2012-06-07, 19:49 | Link #32021 |
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^ Ah sorry, that's me mistyping, I mean mellow spot
The point still stand, and yes, she do just that because A. Gentaro is strong B. He is persistent in engaging enemy, even though he was forbid to C. To prevent collateral damage from action B
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2012-06-07, 19:59 | Link #32023 |
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A.
B. Oh, sorry then, not watching Fourze, I assume Gentaro is like Ichika, having Chronic Hero SYndrome. C. Again, no. But I got that from every Kamen Rider I watch, especially when they're still green and in Joke Forms, officially known as Blank Form. Kamen rider is basically human shaped brick after all.
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2012-06-07, 20:03 | Link #32024 |
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But Gentarou is certainly the meddling type. He makes it his mission to befriend everyone! Mostly via a rider kick to the face but
He seems to uphold certain codes of honor, so he knows if someone needs to do things by themselves. But at the same time he believes that friendship power answers all... wierd. |
2012-06-07, 20:08 | Link #32025 |
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That makes him quite a complex character than archetypical hero though, all kamen rider hero seems to have this kind of conflicting personality
Now I am confused where to put Saruyama, because when he said Europe, I have yet to decide WHICH country he will represent. BTW, school first, see you later.
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2012-06-07, 20:42 | Link #32027 |
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Morning
Anyway, I just realized, did my drafts strikingly contrast from the description? It really sounds like a crapsack world when I read it again. And if done even more seriously, normal family did not exist.
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2012-06-08, 00:35 | Link #32029 |
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The problem is pulling a line between "Dark back-story" and "Dark fic", maybe it's a leftover from writing ST concept, I'll try to put this one as lightly as I can though, so, less slapstick and more like a sitcom.
For example Spoiler for porn:
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2012-06-08, 02:42 | Link #32032 |
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@ Senpai -Black Comedy's funny as long as it's not happening to you.
Anyway, I think I whiplash the mood too much when I write. Example: The start of an arc has Irish and Ichika having to deal with an.....eccentric rich family and being tasked to go to an island to get something. Then the "Insanity" draft picks up on what happens there.
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2012-06-08, 03:12 | Link #32037 |
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Hmm, I dunno, it's really how you put it. I can give some pointer though
First, Irish was greatly injured by that point, and Ichika would be very cautious, the girls will wonder what happened (assuming they don't know) and of course is worried about Ichika. This situation will go until Irish recover, and the whole situation settled down.
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2012-06-08, 03:54 | Link #32039 |
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Here come some more!
IS Byakuya no Tsubasa Phantoms of the Past Fata Morgana (Crossover with Naruto) |
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