2013-04-29, 11:59 | Link #42321 |
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Bonus points: Ichika becomes paranoid since this is the second cross-dresser he's seen and looks at two of his other male kids (Maya's and Charlotte's) who look remarkably like their mothers. Scene cuts away and when it cuts back, both are teary eyed and complaining that they "lost something" and Ichika affirms that they're "Definitely male". Kanzashi's kid shakes his head and says he's glad he took after his dad.
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2013-04-29, 12:12 | Link #42323 |
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They're talking about their wallets:/ Ichika didn't actually pants them: He just looked at their ID's, but rather than ask for their wallets he took them in a panic, so the kids whine that they lost it.
Of course, that doesn't stop the yaoi fangirl students from imagining:/ They DID make a doujinshi about Ichika and Dan in the Tankobon manga, remember? Those three show up sporadically in the fic.....and they're hunting for new material Good thing there are no dark alleys in ISA.
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2013-04-29, 12:16 | Link #42325 |
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Again, love it.
I think what I love most about EOxIS is how depressing everything would be. When they reach the end only a cruel truth stands. It's overdone but something that just pulls at you. The labyrinth is a place that promises wealth but it is also the grave of the foolhardy. Not only is strength needed but teamwork as well. Being alone will do you little good as monsters roam in packs and waves. The FOEs that seek their next meal or victim left particularly alone for their tendency to not discriminate friend from foe. Pun not intended. |
2013-04-29, 12:43 | Link #42326 |
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I just love mixing whatever together. Well, almost anything involving Chifuyu.
Although I hope that the showdown between Chifuyu and Madoka doesn't occur 'off-screen' , or if it does, we get to have a 'flashback' of sorts to it. Ichika rushes to his sister, who is pretty much lethargic at that point until she (finally) recognizes Ichika. Could take moments or even days for her to finally *recognize* him and she 'wakes up' .
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2013-04-29, 18:23 | Link #42328 | |
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On the issue of fireworks
What demi said is real: in Japan, tradition is taken seriously, law and all. Massive fireworks are done by licensed artisan, who cares about the result more than the money itself (they usually got 'just enough profit' instead of 'plenty'). The festival result in serious amount of paperwork for government. Small fireworks? Yeah, personal enjoyment too. God bless you try to ignite one in cramped place. On the issue of Miko: yes, prank trick can be done, as are volunteering (the so called part time Mikos). However, the more traditional, sacred ceremony require a trained and educated Miko raised from young age. Japanese is flexible and advance swiftly, but they respect tradition like no other country did. (Although sometimes, their sense of humor can be damned weird) On the issue of young parents: Girls are 16 at minimum, assuming she's out of school or the school made exception (damned impossible most of the time). Quote:
No, really. I remember certain soccer mom screaming the hell out when she looked at very innocent nude scene (was that Jungle Books?)
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2013-04-29, 22:18 | Link #42335 | |
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Yea.... Super Robot or revealing the ultimate form of something.
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2013-04-30, 03:20 | Link #42337 | |
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Not me at least, I'll just go and get some sleep.
Wrote at least 5 pages full of words into the first 2 chapters on my story so no more action for me. Have to reorganize the plot in my head first before continue. I'll just leave this possible FF scenario (not from the story). Quote:
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2013-04-30, 07:38 | Link #42339 |
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Hmm, probably something mundane
Unless you talk about the future scene ----- On the topic of ST, I changed Laura from sadist bitch to rude bitch. Would it be better or worse? She and Lingyin teamed up to fight Louise's gang (Laura started it, but they unwilling to accept Lingyin's apology in Laura's behalf), Lingyin is pissed and the result is destruction of several training suit and Shenlong (Cecilia and Charles interrupt soon) Instead of being thankful, Laura rudely mock Ling's earlier attempt at diplomacy, Charles called Laura on that. Chifuyu defuse situation the way she did in canon, however, this made Madoka and Cecilia pissed.
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