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demino_hellsin · 2013-11-15, 07:58

Like I said, motif will change for each wild core. What they all have in common is that they resemble IS. For example, the basic form is pure white, but it resembles bits of a knight and a ninja.

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 08:01

Only one suggestion: Modified the name of famous Ninja/Cowboy/... In history.

HasuMasu · 2013-11-15, 08:48

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

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Stuck in fic again. This is becoming uncomfortable. Anybody have any smart ideas on how to catch Autumn before she infiltrates IS Academy in ep 3-4? I am stuck and I don't want it to sound like a random chance encounter, either.

What if she's spotted right before she initiates contact with Ichika?

It'll still be a chance encounter, but not so random.

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 08:50

Also, I wonder how much Izuru got from IS?

And doesn't Cecilia is quite similar to Houki? One wants a Knight, another is a Samurai. Different but the Same. Rejected by their past, their inhertance, their dreams. They made quite a good duo, do you think so?

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-15, 08:51

*looks through doujins* apparently they have two of the biggest pair too.

Anyway I don't think that should be the name. I think it should be something else.

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 08:59

How about Z, X, W,...?

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 10:21

Or you could just use my signature.

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-15, 10:28

Wondering If I should use Japanese mythology but it feels overdone.

wavehawk · 2013-11-15, 16:43

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Originally Posted by Masuzu

What if she's spotted right before she initiates contact with Ichika?

It'll still be a chance encounter, but not so random.

- Too close to the actual part. I'm thinking the day before. Autumn being Autumn would probably make a minor slip that only one sharp-eyed person will notice. Thing is, trying to make it work still comes out as contrived, which is the whole problem. As I said, the core of this fice is pretty much compelte, it's all these plot holes I'm trying to work out and reasonably explain that gives me so much of the @#$ts.

The other thing is that I'm trying to keep the "every action has its consequences" theme carrying over from my first chapter. Butterfly effect on a small scale. Bonus points since M's Silent Zephyrs looks like a butterfly--no, M won't have a huge role to play in this chapter, but she might in the next one...

Also, because I'm SURE everyone's thought of it already...this girl. in IS.

Tempest35 · 2013-11-15, 17:43

@ wavehawk

From what I saw, her alias of Reiko Blahblahblah was one of a corporate sales rep. One can just have a 'No Sales Reps' policy in effect for the school festival. She is 'caught' trying to pitch a sale to Ichika and she's rounded up at the cafe. Nothing else to be had.

For poops n fiddles, can turn Chifuyu's brocon radar to MAX and have her be the one to 'catch' Autumn in the act of making a Sales pitch. Needless to say, I was actually hoping that would have been thrown in but hey... 3.3

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 18:35

Have been thinking this about Paradise Lost: Normally, Ichika shares a bed with Madoka, but then one day he woke up and see Laura on another side. Words were exchanged, and the Laura finally called him "Aniki".

Instead of 1 Yandere Imouto, we would have 2 Yandere Imouto. Isn't that great!

blitz1/2 · 2013-11-15, 18:38

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Have been thinking this about Paradise Lost: Normally, Ichika shares a bed with Madoka, but then one day he woke up and see Laura on another side. Words were exchanged, and the Laura finally called him "Aniki".

Instead of 1 Yandere Imouto, we would have 2 Yandere Imouto. Isn't that great!

Nope, change that. Laura shouldn't be there. Madoka should be on one side and CHIFUYU should be on the other.

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 19:04

But Chifuyu has already became White Knight's A.I! Beside, sooner or latter, I would make her come for Ichika. Duo-personality Madoka?

Tempest35 · 2013-11-15, 22:39

Y'know, listening to 'Two Steps From Hell' is making me want to write something EPIC!!! Right now, I'm imagining Icchan's training montage in time to 'Birth of A Hero'.

StratoSpear · 2013-11-15, 23:12

Immediate Music (or I think that's what they're called) tend to be ideal for motivation, look up John Dreamer or X Ray Dog if you have the time.

Myself, can't stop watching this part of GSD. Supposedly it's going to be the kind of rampage that Tsurugi and Kirin goes on about while Inami's still in coma.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-11-16, 00:22

Indeed, epic music = TRANS ARM

Forget about inserting lyrics to the fic though, that's one of the numerous sign of bad writing.

(Quoting a line or two, context related, is okay)

Fireminer · 2013-11-16, 01:03

I always thinking of this song for every of the final battle: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Om2Oodv...%3DOm2OodvDJ-M.

And what is your?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-11-16, 01:15

Actually, I tend to prefer the contrast and use a lullaby for such climatic moment. I.S., Gundam, etc tend to use this trick as well.

A scene so epic it broke the scale and inverted down into serenity, and after the long, grueling and exhausting battle, comes peace and understanding.

Fireminer · 2013-11-16, 01:20

Then where is the Climax music?

Status of your fics?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-11-16, 01:30

The climax music is during the take off scene and first half of battle. But for the most part, they're just extended session of the OP song.

Such as this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kLzd0zhrb8

Not updated, definitely.

2013-11-15, 17:43	Link #48410
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	@ wavehawk From what I saw, her alias of Reiko Blahblahblah was one of a corporate sales rep. One can just have a 'No Sales Reps' policy in effect for the school festival. She is 'caught' trying to pitch a sale to Ichika and she's rounded up at the cafe. Nothing else to be had. For poops n fiddles, can turn Chifuyu's brocon radar to MAX and have her be the one to 'catch' Autumn in the act of making a Sales pitch. Needless to say, I was actually hoping that would have been thrown in but hey... 3.3 __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-11-15, 22:39	Link #48414
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Y'know, listening to 'Two Steps From Hell' is making me want to write something EPIC!!! Right now, I'm imagining Icchan's training montage in time to 'Birth of A Hero'. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-11-15, 23:12	Link #48415
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Immediate Music (or I think that's what they're called) tend to be ideal for motivation, look up John Dreamer or X Ray Dog if you have the time. Myself, can't stop watching this part of GSD. Supposedly it's going to be the kind of rampage that Tsurugi and Kirin goes on about while Inami's still in coma. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2013-11-16, 00:22	Link #48416
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Indeed, epic music = TRANS ARM Forget about inserting lyrics to the fic though, that's one of the numerous sign of bad writing. (Quoting a line or two, context related, is okay) __________________

2013-11-16, 01:15	Link #48418
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Actually, I tend to prefer the contrast and use a lullaby for such climatic moment. I.S., Gundam, etc tend to use this trick as well. A scene so epic it broke the scale and inverted down into serenity, and after the long, grueling and exhausting battle, comes peace and understanding. __________________

2013-11-15, 07:58	Link #48401
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Like I said, motif will change for each wild core. What they all have in common is that they resemble IS. For example, the basic form is pure white, but it resembles bits of a knight and a ninja.

2013-11-15, 08:01	Link #48402
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Only one suggestion: Modified the name of famous Ninja/Cowboy/... In history.

2013-11-15, 08:50	Link #48404
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Also, I wonder how much Izuru got from IS? And doesn't Cecilia is quite similar to Houki? One wants a Knight, another is a Samurai. Different but the Same. Rejected by their past, their inhertance, their dreams. They made quite a good duo, do you think so?

2013-11-15, 08:51	Link #48405
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	looks through doujins apparently they have two of the biggest pair too. Anyway I don't think that should be the name. I think it should be something else.

2013-11-15, 08:59	Link #48406
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	How about Z, X, W,...?

2013-11-15, 10:21	Link #48407
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Or you could just use my signature.

2013-11-15, 10:28	Link #48408
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Wondering If I should use Japanese mythology but it feels overdone.

2013-11-15, 18:35	Link #48411
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Have been thinking this about Paradise Lost: Normally, Ichika shares a bed with Madoka, but then one day he woke up and see Laura on another side. Words were exchanged, and the Laura finally called him "Aniki". Instead of 1 Yandere Imouto, we would have 2 Yandere Imouto. Isn't that great!

2013-11-15, 19:04	Link #48413
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	But Chifuyu has already became White Knight's A.I! Beside, sooner or latter, I would make her come for Ichika. Duo-personality Madoka?

2013-11-16, 01:03	Link #48417
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	I always thinking of this song for every of the final battle: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Om2Oodv...%3DOm2OodvDJ-M. And what is your?

2013-11-16, 01:20	Link #48419
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Then where is the Climax music? Status of your fics?

2013-11-16, 01:30	Link #48420
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	The climax music is during the take off scene and first half of battle. But for the most part, they're just extended session of the OP song. Such as this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kLzd0zhrb8 Not updated, definitely. __________________