2010-03-15, 17:55 | Link #23802 |
Burst Mode
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It appears that my comments have offended some people and for that I would like to apologise. It was not my intent to brush off your good intentions or ignore your comments. I did read each comment in full and while I originally had no intention of altering the fic, I will now take your suggested revisions into consideration. I really do appreciate any feedback I get, so thank you for that.
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2010-03-15, 19:46 | Link #23804 | ||
Vividly Vivio
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2010-03-16, 09:30 | Link #23808 | |
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This is starting to seem like one of those cosplay cafes in Japan... maybe could add a side room where guys sit in a booth and have women sit and talk to them while pouring them alcohol, haha! Not sure what they're called... |
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2010-03-16, 11:48 | Link #23810 | ||
IS: Liar's Mask
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Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Sendai
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@Raiser: I dunno...might be more fun if I had you two duke it out XD
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2010-03-16, 21:15 | Link #23812 | |
Test Drive
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Oh, man, I laughed so hard with this. Ever since you made that crack during our PM discussions ("But if I summon him, it'll no longer be a covert mission!") I knew something like this would pop up sooner or later, and I enjoyed every second of it. Do love how Lutecia still manages to talk her way out of it, though.
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Last edited by RadiantBeam; 2010-03-16 at 21:15. Reason: Forgot a tag... |
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2010-03-16, 22:03 | Link #23818 | |
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Terrorist #2: What's happening!? So many explosions! Who could be doing this!? Terrorist #3: *hobbles up* R-Run... *gasps and dies* Terrorist #1: Um, let's get out of here! *looks around, seeing he's alone* ...#2? Where are you? *severed head of #2 lands at his feet, as he looks up to see a teenage girl staring expressionless at him.* "Oh god..." Vivio: You got that right! |
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2010-03-16, 22:09 | Link #23820 | |
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
Age: 33
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Oh crap indeed ! I like how Lutecia had everything planned out, and that detail makes the reader able to enjoy the explosive fight while still retaining Lutecia's capable, cool points ^^. "The only reason the local government hasn't lodged a protest is that they're afraid we'll do it again!" Smart government . It was fun Dezo, it's nice to see some humour in the Shadows-verse !
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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