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Bonzo · 2009-12-02, 21:33

Shinn_Kabuto · 2009-12-02, 23:30

Currently reading ch. 24. I'm loving it....

Mazryonh · 2009-12-03, 00:17

Great work, Bonzo. I swear if this was translated, colourized, and put up for sale at Comiket in Japan, you'd be one of the top sellers!

Nobodyman9 · 2009-12-03, 17:42

Awesome as always bonzo. I think this revised version is definitely better than the original. I always love expansion on the characters and story, and I think you did a good job with it. Also, as I've said before, your art has really improved from when you first started this project. It just keeps looking more and more authentic. Also, good choice on the new font style.

Shinn_Kabuto · 2009-12-03, 20:01

The newer version is better than the old one. heck, I love to see Nunnally as an angry little lamb.

Bonzo · 2009-12-06, 11:13

A couple of appendixes, old works, but now with a fixed english text thanks to nobodyman9 and some modifies, chp 24 changed, then all the rest must be evolve:

Turn 24.4:
After the final battle in the evening, something happen:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4enga.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engb.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engc.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engd.jpg

Turn 24.5:
Few days after, Kallen is dead inside, her duty is the only strenght give her the will to live, finally she says to Lelouch what she feel, but for the terror to hear every possible reply, she do it...during Lelouch's coma.

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5aeng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5beng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5ceng.jpg

Betteroffer · 2009-12-09, 00:03

Wow. The improvements are great. The art, the story, and the characters themselves. Pretty much everything that Nobodyman9 said, though after this I would have kissed Kaguya if she had exiled Chiba from Japan for her outburst, but let Tohdoh stay.

Kallen's expression in the third panel of page 14 was absolutely heartbreaking, I really mean that. Bravo.

Bonzo · 2009-12-14, 17:12

New comic work in progress.

Bonzo · 2009-12-21, 20:17

Very well.

Ladies and gentlemen, another of the appendix everyone waited, a pregnant kalulu story and the christmas card together:

Note, a topless inside:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.54eng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engb.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engc.JPG
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engd.JPG

Nobodyman9 · 2009-12-23, 16:59

Great work as always bonzo. My only complaint is that some of the dialogue is a bit shaky. For example, when Kallen lies to Lelouch telling him she forgot to take the morning-after pill Lelouch catches her and asks her to be honest and then she immediately admits yes, she wanted to have a baby. There seems to be no transition there. Usually people are a bit hesitant when they get caught in a lie, but we didn't see Kallen react at all.

Other than that it was great. Can't wait for your next work.

Bonzo · 2009-12-23, 19:27

I know, some adjustment was necessary.

Tomorrow I'll start to fix chp 25 seriously.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-12-23, 23:45

Sounds good. But are you gonna get us that Christmas pic, right? You know the one

Bonzo · 2009-12-24, 08:15

The pregnant story IS the christmas pic.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-12-25, 21:18

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bonzo

The pregnant story IS the christmas pic.

What about that pic with...

Spoiler for pic spoiler:

Bonzo · 2009-12-26, 14:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nobodyman9

What about that pic with...

Spoiler for pic spoiler:

Oh, you right, but my idea to draw it for christmas changed with the appendix story, however, I'll draw that art too.

Like a little surprise added on chp 25.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-12-26, 23:14

Gotcha. Can't wait

Bonzo · 2009-12-31, 09:48

First 6 pages of chp 25 are fixed, be patience

Bonzo · 2010-01-08, 09:11

80% of job done.

X20A-SFreedom · 2010-01-13, 23:03

Just finished reading ur work, and i love it. it rare i get moved by reading or watching media but i must say u have my respect and gratitude for such an amazing piece of work. Best remake of code geass ending ever...

Bonzo · 2010-01-15, 04:03

I'm happy you liked it, but wait to see the last chapter after the modifies.

2009-12-02, 21:33	Link #241
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	Finally, chapter 24 of R2Remake is fixed, a lot of modifies, in fact from 16 pages, the chapter now is 25 pages, thanks to mazryohn and nobodyman9 for to fix the english translation, I know, the difference between the old art comic and the new one is like a abyss....be patience: http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-01eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-02eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-03eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-04eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-05eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-06eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-07eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-08eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-09eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-10eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-11eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-12eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-13eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-14eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-15eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-16eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-17eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-18eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-19eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-20eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-21eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-22eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-23eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-24eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/24-25eng.jpg Last edited by Bonzo; 2009-12-03 at 19:13.

2009-12-03, 17:42	Link #244
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Awesome as always bonzo. I think this revised version is definitely better than the original. I always love expansion on the characters and story, and I think you did a good job with it. Also, as I've said before, your art has really improved from when you first started this project. It just keeps looking more and more authentic. Also, good choice on the new font style. Last edited by Nobodyman9; 2009-12-09 at 04:29.

2009-12-21, 20:17	Link #249
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	Very well. Ladies and gentlemen, another of the appendix everyone waited, a pregnant kalulu story and the christmas card together: Note, a topless inside: http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.54eng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engb.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engc.JPG http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engd.JPG Last edited by Bonzo; 2009-12-25 at 05:19.

2009-12-02, 23:30	Link #242
Shinn_Kabuto Ore wa Kyasshan! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Somewhere... Age: 36	Currently reading ch. 24. I'm loving it....

2009-12-03, 00:17	Link #243
Mazryonh Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006	Great work, Bonzo. I swear if this was translated, colourized, and put up for sale at Comiket in Japan, you'd be one of the top sellers!

2009-12-03, 20:01	Link #245
Shinn_Kabuto Ore wa Kyasshan! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Somewhere... Age: 36	The newer version is better than the old one. heck, I love to see Nunnally as an angry little lamb.

2009-12-06, 11:13	Link #246
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	A couple of appendixes, old works, but now with a fixed english text thanks to nobodyman9 and some modifies, chp 24 changed, then all the rest must be evolve: Turn 24.4: After the final battle in the evening, something happen: http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4enga.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engb.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engc.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4engd.jpg Turn 24.5: Few days after, Kallen is dead inside, her duty is the only strenght give her the will to live, finally she says to Lelouch what she feel, but for the terror to hear every possible reply, she do it...during Lelouch's coma. http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5aeng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5beng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5ceng.jpg

2009-12-09, 00:03	Link #247
Betteroffer Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009	Wow. The improvements are great. The art, the story, and the characters themselves. Pretty much everything that Nobodyman9 said, though after this I would have kissed Kaguya if she had exiled Chiba from Japan for her outburst, but let Tohdoh stay. Kallen's expression in the third panel of page 14 was absolutely heartbreaking, I really mean that. Bravo.

2009-12-14, 17:12	Link #248
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	New comic work in progress.

2009-12-23, 16:59	Link #250
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Great work as always bonzo. My only complaint is that some of the dialogue is a bit shaky. For example, when Kallen lies to Lelouch telling him she forgot to take the morning-after pill Lelouch catches her and asks her to be honest and then she immediately admits yes, she wanted to have a baby. There seems to be no transition there. Usually people are a bit hesitant when they get caught in a lie, but we didn't see Kallen react at all. Other than that it was great. Can't wait for your next work.

2009-12-23, 19:27	Link #251
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	I know, some adjustment was necessary. Tomorrow I'll start to fix chp 25 seriously.

2009-12-23, 23:45	Link #252
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Sounds good. But are you gonna get us that Christmas pic, right? You know the one

2009-12-24, 08:15	Link #253
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	The pregnant story IS the christmas pic.

2009-12-26, 23:14	Link #256
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 35	Gotcha. Can't wait

2009-12-31, 09:48	Link #257
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	First 6 pages of chp 25 are fixed, be patience

2010-01-08, 09:11	Link #258
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	80% of job done.

2010-01-13, 23:03	Link #259
X20A-SFreedom Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010	Just finished reading ur work, and i love it. it rare i get moved by reading or watching media but i must say u have my respect and gratitude for such an amazing piece of work. Best remake of code geass ending ever...

2010-01-15, 04:03	Link #260
Bonzo I change anime endings. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Italy Age: 46	I'm happy you liked it, but wait to see the last chapter after the modifies.