just didn't care?)
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2011-11-20, 19:16 | Link #8619 | ||
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Chifuyu has the first, perhaps too much and bad for Irish' development, without being balanced by the latter. Remember they're teachers, not drill sergeant, and thus cared for Children's psychology. Irish is a kid, no matter if he's messed up. What you need is not only portray Maya as a ditz, but a caring warrior that guide Irish to the right direction, coupled with Tatenashi, I think it'll work. It's really a gamble.
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2011-11-20, 19:26 | Link #8620 |
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@ Zero - Sorry for repeating the question from before. I was just surprised since there was no mention of her having no contact with males on the IS wiki and the novels so it came off as shocking when you mentioned it.
The dynamics between the two will be complicated since they alternate between who's more mature depending on the situation.
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