2012-02-23, 04:46 | Link #23501 |
I am no one
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Hey, I knew about that, but you can't really forbid anyone from trying.
Cellphone? At the very least Ichika have it (V6). Despite it's not featured a lot, we can assume almost everyone have it.
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2012-02-23, 05:42 | Link #23503 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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2012-02-23, 06:00 | Link #23504 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
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It's been a while, and then you found I.S. novel was axed, the misery. And V7 is either an anticlimax filler or huge foreshadowing for the subsequent 'plot'
Anyway, can you send me what you've got so far, I need to compare it whit what I've written until this point (you can say it's a calm, filler moment before the grimdark kicked in) and need to check if there's inconsistencies.
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2012-02-23, 06:04 | Link #23505 |
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@ Blitz - Actually, it was given a nod at the end. The person who helps Ichika buy a tuxedo and flowers is "Squall Meusel". Ichika also asks Chifuyu If they have any relatives, she says no and Ichika......drops it immediately.
..... Well, so much for taking initiative. @ Senpai - It just feels like a lot of the problems would be easily taken care off if they used them. Want to go on a date with Ichika and keep it a secret? Text him and tell him to keep it a secret. That solves all your problems right there.
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2012-02-23, 06:22 | Link #23509 |
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This gets to the point where it's ridiculous. They need to find Ichika, so what do they do? Try to find him with the illegal IS sensor when they could just call him?
Side note - Blatant disagreement in the appearances. LN says "Cecilia glared at him with the Blue eyes exclusive to the whites"......after he just talked to the blue eyed Houki.
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