2011-10-17, 20:33 | Link #3261 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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I'll try and work on it! PM me if you have more details as to how I can improve Yeah, Inami might've sounded arrongant. But he knows that they were worn out by almost being beaten by the drone squad in the previous chapter. In a way, he's trying to repay their efforts this time round, telling them to hang back while he does the work. Then again, most of the canon characters are stubborn anyways, so they'll pretty much head off to help him. (Especially Cecilia)
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2011-10-17, 20:42 | Link #3263 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Ichika stopped thinking about taking part time job after Chifuyu gave an implication that she was the one tampering his work, and will beat him (and Dan) he's persistent of taking one. Yes, Chifuyu can play subtle if she wanted. @ Stratospear That's pretty much what I wanted to tell, the rest is incredible.
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2011-10-17, 21:02 | Link #3267 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Zero - Xanatos Gambit by Chifuyu? That seems completely in chatacter for her Beware the power of Guan Yu!
@ Meister - Of course once she sorts it out she'll have to deal with a sexually confused teenage shota:P This leads to the talk with Karon asking her if she's a boy because she's flat chested and Yamada says girls get bigger chests when they grow older. Paparazzi-san from Canada would probably spread a rumor once she hears Maya describing sex to Irish behind a closed door whixh sounds very innuendo filled. |
2011-10-17, 22:28 | Link #3270 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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I suck at writing fanservice along with romance so I'm just doing it for some gags. Though Irish will probably act like a douche again once he regains his memory since he usually doesn't act like Maya is his mom (He calls her by last name, never accepts her help and keeps remarking that she acts like a kid) but that's the joy of writing grimdark along with jerkass protagonists, it allows you to give them a lot of character development.
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2011-10-17, 23:35 | Link #3273 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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List for people who'll be in "Daydreams of Maidens in Love"
Houki Cecilia Rin Ran Charlotte Laura Tatenashi Kanzashi Madoka (Zero's version) Bonus Chapter: Ushio Nohotoke going on a date with Dan Gotonda, not a daydream. Anybody have any additions? |
2011-10-18, 00:19 | Link #3274 | ||
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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(yep, i'm emulating Eratas' method, having as much draft as possible) Quote:
Suggestion: Chifuyu daydream, when she's drunk.
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