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raphaël · 2006-05-09, 17:50

Hello everyone,

I've been so impressed by all the works in here i really wanted to participate!
But there were two big problems. First, I don't know how to draw. But I can write. Some will say "So what? it's OK, then!". Well, almost OK. Cause the second big problem is that I'm french, and i wouldn't even mean to ruin such a beautiful language as English.
NightWish told me i could write in my own language if i clearly mention it the title. So i did it.
Hope there will be some French-speakers here who will enjoy it.

My story is called Ishijima. That's not fanfiction, and i'm not sure it's gonna be so short a story.
Here i'll just post the first chapter. I have to warn all those who learn French here ( maybe there are some, who knows.

) the way i write is not really common. A bit complicated if you ask me.
But it's really based on "anime way of feeling". Then it's a bit "yuri-like", maybe. ^^ So i do think it belongs here, in a way.

raphaël · 2006-05-09, 17:54

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raphaël · 2006-05-09, 17:58

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raphaël · 2006-05-09, 17:58

Here were the two first chapters.
If anyone made it that far, please tell me. ^^

Oloko · 2006-05-10, 11:07

Hi, I read all of it and I'm a bit confused.

I mean, they seems to be all lesbians on this island and they get child by the gouvernement. When is this story taking place and what is going on in this world? Clyde could not have a child but we dont know why. Maybe we will know all of this later? Anyway, I would like to continue reading it, could you post more of it?

raphaël · 2006-05-10, 12:52

Actually, as i said, this is gonna get pretty long, and even more confusing. ^^
Thanks for reading, thank you very much.

I still have a very clear idea where i want to take my characters, and i don't want to spoil it, so i hope you won't mind if i don't say anything on what's coming. ^^

Anyway, i wrote that quite a while ago so i'm not complelety satisfied with the style anymore, now i've read it again. It's still in progress since so i'm glad some people want to read it it'll give me courage to finish it.

Ok, i'll post the next chapter. Don't worry if it seems a bit out of the story, cause it's not.

raphaël · 2006-05-10, 12:55

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raphaël · 2006-05-10, 12:59

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raphaël · 2006-05-21, 09:14

Well, as I don't get any feedback, i was hesitating over keeping on posting my story here.

But then, I decided to do it, at least until where I stopped. So here is the end of chapter 3. There's a 4 coming. Don't be too impatient, please.

I know it's hard, isn't it?

ISN'T IT????

lol, it doesn't really matter though.

raphaël · 2006-05-21, 09:16

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raphaël · 2006-05-21, 09:19

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raphaël · 2006-06-05, 19:29

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guest · 2006-06-05, 21:12

Now all we need is someone to translate this into English.

Joke aside, I don't know a word of French but from the "only" reply here, Have you see the anime "Simoun?" It is currently running in Japan and it is only fansub up to ep 3, unfortunately. But I think the concept is somewhat similar to yours and it is a very interesting show. Just thought you might be interested if you are writing stuff like this.

papaquong · 2006-06-05, 21:26

ca parle de koi cette histoire? >.<

raphaël · 2006-06-06, 07:21

Thanks!
Guest, as I said, my English is not good enough to translate it myself.

I tried watching Simoun but i didn't find it particularly interesting. I just had a look at ep.1 actually. Maybe I should try again.
Anyway, from what I saw, Simoun is quite different. My story would be sort of a yuri tragedy, if you ask me.
papaquong, well, just read, and you'll now what it is about.

It's still a bit mysterious for now, but I did it on purpose.

Thanks again for answering! ^^

BaronNoir · 2006-06-06, 10:34

J'te lis si tu me lis...

BaronNoir · 2006-06-06, 13:50

Bon...ça a l'air bien, mais une FEMME qui s'appelle CLYDE ? Ça fait, euh, viril, comme nom...

raphaël · 2006-06-06, 19:44

Thanks a lot for reading, BaronNoir. About names, I don't know if you realized where they all come from. I'm sure you do. If you don't check all the names with Google. ^^ I think Clyde is cool. Then she supposed to be quite "virile", as you said.

Then, please, I'm saying that to you, papaquong, and all the people who will write next : My text is in French, but as an English forum it's better to write in English when you post. As you can see I post in English wherever there's no spoiler tag.

I'm counting on you all.

BaronNoir · 2006-06-06, 20:10

England rivers...

raphaël · 2006-07-08, 23:07

Yes, those are English rivers, but you'll see many more.

Ok, I'm just digging up my own thread again, sorry. But I see there are some clicks, so i assume there will be more if I get this in the first page for a while.

I won't ask for feedback anymore, I'll just keep writing.

I'm not through with chapter 3 so... please be patient.

2006-05-09, 17:50	Link #1
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	(in french/ en français) Short story: Ishijima Hello everyone, I've been so impressed by all the works in here i really wanted to participate! But there were two big problems. First, I don't know how to draw. But I can write. Some will say "So what? it's OK, then!". Well, almost OK. Cause the second big problem is that I'm french, and i wouldn't even mean to ruin such a beautiful language as English. NightWish told me i could write in my own language if i clearly mention it the title. So i did it. Hope there will be some French-speakers here who will enjoy it. My story is called Ishijima. That's not fanfiction, and i'm not sure it's gonna be so short a story. Here i'll just post the first chapter. I have to warn all those who learn French here ( maybe there are some, who knows. ) the way i write is not really common. A bit complicated if you ask me. But it's really based on "anime way of feeling". Then it's a bit "yuri-like", maybe. ^^ So i do think it belongs here, in a way. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net Last edited by raphaël; 2006-06-05 at 19:23.

2006-05-09, 17:54	Link #2
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Chapitre 1 I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:31.

2006-05-09, 17:58	Link #3
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Chapitre 2 I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:31.

2006-05-09, 17:58	Link #4
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Pause Here were the two first chapters. If anyone made it that far, please tell me. ^^ __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net Last edited by raphaël; 2006-05-09 at 18:56.

2006-05-10, 11:07	Link #5
Oloko Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Quebec Age: 35	Hi, I read all of it and I'm a bit confused. I mean, they seems to be all lesbians on this island and they get child by the gouvernement. When is this story taking place and what is going on in this world? Clyde could not have a child but we dont know why. Maybe we will know all of this later? Anyway, I would like to continue reading it, could you post more of it? __________________ I know there is a mistake in "Souufrance" but I lost my .psd Animes: Seen all Masterpieces

2006-05-10, 12:52	Link #6
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	explanations? Actually, as i said, this is gonna get pretty long, and even more confusing. ^^ Thanks for reading, thank you very much. I still have a very clear idea where i want to take my characters, and i don't want to spoil it, so i hope you won't mind if i don't say anything on what's coming. ^^ Anyway, i wrote that quite a while ago so i'm not complelety satisfied with the style anymore, now i've read it again. It's still in progress since so i'm glad some people want to read it it'll give me courage to finish it. Ok, i'll post the next chapter. Don't worry if it seems a bit out of the story, cause it's not. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net

2006-05-10, 12:55	Link #7
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Ex I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:32.

2006-05-10, 12:59	Link #8
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Chapitre 3 I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:32.

2006-05-21, 09:14	Link #9
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	digging up... Well, as I don't get any feedback, i was hesitating over keeping on posting my story here. But then, I decided to do it, at least until where I stopped. So here is the end of chapter 3. There's a 4 coming. Don't be too impatient, please. I know it's hard, isn't it? ISN'T IT???? lol, it doesn't really matter though. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net

2006-05-21, 09:16	Link #10
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	INTRA : L'affaire des petites culottes compensées I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:33.

2006-05-21, 09:19	Link #11
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Chapitre 3 Suite I'm using my blog now, see the last message http://injektileur.over-blog.com __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:28.

2006-06-05, 19:29	Link #12
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Ex 2 I'm using my blog now... __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net Last edited by raphaël; 2009-11-07 at 15:27.

2006-06-05, 21:12	Link #13
guest guess Join Date: Nov 2003	Now all we need is someone to translate this into English. Joke aside, I don't know a word of French but from the "only" reply here, Have you see the anime "Simoun?" It is currently running in Japan and it is only fansub up to ep 3, unfortunately. But I think the concept is somewhat similar to yours and it is a very interesting show. Just thought you might be interested if you are writing stuff like this. __________________

2006-06-05, 21:26	Link #14
papaquong Anime Fan Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Canada Age: 34	ca parle de koi cette histoire? >.<

2006-06-06, 07:21	Link #15
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Thanks! Guest, as I said, my English is not good enough to translate it myself. I tried watching Simoun but i didn't find it particularly interesting. I just had a look at ep.1 actually. Maybe I should try again. Anyway, from what I saw, Simoun is quite different. My story would be sort of a yuri tragedy, if you ask me. papaquong, well, just read, and you'll now what it is about. It's still a bit mysterious for now, but I did it on purpose. Thanks again for answering! ^^ __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net

2006-06-06, 10:34	Link #16
BaronNoir Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005	J'te lis si tu me lis...

2006-06-06, 13:50	Link #17
BaronNoir Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005	Bon...ça a l'air bien, mais une FEMME qui s'appelle CLYDE ? Ça fait, euh, viril, comme nom...

2006-06-06, 19:44	Link #18
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	No French in the posts please. Thanks a lot for reading, BaronNoir. About names, I don't know if you realized where they all come from. I'm sure you do. If you don't check all the names with Google. ^^ I think Clyde is cool. Then she supposed to be quite "virile", as you said. Then, please, I'm saying that to you, papaquong, and all the people who will write next : My text is in French, but as an English forum it's better to write in English when you post. As you can see I post in English wherever there's no spoiler tag. I'm counting on you all. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net

2006-06-06, 20:10	Link #19
BaronNoir Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005	England rivers...

2006-07-08, 23:07	Link #20
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 42	Yes, those are English rivers, but you'll see many more. Ok, I'm just digging up my own thread again, sorry. But I see there are some clicks, so i assume there will be more if I get this in the first page for a while. I won't ask for feedback anymore, I'll just keep writing. I'm not through with chapter 3 so... please be patient. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net