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Bonzo · 2010-01-20, 15:28

Mazryonh · 2010-01-20, 19:33

Bellissimo! Semplicemente Bellisimo!

Much better than the anime's ending, in my view. If this were inked and colourized, I would definitely buy a physical copy at a convention.

I know you didn't approach me to have this chapter edited, but I'm still here and would be happy to help with the following ones. I'm especially looking forward to how the OVA gets started.

Nobodyman9 · 2010-01-20, 19:54

Phenominal, bonzo.

Of course, having edited the text for you, I was aware of what changes you were going to make so it wasn't really surprising reading it, but it was still awesome. I love the art and text changes that you made, and overall I think it's a lot better than the previous one. Keep up the good work, bonzo.

X20A-SFreedom · 2010-01-20, 20:53

Wonderful remake and i like the changes and additions.

Will u be redoing the other comics as well now or is that it?

Bonzo · 2010-01-25, 12:49

Well, in the wait, a little preview about the side-story everyone waiting:

After the visit at fake lelouch grave, instead to return to the camper to take care of Lelouch, Kallen does a little detour, Stadfteld mansion...to face her father.
Kallen is wounded, dead beat (days without sleep) and emotionally unstable, a bomb ready to explode.

Spoiler for Kallen parents:

About the design, Kallen's stepmother was present in the anime, but I just remember her hairstyle vaguely, then maybe she can be enough different from the original, about Kallen's dad, I invented the character, I made a design of a serious man, but with physical features connected with Kallen, just the reader can say "he's her daddy".

Your opinion?

Kid Ying · 2010-01-25, 19:46

Only read it today. It was fun, i don't have any complaints about it. I think it got everything smooth and nice. Your drawings are getting really good, Bonzo.

Bonzo · 2010-01-30, 07:28

The new comic is at 50%

NateFate · 2010-01-30, 09:26

i cant read the 23-24 chapter in the first page

Bonzo · 2010-01-30, 16:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by NateFate

i cant read the 23-24 chapter in the first page

I restyled and rename the pages, look here:
chp23
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=223

chp24
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=242

chp25
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=262

Bonzo · 2010-02-18, 12:55

New comic complete! Kallen has her past now.

I hope tonight to write all the text and send to nobodyman9 for fix it.

Bonzo · 2010-02-19, 15:03

In the wait of new comic, I'll update this one, with some art correction and text fixed, this appendix is directly connected with the new one, the event is about 30 minutes before.

Two days are passed from Lelouch's death, Nunnally visit his fake grave together with Cornelia and Kallen, but there's some tension in the air....

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09enga.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09engb.jpg

The grave must be fixed too. Lelouch is born in 1999.

Bonzo · 2010-02-20, 09:58

And now the new story, after the vist at Lelouch's grave...Kallen, wounded, dead beat and emotionally unstable want close her last question with her family.

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enga.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engb.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engc.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engd.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enge.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engf.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engg.jpg

Good fun!

Yorae_paladin1 · 2010-02-20, 14:42

very nice good work

Nobodyman9 · 2010-02-20, 22:28

Great work as always bonzo. You're writing and art continue to shine. Oh, and I know you had that bit of trouble picking out school subjects for primary school, so I just wanna let you know that you did it just fine. That were very believable report cards for Naoto and Shirley. Good work

So, what project are you gonna be working on next?

Bonzo · 2010-02-21, 05:28

Well, I just fixed another OAV page.

Next appendix is inside Royal family.

GundamFan0083 · 2010-02-21, 22:37

Excellent work Bonzo.
Looks good as always.

Love Kallen with long hair!

Shinn_Kabuto · 2010-02-22, 02:17

I loved the new chapter. It seems that Kallen's dad is happy to see Lelouch as his son-in-law.

Great work!

Bonzo · 2010-02-22, 07:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shinn_Kabuto

I loved the new chapter. It seems that Kallen's dad is happy to see Lelouch as his son-in-law.

Great work!

Well, after all, C.C "censored" his worst crimes and the world doesn't know the rest.

Bonzo · 2010-02-27, 17:33

A "new" story....in the truth I just fixed the dialogue and three panels:

Inside Ashford Estate....

Nina live hided and under Ashford family protection, but there's a turning point for her:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59aeng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59beng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59ceng.jpg

Mazryonh · 2010-02-28, 14:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bonzo

And now the new story, after the vist at Lelouch's grave...Kallen, wounded, dead beat and emotionally unstable want close her last question with her family.

Good fun!

Now that's what I call an addition that should have been part and parcel of the original series. Again, you can really see that Theodore's marriage to Romilda was purely political. The way you mention "after Naoto's birth" and "how he looked so Japanese" makes me think that Zoyo was pregnant with Naoto before Theodore met her, though.

I can't wait to see if Theodore will feature again in your OVA. If they can't get to Kallen or her children directly, the antagonists could always go after her father.

2010-02-20, 09:58	Link #272
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	And now the new story, after the vist at Lelouch's grave...Kallen, wounded, dead beat and emotionally unstable want close her last question with her family. http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enga.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engb.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engc.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engd.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enge.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engf.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engg.jpg Good fun! Last edited by Bonzo; 2010-02-21 at 05:27.

2010-02-20, 14:42	Link #273
Yorae_paladin1 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: world of devilman lady	very nice good work __________________ "I do not hate you. I do not think your a monster just another species trying to live like us humans. If there is a monster in this world its nature itself for wanting and allowing spectacles of death and destruction." Neo Human Angelus Von Doom to Abyssal Riful before there battle. My fic saga revelations of the past title Advent Rising

2010-01-20, 15:28	Link #261
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	Chapter 25 fixed, the story like I thought it from the beginning, the new panles show the big different between my old style and the new one. However, good reading! http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-01eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-02eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-03eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-04eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-05eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-06eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-07eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-08eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-09eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-10eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-11eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-12eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-13eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-14eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-15eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-16eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-17eng.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/25-18eng.JPG

2010-01-20, 19:33	Link #262
Mazryonh Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006	Bellissimo! Semplicemente Bellisimo! Much better than the anime's ending, in my view. If this were inked and colourized, I would definitely buy a physical copy at a convention. I know you didn't approach me to have this chapter edited, but I'm still here and would be happy to help with the following ones. I'm especially looking forward to how the OVA gets started.

2010-01-20, 19:54	Link #263
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Phenominal, bonzo. Of course, having edited the text for you, I was aware of what changes you were going to make so it wasn't really surprising reading it, but it was still awesome. I love the art and text changes that you made, and overall I think it's a lot better than the previous one. Keep up the good work, bonzo.

2010-01-20, 20:53	Link #264
X20A-SFreedom Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010	Wonderful remake and i like the changes and additions. Will u be redoing the other comics as well now or is that it?

2010-01-25, 12:49	Link #265
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	Well, in the wait, a little preview about the side-story everyone waiting: After the visit at fake lelouch grave, instead to return to the camper to take care of Lelouch, Kallen does a little detour, Stadfteld mansion...to face her father. Kallen is wounded, dead beat (days without sleep) and emotionally unstable, a bomb ready to explode. Spoiler for Kallen parents: About the design, Kallen's stepmother was present in the anime, but I just remember her hairstyle vaguely, then maybe she can be enough different from the original, about Kallen's dad, I invented the character, I made a design of a serious man, but with physical features connected with Kallen, just the reader can say "he's her daddy". Your opinion?

2010-01-25, 19:46	Link #266
Kid Ying Pon pon pon Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Rio	Only read it today. It was fun, i don't have any complaints about it. I think it got everything smooth and nice. Your drawings are getting really good, Bonzo.

2010-01-30, 07:28	Link #267
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	The new comic is at 50%

2010-01-30, 09:26	Link #268
NateFate Just A Newbie Animers Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: My Beloved Indonesia Age: 27	i cant read the 23-24 chapter in the first page

2010-02-18, 12:55	Link #270
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	New comic complete! Kallen has her past now. I hope tonight to write all the text and send to nobodyman9 for fix it.

2010-02-19, 15:03	Link #271
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	In the wait of new comic, I'll update this one, with some art correction and text fixed, this appendix is directly connected with the new one, the event is about 30 minutes before. Two days are passed from Lelouch's death, Nunnally visit his fake grave together with Cornelia and Kallen, but there's some tension in the air.... http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09enga.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09engb.jpg The grave must be fixed too. Lelouch is born in 1999.

2010-02-20, 22:28	Link #274
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Great work as always bonzo. You're writing and art continue to shine. Oh, and I know you had that bit of trouble picking out school subjects for primary school, so I just wanna let you know that you did it just fine. That were very believable report cards for Naoto and Shirley. Good work So, what project are you gonna be working on next?

2010-02-21, 05:28	Link #275
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	Well, I just fixed another OAV page. Next appendix is inside Royal family.

2010-02-21, 22:37	Link #276
GundamFan0083 Senior Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: classified	Excellent work Bonzo. Looks good as always. Love Kallen with long hair!

2010-02-22, 02:17	Link #277
Shinn_Kabuto Ore wa Kyasshan! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Somewhere... Age: 36	I loved the new chapter. It seems that Kallen's dad is happy to see Lelouch as his son-in-law. Great work!

2010-02-27, 17:33	Link #279
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	A "new" story....in the truth I just fixed the dialogue and three panels: Inside Ashford Estate.... Nina live hided and under Ashford family protection, but there's a turning point for her: http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59aeng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59beng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59ceng.jpg