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Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 19:52

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Eratas: I've got no problem with it, it's great. What I would like to know is how the battle goes, maybe a draft of the scene with a little banter between the two, if you've written it.

Not yet. I'll write it by tom since I'm still in school right now.

The fight scene has no banter apart from the beginning where Irish tells Joshua to run and that he'll keep Kyuukai distracted. Irish is a pragmatic fighter though so he'll use the graves as shields since Kyuukai would hesitate to attack his friends resting places. It's a dick move but Irish is a combat pragmatist.

EthernalRain · 2011-11-03, 20:06

@ Eratas: A dick move indeed. A good way to have Kyuukai counter, is fly up with Tsubasa, and then try to cut him away with Arashi.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 20:15

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Eratas: A dick move indeed. A good way to have Kyuukai counter, is fly up with Tsubasa, and then try to cut him away with Arashi.

That'll work. But Irish would jump onto Kyuukai's back and attack him with the jammer knife if Kyuukai gets too close.

Side note - Here's a video of Irish's fighting style against larger opponents.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7ccHFqQMY4

Please say if it seems plausible.

EthernalRain · 2011-11-03, 20:42

@ Eratas: It's pretty plausible since the skull suit aguments Irish's abilities.

blitz1/2 · 2011-11-03, 20:47

I see Eratas with Tatenashi sig, must resist urge to kill....

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 20:52

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Eratas: It's pretty plausible since the skull suit aguments Irish's abilities.

It's against larger opponents not IS units. Trying to do that when fighting an IS is suicidal at best.

@ Blitz - Then you're probably gonna want to maim me once I write the Tatenashi and Irish romance scenes

falcolobo · 2011-11-03, 21:03

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

What was in the video?

Also. How exactly does Kyuukai fight when he's outnumbered and outgunned?

What was in the video?

A couple of puppets decide to get creative....but then the notepad brain washes them and then they become crazed and blood thirsty...watch it, I though that the flesh cake was the most hilarious scene

@ Zero- At this point chapter 4 is 10% done, and I stated chapter 5 (approx 2%) because the video inspired me to write something completely horrid and fantastic.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 21:05

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Originally Posted by falcolobo

What was in the video?

A couple of puppets decide to get creative....but then the notepad brain washes them and then they become crazed and blood thirsty...watch it, I though that the flesh cake was the most hilarious scene

@ Zero- At this point chapter 4 is 10% done, and I stated chapter 5 (approx 2%) because the video inspired me to write something completely horrid and fantastic.

That doesn't sound very horrific.

falcolobo · 2011-11-03, 21:08

Just watch:

HERE IS THE LINK TO THE VIDEO.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 21:10

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Originally Posted by falcolobo

Just watch:

HERE IS THE LINK TO THE VIDEO.

I'm using a phone >_< I can't watch videos yet.

falcolobo · 2011-11-03, 21:17

Eh...its probably better for your sanity if you don't watch it.

Anyway- I had an idea for an IS ability:

Emperors Left Hand- Extracts the IS core out of an ally and allows the core to assimilate a weapon that matches the personality and combat style. So a core taken from Houki would be a sword, while taking one from Cecillia would be a gun.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 21:22

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Originally Posted by falcolobo

Eh...its probably better for your sanity if you don't watch it.

Anyway- I had an idea for an IS ability:

Emperors Left Hand- Extracts the IS core out of an ally and allows the core to assimilate a weapon that matches the personality and combat style. So a core taken from Houki would be a sword, while taking one from Cecillia would be a gun.

What's stopping Ichika from doing it to enemies and making them lose immediately? Also, wouldn't extracting an allies core while they're in the middle of a fight put them in danger.

falcolobo · 2011-11-03, 21:26

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

What's stopping Ichika from doing it to enemies and making them lose immediately? Also, wouldn't extracting an allies core while they're in the middle of a fight put them in danger.

The ability only works when the frequency between the IS cores are the same (just like how Houki can give energy to people who are in "tune" with her). So its going to be hard to become in sync with enemy IS.

That's the trade off, the pilot goes into a coma like state while the IS core weapon is being used. The weapon is extremely powerful though- its equal to an IS in itself.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 21:30

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Originally Posted by falcolobo

The ability only works when the frequency between the IS cores are the same (just like how Houki can give energy to people who are in "tune" with her). So its going to be hard to become in sync with enemy IS.

That's the trade off, the pilot goes into a coma like state while the IS core weapon is being used. The weapon is extremely powerful though- its equal to an IS in itself.

It's risky but the payoff is massive. Seems like a good idea to me.

Side note - Will Ichika fight non-IS enemies?

falcolobo · 2011-11-03, 21:46

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

It's risky but the payoff is massive. Seems like a good idea to me.

Side note - Will Ichika fight non-IS enemies?

Sometimes, mostly this is for those rare case scenarios.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-03, 21:53

So you make 1 team member extremely vulnerable, while you only gain the power of that member?

Its a saturday morning cartoon gimmick, which is entertaining, but try to make the prize more appealing to warrant being used?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-03, 21:56

Racing to 300 Pages, Moving on!

New draft for chapter 12

Spoiler for LOL:

Basically, Ichika & Dan is Gang-beaters back when they're in high School, until 'something' happened and they quit the business.

They also just happen to gain allies, conquering most of the rural area of Odaiba... in the end, Ichika stood up above everyone else.... he became the very monster he was despised of. It wasn't called Bloodstained throne for nothing...

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 22:06

@ Zero - That sounds like a deconstruction of Beelzebub

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-03, 22:09

You mean a reconstruction, as Bellzebub turned it upside down.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-03, 22:13

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

You mean a reconstruction, as Bellzebub turned it upside down.

All we need is an exploding baby

2011-11-03, 20:47	Link #5965
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	I see Eratas with Tatenashi sig, must resist urge to kill.... __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

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falcolobo The Third Runner Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In my house	Just watch: HERE IS THE LINK TO THE VIDEO. __________________

2011-11-03, 21:17	Link #5971
falcolobo The Third Runner Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In my house	Eh...its probably better for your sanity if you don't watch it. Anyway- I had an idea for an IS ability: Emperors Left Hand- Extracts the IS core out of an ally and allows the core to assimilate a weapon that matches the personality and combat style. So a core taken from Houki would be a sword, while taking one from Cecillia would be a gun. __________________

2011-11-03, 21:53	Link #5976
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	So you make 1 team member extremely vulnerable, while you only gain the power of that member? Its a saturday morning cartoon gimmick, which is entertaining, but try to make the prize more appealing to warrant being used? __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-03, 21:56	Link #5977
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Racing to 300 Pages, Moving on! New draft for chapter 12 Spoiler for LOL: ________________________________________ V2 Chapter 4: Bloodstained Silver Throne ________________________________________ ~ICHIKA POV~ “Well, that concludes today” “Too bad, I really want to met Madoka-chan” “I’m not letting you meet her” Contrary to what I said, it’s not like I’m not letting her getting him as boyfriend, problem is, I’m afraid once they broke up, it’ll never been the same again. Call me paranoid, if you want. “You went to mixed gender school right, how exactly you don’t get any girlfriend?” I hate to admit it, but during our Junior High Dan is kind of popular guy. Too bad at the time our minds we’re occupied by something else, and now Dan regret it. “Dunno, it’s maybe nice guy syndrome or something, except for the fact that you’re immune to it…grr…” Well, while Dan is ‘nice’, some button simply shouldn’t be pushed. “Ichika-nii?” “WOAH!” It was Madoka, standing behind us all along, and of course it startled Dan, poor him. “Madoka? Why are you here?” “Took some fresh air, it was boring in the home without you, and I’m hungry, besides, you forget to bring your cellphone” Alas, I left it in my dorm…maybe I should bring her after all…”Ahh, I’m very sorry” “No problem, I suppose you’re Dan-san?” “Yep, that’s me” pointed himself confidently, Dan raised his chest a little… that’s pathetic… “My Name is Madoka, nice to meet you!” It was rare for Madoka to smile to a new acquaintance, maybe the effect of having real friends? Or maybe because Madoka knew Dan from my story and that two of us hits well? Anyway, it’s good. “Ah, it’s dark already, would you like to have a dinner with us?” I offered him, honestly, what else could I do? Smiled at me with suspicious eyes, Dan waved his hand “Nope, I’m not gonna disturb your private moment” Madoka seems disturbed with that, and her face is flushed with red, hey! Don’t tell me you flirt with him all along… “N-no, it’s not like that, I’ll be happy if you can join us” “I’m not very convinced” “Well if you said so” Madoka laughed, seems like she’s not hitting him at all, thank God, but I wonder why she seems embarrassed “Anyway, you know that tomorrow a closed beta testing of ‘ISVR’ system is held at Arcade nearby?” “Yeah, I knew it; it was called Closed Beta for something though, the participant is specially selected from those who win the higher place national ISVS tournament 3 years ago” “How do you know about that?” I raised my eyebrow “Hey you haven’t told me” “Ah, sorry, my bad” One of Dan’s bad side is that he tends not to tell something trivial to him, but sometimes it’s crucial for somebody else, geez… “Iori-san told us to participate in its testing; they want an opinion from real pilots” “Hmm I see” I should bring my cellphone… “And to bring at least one friend along, preferably male” I and Madoka looked at Dan, who seems puzzled “me?” He asked. We nodded in conclusion. “That… would be awesome…” Being a game mania he is, Dan must be caught off guard, a chance of lifetime testing a new Reality simulation, no wonder he lose the ability to speech coherently… even though usually he’s very talkative. “Please come at 07:00 O’clock” “Are you sure it’s okay to bring him?” I asked jokingly. “Well, dunno, that’s up to Iori-san” Madoka shrugged. “You guys better not give me false hope” Dan seems annoyed as he turned his back on us ”See you tom, and call me if there’s a change of plan” “Yup” As his tall and lanky figure disappeared within the dim-lit alleys, I mumbled “I wonder what I should cook today?” “I want omu-rice!” Madoka frowned and tugging my sleeves like a child begging for candies, normally I’ll shake my head to high-protein dinner, but since its Madoka, and the fact that I abandoned herfor three hours odd, I’ll leave it this once. The dinner went absolutely smooth, and Madoka complimented my cooking as always, even though it’s nothing special, well, at least it’s up to her expectation. And then things went downhill… “Madoka” “NO” “Please?” “I said no” “We’re not going to share a bed, too small” “Precisely” Did Madoka have a fever or something? Well, as I checked, SHE DID, OH GOD! Using my strength, I carried her to the upper room, and most of my goods are there. POOOOF “Uwa…” “Open your mouth” “Ichika-nii-“ “Open. Your. Mouth” I crossed my arms and emulating Chifuyu-nee’s stern face, which made Madoka obedient somehow. 37.8 C, slight fever, there’s not much symptom beyond that, no sneeze or cough, strange. It’s not influenza probably, so I might just give her fever medicine and use warm compress. I see if her condition will be better or worse… On aside note, cold compress is no longer an effective method to reduce fever, because it caused constriction of the veins. Warm compress enlarged them hence the body can regulate the temperature more efficiently by the means of blood flows and sweat. “Gee, I wonder if it’s because the cold room and late dinner…” “You won’t leave me right” “Nope, I won’t” I don’t know why, but by consciences whisper that I won’t leave Madoka for a long time. Probably the best. “So this is their place?” “Yep, this is” It was me in the past, me and Dan precisely… Its winter 2014, and snowy, everyone is walking around, paid no attention to two of us. Except for them. Five guys, three armed, one with a knife. “Finally you came…you bastard” “You dare to challenge us?!” “Why? You guys are just cheapskate pussies, two of us are enough” Dan mockingly asked. “SHUT UP AND DIE!” “I should be the one told you that, asshole!” Dan opening the slaughter with a kick to the face, yep, his long legs aren’t for show… “Why don’t you guys just apologize and gone with it” I laughed manically as my first strike broke my target’s teeth, my fist is bleached with the blood of my enemy. Those feelings, sense of domination and bloodlust, somehow both familiar and alien at the same time. And then, that switchblade flew toward Dan… Basically, Ichika & Dan is Gang-beaters back when they're in high School, until 'something' happened and they quit the business. They also just happen to gain allies, conquering most of the rural area of Odaiba... in the end, Ichika stood up above everyone else.... he became the very monster he was despised of. It wasn't called Bloodstained throne for nothing... __________________

2011-11-03, 20:06	Link #5962
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: A dick move indeed. A good way to have Kyuukai counter, is fly up with Tsubasa, and then try to cut him away with Arashi.

2011-11-03, 20:42	Link #5964
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: It's pretty plausible since the skull suit aguments Irish's abilities.

2011-11-03, 22:06	Link #5978
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - That sounds like a deconstruction of Beelzebub __________________

2011-11-03, 22:09	Link #5979
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	You mean a reconstruction, as Bellzebub turned it upside down. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？