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Old 2013-11-22, 09:03   Link #48621
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Dammit wave. Don't keep cecilovers like me waiting
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What demi said
Careful what you wish for. I'll try to get it done soonest. If my one-shot for Houki was dramatic, Cecilia's...is comedic.
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Old 2013-11-22, 09:10   Link #48622
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Pss... No idea today, except one that include Houki and Ichika posting as professional models after the magazine.
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Old 2013-11-22, 09:11   Link #48623
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"Stop being childish"

"Leave me alone"

"You... how dare you to act such a way to your senior!"

"I never raised you this way, Dan!"

"Face it, you two don't care about me. I'm unwanted, I'm nothing but failure in your eyes, nothing but an eyesore and a load in this family. Do you have any idea what I have to endure for YEARS, GRANDPA? HAVE YOU ANY IDEA DAD?"

"No? Well tough luck, you're not the only one who can act selfishly. Don't you bring shit like seniority when you can't even see your own flesh and blood as equals, stop being a hypocrite."

"Would you shut your mouth already?!"

"I have enough of this crap and might as well give zero damn about it, it's not my choice I have little to no talent that you can be proud off, and when I think I've beating my asses off to achieve something, you two always dismiss it as not enough."

"WAIT YOU-!"

"DAN!!"
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"Dan is not here"

"Are you sure?"

"Check it yourself, every inch of it"

"..."

"I am serious, check every inch of it"

"...that brat, having no idea what's good for him-"

"Get out"

"Wha-"

"Get out or I'll force you"

"Kid what are you...WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

"He was right, adults are never trustworthy. Now get out before I call police"
Bring on the family drama!
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Old 2013-11-22, 09:22   Link #48624
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If you think this is messy, just look at the Orimura.

By the way, how many people here actually gamble with a full Drama?
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Old 2013-11-22, 09:26   Link #48625
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The second Quote? That is Ichika. Between him, Dan, and Lingyin's sistuation no wonder Ichika is wary of adults (with few exceptions). Before they knew it, Dan end up in Europe participating in Gunpla championship.

Also, you had to define full drama. Even silly things can be engaging if brought properly, it doesn't always need to be rapepillageburn and it's equivalent.
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Old 2013-11-22, 09:40   Link #48626
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(Sob)

"Ichika, what happened? Who made you like this?" Chifuyu frantically asked her crying little brother.

(Sob) "Chifuyu-nee, some kid at school said that I couldn't be a hero, and then we fought." (Sob)

To reaping the dream of a little kid is even worse than to kill them.

"Shh... Don't cry, little brother! A hero is a person who shouldered the weight of this world on his shoulder, the man who protect his beloved, and yet still stand tall with it."

"Chifuyu-nee... Do you think that I will be a hero?"

"I'm sure that you will be a fine hero! Now go and play with your friends!"

As Chifuyu watching Ichika running and shouting to Madoka plus Houki about how would him protect both of them, a small smile creeped through her face. And Tabane's, her best friend.

"They grow up so fast, huh Chifuyu? Look, they have already reach a sharing agreement!"

She means Houki and Madoka both hugging Ichika, which Chifuyu has to admit, is quite cute.

"I know!"

...

Too bad that the Sharing Agreement didn't last long.
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:06   Link #48627
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Say, just a passing thought, how would IS change if Chifuyu is Ichika and Madoka's Mother?
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:16   Link #48628
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Underage mother? That'll change a lot, and probably for the worse.

9 years age difference, think about it.
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:21   Link #48629
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Have I say that Chifuyu is that young? Meaning a late-30s woman, a motherly and mature figure.
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:27   Link #48630
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Well, that's a rather great change too, though this one might be slightly better.

I dunno, the image of thirty something woman in an I.S. just don't click
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:35   Link #48631
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Well, how old is Ash Ketchum's mother?

Who cares! I might even make Maya as their adopted sister, and a "Mother - Daughter-in-Laws" situation, especially with Laura!
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:43   Link #48632
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No one knew

And Ash is 10, so that's at least 5 years out.
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Old 2013-11-22, 10:56   Link #48633
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We have Child Ichika, Mature Ichika, Female Ichika, Badass Ichika, Romantic Ichika,...

So what we don't got?

Lion Ichika?

Damn! Too much Saber!

Say, what if all these thing is just a dream? Ichika is just a near-death kid, chained to his bed and thinking this as a mean to delusion him? And in the last moment to obilvation, he realized that life itself is a dream. A Nightmare or the Opposite, it's yourself.
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Old 2013-11-22, 11:01   Link #48634
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Sure, go with it.

Meanwhile I'm deluding myself believing that this is just an extended nightmare, the real me is reading a perfectly written light novel with likeable characters and engaging plot.

Or is it?

Miner, just in case you wonder why I react just like that, that exact same plot you propose appear in gunpla thread of all things. I just wonder why people keep trying to make Orimura more miserable than they are already.
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Old 2013-11-22, 11:06   Link #48635
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Hnnn, Chifuyu as Ichika's actual mother...? ... *beat*

... I hate my brain sometimes...

Before that, her role in IS would be either reduced, or the timeline has to be altered if she's to do all that stuff and still give birth to him. And also, is 'Daddy' going to be around, or will she raise him as a single mother? Things I must know before I re-write virtually her entire story...

Giving birth to Ichika would be the reason she'd retire - wanting to devote everything to raising him (she is like that). She *has* to learn to cook, do laundry, all of that. The Shinomono can help with that.

She'll try to keep a relatively private life but you know how the paparazzi are. She can even have a bad run-in with one of them and she flips out, nearly killing the guy (either partial IS summon or highheel to face) for spooking Ichika so much he runs into traffic.

A baby sitter she will need... and this is where the fun can begin... XD Houki can be his baby-sitter for the longest time.
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Old 2013-11-22, 11:18   Link #48636
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Weird... Maybe I've got a counterpart on another part of this world?

Have you guys read How the Steel Was Tempered (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_the..._Was_Tempered)? My favorite book and the guideline to generations of Vietnamese youth in our War. The character has got pretty much every type of disaster upon him. And yet he still managed to come out as the victory challenger to Fate. And that's how I want every of my character to be.

You could also say that I was influenced by Marxim Gorky and Lev Tonstoi.

Beside, Ichika's father, according to that scenario of mine, were an aircraft scientist, mentor to Tabane and died in a mysterious accident - Tabane picked Chifuyu for her is an Ace fighter pilot.
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Old 2013-11-22, 11:28   Link #48637
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That's alright, just remember that there are limits.

I'll reiterate someone in SB:

"If you want to read dark, read Ai-Ren, heavy drama, light in the end of tunnel. Instead, many fanfic writer want eveyrthing they encounter dark and edgy as if they're the second coming of Gen Urobuchi or Yoshiyuki Tomino"

Your ability to write decide how far you can push things to hell before the readers lost their sympathy because they can't simply see a satisfying conclusion. While that's not my cup of cake, I don't think the concept itself is bad, it's the execution that need to be carefully done.
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Old 2013-11-22, 11:32   Link #48638
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"The destination is important, but so does the road"?

Can't agree with you more!

Good night, everyone! And don't forget to brush!
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Old 2013-11-22, 12:20   Link #48639
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I know he's gone but...

Having 'every character' be from the same mold, or go through the same trials will get boring really quick. 'Dark and Edgy' certainly does not make for automatic 'compelling story-telling'.

Experimentation and practice - the only sure-fire way to get better.

Now then... To finish up compiling those three parts...

How many of you have Gmail accounts? I just need to know if you have one since I'll post this up on GoogleDocs and have you guys take a look at it/make comments.
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Old 2013-11-22, 12:27   Link #48640
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We have Child Ichika, Mature Ichika, Female Ichika, Badass Ichika, Romantic Ichika,...

So what we don't got?
Lecherous Ichika, Crazy Ichika, Emo Ichika... or Homo Ichika.

BTW, more ideas for KR/IS xover, again:

Quote:
"Oh, what do we have here? Another pathetic little foot soldier."

"Phantom Task. You bastards again? Why don't you just stop? We're sick of your antics. We're sick of all of you humiliating us. Ever since that machine was made, we've lost our dignity and pride. We are replaced by a bunch of girls playing soldiers using that mechanical abomination. Then you guys came, and killed many of us wherever or whenever you pleased, like we're some sort of pests. We're tired of being treated like trash!"

DURIAN!

"And with this, I'm gonna show you...

LOCK ON!

"..what it means to be a true soldier! Henshin!"

DURIAN ARMS! MISTER DANGEROUS!
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