2006-06-08, 02:25 | Link #44 | |
Absolute Haruhist!
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Age: 37
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But yes page 1's pics are red x's, even some people have red x's for their sigs.
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2006-06-08, 04:11 | Link #45 |
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I don't think you got an answer on the nipple question, and I must say, that is an excellent subject for a question! I'd say that on the Christmas pic, they need to be a little higher. That way the breasts seem perkier. And who would want them any other way? Not that Hinata is my cup of tea exactly, I'm more of a Sakura man. Pink hair and sass can't be beat, but a good nude is always good regardless, so thumbs up to you! Oh, and the nipple on her left breast (image left) needs to be moved to the right, seems a bit offcenter... Plus a little muscle definition on her shoulders and some colar bone lines in the Christmas pic would help.
However, I feel I must say that while the bodies are overall pretty good, the faces are what's lacking, mostly on the Christmas picture. It's got that American trying to draw anime feal that is the bane of all us US anime artists. (I grapple with it all the time.) While the issues there are subtle, I'd say the most obvious point is needing more space between her eyes. Moveing the right eye a bit further right would be the simplest fix. And moveing her left eyebrow right would help to, for the sake of a more realisticly implied eye socket. And now that I think about it, her forehead protector is too small. I be this all sounds picky, but I only bother to say this because these pictures show real potential, and some relatively small improvements at this point are all thats in the way of them being great. If you care, I have a few more pointers on them, too, but I don't want to overwhelm you all at once. |
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