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Wandering_Youth · 2007-04-11, 00:53

Hello, people!

I'm currently making a wallpaper featuring Suiseiseki and it's a work in progress since I'm still far from finishing the vector image. I would like to get some opinions right now about the way I did Suiseiseki's eyes. Below is the original picture and a partially vectored version. Do you guys think the eyes look ok or do I need to edit it a bit? Critiques and comments are welcome. I'll update this thread later on with other questions and the finally wallpaper so feel free come back.

Daniel E. · 2007-04-11, 01:16

You got the eyes done pretty well, perhaps a bit more color or brightness to make them stand out more could help. You could also leave them just like that if you feel like it.

The thing that I found strange is the way in wich you traced the hair; You only followed the perimeter of the area instead of going with the natural flow of each hair bit.

Doing every bit of hair individually, works best in the long run IMHO.

2007-04-11, 00:53	Link #1
Wandering_Youth lost in wonder forever... Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: edge of my dream in the land of twilight...ZzzZzZ	Garden's Giift - Suiseiseki Vector Wallpaper Hello, people! I'm currently making a wallpaper featuring Suiseiseki and it's a work in progress since I'm still far from finishing the vector image. I would like to get some opinions right now about the way I did Suiseiseki's eyes. Below is the original picture and a partially vectored version. Do you guys think the eyes look ok or do I need to edit it a bit? Critiques and comments are welcome. I'll update this thread later on with other questions and the finally wallpaper so feel free come back. __________________

2007-04-11, 01:16	Link #2
Daniel E. AniMexican! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Monterrey N.L. Mexico	You got the eyes done pretty well, perhaps a bit more color or brightness to make them stand out more could help. You could also leave them just like that if you feel like it. The thing that I found strange is the way in wich you traced the hair; You only followed the perimeter of the area instead of going with the natural flow of each hair bit. Doing every bit of hair individually, works best in the long run IMHO. __________________