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2013-07-14, 15:31 | Link #823 |
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Sorry for double posting but I'd just like to be 100% sure I have an ok to make a few edits for the grammar on chapter 2 volume 2, section 5.
The parts I plan on editing are in the "tldr" B stands for Before and A stands for After.
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2013-07-27, 18:34 | Link #831 |
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I've always took her outbursts as just being childish outbursts as she is still mentally very young and even by volume 2 she will acknowledge, to herself at least that, she is in the wrong. The way I see it is she started off with the emotional control of a 2 year old and by the second volume she has gotten to the level of a 4 or 5 year old. She acknowledges, again if only to herself, Ash is her guardian (given the type of dragon she is the term Master really doesn't fit) but still acts out like the child she is.
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2013-07-27, 21:31 | Link #832 |
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She seems to gain more control as time goes on. Her behavior becomes more forgivable (if not less annoying) once her insecurities and doubts become more obvious. Ash even teases her about how she used to be in one of the later novels.
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