Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[demino_hellsin]

gets the crap beat out of him by multiple tsundere?

[Eratas123]

@ Demi - I hope not, he wouldn't be able to type if that happened! Anyway, I'm still waiting for those plots

[demino_hellsin]

One is in the page before this. The fanservice one... I need to get over the excessive fantasies first (distracted by kamen rider also. Fourze is AWESOME!)

[HasuMasu]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

One is in the page before this. The fanservice one... I need to get over the excessive fantasies first (distracted by kamen rider also. Fourze is AWESOME!)

UCCHHHUUUU KIIITTTTAAAAAAAAAA~~!!!!!!!!!

[demino_hellsin]

Desshoooo!? =))

[Eratas123]

@ Demi - Can you think of a more lighthearted one please? I know you said that you habe a fanservice one.

[demino_hellsin]

I'll try to finish it before the night ends era-era.

[Eratas123]

Thank you I'm sure readers like those better

[agetreme]

New Male oc lead Profile

Side note: appear incomplete because I just remembered that I had forgot to save the file after completing it yesterday.....*sigh* Had to retype everything for the third time.....

Spoiler for Yuuya:

Character's name: Yuuya
Gender: Male
Looks: Undecided
Alignment : Netaural good
Personality:
Positive Trait
> A nice guy generally due to being a
> Happy-go-lucky kind of guy
> Cynical about the world, Idealistic that it will change for the better. (The glass is half-empty but what is stopping you from getting more water somewhere else?)
> Determinator, made of steel/iron/whatever.
> Made of Steel...etc (due to the rare material), can take abuse.
> Intelligent (informed ability... most of the time)
> Celibate hero (doesn't read porn, don't peek at girls, look away when girls accidentally expose themselves...Note: Doesn't help him at all)


Flaws:
> Bad liar
> and constant bad luck which tend to worsen the situation where he is often
> Mistaken as a pervert, Fate conspired against him, whatever happen, girls will always end up believing that he is a culprit to some perverted act....(such as finding a underwear on the floor and end up being accused of being a panty-thief)
> Sometimes operate on troll logic due to
> Intellectually inefficient (don't use his head a lot), because he sometimes skip the brain part.....
> Is a Klutz, the very careless kind (Fly like Bumblebee (the animal) using his machine.
> Taunt his opponent..... and often get epic pwn by them.

Regardless of the machine used, his machine is focused on defending, outlasting, outrun(if the opponent's IS is slower than average IS).

The machine used on the Draft board for him used is a Beyond Stratos unit with a rare material providing enough power to fight at near equal ground with IS.

(note: The reason for having the rare material, is to hand-wave the explanation on how he survive a full blown IS punch even without putting on the BS unit )

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Real life note:

Another day wasted.....on planning story which I do not intent to type out (yet)

I prefer to, at the very least, complete an IS fanfic before I move on to original story.....

(On slightly unrelated note: A Hero/legend Class in Maplestory, Phantom appear to be quite a charmer.... probably will incorporate some of that personality into the yet-to-appear OC male IS pilot.... You know, that guy who is suppose to counter Ichika's Harem energy? He need to be, at the very least, capable of charming girls)

(On even more unrelated note: I actually spend the entire day working out the finer detail of an original universe, which has absolutely nothing to do with IS, but the new male OC I mentioned is the prototype for the Main character (practicing how to make a good(as in alignment) character work out))

[ValiantX3]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Wonder what's happening with Senpai?

Originally Posted by Detective-san

What happens to every harem lead.

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

gets the crap beat out of him by multiple tsundere?

So, my cousin decided to take the good chance 'pretend' to be his girlfriend in front of my friend so he can slip out...

And he has to bring two of us to nearby carnival (a new year carnival) for a treat.

Spoiler for LOL:

, only to find that his crush already has boyfriend and was there for a date. Aww~

Real life is stranger than fiction, thank god he wasn't really devastated and for the heck of it, subtly flaunting that he has a flower in each hand =.=

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Spoiler for Chifuyu plot:

Chifuyu is in the arena control room. She's watching as Ichika and the girls train. She notes how strong Ichika has become and that he's gone a long way since he first came to ISA. She remembers how Ichika used to train as a child so he could protect her, how she'd tell him that it was her job to protect him because she was older. She remembers how angry and frustrated she was when she heard Ichika was kidnapped. She remembers the fear and worry, the near panic that overcame her. The reckless cold fury that made Chifuyu rush out in the Kurezakura.

As she watches Ichika now, she wonder if he feels that he has the power. Chifuyu knows that Ichika still has a long way to go despite his improvement. She wonders if the day she'd be saved by him will really come.

Chifuyu thinks that she's always fighting, always fighting. Even when she wasn't involved with the IS yet, she was still fighting: for custody of Ichika, freedom from social service, the people that threatened them with violent crime, even the social stigma of living together despite being only children. She bore all of it. Before she realizes what's going on, she's being attacked by a Jet. Chifuyu backs away and realizes she's in an IS, not just any IS but the White Knight(you might want to change this... it'd be spoilerific for anyone who hasn't read that far. Or for anyone who's blind and not genre savvy). She realizes it's a dream, because right now, the White Knight isn't supposed to exist anymore. A memory, she realizes and she relishes in it. The IS was power, her power. Even if it was given to her, even if this power was not a result of her own training, she relished in it. All the years of struggling and those moments of being in an IS made her suffering have meaning. All her pain amounted into this unearthly power. As long as she was in the IS, she was absolute with no one to defy her.

At the end of that thought is when things went wrong. She was shot down. Unimaginable, her, Chifuyu in the White Knight... shot down. But it was happening. Chifuyu thinks to herself, it's no dream. This is a nightmare. She struggles to see the culprit. Tabane is standing on a far away cloud, a look of mischief and apology and dotting the skies are shadowy figures of IS, one of them looking suspiciously like the Akatsubaki. Chifuyu is bitter. She always believed in her own strength, she had to be strong and support everyone. Herself, her friend and even her little brother. But in the end, she was just the big sister, a caretaker. She supported everyone, but in the end no one would be there for her. No one will need her, no one will know her troubles, no one will support her. That was when the machines started to explode. One by one, they were gone in a flash of light. It was as if a majestic being was swooping across them and exercising a divine will to erase everything. It went for Chifuyu and she thought it would have been her end. She closed her eyes and embraced the warm light thinking, 'Is this how I'll wake up?'.

'Not quite' is the reply of a familiar voice.

Chifuyu can't help but blush. She doesn't look up to see his face, probably because she's hiding her own. They tease each other a bit. The voice tells Chifuyu to look up at him, Chifuyu tells the voice she doesn't need to because they already know each other by voice. Chifuyu notices that he's holding her like one would carry their bride. She blushes and tells him that he's really grown up. The voice says that it's thanks to her. Chifuyu says that it's probably time for her to leave then, to net meddle in his business anymore. The voice says no as the arms around Chifuyu hold tighter. He tells her that he's by her side, always has been, always will be. Whatever happens he'll need her, he'll support her and that if ever she's gone, he'll definitely bring her back to be with him. Chifuyu smiles and says that despite him being an idiot, he always says what a girl wants to hear.

Chifuyu opens her eyes and she's back in the control room again. Maya is looking at her worriedly, asking if Chifuyu's okay. Chifuyu smiles and just says that even she needs a break from reality. In Chifuyu's heart she knows, even the strong need to be saved.

distracted by and partially inspired by kamen rider. I'll get to the fanservice next.

OMG!

EDIT: That's very bittersweet...

[Eratas123]

@ 3 - Senpai - That sounds like the perfect manga plot Hope Senpai's okay.

@ Treme - When will you type out your story?

[ValiantX3]

@ Era-chin
He's currently is talking with our cousin outside, probably to distract himself from taking it too seriously. He said he won't log in for the rest of night though, he's afraid of offending someone here. =.=

@ Agetreme-san
Umm... Beyond Stratos? is that machine designed as I.S. rival or something?

[agetreme]

When I truly decided on which Lead I am going to write

But with no comments or criticism on the character, it kind of difficult....

Here is the Dilemma:

Spoiler for Spoiler for the story:

For now, I will name the guy-who-counter-Ichika-harem-power Cipher Winter (as intended since he is the counter-force to Ichika)

Firstly Firm fact:
> Cipher is a must in the story.
> He should be the only second male IS pilot in the story.

Now the Dilemma part:

> Since he should be the only second male IS pilot, therefore there should not be another male IS pilot, which means other male character appear in the story, uses a different machine.

> But introducing new machine.... feels like flamethrower material....Need to introduce in such a way that it does not sound more superior...

> Without a new machine, need a good reason for the character to be in ISA....

> Note: Being Teacher and engineer on school ground won't work out in this universe due to a simple fact: that only women knew how it is like to pilot IS..... IS battle is not the same as normal fighting due to the hardware(armor) may get in the way of some marital art movement.

> Being a normal worker at school won't work out because...... guys are pervert and they try to reduce "bad incident" form happening.....

>Ichika is an exceptional to this because.... if he manage to pass down his genetic material (of being able to pilot IS) to his son.... it means they will have more male IS pilot!

Current solution (feel quite weak...)
>Male lead balance new machine with butt monkey status...

The err... Shota boy is fine because.... in movie, even if it make little senses, a female character is always added into the film just to serve as love interest.... same goes for the Shota.

(Will add more later, have to run some errant)

I think I will write a pilot chapter first to see how things work out.

[Eratas123]

@ 3-Senpai - Why does he think we'll be offended? Its not like he's going around insulting us or something.

Side note - Odd question, but I need to know: If a guy's effeminate enough and he crossdress, how would you find out his real gender?

@ Treme - So what's the story mostly about, anyway? I'm wondering.

[ValiantX3]

Ah... it's really hard to create an acceptable male OC isn't it, took a lot of effort to balance them these days. I heard from nii-nii about the earlier days of I.S. fan-verse....

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ 3-Senpai - Why does he think we'll be offended? Its not like he's going around insulting us or something.

But he lacked restraint and may say something unfit that one can't help but annoyed, maybe he's that paranoid.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Odd question, but I need to know: If a guy's effeminate enough and he crossdress, how would you find out his real gender?

How he act and walk, as well as body structure, also, gross as it sounds, guy and girls usually has different scent (due to different hormone output). Finally, there's also intuition, this is why girls is easier to spot a male crossdresser than guys do and vice versa.

[HasuMasu]

What the hell has Zero gotten himself into.

It might just be good enough for a fic...

[Eratas123]

The early days of the IS fandom were pretty dark. Male IS pilots seemed to some out of the woodwork

[Eratas123]

@ 3-senpai - What do you mean scent? That's the first time I've heard of that. Also, do the students in IS academy seem smart enough to see someone who's crossdressing?

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ 3-Senpai - Why does he think we'll be offended? Its not like he's going around insulting us or something.

Side note - Odd question, but I need to know: If a guy's effeminate enough and he crossdress, how would you find out his real gender?

@ Treme - So what's the story mostly about, anyway? I'm wondering.

Currently had two idea in my mind:

Spoiler for spoiler: story:

1. Fighting against wave of drones in a post-Apocalypse like world
>A new world, no real life country....involved, so free to do whatever I like...

2.Slice of Life mostly....with random stuff once in a while. The most serious stuff happen are either random enemy attack from terrorist(Canon-verse) and IS tournament (not enough love from both fans and creator)

[ValiantX3]

Depending on how convincing the crossdresser is (my post above), attentive people like Char won't be fooled easily (that and she had experience). =.=

As for the scent, Nii-nii said guys usually don't paid attention to that either, simply because they're...umm, sweaty all the time due to... uh, activities, and the fact that most girl of our age use cologne or perfume that mess with natural scent (note that it was faint, and honestly, it's embarrassing to talk about it... I'm not a medical student so... )

@ Box
Umm.... didn't nii-nii make a fanfic out of this thread? =.=