Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

Sataurial? it sounds interesting....


/R/equesting a Sataurial lemon fic!!

I dare you to write it, Satashi!


Saludos, Haru

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Granted

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is."

Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

*Falls over laughing* LOL XD

[mercurianangel]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is."

Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

Spoiler for Accompanying picture...:

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is."

Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

Spoiler for Accompanying picture...:

LOL & WIN

As expected from you Satashi, and cute drawing MercurianAngel. Thanks both of you

Saludos, Haur

[Hiddenryuu]

Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)

Sorry for not being very active was working on another project...but I kind of meet a block on it hehe.

I have a question for all of you...

I want to draw a short scene... battle preferred, maybe not too long, of 2 characters (could be OC vs. a nanoha character) but my brain is a little gelified from all the work I'm doing with the other project... so I'm asking if anyone would want to write a fairly short scene that's has some action.

If there is anyone willing just give me a holler (any way) I'll be happy to discuss the details.

Btw both of the fic updates were really nice , I'm looking foward for more of it! if anyone wants to help out with anything that would be fun too!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

Sataurial? it sounds interesting....


/R/equesting a Sataurial lemon fic!!

I dare you to write it, Satashi!

Saludos, Haru

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

Originally Posted by Hiddenryuu

Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)

Sorry for not being very active was working on another project...but I kind of meet a block on it hehe.

I have a question for all of you...

I want to draw a short scene... battle preferred, maybe not too long, of 2 characters (could be OC vs. a nanoha character) but my brain is a little gelified from all the work I'm doing with the other project... so I'm asking if anyone would want to write a fairly short scene that's has some action.

If there is anyone willing just give me a holler (any way) I'll be happy to discuss the details.

Btw both of the fic updates were really nice , I'm looking foward for more of it! if anyone wants to help out with anything that would be fun too!

Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!

Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kha

Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!

Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam.

Gundam?! Where?! Where?! *Looks around frantically*

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

That reminds me of the Erio/Caro/Lutecia hardcore lemon you wrote in the old FanFic Thread

Originally Posted by Kha

Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!

I gave up trying to find out a long time ago

Originally Posted by Kha

Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam.

You know it's possible

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

Spoiler for Accompanying picture...:

Sataurial delivers another piece of WIN

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kha

Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!

Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam.

Originally Posted by Hiddenryuu

Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Sataurial delivers another piece of WIN

Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^

and Sataurial still makes me giggle :3

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^

and Sataurial still makes me giggle :3

Now THAT's what I call unfair

Sataurial..... Okay...starnge but I guess it still doesn't beat the strangest nickname you ever recieved

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^

And your new one no longer has such info. :3

Though I know how much fun such gender confusion can be, being somewhat of a forum trap myself *remembers the glorious gender chaos in the OC-thread* Ah, that was fun.

On the flipside, my love for traps have also made me somewhat of an expert in them. Just you watch Satashi, I will find out someday if my suspicions are correct.

In other news: Writing of Raising Heart will re-commense this evening. Votes are open untill then.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Now THAT's what I call unfair

Sataurial..... Okay...starnge but I guess it still doesn't beat the strangest nickname you ever recieved

lol its only half my nickname

actually, Sata is 4 characters but urial is 5,

so it's 60% Angel and 40% Satashi XD

Originally Posted by Keroko

And your new one no longer has such info. :3

Though I know how much fun such gender confusion can be, being somewhat of a forum trap myself *remembers the glorious gender chaos in the OC-thread* Ah, that was fun.

On the flipside, my love for traps have also made me somewhat of an expert in them. Just you watch Satashi, I will find out someday if my suspicions are correct.

In other news: Writing of Raising Heart will re-commense this evening. Votes are open untill then.

Yay RH! and omg, Keroko is a trap! Get in the car! >: 3

I know he's male but I like Keroko-chan, so Keroko-kun is female to me

[krisslanza]

Actually I always wondered why say Graham called Nanoha and Fate -kun I thought that was a honorific for boys...

And today I feel like noting I actually had to replace the pencil lead in my mechinical pencil. It feels like a milestone going through the like... 3 or 4 it started with Though alas it wasn't all in SoL work (Which off-hand I think I'll re-write a few sections of it that I feel just read very, very bland and dull) but mostly from having to write Arc-en-Ciel notes.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Actually I always wondered why say Graham called Nanoha and Fate -kun I thought that was a honorific for boys...

-kun and -chan are the most misunderstood honorifics. -chan is generally used between females, and -kun is generally used between males. But it doesn't mean it's limited to just that.

-kun can also mean an underclassman or such, which is why Graham calls them -kun. "-chan" in that case would be a little awkward.

Also like in my story, Yuuno calls Candy "Candy-kun" because she's a student.

Annnnd, -chan can be used for adoration too or cuteness too. Like a girl calling a male -chan would symbolize closeness or teasing.

those are just a few examples, and not limited to just those ^^ It's hard doing fanfics with them sometimes, but they add a depth you just can't get in English ><

[krisslanza]

Aaaah I see We didn't touch much on -kun in Japanese I so I wasn't aware of its other uses (I knew -chan had some more uses then what we were taught in class).
That helps some It is difficult writing a Japanese-oriented character when you don't know too much about it... (Like I noticed I goofed Lindy up in SoL since she actually DOES use honorifics... So I had to correct that.)

So true though. I know Feral once noted in YU a scene just didn't feel right anymore since they removed the honorifics. (Elena calls Milanor "Master" at first but he complains and she now calls him "Sir"... Feral says the scene is better in japanese since it involves a change in honorifics or something)

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Yay RH! and omg, Keroko is a trap! Get in the car! >: 3

I know he's male but I like Keroko-chan, so Keroko-kun is female to me

The sign of a perfect trap is denial.

Raising Heart Final Vote Count:

A: IIIIII
B: IIIIII
C: IIIIIIII

Close finish. The closest we've had so far, but honesty wins this time.

[Yaya-chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Granted

Spoiler for Sataurial Lemon:

Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."

"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."

"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"

"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"

"Yes, Angel?"

"I love your lemons."

LOL!! Sataurial lemons are so refreshing.
Really a win.

[Satashi]

Speaking of lemons......

Title: Please Teach Me ( a spoof of an old CCS doujin lol)
pairing: Nanoha/Vivio ( mainly Vivio solo with Nanoha's help )
Summary: After a day at school, a teenage Vivio calls Nanoha to her room to ask some embarrassing questions about things she doesn't understand. Nanoha/Vivio bonding
length:2.2k words
Rating: Mature
Notes: Although this is technically N/V, it's more of Nanoha being there with/for Vivio. Hard to explain. I actually like this one. It shows a lot of love along with hentainess.

Right now this is too long for PM........trying to think of a way to share it.

[Ryand-Smith]

Satashi. I do believe there is a internet website asstr+.+org (Links broken, because hotlinking to adult content is not smart.) that holds these sort of stories there. Just a quick suggestion from your neighborhood friendly lurker Smith.

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