Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Melodius Trueheart

What are the rules for using already established OCs in one's own storylines? Do I have to directly ask that OCs owner, or what (i.e if I have to use Kha and Keroko, do I have to ask...Kha and Keroko?)

Depends. Some OC's are free to use, while others, most often main characters, need some clarification from their respective owners. As long as you get the basics of the character right, we don't mind at all

Originally Posted by Melodius Trueheart

What *does* "hotbloodedness" mean anyway? Same with "bluecheesium"? I'm not sure, and i'm not sure *either* of them sound too good.

Smith: What is Hotblood?
Wesson: Hotblood is PASSION!
Smith: Hotblood is LOVE!!
Wesson: Hotblood is BURNING FIERY EMOTIONS running through your veins like liquid fire!!!
Smith: It is the BLAZING ESSENCE of the COURAGEOUS SOUL!!!!
Wesson: RAGING FURY!!!!!
Smith: ROARING POWER!!!!!!

Both: A True Man's ERUPTING SPIRIT!!!!!!

*ehem*

As for Bluecheesium, that would refer to any MASSIVE amount of content here, typically filled with much CRACK

Originally Posted by Keroko

Heh, tables turn quickly here. I meant this Ruri.

Aaah

Originally Posted by Keroko

I meant source anime/game/manga

Super Robot Wars Judgement

Originally Posted by Keroko

Hmmm, ideas for Keroko's enforcer days. A mission to an unadministered planet that has shown signs of developing dimensional travelling technology, but when she arived...

The Seven Hour War had begun?

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

His influence? I think I'm already half corrupted before I joined this thread anyway.

You got it all wrong...

In Nanoha OC
Chaos corrupts You

*runs*

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Huh? Skimpy barrier jacket is skimpy!

Motivated! To rebuilt my OCs myself. Or rather, I really just need a bunch of tweaks here and there.

That's not their Barrier jackets per se, they're barrier jacket underwear... they wear their default barrier jackets over those

And OC rebuilds? Need to see this

Originally Posted by Saint X

awwww

I suddenly feel the need for milk

Originally Posted by Saint X

No... something much worse... much worse...

Originally Posted by Saint X

*sees giant sword falling from the sky after porting said Claw Man*

*Dann lands*

HEY, WATCH WE'RE YOU'RE AIMING THAT THING! ()

Originally Posted by Saint X

we can always go on a treasure hunt~

*opens secret little door on the base of the Statue of Mary*

Originally Posted by Saint X

*sees some running away from Akira*

Oh will they now? Wait till they see pics of her with ponyt-

*radio static*

Originally Posted by Saint X

The first time i read Ruri without clicking on Keroko's link was Ruriko Ikusawa...



*runs from invaders, General Machine, Count Devil and the Black Gate Robot*

GATE OPEN!!!!!

*vanquishes Machine Empire*

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Eh?

The only one I ever mistook a gender mistake of was PF. His post about Leona had me thinking from the start he was a girl.

Though I'm starting to not able to shake the impression of Keroko being female lately.


"Wait. Is he a guy or a girl? Oh yeah ."

*later that day*

"Which sex is Keroko again ?"


And repeat everyday and you'll see why I'm confused.

Aaah the side effects of internet anonymity

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *mumbles something* Urataros! Henshin!

Rod Form

*back flips in the air and lands safely on the ground*

Ryotaros: Well, that was unexpected.

Mayura: WOW

*poses in fighting stance, then signals for Ryotaro to come ala Neo*

I'd like to have this dance

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

As well as grope her knights anytime she wants...

*runs*

and without objection

*runs*

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Yuuko: There may be instances where people you knew in your world will be living completely different lives in other worlds...You might even meet people who look exactly the same , time after time, on different worlds.

Speaking of which, I'm surprised Saint X hasn't ported her in yet

Originally Posted by Kagerou

...the Super Sentai Harem?

*runs*

C'mon Aurion, you have nothing to lose... right?

*runs*

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Not quite Zerg, though much of how they act/what they do is based off of the Swarm. Instead, I took the Zerg and spliced them together with the Flood, and made my own creation with its own history, the Spawn.

Aaaah

What's the Flood?

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Emili: *patpat* "It's okay. I seem to attract all sorts of perverts. It's because of this damn outfit."
Leena: "Emili-chaaan~"
Emili: "...*hides behind Keroko-chan*"

Originally Posted by Saint X

Only 1 reaction: She needs to learn Kanka...

*Asks Kyla for details*

Nah, I have better plans for Mayura than that

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Not quite Zerg, though much of how they act/what they do is based off of the Swarm. Instead, I took the Zerg and spliced them together with the Flood, and made my own creation with its own history, the Spawn.

Intriguing...

Originally Posted by Kagerou

[deadpan] "Evil beware, we have waffles cookies." [/deadpan]

And lots, and lots of crack

Originally Posted by Kagerou

so does mean that "Everyone is gay for Bridget Keroko-kun?"

*runs*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And after some delays, finally starting off PROFILE TIME

for the second of the Belkarangers, the Honest Heart, and Ebony Justice, Mayura Lee Labatt

Here's Part I: History

Spoiler for Chronicles of the Roaring Fist:

*flexes fingers*

"Right Glock, let's get this over with."

"Same guidelines as last time Kay."

"Of course! Who the hell do you think I am?"

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Name: Mayura Lee Labatt
Alias:
- KuroBlack
- BelkaBlack
- KiiYellow
- BelkaYellow
- “Kokou wa Awarashi” (Noble Eagle)
- Honest Heart
- Ebony Justice
Gender: Female
Age: 23 (as of MC0075)
Origin World: Cranagan, Midchilda
Birthdate: April 8, MC Year 0052
Height: 5” 5’
Weight: 112 lbs
Complexion: fair
Eye color: hazelnut brown
Hair color: Blonde

Theme Song: Just Feel It ~ Ashita No Tameni (For Tomorrow)

Spoiler for ID Image:

23-year-old Mayura Lee Labatt

History:

Amongst the three Belkarangers, Mayura was the only one not born into the bloodline of wealth and luxury. She was born Mayura Lee, youngest of three siblings, and only female of the Haken Lee Dojo of Martial Combat in Cranagan. Their parents had died in a power-related struggle that had left the dojo in near ruins, and left to fend for themselves it was up to her elder brothers Garrod and Falken to restore and continue the family tradition. Without the restrictions that their conservative parents might’ve otherwise imposed on her as a female, Mayura was extensively taught the family arts by her brothers at a very young age, excelling in the ways of the ‘Gaoleon’ style of hand-to-hand combat by 6 years of age.

The turning point in her life came at age 7, when their most hated rivals, the Ark Chen School, challenged them yet again to a match for their dojo’s name. Hoping for an easy victory with their underhanded methods, the Ark’s best mage fighter, Rio, had asked specifically for Mayura to represent the Lee’s in direct combat.

In an astounding moment that would shock her brothers and the Arks, the young Mayura managed to utterly own the taller and more powerful Rio in combat, using her own magic-enhanced fighting style. The defeated Arks could not take this overwhelmingly embarrassing defeat of their best adult fighter at the hands of a child, and in a fit had their minions proceed to have the Dojo burned and the Lees killed. Despite their best efforts the Lees could not overcome their enemy’s superior numbers, weapons and dirty tricks, and as the siblings lay exhausted and beaten they could only watch their Dojo razed to the ground. It was when all hope seemed lost for the Lees that salvation arrived, and it came in force with the mass of police sirens that accompanied Mr. Mason Labatt, head of Labatt Enterprises, and one of the most influential people in Midchilda. After months of surveillance the Arks were finally caught in the act, and were thus rounded up to face justice, including their leader Rio.

With the Haken Lee dojo gone, Mr. Labatt offered to take in the tired and battered children, because in his words “so he can clear his immeasurable debt”.

The Lees were thus adopted, which was a blessing to the long childless Labatts, as they now had legal heirs to their decades old family business. The now Labatt siblings would now be indoctrinated in the ways and responsibilities of the upper class elite, groomed in the decorum of luxury, a world once alien to them. Fortunately the siblings were still allowed to continue their Haken Lee martial arts tradition, but with the elder brothers having less and less time in practicing their art and dedicating themselves more to upholding the Labatt business it was left to Mayura to shoulder the burden.

For a while, the weight of this responsibility at such a young age, coupled with the isolation of being the only female around nearly left Mayura in despair… until the day Mayura met a bored Asagi Colwell at cocktail party, and casually started a conversation about the martial arts and fighting. This would be the simple start of an inseperable friendship between the both of them, and only a year later up her return from a family vacation on the 97th Administered World, Mayura would be responsible for introducing Asagi to what would later become their shared passion, and the latter’s obsession: Super Sentai.

And it was this passion that would lead to the two of them joining the TSAB Academy a few years later along with their new friend Julie Liu Ming to put their collective combat knowledge into good use. Like Asagi and Julie, Mayura would train as a Midchilda-type Mage for their first two years as cadets, before they were enlisted into the experimental class of 0061-Q, with their superior’s realization that their skills as close combat fighters would be better honed and utilized in the emerging style of Neo-Belka. As one of the newly formed Belkarangers, codenamed BelkaYellow, Mayura displayed her impressive talent in unarmed martial combat, besting many of the cadets in hand-to-hand, and getting the personal approval and praise of instructor Quint Nakajima, whom Mayura had fought to a standstill in duels.

Graduating from the Academy with flying colors, Mayura served with Asagi and Julie in their assignment in the 79th Army Battalion under Hiram Maxim. It was while serving with the 79th that the Belkarangers would meet one of the most influential people in their lives: Private Shinobu Nakajima.

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"Did you say something Glock?"

"... no, it's..."

"It's what?"

"... just remembered something strange that's all..."

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As one of the rare TSAB servicemen to practice hand-to-hand combat, Mayura easily found a common bond with the young and fiery Nakajima, becoming an honorary Belkaranger dubbed “BelkaBlack” who always went along on any mission assignments the girls would find themselves in for the rest of their time in the bureau. As sparring partners in martial arts the two complemented each other well, and Mayura found a sympathetic soul in Shinobu, who only too well understood the ordeal the young Lee had once undergone, and knew best how to lift the girl’s spirits from the burden of responsibility for her entire dojo.

Thus the news of Shinobu’s untimely death at the hands of a Lost Logia only weeks after the Belkaranger’s retirement devastated the trio, Mayura being the hardest hit of them all. Her grief was only quelled by Asagi’s creation of the Search Guard Successor Foundation with the intention of preventing a similar tragedy from happening again. And so as Asagi founded their current organization in memory of their fallen friend, so did Mayura honor her beloved friend by adopting Shinobu’s colors as her own, as The Ebony Justice BelkaBlack.

Currently Mayura is still serving with Asagi and Julie in search of their “Precious”, all the while continuing to uphold the family arts by teaching a new generation of young warriors in the way of the roaring fist.

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"You can always leave this to me, if it's alright with you."

"No, it's fine..."

Yay for profile!! Can't wait for more (or her Kamen Rider obsession origin )

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mayura: WOW

*poses in fighting stance, then signals for Ryotaro to come ala Neo*

I'd like to have this dance

Ryotaro: *starts to casually walk over while assembling Rod Form DenGasher* Hmm...I wonder who's stringing who along here.

*charges forward, weapon in hand*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Aaaah

What's the Flood?

Parasitic creatures that take over organic lifeforms in order to feed and spawn, from the Halo series.

The Flood

[krisslanza]

Hmmm so about 3 hours until I leave... Wonder if I could think up some kind of OC-related short to write about V Day in that time...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Yay for profile!! Can't wait for more (or her Kamen Rider obsession origin )

Don't worry, that's coming up soon

Originally Posted by Evangelion

Ryotaro: *starts to casually walk over while assembling Rod Form DenGasher* Hmm...I wonder who's stringing who along here.

*charges forward, weapon in hand*

Mayura: I wouldn't mind you stringing me along pretty boy

*hits both fists together*

Iza Shoubu da!!!

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Parasitic creatures that take over organic lifeforms in order to feed and spawn, from the Halo series.

The Flood

Aah

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Hmmm so about 3 hours until I leave... Wonder if I could think up some kind of OC-related short to write about V Day in that time...

If you can Don't force yourself though

[krisslanza]

Well its always POSSIBLE. I typed up a 500 word essay in like 10 minutes... The problem is I just need a IDEA.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Well its always POSSIBLE. I typed up a 500 word essay in like 10 minutes... The problem is I just need a IDEA.

Exactly. Writing without at least an idea will get you nowhere

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mayura: I wouldn't mind you stringing me along pretty boy

*hits both fists together*

Iza Shoubu da!!!

Ryotaro: *charges at full speed and uses the rod to pole vault over Mayura at the last moment, landing behind her* Sounds like a date to me.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Exactly. Writing without at least an idea will get you nowhere

Very true. It all starts out with the idea, much like a tree comes from a seed

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *charges at full speed and uses the rod to pole vault over Mayura at the last moment, landing behind her* Sounds like a date to me.

Mayura: *bends over forward, stands with her hands and clutches Ryotaro's waist in between her legs before launching into a somersault, slamming him into the ground as she pins him down with her knee*

Only if you pay

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Very true. It all starts out with the idea, much like a tree comes from a seed

Sounds very much like how much of OC's Crack is produced

[krisslanza]

Hmmm... I think I might have an idea. This gives me an excuse to practice out a OC I made up XD (Not as important as Rune. There are a LOT of OCs in Arc-en-Ciel since I have to make up so many people... XD)

Maybe I'll type it up in time... If not... Maybe by Tuesday (College closed Monday, President's Day)

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mayura: *bends over forward, stands with her hands and clutches Ryotaro's waist in between her legs before launching into a somersault, slamming him into the ground as she pins him down with her knee*

Only if you pay

Ryotaro: *chuckles* What kind of gentleman would I be if I didn't?

*With the DenGasher in his right hand, he gives it a sharp flick with his wrist. The tip separates, revealing a line hidden in the shaft. It swings around and binds Mayura's arms to her sides*

Ryotaro: Now this is an interesting situation...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Sounds very much like how much of OC's Crack is produced

Except our crack is produced in EPIC quantities

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Hmmm... I think I might have an idea. This gives me an excuse to practice out a OC I made up XD (Not as important as Rune. There are a LOT of OCs in Arc-en-Ciel since I have to make up so many people... XD)

Maybe I'll type it up in time... If not... Maybe by Tuesday (College closed Monday, President's Day)

Just go for it then

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *chuckles* What kind of gentleman would I be if I didn't?

*With the DenGasher in his right hand, he gives it a sharp flick with his wrist. The tip separates, revealing a line hidden in the shaft. It swings around and binds Mayura's arms to her sides*

Ryotaro: Now this is an interesting situation...

Mayura: *spreads her legs to Ryotaro's side so she can stand up*

Hold on, I think we're a bit too early for that stage...

*With a swift waist bend she smashes her forehead unto Ryotaro's, then purposefully dislocates her clavicle to free herself from the bind*

I like to take it... nice and slow

*resets her shoulder with a crack*

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Except our crack is produced in EPIC quantities

*watches factories pouring out potent Kha/Nighty brand CRACK*

EPIC quantities of EPIC quality crack no less

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mayura: *spreads her legs to Ryotaro's side so she can stand up*

Hold on, I think we're a bit too early for that stage...

*With a swift waist bend she smashes her forehead unto Ryotaro's, then purposefully dislocates her clavicle to free herself from the bind*

I like to take it... nice and slow

*resets her shoulder with a crack*

Ryotaro: *whistles* I respect that in a woman. Though doesn't that hurt a bit?

*Presses the yellow button on the Terminal Buckle and swipes the Pass he managed to pull free*

Axe Form

*With his new armor and enhanced strength, he wraps his arm around Mayura's waist and pushes quickly, allowing him to roll in the same direction and swing to his feet, the girl now held under his arm by her waist*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*watches factories pouring out potent Kha/Nighty brand CRACK*

EPIC quantities of EPIC quality crack no less

*looks* Guess you can never have enough crack, huh?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *whistles* I respect that in a woman. Though doesn't that hurt a bit?

*Presses the yellow button on the Terminal Buckle and swipes the Pass he managed to pull free*

Axe Form

*With his new armor and enhanced strength, he wraps his arm around Mayura's waist and pushes quickly, allowing him to roll in the same direction and swing to his feet, the girl now held under his arm by her waist*

Mayura: You'd be surprised at how many bricks this head has smashed...

*nimbly bends legs backwards, securing them on Ryotaro's shoulders, then slinks herself free from his arm then raising her torso upward, finally sitting on his shoulder and resting her hands on his head between her legs*

Nice view

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

*looks* Guess you can never have enough crack, huh?

Too much crack is never enough

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mayura: You'd be surprised at how many bricks this head has smashed...

*nimbly bends legs backwards, securing them on Ryotaro's shoulders, then slinks herself free from his arm then raising her torso upward, finally sitting on his shoulder and resting her hands on his head between her legs*

Nice view

Ryotaro: *chuckles* Glad you like it.

*Lightly holds Mayura's legs to keep her from falling as he walks forward*

Ryotaro: So...how do you get out of here, where ever here may be, anyway?

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Just cause this is such an awesome song :3

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Well, I'll be gone for the weekend staffing an anime convention. Still debating if this promotion to Head of Registration is a good thing or bad thing

[AdmiralTigerclaw]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *chuckles* Glad you like it.

*Lightly holds Mayura's legs to keep her from falling as he walks forward*

Ryotaro: So...how do you get out of here, where ever here may be, anyway?

:

I personally vote for demolitions...

*Starts rummaging through a backpack filled with various explosives.*

"Eh... TNT, C4, Composition B... Cyclotrimethelynetrinitramine... bottle of extra strength Tobasco sauce... ACME Roman Candles... Don't NOBODY light a match! Don't let Crash NEAR anything that ignites!"

[LoweGear]

For some reason I find this chapter wierd, even for my style of writing.

Nonetheless, here's the 2nd Update to Mayura Labatt's profile -

Part II: Personality

Spoiler for length:

Personality:

In between the explosively dynamic Asagi and Julie’s multiple personalities, Mayura can be considered the most… normal of the Belkaranger trio, though even she isn’t free from some quirks…

To many people, Mayura is the Labatt’s pride and joy, a shining example of the grace and elegance that all Labatt females seem to possess. With impeccable decorum and a gentle yet proud aura she never fails to catch the eyes and respect of many a male (or female) onlooker. But beneath her soft smiles is a person who has weathered the odds to arrive at where she is today.

As one who was raised in and has experienced the two opposing spectrums of socio-economic class, Mayura is a girl who knows and appreciates the meaning of contentment: to accept good graces gratefully, and yet never asking more than what she feels she requires. Balance is Mayura’s principle in life, making sure never to let any one aspect dominate over another, to let everything settle in their natural order in harmony, and to give equally to what is taken.

Her years of exhaustive training with her brothers in the Haken Lee dojo has given her incredible mental and physical discipline, the restraint to act only when needed, and to block out all unnecessary distractions and noise from her mind. Where Asagi’s singlemindedness stems from her obsession and stubbornness, Mayura’s comes from her stern determination to see the task accomplished at all cost, steeled by the incredible patience built from her years trying to hold together the bonds between her brothers, and now her friends.

Critical and logical thinking are her best mental friends, along with a head that rarely looses its cool, mostly calm, and often collected, her most favored weapons in dealing with any crises. This tranquility of mind paradoxically comes from a burning passion within her to achieve perfection, and it is this passion that drives her to perform her best in all things.

It doesn’t mean Mayura can’t let loose, and at times she can let the martial artist inside rest and just let the girl have fun. As a daughter of Labatt, Mayura is encouraged to indulge in fun and pleasure, and often this means lots of playful teasing and jabs at her friends… if they’re not up to something incredulously impossible again, in which case she steps up with her elder sister authority and hands out any much needed correction. When not with her friends or left to herself, Mayura indulges herself in her unconditional love of animals, especially with her favorite pet cats, and strangely enough beetles.

Only a few things can break through Mayura’s rock solid defenses, and much like Super Sentai is to Asagi, Mayura’s emotions are released at full force by the tokusatsu series known as Kamen Rider, as series she went to love due to its emphasis on martial combat (and beetle motifs). No matter how much she tries to restrain herself, her insane love for anything and everything Kamen Rider will most always override her conscious thought. Thankfully she can regain control of herself before she does too much collateral damage, unlike Asagi or Julie…

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"Reminds me of the train she destroyed that one time with a Rider Kick..."

"Could've been worse... much worse..."

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Like Asagi though, Super Sentai has left a big impression on Mayura, most specifically the 2007 title “Jyuuken Sentai Gekiranger”, whose story about the power struggles between martial arts schools is a constant reminder of her own experience against the Ark Chen school (and it didn’t help that the main villain was also named Rio…), and further reinforcement to temper her will to succeed.

And on the negative side, the same martial arts that gave Mayura her strengths are also her weakness, as her love and pride for her art is such that anyone that she cannot turn a blind eye to those who dare to sully or challenge their name, and the smallest insult for her family’s tradition can, and had rattled her enough to anger. At times, that very tradition is the very cause of her sadness and stress, as the only one of the Lee siblings entrusted with carrying on their intangible family legacy the weight can sometimes be too much to bear alone. And as proud as she is, she often keeps such matters regarding her personal life to her own, a move which oftentimes reveals her still fragile inner-self.

Which is why she’ll be forever thankful to Asagi’s explosive optimism and Julie’s sage advice to counteract her doubts and fears, and understand her unique plight amongst the sisters. No wonder that when all the corrections are said and done, she resigns herself to the whim of her two beloved sisters who are always up to more insane antics and tricks.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

If Kha's verson is indeed mostly paralel to mine, then yes we will. We've compared him to Takahata too often not to do so. I was thinking sience or math teacher, what about you?

Er... I'm a little too overloaded to bother with that AU for now... So feel free to run wild with RH. Rebuilt is killing me.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Again. Yes. She's somewhat of a bug magnet (Zerg, Scrin, Tyranids)

Keroko-chan: Why am I a bug magnet!?

Coincidentally, in her last fight with the Tyranids she also suffered heavy injuries.

I do hope she is still receptive of Xealot the friendly Tyrannid.

Originally Posted by Keroko

.... That scarilly computes.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Right, right, just don't let it get beyond crack.

Yeah.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Just let go of any crack that doesn't make sense. You'd be surprised how much that makes a difference.

Unfortunately, my mental circuits are so lined with crack I sometimes mistake fanon for canon, and that's where screwups happen. That's why I need to run my ideas by you guys first for moderation.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Episode 23.

Oh I interpreted that sheepish laugh as "Oh dear I got found out!" rather than "Huh? What? Really?".

Originally Posted by Keroko

The problem is Fate having them, and executing them exactly thus.

Dropped.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Amelia Wil Tesla Seyruun, a hero obsessed girl who often climbs high places in order to make 'heroic entrees'

...oh.

I just wanted to add gravity to it. And I even have a crackier application: Doing a Saturn Swing, the kind that space craft use to gain momentum by swinging around a planet to gain escape velocity, before launching off at insane speed.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I always prefer to think that they combined the need for both of them to recover (Lutecia was tampered with, and Megane needed to recover for obvious reasons) and examine them.

Funny thing though, why would they send Lutecia to an, according to Yesy, uninhabited planet for examination and care? Either way, this does not make sense, so I'm willing to call translation flaw (or Seven Arcs) on this one.

I dunno either, but for Rebuilt I'm combining ideas.

So I'll be going with an agricultural Core World that Kia, Megane, Quint, Lutecia, Erio, Caro and later the Numbers will live on for now due to the lack of magical pollution until their bodies recover, and also gives them a chance to be examined.

Thoughts?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!!!:eyesp in:

Exploded.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Do a Kyousuke Nanbu instead.
The names are also more computable now.

I wanted to, but I wish I still got SRWOG to reference to get it right. President deleted it as it was licenced.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Shizure and Otome Natsuki... feels a little weird somehow...

Sette-Tre dynamic imo should be closer to... say, Kalinin/Sousuke. After all, I can just imagine Sette going... "Sousuke".

Spoiler:

"That's a condom." said Tre.

"... Unable to understand why there's a need for normal healthy young people to posses this, though." Sette only said calmly, holding the condom pack without a single sense of embarrassment and shame.

"It's only for males. We don't need them."

"Really? I thought it was dual-gendered. As a matter of fact, I have used it many times."

Tre's seemed like they were about to pop. Before she could inquire, Sette continued...

"They can hold an entire liter of re-energizing fluids without loss of conduction energy. Far more effective than normal plastic and more compact than the geo-glass Doctor used."

Tre's jaws dropped, as she facepalmed.

"Is anything wrong, onee-sama?"

"I'm starting to think maybe becoming like Wendi or Cinque may not be so bad after all..."

Sette = Kha Sousuke? That computes well.

I'll use this then.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

It's not a translation flaw. It clearly states 'uninhabited world.' Besides, the sombre, negative nature of the prison-meeting of E/C and Lutecia kinda implied they were sent there not positively, since Lutecia said something along the lines of probably never meeting one another again... if I recall.

Besides, if it's done for good reasons, why the lack of any court-proceedings whatsoever? Why was Lutecia's punishment 'back-room' matters? Why the secrecy?

This is gonna be thought-provoking...

But do we aggree that Caro and Erio could very likely be on the same planet, which means "uninhabited" might just mean one giant planetary nature reserve?

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Not really, no, no surprisese. This ties in too dangerously with the whole Friendship of Muscles theme that the StrikerS Nano had Regius and Zest involved in. Also... I'm thinking his name is Gaiuss... after Gaiuss Tower in Ace Combat X, which is pronounced the same way...

I was inpried by the Friendship of Muscles. :3

But no overt obsession with detailed pecs for either party, for it'll just ruin the feel of the anime.

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Basically at the end of Alpha.... there may be TSAB Marines. May. Unless Franz manages to accomplish his 1-year old ambition and form USOC - Unified Special Operations Command. (Aka You Suck. *laughs*)

Basically, TSAB Army/AF as I see them is as follows:

Army #1: "We need air support! Where's the air force?"
Army #2: "Fuck the air force! We don't need them!" *pwnt*
Air Force #1: "Fuck you Army, we're taking our own sweet time in getting here; who cares about the Ground Forces?"

Marine Air and Ground is as follows:

Marine Ground: "This is Golf 3 Charlie, we need air support NOW! Is anyone in the neighbourhood?"
Marine FAC: "Stand by Golf 3 Charlie, we are routing your Air support and VTOL in now."
Marine Air: "Golf 3 Charlie, this is Hammer Flight, hang in there! We are on the way, eta five minutes! Semper fi Marines!"
Marine Ground: "Semper Fi! You kick their asses, ya hear?"
Marine Air: "I hear ya, brother! Oorah!"

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Aha.......... makes sense. Sort of.
Ah kk. Let's have the Infinite Library as a Charter on its own?

Let's! That way they can have their own Frames, and Yuuno as the Wild Bear of the Library.

Bear as in Bear Form.

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

....I prefer Otto as a reverse trap. <.<

Mental trip. That's what I meant.

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

...TSAB hiding their dirty skeletons, perhaps? Bureacrat coverup instinct? Thoughts that if Megane and Lutecia are off on an uninhabited planet it'd be easier to ravage them against their wills?

*dodges sniper fire from Lockon, Jenkinski, Master Chief, Ivanovich, and everyone in the OFM who has a scoped Battle Rifle*

*looks up and sees Emili brandishing a Rocket Launcher*

Oh shi-

Very likely, giving their penchant for bullcrap.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

..I do agree with Keroko for scary computation.

I'd worked for me for so damn long now.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Oh that. Fate went mental in the end right?

Yeah that one.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Didn't StrikerS end in 0076? Not counting the epilogue.

MC 0072 IIRC. Anyone else can confirm this?

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Actually, having a girlfriend who plays with you and bugs you about being on time for raids/complain about ganking is priceless

I guess we can dream, huh?

And no even better is when you come back and pwn the a$$ off the ganker and still get to score Rep with girlfriend!

For some people, that's a reality... like yours truely.

*runs*

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Yuuko: There may be instances where people you knew in your world will be living completely different lives in other worlds...You might even meet people who look exactly the same , time after time, on different worlds.

Oh hell yeah!

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Maybe Keroko should start carrying around cans of RAID

I've thus decided never to take her along to Heroic UBRS if it existed. The bug magnet might draw a Category Leeroy Whelpstorm.

*runs*

Originally Posted by Kagerou

snkkkt. Well it's not that it matters. If it gets too confusion, I'll start calling him Keroko-nyan just to confuse people more.

Got it! Keroko-nyan!

*runs*

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Not quite Zerg, though much of how they act/what they do is based off of the Swarm. Instead, I took the Zerg and spliced them together with the Flood, and made my own creation with its own history, the Spawn.

Oh no wonder I felt like it was something in between.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

...oohhhhh lawd, I never realized that they do sorta look alike.

Deshou ne?

Originally Posted by Kagerou

XD. Don't worry about Keroko-chan, she's not dead yet.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Depends on the person, really. I already explicitly stated my desire to use just about every OC conceived, so yeah .

Yeah I better hurry those Knights out, otherwise they're gonna miss a bit of alien action.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And after some delays, finally starting off PROFILE TIME

for the second of the Belkarangers, the Honest Heart, and Ebony Justice, Mayura Lee Labatt

Here's Part I: History

Spoiler for Chronicles of the Roaring Fist:

*flexes fingers*

"Right Glock, let's get this over with."

"Same guidelines as last time Kay."

"Of course! Who the hell do you think I am?"

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Name: Mayura Lee Labatt
Alias:
- KuroBlack
- BelkaBlack
- KiiYellow
- BelkaYellow
- “Kokou wa Awarashi” (Noble Eagle)
- Honest Heart
- Ebony Justice
Gender: Female
Age: 23 (as of MC0075)
Origin World: Cranagan, Midchilda
Birthdate: April 8, MC Year 0052
Height: 5” 5’
Weight: 112 lbs
Complexion: fair
Eye color: hazelnut brown
Hair color: Blonde

Theme Song: Just Feel It ~ Ashita No Tameni (For Tomorrow)

Spoiler for ID Image:

23-year-old Mayura Lee Labatt

History:

Amongst the three Belkarangers, Mayura was the only one not born into the bloodline of wealth and luxury. She was born Mayura Lee, youngest of three siblings, and only female of the Haken Lee Dojo of Martial Combat in Cranagan. Their parents had died in a power-related struggle that had left the dojo in near ruins, and left to fend for themselves it was up to her elder brothers Garrod and Falken to restore and continue the family tradition. Without the restrictions that their conservative parents might’ve otherwise imposed on her as a female, Mayura was extensively taught the family arts by her brothers at a very young age, excelling in the ways of the ‘Gaoleon’ style of hand-to-hand combat by 6 years of age.

The turning point in her life came at age 7, when their most hated rivals, the Ark Chen School, challenged them yet again to a match for their dojo’s name. Hoping for an easy victory with their underhanded methods, the Ark’s best mage fighter, Rio, had asked specifically for Mayura to represent the Lee’s in direct combat.

In an astounding moment that would shock her brothers and the Arks, the young Mayura managed to utterly own the taller and more powerful Rio in combat, using her own magic-enhanced fighting style. The defeated Arks could not take this overwhelmingly embarrassing defeat of their best adult fighter at the hands of a child, and in a fit had their minions proceed to have the Dojo burned and the Lees killed. Despite their best efforts the Lees could not overcome their enemy’s superior numbers, weapons and dirty tricks, and as the siblings lay exhausted and beaten they could only watch their Dojo razed to the ground. It was when all hope seemed lost for the Lees that salvation arrived, and it came in force with the mass of police sirens that accompanied Mr. Mason Labatt, head of Labatt Enterprises, and one of the most influential people in Midchilda. After months of surveillance the Arks were finally caught in the act, and were thus rounded up to face justice, including their leader Rio.

With the Haken Lee dojo gone, Mr. Labatt offered to take in the tired and battered children, because in his words “so he can clear his immeasurable debt”.

The Lees were thus adopted, which was a blessing to the long childless Labatts, as they now had legal heirs to their decades old family business. The now Labatt siblings would now be indoctrinated in the ways and responsibilities of the upper class elite, groomed in the decorum of luxury, a world once alien to them. Fortunately the siblings were still allowed to continue their Haken Lee martial arts tradition, but with the elder brothers having less and less time in practicing their art and dedicating themselves more to upholding the Labatt business it was left to Mayura to shoulder the burden.

For a while, the weight of this responsibility at such a young age, coupled with the isolation of being the only female around nearly left Mayura in despair… until the day Mayura met a bored Asagi Colwell at cocktail party, and casually started a conversation about the martial arts and fighting. This would be the simple start of an inseperable friendship between the both of them, and only a year later up her return from a family vacation on the 97th Administered World, Mayura would be responsible for introducing Asagi to what would later become their shared passion, and the latter’s obsession: Super Sentai.

And it was this passion that would lead to the two of them joining the TSAB Academy a few years later along with their new friend Julie Liu Ming to put their collective combat knowledge into good use. Like Asagi and Julie, Mayura would train as a Midchilda-type Mage for their first two years as cadets, before they were enlisted into the experimental class of 0061-Q, with their superior’s realization that their skills as close combat fighters would be better honed and utilized in the emerging style of Neo-Belka. As one of the newly formed Belkarangers, codenamed BelkaYellow, Mayura displayed her impressive talent in unarmed martial combat, besting many of the cadets in hand-to-hand, and getting the personal approval and praise of instructor Quint Nakajima, whom Mayura had fought to a standstill in duels.

Graduating from the Academy with flying colors, Mayura served with Asagi and Julie in their assignment in the 79th Army Battalion under Hiram Maxim. It was while serving with the 79th that the Belkarangers would meet one of the most influential people in their lives: Private Shinobu Nakajima.

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"Did you say something Glock?"

"... no, it's..."

"It's what?"

"... just remembered something strange that's all..."

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As one of the rare TSAB servicemen to practice hand-to-hand combat, Mayura easily found a common bond with the young and fiery Nakajima, becoming an honorary Belkaranger dubbed “BelkaBlack” who always went along on any mission assignments the girls would find themselves in for the rest of their time in the bureau. As sparring partners in martial arts the two complemented each other well, and Mayura found a sympathetic soul in Shinobu, who only too well understood the ordeal the young Lee had once undergone, and knew best how to lift the girl’s spirits from the burden of responsibility for her entire dojo.

Thus the news of Shinobu’s untimely death at the hands of a Lost Logia only weeks after the Belkaranger’s retirement devastated the trio, Mayura being the hardest hit of them all. Her grief was only quelled by Asagi’s creation of the Search Guard Successor Foundation with the intention of preventing a similar tragedy from happening again. And so as Asagi founded their current organization in memory of their fallen friend, so did Mayura honor her beloved friend by adopting Shinobu’s colors as her own, as The Ebony Justice BelkaBlack.

Currently Mayura is still serving with Asagi and Julie in search of their “Precious”, all the while continuing to uphold the family arts by teaching a new generation of young warriors in the way of the roaring fist.

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"You can always leave this to me, if it's alright with you."

"No, it's fine..."

Originally Posted by LoweGear

For some reason I find this chapter wierd, even for my style of writing.

Nonetheless, here's the 2nd Update to Mayura Labatt's profile -

Part II: Personality

Spoiler for length:

Personality:

In between the explosively dynamic Asagi and Julie’s multiple personalities, Mayura can be considered the most… normal of the Belkaranger trio, though even she isn’t free from some quirks…

To many people, Mayura is the Labatt’s pride and joy, a shining example of the grace and elegance that all Labatt females seem to possess. With impeccable decorum and a gentle yet proud aura she never fails to catch the eyes and respect of many a male (or female) onlooker. But beneath her soft smiles is a person who has weathered the odds to arrive at where she is today.

As one who was raised in and has experienced the two opposing spectrums of socio-economic class, Mayura is a girl who knows and appreciates the meaning of contentment: to accept good graces gratefully, and yet never asking more than what she feels she requires. Balance is Mayura’s principle in life, making sure never to let any one aspect dominate over another, to let everything settle in their natural order in harmony, and to give equally to what is taken.

Her years of exhaustive training with her brothers in the Haken Lee dojo has given her incredible mental and physical discipline, the restraint to act only when needed, and to block out all unnecessary distractions and noise from her mind. Where Asagi’s singlemindedness stems from her obsession and stubbornness, Mayura’s comes from her stern determination to see the task accomplished at all cost, steeled by the incredible patience built from her years trying to hold together the bonds between her brothers, and now her friends.

Critical and logical thinking are her best mental friends, along with a head that rarely looses its cool, mostly calm, and often collected, her most favored weapons in dealing with any crises. This tranquility of mind paradoxically comes from a burning passion within her to achieve perfection, and it is this passion that drives her to perform her best in all things.

It doesn’t mean Mayura can’t let loose, and at times she can let the martial artist inside rest and just let the girl have fun. As a daughter of Labatt, Mayura is encouraged to indulge in fun and pleasure, and often this means lots of playful teasing and jabs at her friends… if they’re not up to something incredulously impossible again, in which case she steps up with her elder sister authority and hands out any much needed correction. When not with her friends or left to herself, Mayura indulges herself in her unconditional love of animals, especially with her favorite pet cats, and strangely enough beetles.

Only a few things can break through Mayura’s rock solid defenses, and much like Super Sentai is to Asagi, Mayura’s emotions are released at full force by the tokusatsu series known as Kamen Rider, as series she went to love due to its emphasis on martial combat (and beetle motifs). No matter how much she tries to restrain herself, her insane love for anything and everything Kamen Rider will most always override her conscious thought. Thankfully she can regain control of herself before she does too much collateral damage, unlike Asagi or Julie…

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"Reminds me of the train she destroyed that one time with a Rider Kick..."

"Could've been worse... much worse..."

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Like Asagi though, Super Sentai has left a big impression on Mayura, most specifically the 2007 title “Jyuuken Sentai Gekiranger”, whose story about the power struggles between martial arts schools is a constant reminder of her own experience against the Ark Chen school (and it didn’t help that the main villain was also named Rio…), and further reinforcement to temper her will to succeed.

And on the negative side, the same martial arts that gave Mayura her strengths are also her weakness, as her love and pride for her art is such that anyone that she cannot turn a blind eye to those who dare to sully or challenge their name, and the smallest insult for her family’s tradition can, and had rattled her enough to anger. At times, that very tradition is the very cause of her sadness and stress, as the only one of the Lee siblings entrusted with carrying on their intangible family legacy the weight can sometimes be too much to bear alone. And as proud as she is, she often keeps such matters regarding her personal life to her own, a move which oftentimes reveals her still fragile inner-self.

Which is why she’ll be forever thankful to Asagi’s explosive optimism and Julie’s sage advice to counteract her doubts and fears, and understand her unique plight amongst the sisters. No wonder that when all the corrections are said and done, she resigns herself to the whim of her two beloved sisters who are always up to more insane antics and tricks.

Wow... The difference in life story is just... Certainly could feel her pain. And the return of Shinobu was as well.

Nice work! I got a better idea of who Mayura is now! It'll do well for Rebuilt crack referencing Artei's arc Mahou Itsugi Pow--

*static*

Artei: Creator-san DC'd again?! You got to be kidding me!!!

[Kagerou]

Will attempt a proper backlog break later.

Time for a random short one hour one shot nao, just because. Takes place pre-Alpha and is full of WAFFy goodness.

...that said, whether or not its canon to Alpha is entirely up to the reader .

Spoiler for Valentine's Day:

Cranagan City, Midchilda - February 14th, MC0082, late afternoon

"This is too embarrassing,"
"Oh, come on, it'll be fun!"
"Mou... why do you always convince me to do these things?"
"Oh come on, it's a day about you, V."

Vivio Takamachi flushed and looked away. "I-it's not about me, Syn..."

The day was called Sankt Kaiser Day, a holiday celebrated on Midchilda that served as an analogy to Earth's Valentine's Day. Though the myths and legends surrounding it were different, the concept remained the same: to give someone you love something special. To Vivio, who had never even had a boy look at her in a way that suggested attraction, coupled with the focus on her - that is, the Sankt Kaiser - caused her to simply despise this day.

Her best friend and companion, Syn Virage, decided to change that. Thus, the two were on a date. Not a "real" date, per se, but more of a girl's night out. Though if you listened to Syn's offhand comments as they got off the bus, it was a date date. "For real," even.

"Sure it is!" Syn smiled and punched her friend lightly in the arm. "Now come on, cheer up! There's this place I wanna take you!"

"Where is it?" Vivio asked, sounding completely unenthused.

"Oh, it's mega-cool!" Syn exclaimed, smiling brightly at the blonde. "You'll love it!"

"Somehow, I doubt that,"
"Oh, just come on!" Taking Vivio by the hand, Syn took off, running as if on fire. Vivio had no choice but to follow, Syn's grip too strong and possibly, just maybe, that she wanted to see what this was that Syn was so excited for.

Their adventure began this way.

Together, the two girls ran, barely holding on to their satchels as they weaved in and out of pedestrian movement. As if life itself was trying to impede them, everyone they encountered was going the opposite direction of them, and none of them bothered to move. As the tall blue-haired girl pulled Vivio through the crowd, she had to force people out of the way. None of her usual aggressiveness was there though; instead, she was laughing and smiling as she pulled the her friend along, the very image of a happy girl who had a good life.

In essence, the total opposite of Vivio. In practice, something else.

"I don't like this!" Vivio shouted as she was pulled along, nearly losing her grip on Syn and, oddly, not wanting to lose that grip. She tightened her hand on Syn's as they ran, finding her own two feet catching up to Syn's slowly.

"You will, I swear!" Syn said to her as the two burst out of pedestrians, onto the crosswalk. The same crosswalk with was currently not accepting pedestrians, and the same one that a car was about to pass, bearing down on the two. The car slammed on its brakes, but it was too little.

All Syn could think of to say was, "Oh shi-" as she stared wide-eyed at the car before slamming her eyes shut. An impact never came though, only the feeling of going up, and her arm being pulled up as well. When Syn opened her eyes, she found herself hanging a few dozen meters from the ground. Looking up, she saw that Vivio had grabbed Syn's hand with both of hers and pulled them straight up, leaping into the sky as easily as her mothers.

"..." Syn was actually quite amazed. She didn't think Vivio could react that quickly. "Vivio..."
"You're going to get us killed," The blonde replied, her face twisted in annoyance and relief. Syn just smiled up at her, the tension gone suddenly. "What?"

"...I can see up your skirt, and I see aoi no pantsu," Syn said, grinning.
Vivio dropped Syn. The blue-haired girl caught herself and touched down gently as Vivio began to fly off, paused, then landed as well.

"...sorry," Vivio muttered, looking away.
"Hey, it's okay," Syn took Vivio's hand again. "I shouldn't have said that. I know you're in a bad mood,"
"I just... really, really, hate this day."
"I know," Syn replied. "But I'm going to make you like it, at least for one night, okay?"
"I don't know what you could possibly do," Vivio said, her eyes still averted.
"I'll show you,"

Syn led Vivio down the sidewalks of Midchilda silently, hand in hand, on a mission of the most important sort, at least to her. She ignored the looks - well, the mean ones, anyway - that the two received, while Vivio ignored everything but her own footsteps altogether, trying to forget that she had just let go. If she couldn't fly...

Syn had already forgotten about it. She worried instead on her directions. The city was big, and the two had gotten as close as Syn wanted to from her destination. The idea was to get where she wanted to go, just in time for the big event. Well, possibly the big event. But this was the year. This was the day. This was their adventure, and she wanted to share everything about her half of it.

As Vivio spaced out, Syn led her to a place that was sacred; a Saint Church-run park that served as one of many Sankt Kaiser monuments. This one was special, in that only members of the church could attend, and so as the two stepped on the hallowed ground, everything was suddenly quiet; this place was rarely populated this time of day. Syn continued to lead Vivio to a place, a special place, and one that she had secured earlier. It was a lake, in the center of the park, and the place was a certain spot, secluded from everyone and everything, except the moons, the sky, the stars...

"Hey, V," Syn began as she led them to the area. Sure enough, no one was around. "Can I ask you something?"

"What?" Vivio looked up at Syn, seemingly unaware that they were somewhere else.
"If we had never met, where would you be right now?"

"..." Vivio scrunched the bridge of her nose and thought. Syn leaned up against the railing and watched the lake, staring at her watch occasionally. "I would... I don't know. I don't like to think about it. Without you... I guess I'd be either dead or... worse off."

"You think so?" Syn asked, not looking at her. "Come stand next to me,"
Vivio did as Syn suggested, assuming a similar stance on the railing. "Why do you ask, Syn?"

"Because... I don't think I'd be dead... but I can't..." Syn paused, unsure. "I don't think I'd be happy. V, I can't really imagine a world without you." She smiled at her friend. "I like life the way it is, I think, because you're here to do it with me."

"...really?" Vivio's eyes wandered up to Syn's own. "You... like life because of me?"
"Of course!" Syn answered, confident. "V, I... I'm happy you're around. Really." That was lame. "I can't really express it."

"..." Vivio went silent as she stared out over the lake. "Syn, really... without you, I don't think I'd be alive... you keep me going. I mean, some of my family does, too... but..." she paused. "I couldn't do it without you. Living, breathing, if you weren't here... I couldn't do it. No one would be there to help me back up when I fall past the point where I can get up on my own." she looked down at the lake. "Syn... I think..." she shook her head. "No, that's silly."

Syn simply chuckled and looked out over the lake. As the sun disappeared under the horizon, the moons' light reflected into the lake. As if alive, small motes of magic energy began to flow up from the lake. Vivio's eyes widened at the spectacle, while Syn's simply narrowed slightly, not out of confusion, but because she was smiling.

"W... wow..."
"This place, is infused with magic." Syn told Vivio. "They say here is where the Sankt Kaiser declared that Belka's heart would be open to all." As Vivio's eyes stared at what could only be described as stardust, Syn's hand moved atop of Vivio's, while her other reached for her eyepath. Slowly pulling it off, she sat it in her satchel. With both eyes opened, she took a deep breath, and looked at Vivio.

"Hey, V..." She began. "I need to tell you something..."
"...me, too." Vivio nodded. Without a word, she lifted both hands and put them on Syn's shoulders, turning her around and facing the taller girl. Closing her eyes and leaning up on her tip-toes, Vivio pulled Syn into a neck hug and pressed their lips together. Syn's eyes widened, amazed, but not confused, or unhappy. Syn leaned back into the kiss and put her arms around Vivio, holding the two of them tightly together.

When the two parted lips, a single tear made its way down Vivio's cheek. Gently, Syn wiped it away, and embraced Vivio tightly.

The two were silent, the rest of the night. No words needed to be said because it had all been said with a single action.

I love you.

[dkellis]

Originally Posted by Kha

MC 0072 IIRC. Anyone else can confirm this?

MC 0071 4th Month 29th Day - Airport Fire, Subaru meets Nanoha, love at first sight

MC 0075 4th Month - Subaru and Teana undergo B rank exam, fail

STUFF HAPPENS

MC 0076 4th Month 28th Day - Hayate gives a speech to RF6, announcing RF6's disbanding

[AdmiralTigerclaw]

Hey, what was that local scale system you guys were setting up, I need to review it.