SOTM 2010 - February (Hatsune Miku!) - Entry Thread

[escimo]

Originally Posted by Cats

Looks good/cute to me. What's exactly odd about it?

Don't really know, what's odd about it just something is bothering me. Tried to tweak it a bit.

Originally Posted by JRendell

Looking very nice. Maybe blur/blend the orange cirlcles in the middle a bit more, as they are a tad distracting. Not too much though.

Yup. They do stand out. Not sure though whether that's a bad or a good thing. Luckily I have a week or so to figure it out.

Originally Posted by vandakiara

Comparing it to your signature, she looks tanned
I really like it but for some reason I prefer your current sig, because of the colours and all x)

Yup made some tweaks to it.

So here's the second draft.

[Riker]

Thanks for all the feedback.

Final Entry




/hits Spoonie with a taser. Where's your entry!

[felix]

^ the bevel effect on the shock-wave doesn't look good. I can see sound changing air's properties so as to produce a different kind of light but makign it bend air is just weird.

[Riker]

Originally Posted by Cats

^ the bevel effect on the shock-wave doesn't look good. I can see sound changing air's properties so as to produce a different kind of light but makign it bend air is just weird.

Yeah, I thought it would look cool before I worked on it. :(

Let's see if I can ninja edit before closing date.

[Mekdra]

hi hi i entry it is signature

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Mekdra

hi hi i entry it is signature

Nice entry only problem is its 165x tall, the max height a sig can be is 160x according to the forum and sig entry rules.

[ganbaru]

@ escimo I prefer your second version. And I don'T know what but yes her face feel somehow strange.
@Mekdra beside the height ( 5 pixels too high) you could maybe rework the second part of the text.

[felix]

Originally Posted by Mekdra

hi hi i entry it is signature

The signature is 5px too big (somehow I see the border as the cause ). Also, you must write "Final Entry" in your post for it to officially enter the contest, or otherwise pm it to Solance, as per first post.

Oh and it looks great to me, good job.

[Kana Futayo]

Originally Posted by Riker

/hits Spoonie with a taser. Where's your entry!

Urk! I'm still thinking of what animation to use.

[Solace]

First attempts this month-

v1


v2

[katiemirmo]

@ Solace - I like V2 more. Miku looks so magnificent.

[felix]

@ Solace - I like V1 more. Miku looks so awsum.

[escimo]

Final Entry

[Mr.Kurosaki]

Need C&C about this one

[ganbaru]

Solace I would go with V! but I would add some star
Mr Kurosaki I am not really a fan of the kind of font used for SOTM february

[katiemirmo]

Mr Kurosaki - I'm not a fan of the Dark Lights from below. I like the idea of Techno Miku (since I've done that a thousand of times with her..lol.)

[JRendell]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kurosaki

Need C&C about this one

It's not an issue directly with the font for 'Sotm February', just it's size and the way it is displayed. I don't think changing the perspective of it is a good look. Maybe a smaller font than 'Hatsune Miku'?

Personal thoughts however/

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Mekdra

hi hi i entry it is signature

It's a good sig with good efects but it's over the AS limits in term of size: (Maximum is 500 x 160)

Originally Posted by Solace

First attempts this month-

v1


v2

I would go with V2, V1 gives the feeling of too much empty space.

Originally Posted by Mr.Kurosaki

Need C&C about this one

Hmmmm... too many lights efects over Miku, she looks a bit blurry too.

[Mekdra]

hi hi

Originally Posted by Cats

The signature is 5px too big (somehow I see the border as the cause ). Also, you must write "Final Entry" in your post for it to officially enter the contest, or otherwise pm it to Solance, as per first post.

Oh and it looks great to me, good job.

ohhh mengo mengo here repair in order

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Solace

First attempts this month-

v1


v2

I love how she looks but for some reason she doesnt look as blended into the background. Maybe cuz her hair looks so light against the dark bg, I dunoo XD I like v2 better.