2013-04-12, 13:38 | Link #37882 |
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An device that thirsts for adventure and grows attached to Yuuno so that she doesn't have to go back to being alone, after spending all the time since the place had sunken conscious in order to maintain the barrier in false hope that her people would return, until Yuuno admitted they've been gone for centuries or even longer, in which case she begs him to release her without mentioning she was feeding the barrier and not knowing it would eventually collapse with the back-up system failing after so long without use or repair once she passes out.
What about antagonists? Maybe their raiders who plunder the sites and see a unison device as something worthwhile, in addition to whatever else he brings out.
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2013-04-12, 13:54 | Link #37883 | |
Uchuu Kaizoku
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: From Italy
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2013-04-12, 14:25 | Link #37884 | |
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Hey! I resemble that remark! XD I actually just started a new job that has me working 10 hour shifts, 4 days a week. So preparing for that has been a major timesink. But beyond that, mostly laziness. =P If you want someone... less destructive about it and more thoughtful to accompany Yuuno on his digs while still being helpful and not eye candy or otherwise useless, your best bets are Fate, Signum, Stern, Hayate, and a Vivio on the scholarly path. As for a device, I've never been a real fan of Yuuno having one. Sometimes it's okay. But for the most part I am of the opinion it takes away from one of the more intriguing aspects of his character on the magical side. If anything, a Storage Device to act as a secondary CPU. But giving him something comparable to RH or Mach Caliber just seem out of place. Though if it's a Device as a character, that could work. Like how Yuuno couldn't use RH, but still had her with him. Non-use opens up some potential I'd think.
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2013-04-12, 14:54 | Link #37887 | |
Dark Energy
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: United States
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I'd actually like to see Yuuno have a device like Sacred Heart or Asteion: Full-on support.
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I'll have the shears and instruments of murder ready. *maniacal laughter*
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2013-04-12, 15:09 | Link #37889 | ||
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2013-04-12, 15:11 | Link #37890 |
Uchuu Kaizoku
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: From Italy
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Well...he does have a cute pet form, so he might become the new TSAB recruitment method, going around offering free Devices, cute Barrier Jackets, free starter lessons and a medical insurance plan... all you have to do is to fight potentially deadly lost logia and cosmic horrors...and train with Nanoha.
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2013-04-12, 15:13 | Link #37891 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Well, the unison device could always have a malfunction or not be compatible. We're talking a side-kick to make up for Yuuno being alone and lacking any real offense. Maybe help with storing some artifacts.
So, Scrya Chronicles Chapter 1 Outline: * Yuuno enters the site * Yuuno navigates past the traps and security * Finds Unison Device (needs to be named) who he fills in on the fate of her people and she begs him to take her away from here along with the lost logia. * Barrier begins to collapse * Yuuno narrowly escapes and wonders how it collapses while lamenting the loss of the site before retreating back to his camp site to write up the report and run a diagnostic on the device. * Raiders track him down and attack his campsite, forcing him to flee with the device and lost logia. End chapter
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2013-04-12, 15:41 | Link #37893 | |
Uchuu Kaizoku
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: From Italy
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I'd fight an Elder God too, I prefer a quick death to a long and mentally scarring training. Also if the ferret we're talking about can get the Infinite Library in order and working, what would recruiting promising youths be for him. |
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2013-04-12, 16:23 | Link #37896 |
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Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: US
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So from the way it's going, the info on the story will be like this: NAME: Whatever it is, AUTHOR: the whole thread. Sounds good, sign me up.
Anyways, I just joined up here but if you’ve been over to the fanfiction.net Nanoha section in the last month (well, and set it to find M-rated stories), you’ve seen me chugging along with my own fanfic, Bathory's Countdown. I’ll just explain quickly to anyone who hasn’t checked it out that IT IS VERY VERY OC HEAVY. It’s basically about one of Fate’s Enforcer missions from the perspective of the target she’s after and how things just start getting out of control around him. It’s fairly serious (not dark, just...serious) and yeah, it’s a bit niche, but the people that have reviewed it so far like it. As usual, critique if you want to, give thoughts if you want to, etc. This was just the first story I wanted to do; I’m coming up with some ideas that will have much more involvement from, you know, the established cast here, and I already know that those may or may not go smoothly. While I don’t want to do any OOC of course, I have a good feeling there’s going to be lots of AAC (attempt at character, copyright me 2013 original phrase do not steal). So yeah, help me out and I’ll try to help you out, and it’ll be fun. Also, I’m still going sort of back and forth on the name of the story...I called it that because I’m thinking of doing another story kind of like that and I was wanting to do one of those “make the titles similar so people know they’re sequels and stuff” but I think I might be bashing my OC into your head a little too much by putting him into the title. Oh and don’t worry: OCxFate romance will not happen, hell no, not even considering it, you’re safe there. |
2013-04-12, 17:01 | Link #37900 | |
Uchuu Kaizoku
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: From Italy
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Also for the Device, I like more the sound of Elysion, Elys for short. |
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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