2012-08-01, 04:25 | Link #34963 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Fanfic idea:
A Japanese girl who is actually one of the best pilot among the first year. The weird thing is that she is not chosen as a Rep Candidate for Japan because.... Sarashiki family pulled string from behind to let Kanzashi to be the rep candidate of Japan.(yay for political intrusion? To be fair, if Kanzashi has a personal IS, it means that the family will have two IS under them) Ootaka Yuuko Personal IS: Muramasa (Japan's 2nd third Gen IS) > Shion's bully > She looked down on other and is generally a bitch to others....especially those who are weak. > Forget about teaching her a lesson because she is really that good. > She didn't look down on others because of her arrogant but... > Just really angry and pissed off (she is the kind of person who bottle her emotion inside): -She work very hard to get to where she is today. -She study for ISA entrance exam (and Ichika just enter ISA because he is a guy...) -She trained very hard (And Kanzashi who is weaker than her get the rep candidate status.) Note: Anybody in her position would be pissed off too. Her anger just manifest negatively.... The consolation she had is her own personal IS: Japanese's true 3rd Gen IS (after abandoning Byakushiki) Muramasa..... - Even so, she had to forced herself to get used to the quirk of the machine - She work very hard but her effort not recognized....(She only got the machine because the Japanese Developers are using her as test pilot to improve on Muramasa..... She only got the role because she is lucky.) It only served to pissed her off.... she get leftover (a piece of junk at the very worst) because somebody(A Rep Candidate of Japan at that) who can't handle a machine....that is similar to what her Predecessors had been using. About Muramasa: Since optimization of One-off ability did not work out, Japanese Developer decided to work on improving basic function.... but they went a little overboard. Result is a super-agile/nimble IS that is very difficult to control (too many Verniers which has to be control individually otherwise the machine will spin out of control). Like its predecessor, its main weapon is a single sword.... an improved version of Yukihira... the problem is: It take up too many bus slot.... However, it still have enough space for a small sword (wakizashi...that is water-down version of the same sword) However, the frame was "Suspended" because after the Japanese Rep Candidate Kanzashi could not handle the machine. Due to shortage of time, the Developers decided to improve on Uchigane instead of working on a new 3rd Gen IS.... The problem is: Half way through the development.... Byakushiki came back....(Tabane just screw them(Developer and Kanzanshi) all over....) =
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2012-08-01, 06:30 | Link #34970 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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But harder (obvious) Edit: Err... that girl is the rival girl. I am still pondering about working on a new Female lead.... The problem is still with the introduction though.... The story is technically Forbidden Core version 2 (IS Forbidden Core refer to Unicorn which was supposed to be sealed away due to fear of Machine singularity) Shion is currently my main girl....Yusha(unicorn) is a secondary character. >I am considering about having another female pilot (because there are still too many manly male OC > Mainly because I still feel kind of bad for a nice guy to hitting a girl....(unless it is in self-defense) => Nice guy not being nice should be Batman grabbed a gun moment... > It lower Mary sue points for her > Probably throw in some yuri joke while I am at it.... which made the female pilot kind of weird out >Female pilot is intellectual type so no romance for her. >Transfer Nemo's epic fail moment as hers. Physical Comedy should have no boundaries. = Male Pilot is there to highlight the problem that a male Pilot have other than the usual stuff. In additional to that, a joke about Ichika being gay.... when he is just suspecting Joan's real gender (more drinks?).
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2012-08-01, 07:30 | Link #34975 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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It's a "what you are in the dark" moment.
Nice people will help out unconditionally (Like Old players helping new players) No so nice people will think if it is worth it (Normal players partying up because it up their survival rate) Evil people say screw you an probably stole your wallet while at it. (Pker)
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2012-08-01, 07:33 | Link #34976 |
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It's always made me question what motivates people like Daredevil, Batman, or (especially) Spiderman to do what they do despite the fact that they get treated like shit for it or (in spiderman's case) actively hunted down and arrested. No matter what they do, people would give them up the minute their heroics might slightly threaten them. I'm surprised they haven't just said "eff it" and give up.
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