Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character

[jinchuuruki hunter]

well new character so here

Name: Hayate, Ayame, Mizuki

Second name: Yabushi

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Village: hidden in the frost

Rank: jonin

Appearance: Hayate is 6ft with short white spiked hair, Hayate’s face is pale white and his eyes are light blue, Hayate wears a black shinobi outfit with a gray pouch and ties his forehead protector around his arm
Blue hair for Mizuki and red for Ayame

Kekkei genkai: none

Clan: The Yabushi clan specialises in a unique metal type jutsu they’ve developed over the years. It allows them to turn there skin into a hard dense metal and also transform there limbs and such into weapons such as blades. These techniques also highly increase the clans defence with some of the clans members being able to make shields out of there limbs.

Bio: Hayate was born a triplet with his brother Mizuki and his sister Ayame, soon after there birth Mizuki and Ayame became ill, it was clear that they would soon die so there father Dozu performed a forbidden jutsu and sealed Mizuki and Ayame within Hayate, Although Dozu believed he had done the right thing his wife was distraught, she knew that Dozu had condemned Hayate to a horrible life as he would never be able to fully experience life the way it should be. The sealing technique resulted in the three siblings sharing one body and one mind, although Hayate was the face and body of the three they took turns in which one controlled it each of them being a completely different person with different personalities elemental affinities and different chakra, Hayate’s parents separated and Hayate’s father fled the village due to his actions
Hayate joined the ninja academy and developed incredible ninja skills due to his brother and sister each being sealed inside him. They both learned ninja arts as he did and developed there own interests they were able to develop different jutsu whenever one of them was in control of Hayate’s body, and due to this they went in different directions as far as fighting ability, Hayate developed a skill at his clans secret metal skin jutsu, Ayame developed her skills towards here fire chakra and learned fire jutsu’s and Mizuki learned the ninja art of poison from the siblings sensei.
Due to the siblings situation Hayate is regarded as a freak from other ninja as he is the face of the three. However having seen how difficult it is for there friends and family to tell them apart whenever one of them is in control of the body the learned a jutsu that changed the colour of there hair for which ever one was in command of the body at the time, Hayate’s hair is white , Agama’s is red which reflects both her temper and jutsu as she is a hot head and uses fire style moves, and Mizuki’s is blue as he is calm and cool in situations. The three siblings don’t have similar personalities in any way as Hayate is shy and keeps things to himself and often lets his brother and sister’s thoughts overshadow his own. Ayame is hot headed and jumps into situations without thinking it through she is always eager to fight and arque over other things, Mizuki likes to rationalise everything and find the diplomatic route however this often leads to clashes between him and Ayame, which usually leaves Hayate to step in and try to stop them. However even with there sqables the three function extremely well in combat and tactical situations which makes them a deadly force against enemy shinobi.

Jutsu’s and skills: Due to the three siblings sharing one body they are each able to see what the others and also discuss the best plan of attack or strategy for each situation as they can tell what the others are thinking.

Hayate skills: Hayate is extremely skilled at taijutsu due to his clans technique’s, he is also moderately skilled at genjutsu

Hayate jutsu’s
1 Metal style metal skin jutsu: Hayate turns his skin into metal
Advantages: increases Hayate’s attack and defence
Disadvantages: lowers Hayate’s speed

2 Metal style arm blade jutsu: Hayate turns his arm into a powerful blade
Advantages: strong weapon
Disadvantages: weighs Hayate down

3 Metal style arm shield jutsu: Hayate turns his arm into an enormous shield capable of shielding him from strong attacks
Advantages: capable of protecting Hayate against strong attacks
Disadvantages: requires a lot of chakra to maintain the shield

Ayame skills: Ayame is quite skilled at fire techniques and knows basic taijutsu along with basic genjutsu

Ayame’s jutsu’s
1 Fire style dragon breath jutsu: Ayame spits forth a long intense stream of fire towards the opponent
Advantages: strong fire attack
Disadvantages: costs considerable chakra

2 Fire style dragon ball jutsu: Ayame spits dozens of small fire balls towards the enemy
Advantages: costs little chakra
Disadvantages: not very strong

3 Fire style flaming vortex jutsu: Ayame spins while spitting out a continuous flame which turns into a flaming vortex around her. The vortex then pushes out four meters burning everything in its path.
Advantages: very powerful against a lot of enemies
Disadvantages: drains chakra and fatigue quickly

Mizuki’s skills: Mizuki is an expert in poison techniques and a master tactician able to think in harsh situations, knows basic taijutsu and little or no genjutsu

Mizuki’s jutsu’s
1 Poison style poison clone: Mizuki creates a clone out of poison and when its destroyed it reverts into a poisonous gas
Advantages: deadly to anyone in range of it being destroyed
Disadvantages: costs chakra and is still dangerous to allies

2 poison style poison cloud: Mizuki spits out a poisonous cloud of green gas, which is endowed with his chakra which can kill the enemy if they breath it in.
Advantages: kills if the opponent comes into contact with it
Disadvantages: requires enormous amounts of chakra

3 Poison style cloud control: Having endowed the poison cloud with his chakra Mizuki can control the clouds movements
Advantages: can trap opponent and ensure a kill also very good for separated opponents.
Disadvantages: cost a lot of chakra to keep it going also it doesn’t move that fast.

[Ninja_Nobody]

Thanks Mitsu, I'll fix up his jutsu. Thanks I also wanted to use Chinese for a couple characters since I got bored with Japanese. Here's the remake of the Jutsu/

Jutsu

Name- Suiton: Suihachi (lit. Water Release: Hand of Waves)
Type- Water;Ninjutsu
Hand Seals- Tiger, Snake, Hold Palm Out
Description- The user will fire a powerful stream of water from there palm out towards the target. The user can change the width of the stream, but it is usually kept pretty small to gain maximum damage. By using this jutsu, the user must have precise mastery over there Water affinity

Name- Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu (lit. Water Release: Hidden Mist Jutsu)
Type- Water;Ninjutsu
Hand Seals- Snake
Description- The user will surrond the area in a thick mist. The denisty can be controlled by the user. The longer the mist is kept up, the more chakra is used during the time the jutsu is active.

Name- Suiton: Ja no Kuchi (lit. Water Release: Snakes Mouth)
Type- Water;Ninjutsu
Hand Seals-Monkey, Horse, Dragon
Description- The user will denisfy the water into the shape of Snake and shoot it ooutward striking the target. The user can change the size of the Snake, ranging from a small garden snake to a Giant Snake similar to Manda. This jutsu is a archtype to the Water Dragon Jutsu

[Mitsu]

Ninja_nobody: I agree, Japanese gets very boring sometimes! That's alot better... I think they are good!

And jinchuuruki hunter, that is an awesome idea! I really really like that idea! Just one quick question (I'm curious), was Ayame and Mizuki dead when he sealed them inside of Hayate or were they about to pass away? (I wish the hair color changing jutsu was real...>.<)

[jinchuuruki hunter]

mitsu

And jinchuuruki hunter, that is an awesome idea! I really really like that idea! Just one quick question (I'm curious), was Ayame and Mizuki dead when he sealed them inside of Hayate or were they about to pass away? (I wish the hair color changing jutsu was real...>.<)

thanks mitsu, and Ayame and mizuki were just about to die when they were sealed in hayate

[Mitsu]

Your welcome! Thanks for clearing that up for me! (Actually... I personally should have already known that)

If no one posts after this post i'm going to put a character on it later tonight. Actually no, I'm not going to post the character just yet... it needs some editing

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

Came up with a new jutsu (sry, no translation)

Name: Chinese Zodiac Barrier
Rank: S
Effect: The jutsu calls for the user to complete all 12 zodiac symbols (hand signs) 4 times in a row to call upon a large barrier spreading 3 meters in width with a wall for every symbol and goes up 20 kilometers. The barrier has the japanese sign (like "火" would be for fire) for each of the twelve symbols on their corresponding wall. The barrier is unbreakable but is open at the very high top of the walls

EDIT: LOL I noticed that too while I was reading through pages on the thread but for some reason didn't say anything lol

[Ninja_Nobody]

...Just saying If anyone hasn't noticed there is a Kyubi Jinchiruuki and a Jinchiruuki Hunter. Ha that was funny... don't patronize me cause I'm cool

Name- Chiniiro Tsubaki (lit. Blood Red Camellia)
Age- 13
Eye Color- Green
Hair Color- Black
Height- 151 cm
Weight- 44.5 kg
Blood Type- AB negative
Birthplace- Kusagakure
Location- Kusagakure
Rank- Chunin
Outfit- Chiniiro wears a black long sleeved shirt with a black skirt. Over her shirt she wears a baggy green jacket. She is also known for her relativly large chest and long black hair that parts. She carries a kusangi grass cutter.

Jutsu

Name- Tsubaki Odori no Jutsu (lit. Camellia Dance Jutsu)
Type- Taijutsu
Rank- C Rank
Description- Jumping up in the air, Tsubaki will quickly move behind her enemy and kick them with full force. She has shown to use chakra to basche her own chakra when trying the move behind the enemy. This makes it hard for people such as the Inuzuka or Kakashi who seems to be able to sniff out the scent of chakra.

Name- Unknown Chakra Slice
Type- Sword Fighting/Chakra Concentrating
Rank- Unknown
Description- By molding her special green chakra into her katana, Tsubaki will slice forward dealing a powerful strike to her target. The name of this jutsu is unknown.

Name- Man'etsu Ibara Reikyuu (lit. Rapture Thorn Casket Jutsu)
Type- Unknown (Though to be Wood)
Rank- A Rank
Description- Tsubaki's strongest Jutsu, in which she will summon giant vines lined with poisonous thorns. The vines will wrap around the target doing major damage. In has many other abilites, yet to be known.

Biography- Unknown

[narutojm]

vine style: vine whip jutsu

[Ninja_Nobody]

...No offense I just did something really similar before you NarutoJM. Also not to be rude but extending your idea's would make them better.

Name- Gamakura (lit. Toad Cellar)
Age- Somewhere over 50
Eye Color- Blueish/Green
Skin Color- Dark Red with Green stripes
Element Affinity- Fire/Water
Outfit- He has a chain mail with the kanji for Earth on it and carries a sickle on his back. He also wears a straw hat.

Jutsu

Name- Suiton: Mizuotaki (lit. Water Release: Water Cascade)
Type- Ninjutsu
Element- Water
Description- Gamakura will release a torrent of water from his mouth at high speeds toward its target.

Name- Katon: Kushihi (lit. Fire Release: Spitfire)
Type- Ninjutsu
Element- Fire
Description- The user will spit a blast of fire onto there target burning anything it touches.

[Mitsu]

*sighs* I haven't gotten the dude done yet. But i'm still posting. I'll just review a little bit of the page.

Ninja_nobody: Chiirniro seemed interesting, to bad she doesn't have a bio 'cause I was really curious! I like the last jutsu on there. Don't know why but I do. And your summon is kinda cool. And lol I just now noticed that! (jinchuuruki hunter don't kill Kyubi! DX)
Narutojm: I agree with Ninja_nobody.... I hate it when people come on the thread and just post a jutsu name and that's it. Details would be nice.

[Ninja_Nobody]

Sorry for no bio Mitsu, for that character I didn't want a bio.

AND FOR ALL NARUTO FANS THE KAKASHI GAIDEN IS FINALLY COMING TO TELEVISION. WOO WHO!!!! COMIN LATER THIS MONTH. CAN'T WAIT

[Mitsu]

It's fine. Just makes you wonder what it is... I like imagining pasts all on my own.

Spoiler for Off topic: answer to Ninja:

Seriously? What channel will it be on and what time? I haven't watched or read Naruto in so long... I think I left around were Jariya (I know I spelled that wrong) was killed off by Pein.

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

Originally Posted by Mitsu

And lol I just now noticed that! (jinchuuruki hunter don't kill Kyubi! DX)

Don't worry, no hunter could kill the Kyubi and me (lol)

[jinchuuruki hunter]

kyubi jinchuuriki

Don't worry, no hunter could kill the Kyubi and me (lol)

I dont know about that lol

oh and i cant wait for kakashi gaiden to be released

[Mitsu]

@ Kyubi/hunter: I sure hope you two don't kill each other... DX hunter, I can't wait either! I think this thread is going really off topic. lol

~slightly on topic~ I found my Akazi Kitaru character from awhile back and I decided I was going to completely finish his whole character and his entire organization even it took me more than a month to finish! And it's about time i'll get Mitsu done... >.<

[Ninja_Nobody]

Sorry for not answering quickly, but I don't know when It will be coming but I'm guessing that it will be late august on Cartoon Network. I don't know about some people but I used to watch Naruto every saturday at 9. They might do this then lead into Shippuden.

Name- Aianjoukei (lit. Iron Sight)
Age- 23
Eye Color- Blue
Hair Color- Black
Height- 5'6"
Weight- 128 pounds
Blood Type- A negative
Rank- Jonin
Birthplace- Konohagakure
Location- Konohagakure
Outfitt- Aianjoukei wears a white sleevless shirt with a button down shirt. He, unlike other ninja wears a white hakama. Under his right eye is a 00 Tattoo for unknown reasons. He carries a bow and arrow on his back and can make arrows out of Chakra when needed.

Jutsu

Name- Hayai Dangan no Jutsu (lit. Quick Shot Jutsu)
Type- Ninjutsu, Physical
Description- The user will, perferably Aianjoukei will aim his arrow at a target and create a connection between the chakra networks. This will causethe arrow to target the other chakra network making it a almost-never miss shot.

Name- Ikusen Renda! (lit. Thousand Barrage!)
Type- Ninjutsu
Description- The caster will fire a arrow into the air tagged with a talisman. The talisman will explode in the air and rain thousands of arrows on the target.

Bio- As a child, Aianjoukei had a keen eye. He excelled in the academy and passed all of his tests. He eventually passed the Chunin exams and passed his teammates and friends. He felt lonely being the only Chunin but eventually played a big role during the assualt of Konoha by Orochimaru. He killed hundreds of enemy shinobi as they charged and served a large role. He also served Tsunade as one of her assistants. He watched as his allies died in battle and was there during many major events. When Pain attacked Konoha, he was killed by Deva Paths Shinra Tensai. He eventually was revived by Nagato and is currently waiting on the new Hokage's orders....

[Mitsu]

It's fine! I didn't really think anyone would answer me. I'll be looking forward to it, definately but I don't have a TV besides the one we play video games on... ): I really wanna watch the Shipuuden but I prefer the manga.

I like him. Ikusen Renda seems really painful to be hit by! How does Hayai Dangan no Jutsu connect to the chakra network?(Lol My mom says I'm naturally curious) And I think you could add a little bit more description to him, like his normal personality or something like that.

[Ninja_Nobody]

Hayai Dandan no Jutsu is a special type of Jutsu that I will use later on that can create temporary links between chakra networks. The only bad thing is that while Aianjoukei can manipulatre their chakra network, they can manipulate him...

[Keikan]

Well I figured it's time for me to post again now that I've gotten over the creative drain of last page (jk).

Without further ado I present my responces to Kyubi's request to create headed demons, the Brothers Three, the birds that need no introduction, THE STORM BROTHERS!!

Spoiler for The Brothers Storm:

Spoiler for Shiatama:

Name: Shiatama (lit. four head)
Height: above 80 metres
Weight: ???? (You try getting him on a set of scales)
Gender: Male
Animal: Sooty Shearwater
Appearance/chakra colour: The Shiatama has one normal Shearwater tail but four heads. His chakra colour is aqua.

Bio: The Shiatama is from the alternate realm of the bijuu realm, the name of the species is unknown and how they were to have been made. Their origins remain a mystery but is rumored to have been made of excess chakra of the Bijuus from tails 1 to 9 while they remained in their realm. But the chakra was altered so the new beasts had instead of multiple tails, they had multiple heads. The Shiatama was beast created from chakra of the Rokubi (6 tail). It was noticed that each headed beast was made from it's reversed tailed beast even if the animal is different. (like 1 head is 9 tailed, 3 head is 7 tailed, the only alteration is the 5 head was made of the 5 tail)

The Shiatama has powerful chakra attacks centred around the element air and the following jutsus are made specific for Shiatama and each headed beast has their own specific weapon based jutsu that cannot be learned by humans.

Jutsu: Fuuton: Kiritori bo (Wind Style: Cutting bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Shiatama forms a bo-staff of wind and ‘throws’ it. The bo-staff cuts anything it touches and some things it doesn’t.

Jutsu: Fuuton: Shippuu bo (Wind Style: Squall bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Shiatama forms a bo-staff of wind and ‘throws’ it. The bo-staff, while not doing direct damage, picks things up and blows them around.

Jutsu: Fuuton: Kiritori shippuu bo (Wind Style: Cutting squall bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Shiatama combines the cutting power of the Kiritori bo and the brunt strength of the Shippuu bo into one jutsu which, when unleased does massive damage.

Jutsu: Fuuton: Sen satsu kiritori shippuu bo bakuha (Wind Style: 1,000 Split cutting squall bo-staff explosion)
Rank: Higher than above S
Effect: One Kiritori shippuu bo is launched. This bo-staff then explodes into 1,000 smaller bo-staffs which spread out and destroy everything.

Spoiler for Goatama:

Name: Goatama (lit. five head)
Height: above 90 metres
Weight: ????
Gender: Male
Animal: Sooty Albatross
Appearance/chakra colour: The Goatama has one normal albatross tail but five heads. His chakra colour is ocean blue (deep blue).

Bio: The Goatama is from the alternate realm of the bijuu realm, the name of the species is unknown and how they were to have been made. Their origins remain a mystery but is rumored to have been made of excess chakra of the Bijuus from tails 1 to 9 while they remained in their realm. But the chakra was altered so the new beasts had instead of multiple tails, they had multiple heads. The Goatama was beast created from chakra of the Gobi (5 tail). It was noticed that each headed beast was made from it's reversed tailed beast even if the animal is different. (like 1 head is 9 tailed, 3 head is 7 tailed, the only alteration is the 5 head was made of the 5 tail)

The Goatama has powerful chakra attacks centred around the element water and the following jutsus are made specific for Goatama and each headed beast has their own specific weapon based jutsu that cannot be learned by humans.

Jutsu: Suiton: Gekiryuu bo (Water Style: Raging stream bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Goatama forms a bo-staff of water and ‘throws’ it. The bo-staff batters everything it touches.

Jutsu: Suiton: Arainami bo (Water Style: Wild waves bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Goatama forms a bo-staff of water and ‘throws’ it. Once the bo-staff contacts a surface it bounces away only to home back in on what it contacted the first time and keeps hitting then bouncing away.

Jutsu: Suiton: Gekiryuu arainami bo (Water Style: Raging stream wild waves bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Goatama combines the battering power of the Gekiryuu bo and the multi-hit ability of the Arainami bo into one jutsu which, when unleased does massive damage.

Jutsu: Suiton: Sen satsu gekiryuu arainami bo bakuha (Water Style: 1,000 Split raging stream wild waves bo-staff explosion)
Rank: Higher than above S
Effect: One Gekiryuu arainami bo is launched. This bo-staff then explodes into 1,000 smaller bo-staffs which spread out and destroy everything.

Spoiler for Rokuatama:

Name: Rokuatama (lit. six head)
Height: above 115 metres
Weight: ????
Gender: Male
Animal: Black-bellied Storm-Petrel
Appearance/chakra color: The Rokuatama has one normal Storm-Petrel tail but six heads. His chakra colour is normal blue.

Bio: The Rokuatama is from the alternate realm of the bijuu realm, the name of the species is unknown and how they were to have been made. Their origins remain a mystery but is rumored to have been made of excess chakra of the Bijuus from tails 1 to 9 while they remained in their realm. But the chakra was altered so the new beasts had instead of multiple tails, they had multiple heads. The Rokuatama was second beast created from chakra of the Shibi (4 tail). It was noticed that each headed beast was made from it's reversed tailed beast even if the animal is different. (like 1 head is 9 tailed, 3 head is 7 tailed, the only alteration is the 5 head was made of the 5 tail)

The Rokuatama has powerful chakra attacks centred around the element lightning and the following jutsus are made specific for Rokuatama and each headed beast has their own specific weapon based jutsu that cannot be learned by humans.

Jutsu: Raiton: Kanden bo (Lightning Style: Electric shock bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Rokuatama forms a bo-staff of lightning and ‘throws’ it. The bo-staff electrocutes anything in its path.

Jutsu: Raiton: Seidenki bo (Lightning Style: Static electricity bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Rokuatama forms a bo-staff of lightning and ‘throws’ it. The bo-staff is powered-up by the natural static electricity in the air. The lightning is known to spark off the bo-staff into anything close to it.

Jutsu: Raiton: Kanden seidenki bo (Water Style: Electric shock static electricity bo-staff)
Rank: Above S
Effect: The Rokuatama combines the electric power of the Kanden bo and the power-up and sparking abilities of the Seidenki bo into one jutsu which, when unleased does massive damage.

Jutsu: Raiton: Sen satsu kanden seidenki bo bakuha (Lightning Style: 1,000 Split electric shock static electricity bo-staff explosion)
Rank: Higher than above S
Effect: One Kanden seidenki bo is launched. This bo-staff then explodes into 1,000 smaller bo-staffs which spread out and destroy everything.

In case I didn't make it entirely obvious they are related in some way. If you want to know more just let me know.

OFF TOPIC ALERT:

Well gorram all of you that have Kakashi Gaiden coming up. As far as I know we in Australia are only up to the end of the Sasuke retrieval arc (before the Naruto vs. Sasuke fight) unless there are less episodes between the two than I thought.

Also do any of you how TONFA works? Because I am currently trying to post a story there but it doesn't seem to what to work. Yes it is the first couple of chapters of Naruto Gyaku (sorry to keep people waiting) however I'm still not up to the stage where your (those that provided them) characters are actually getting larger chunks and fights.

My last thing, this is meerly a test of something, please respond if you understand, THE GAME. Sorry if any of you are pissed at me for this .

EDIT:
@ jinchuuriki hunter: That's a very interesting character you have there. It sort of reminds me of Sakon and Ukon a bit. How they each still have their own element is cool. Can't really find much of a flaw with it, maybe you could breakup the bio a little bit to make it easier to read but that about it. It would be kind of awesome to watch him/her to fight. One thing, how quick is the change between the 'faces' because if it is fast then sure watching the battle would be cool but if it's slow then it wouldn't be an effective battle strategy to change between them.

@Ninja_Nobody: High class as always, all of them. I think you could almost be dubbed the consistency king of the thread. Since you joined the thread you have be pumping out excellent characters very often and I think that deserves some recognition. I don't remember anyone that has done this to the same extent that you have. So bravo mate, bravo. Cheers to you and your imagination.

[jinchuuruki hunter]

Thanks keikan

And the change between one another in battle is instint its one of the reasons why there so stong, as between each other so they could ultimately almost combine there jutsus if they wished