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Old 2009-08-27, 14:55   Link #15461
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And now, without any farther delay...

An Erio/Caro short! WOOHOO!

Spoiler for Lucky:
*Kneels*

Keep making fics of this pairing or Er/Ca/Lu if you can - there is a serious lack of fics even making them the main characters.

On another note: I've gone an made a C2 on FF.net for the Male Cast, now I need more fics to fill it up - help with suggestions or writing more fanfics for them would be appreciated.

Oh and Nanya01, keep going and I feel you'll eventually convert the NanoFate shippers into YuNoFa ones instead
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Old 2009-08-27, 15:12   Link #15462
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If I was better at romance and humor-crack I'd write a TeaNena Rival/Les Yay short... I've been trying this morning... but it just doesn't come out right...

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Old 2009-08-27, 15:33   Link #15463
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Yeah, he did.

He ended up with both of them, didn't he?

Lucky punk.

...

Any chance for an update on that in the future, Satashi?
Caro and Lutecia fight over Erio in 6th Division. Lutecia, being more mature, wants a relationship with him. Caro asked him to "figure out their feelings" together, and Erio is battling puberty.

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*Kneels*

Keep making fics of this pairing or Er/Ca/Lu if you can - there is a serious lack of fics even making them the main characters.
Can't promise much, but Reminisce focused on Erio/Caro/ Lutecia as the main couples. I think that's as far as I'll ever go with it. I may try some shorts, though. But yes, any future 6th division stories will have them as a 3-way couple. I enjoy trying to do that and make it seem natural.

and *punts* no kneeling D:

Also, blame Saha for not getting a Nanoha short today... I ending up writing a Lucky*Star one over on that forum's fanfic thread *brik'd*

On a positive note, I did, however, write about 1,000 words in Vampire!Fate Creation yesterday.
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Old 2009-08-27, 15:35   Link #15464
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Yay! More Vampire!Fate!
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Old 2009-08-27, 16:39   Link #15465
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Nanya, I'd just like to point out that:

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"They don't like it," Arf mumbled. "They don't like it, but they're trying to accept it... since it's the brass that's giving orders."
was put in twice in that chapter.
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Old 2009-08-27, 16:43   Link #15466
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Nanya, I'd just like to point out that:



was put in twice in that chapter.
Thanks, I missed that.

*Fixes in master copy.*
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Old 2009-08-27, 16:43   Link #15467
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Caro and Lutecia fight over Erio in 6th Division. Lutecia, being more mature, wants a relationship with him. Caro asked him to "figure out their feelings" together, and Erio is battling puberty.



Can't promise much, but Reminisce focused on Erio/Caro/ Lutecia as the main couples. I think that's as far as I'll ever go with it. I may try some shorts, though. But yes, any future 6th division stories will have them as a 3-way couple. I enjoy trying to do that and make it seem natural.

and *punts* no kneeling D:

Also, blame Saha for not getting a Nanoha short today... I ending up writing a Lucky*Star one over on that forum's fanfic thread *brik'd*

On a positive note, I did, however, write about 1,000 words in Vampire!Fate Creation yesterday.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH *goes to look for it*
I humbly ask for forgiveness *bows but stick out her toungue as her hair hides her face* hehe...suckers..
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Old 2009-08-27, 16:55   Link #15468
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I need some help people - I was browsing FF.net and I can't see to find a certain fic, any help with locating it? (I don't have the name since it's been several months now)

From what I remember of the plot:

- It's several Chapters long, 3 IIRC
- It's AU from the Section 6 attack
- It is likely the ONLY fanfic with a possible pairing of Erio/Lutecia or Erio/Caro/Lutecia
- Chapter 3 ends with Erio and Lutecia in the same sleeping bag ^_^

Btw - Is it me or did the option to select Lutecia as a main character disappear from FF.net's character list?

Might later post some ideas up for grabs If anyone wants them.
Don't think anyone got around to answering this one- It's "A Simple Desire" by Komidol.
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Old 2009-08-27, 17:36   Link #15469
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First, you like full incantations like I do. Did you pick it up from Final Fantasy Tactics like I did?

Second, nice work-in of more Nanoha-canon. Now, though, I wanna see the Battle Royale with all my favorites. Lindy (THANK YOU FOR THE WINGS), Arisa, Suzuka, Falin, Noel, Kyouya, Miyuki, Fiasse, Lutecia, Vivio, the Forwards and the Wolkenritter all arrayed behind the three Aces for some extremely powerful and severe... oh, right... befriending.

So... thanks for the mental image I get to sleep with tonight
Nope; I got it from, well, er, Nanoha. Part of why Tengu uses the things more often than not is that I'm trying to get across the idea that he's not as powerful as the "standard" Nanoha characters and so he has to do the full incantation to get higher-power attacks to fire off.

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Speaking of which,they haven't told anyone else about Arisa being dead yet, right? Perhaps it's time for an examination.
Well, since Noel included the more-or-less complete history of what was going on in what she sent to Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate, whether Arf and Lindy are aware at this point is dependent on how closely they read over the file. As for the second point...funny you should mention that, since it's the subject of the "Extra" chapter.

...Well, okay, the actual subject of the "Extra" chapter seems to be Hayate and Suzuka making borderline ecchi jokes at Arisa's expense, but the principle applies.

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I think the underlined should be "reach" instead.
I think you think correctly. *edits*

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Since Due normally works solo, I was wondering why Lutecia was there. Providing teleport services? Considering the nature of her operations, you'd think she'd have her own arrangements for such things.
You're actually right--she's there solely for transdimensional teleport services since Due would otherwise have to arrange for a ride with something (the Numbers can't even do ordinary teleports as far as we know; Lutecia had to 'port Quattro, Sein, Deici, and Tre back to base after the clash in Ep. 12).

Actually, I put Lutecia in the scene to explain how Due got the heck out to the fringes of dimensional space to keep from getting haxxbusted over the Amazing Teleporting Numbers. Irony is...ironic.

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The first omake is missing a quote mark at the end.
Noted.

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Short, fast-paced, well-done!
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@Dezo: I'd ask for your hand in marriage but I think your wife might have a little problem with that . Keep up the good work B&S is one of my favorites
Yes...yes she would. But thanks anyway. *now needs to read your fic*

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@Dezo: You better get this finished quickly, it's really getting good...
Um...would one more chapter plus the "Extra" be too soon...

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The way you two handle this, NxFxY is much better than I'd think. I've only ever seen the three-way in porn-without-plot stories. This is good stuff.
I wrote some of those, too, though mine is more accurately Y-->N<--F since Yuuno and Fate don't love each other in it except as close friends. I just have this mental block on seeing Fate as anything other than a lesbian (with Nanoha or not...I just can't get myself to mentally see Fate/male pairings). Honestly, Subaru seems straighter to me than she is, though I'm not quite sure why...

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If I was better at romance and humor-crack I'd write a TeaNena Rival/Les Yay short... I've been trying this morning... but it just doesn't come out right...

=/
Well, in Phase II at least, they didn't seem to have that Foe Yay vibe going on, as opposed to being actual foes. But then, I don't think that a tsundere like Tea really goes well with Foe Yay anyway. They make their friends into enemies who have to work their way through their tsuntsun shell just to get anywhere, so that makes it twice as difficult for actual enemies. And Nena seemed too...businesslike...to work with that kind of bantering appeal necessary to make Foe Yay work.
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Old 2009-08-27, 17:40   Link #15470
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Nope; I got it from, well, er, Nanoha. Part of why Tengu uses the things more often than not is that I'm trying to get across the idea that he's not as powerful as the "standard" Nanoha characters and so he has to do the full incantation to get higher-power attacks to fire off.
Oh right; we just haven't seen it since the one part of season one I dislike I'm silly. Can my writer's block go away now?
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Old 2009-08-27, 17:52   Link #15471
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I wrote some of those, too, though mine is more accurately Y-->N<--F since Yuuno and Fate don't love each other in it except as close friends. I just have this mental block on seeing Fate as anything other than a lesbian (with Nanoha or not...I just can't get myself to mentally see Fate/male pairings). Honestly, Subaru seems straighter to me than she is, though I'm not quite sure why...
Well, it's nice that you seem to like the "Relationships" arc.
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Old 2009-08-27, 17:56   Link #15472
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Oh right; we just haven't seen it since the one part of season one I dislike I'm silly. Can my writer's block go away now?
Hey, Hayate does it all the time.
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Old 2009-08-27, 18:11   Link #15473
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Another BtBR short, featuring Elise and Kyouya. Occurs sometime during the fic, probably during the early chapters... or simply sometime before Nanoha is injured and comes to England. Kind of a companion piece to "Tiny Heart".

Spoiler for Changing Heart:
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*Laughs* Cute chase scene is cute.

Though, probably a lot more dangerous these days, ne?
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Old 2009-08-27, 18:40   Link #15475
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Didn't they have almost the same exact scene (though with Kyouya winning) in the OVA? Cuter with a chase scene.
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Didn't they have almost the same exact scene (though with Kyouya winning) in the OVA? Cuter with a chase scene.
I have to go back and rewatch the OVA, but they might of... though the original scene was much nastier.
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Old 2009-08-27, 19:37   Link #15477
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A little while ago, over in the manga discussion thread - Nanya brought up a point where it seems odd that that Jail Scaglietti is young in StrikerS when he shouldn't be. Regardless, it deviated and now:

Anyone up to the challenge of writing a Crackfic about Jail's early years or even general Jail crack in the first place?

EDIT: Btw thanks Outlaender for the search
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Shiny's doing some pretty good Jail crack at the moment.
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Old 2009-08-27, 19:49   Link #15479
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Yeah I'd say you're about 1 week too late there Kokuyoku.
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Old 2009-08-27, 20:08   Link #15480
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Well, in Phase II at least, they didn't seem to have that Foe Yay vibe going on, as opposed to being actual foes. But then, I don't think that a tsundere like Tea really goes well with Foe Yay anyway. They make their friends into enemies who have to work their way through their tsuntsun shell just to get anywhere, so that makes it twice as difficult for actual enemies. And Nena seemed too...businesslike...to work with that kind of bantering appeal necessary to make Foe Yay work.
This was the problem I've run into. Trying to make Nena flirty seemed character derailment. She isn't so much like her namesake Nena Trinity--only a physical expy, her personality is not alike.

And Teana is not an easy character to create Foe Yay with either. So it just didn't work, no matter what I did, it seemed wrong.
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