AnimeSuki Forums

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 10:24

Interestingly, while it sound awfully disgusting, it's not really incomprehensible, being physiological reaction and all. Just that fiction tend to exaggerate it for laughs.

EDIT: LLEMOOOOOOONN!!!!!!!

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 10:37

What do you mean Lemon?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 10:40

I wrote randomly and realized that I raised a flag in story and... buh, too explicit so I remove it and rewrite it with something subtler.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 10:44

Suspicions: If he gave his shirt to Charlotte, how suspicious would Ichika be if he found it in Charles closet?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 10:46

I dunno, but he might ask bluntly.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 10:47

Okay, next question: What would it take to convince Ichika that his best buddy and budding love interest are the same person?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 10:58

Direct confession or seeing Charles changing

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-20, 10:58

No mention of falling on top of each other? With hands in inappropriate places?

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 10:59

Nothing less would work?

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-20, 11:01

For a more family friendly way. How about the doctor's?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 11:02

Stumbled on medical record? That would be good.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 11:03

They'd probably forge it to look like she was a male. I still don't know how she got past ISA customs with nothing but a girdle.

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-20, 11:12

Nah, nothing that easy.

CHarlotte asks Ichika to take her to her family doctor. Ichika takes her there with him as Charles and walks out the clinic to wait. Then he reads the doc's nameplate. OB... wait what?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 11:12

Maybe the school is purposefully silent to keep their political position safe and thus missed a lot of things concerning their security.

Dunno, stupid as it sounds, it's the most logical explanation to me. Because the only alternative is "Adult are useless"

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 11:14

You mean the same adults who refuse to help Ichika at all when he's screaming for help or don't do their jobs when IS attack? Yeah, they sound like real model employees and models.

StratoSpear · 2012-07-20, 11:14

Just cooked up part of the scene, though seeing as it's a wee bit long as my other scenes... I'll have to put it in a spoily:

Spoiler for Draft Scene:

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-20, 11:19

PPPPPPPPPPPPFfffffffffffffffffffffffffffftttttttt

Just like I thought

StratoSpear · 2012-07-20, 11:23

Still gotta think of what other ways Rin can show that she's all "WTF?". Camilla has yet to tell the class that she's a Rep Cadet... Let alone displaying her capabilities in combat with her Personal IS, the Räikkönen.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-20, 11:31

Well, goin to sleep now.

agetreme · 2012-07-20, 11:33

As much as I wanted to introduce Nishiki's (white Custom) first upgrade.... I need to keep the pace slow.....because the original rush too much and skip too many stuff.

Edit

Question which sounds better as a title?
The White Nishiki
or

Chapter 3: Mysterious Genius Professor (Gift from God?)
Chapter 4: Brilliant Blue Flash (Blue Rain)
Chapter 5: ??? (Surprise....)
Chapter 6: The White Nishiki (signifying the completion of the unit)

2012-07-20, 10:24	Link #34381
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Interestingly, while it sound awfully disgusting, it's not really incomprehensible, being physiological reaction and all. Just that fiction tend to exaggerate it for laughs. EDIT: LLEMOOOOOOONN!!!!!!! __________________

2012-07-20, 10:37	Link #34382
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What do you mean Lemon? __________________

2012-07-20, 10:40	Link #34383
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I wrote randomly and realized that I raised a flag in story and... buh, too explicit so I remove it and rewrite it with something subtler. __________________

2012-07-20, 10:44	Link #34384
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Suspicions: If he gave his shirt to Charlotte, how suspicious would Ichika be if he found it in Charles closet? __________________

2012-07-20, 10:46	Link #34385
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I dunno, but he might ask bluntly. __________________

2012-07-20, 10:47	Link #34386
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Okay, next question: What would it take to convince Ichika that his best buddy and budding love interest are the same person? __________________

2012-07-20, 10:58	Link #34387
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Direct confession or seeing Charles changing __________________

2012-07-20, 10:58	Link #34388
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	No mention of falling on top of each other? With hands in inappropriate places?

2012-07-20, 10:59	Link #34389
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Nothing less would work? __________________

2012-07-20, 11:01	Link #34390
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	For a more family friendly way. How about the doctor's?

2012-07-20, 11:02	Link #34391
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Stumbled on medical record? That would be good. __________________

2012-07-20, 11:03	Link #34392
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	They'd probably forge it to look like she was a male. I still don't know how she got past ISA customs with nothing but a girdle. __________________

2012-07-20, 11:12	Link #34393
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Nah, nothing that easy. CHarlotte asks Ichika to take her to her family doctor. Ichika takes her there with him as Charles and walks out the clinic to wait. Then he reads the doc's nameplate. OB... wait what?

2012-07-20, 11:12	Link #34394
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Maybe the school is purposefully silent to keep their political position safe and thus missed a lot of things concerning their security. Dunno, stupid as it sounds, it's the most logical explanation to me. Because the only alternative is "Adult are useless" __________________

2012-07-20, 11:14	Link #34395
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	You mean the same adults who refuse to help Ichika at all when he's screaming for help or don't do their jobs when IS attack? Yeah, they sound like real model employees and models. __________________

2012-07-20, 11:14	Link #34396
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Just cooked up part of the scene, though seeing as it's a wee bit long as my other scenes... I'll have to put it in a spoily: Spoiler for Draft Scene: “All right, everyone to their seats please. Today we’ll be welcoming a new transfer student.” The announcement instantly draws attention from the students, abruptly ceasing their respective conversations as they turn to their homeroom instructor with widened eyes while she turns to the classroom’s door. “Come in.” Camilla steps into the classroom and approaches the small elevated platform where the instructor stands. Instinctively, she briefly pauses right at the edge of the platform and raises her right leg then steps onto it. Pockets of whispers rattle the ambience as the students notice her apparent disability. “Wow…” “Why are her eyes…?” “Is she…?” The instructor steps aside as Camilla stops at her side and turns to her classmates. Despite not being able to see them, she could still sense that she’s being watched from every direction. “Umm… Before I start, I would like to apologize.” Her sudden apologetic tone raised eyebrows amongst the students including Lingyin who is sitting next to the windows to the outdoors. ‘What’s with her…?’ A brief moment of silence and Camilla raises her head. “I’m sorry… I can’t really see any of you. However, I do hope that I can still study alongside everyone.” The students gasp at the revelation of her being visually-impaired while some began to grow concerned. “My name is Camilla Virtanen. I’m from Finland and… well, I have great interest in sports and any activities that involve speeding…” While the introduction is honest, some of the students are in apparent disbelief as to what they just heard. Lingyin simply stares at her with an open jaw, blinking her eyes while her mind slowly registers Camilla’s words. As she tries to mentally catch on, another student raises her hand. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-07-20, 11:19	Link #34397
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	PPPPPPPPPPPPFfffffffffffffffffffffffffffftttttttt Just like I thought __________________

2012-07-20, 11:23	Link #34398
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Still gotta think of what other ways Rin can show that she's all "WTF?". Camilla has yet to tell the class that she's a Rep Cadet... Let alone displaying her capabilities in combat with her Personal IS, the Räikkönen. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-07-20, 11:31	Link #34399
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Well, goin to sleep now. __________________

2012-07-20, 11:33	Link #34400
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	As much as I wanted to introduce Nishiki's (white Custom) first upgrade.... I need to keep the pace slow.....because the original rush too much and skip too many stuff. Edit Question which sounds better as a title? The White Nishiki or Chapter 3: Mysterious Genius Professor (Gift from God?) Chapter 4: Brilliant Blue Flash (Blue Rain) Chapter 5: ??? (Surprise....) Chapter 6: The White Nishiki (signifying the completion of the unit) __________________ Ara Han Last edited by agetreme; 2012-07-20 at 11:49.