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HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 02:44

Episode 4 is...OUT!!!!?????

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 03:08

Yeah, Saintess, Spear and I watched it at AFA11. Shit was awesome.

That said, stop trying to kill Cecilia. You're only making me want to feature her more.

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 03:11

I admit, it took so long to come out I forgot what was going on, Cecilia always seems to be the butt of those eh?

wavehawk · 2011-11-20, 03:18

Well, my first chapter had someone trying to kidnap Charu, so killing Cecillia wouln't be much of a stretch, would it...??

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 03:22

I'm actually not afraid to give her a bigger role in Vandam. After all, the initial plan did call for Houki and Cecilia to appear. I later reduced it in case I caused a canon paradox.

But perhaps I should have someone worthy of being called a Representative Candidate do a little more...

Houki still gets pranked by Tabane. But in a good way.

Laura remains a cameo however. The 'villainous plot' scene I have for her is too cheesy to pass up. I'll just face-drop Charlotte, Ichika and Lingyin for completeness.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-11-20, 03:23

Oh... Goddamn it...

Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 4 Preview:

StratoSpear · 2011-11-20, 03:55

Chinatown pretty stale today so I got back earlier than I thought I would...

Also Jak, writer's jam I suppose?

DarkJak2050 · 2011-11-20, 04:06

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Chinatown pretty stale today so I got back earlier than I thought I would...

Also Jak, writer's jam I suppose?

No it's not that. I got Ch. 4 pretty much sorted out, it's just that I didn't have the time I thought I had today to write it.

I planned on using the whole day to write Ch. 4 out, but because of "personal matters" offline (the kind that's not all that important), hours were lost. If I didn't loose those hours, Ch. 4 would've been done hours ago.

Oh and as for an Opening that you guys talked about a few pages ago; I think I have something for Project Silverback. It's something that some of you guys are familiar with...

Spoiler for Possible Project Silverback OP:

StratoSpear · 2011-11-20, 04:26

I see...

Well, I have my times too. Back to typing~!

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 04:49

I go to sleep for a couple of hours and that's when everyone starts posting!? My sense of timing sucks

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 04:55

It's okay, Eratas, that's how I feel every time I log-on here.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:00

@ Box - Still sucks though

Only reason I went to sleep is because no one here was posting

@ Zero - I posted a re-hash of Irish's epilogue on 426. Please tell me if it's okay or not so I know whether I can start on the first part of chapter 5.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-20, 05:01

At least you guys don't have to fight to get modem privilege.

Just read the improved draft, Irish POV is so minimalistic isn't it, at least every single words of him are plot important.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:03

@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero

Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?

Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-20, 05:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero

Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?

Hmm, I thought you said it itself?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?

There's only one modem in the house, one steam powered PC without ethernet card and one high end laptop, do the math.

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 05:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero

Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic?

Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"?

Well if you must know, Vicky is a guerrilla ace trained since he was a zygote, he's been fighting giant watermelon mechas on fire, blind-folded, underwater, in space for 1312342 centuries now, fighting for the sole purpose of attaining modern conveniences, I hope that clears all your doubts.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:10

@ Detective - Yes. Yes it does.

@ Zero - Now I remember

Sorry, I'm still groggy from waking up:P Anyway, is there anything I can do to improve it? I feel something's off for some reason.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-20, 05:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Now I remember

Sorry, I'm still groggy from waking up:P Anyway, is there anything I can do to improve it? I feel something's off for some reason.

I dunno, maybe TOO simplistic would leave a bitter taste with reader. Maybe you can make Kyuukai and Ichika at similar detail... except as canon indicates Ichika's minds and monologue tend to wander into random topic (such as talking about how he love Japanese food when he saw Houki for some reason....

).

Irish is a recon/ assassin type guy, and while he wouldn't bother to remember people's physical appearance, he MIGHT pay a lot of attention to the environment itself.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:20

@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that.

Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-20, 05:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that.

I actually wonder IF Ichika isn't talkative enough in Sacred Twins.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that?

EXACTLY, if he paid attention to people, it's either

1. Analyzing if they're allies or foe.
2. Whether they're dangerous or not.
3. Anything else that's slightly more trivial.

2011-11-20, 02:44	Link #8541
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Episode 4 is...OUT!!!!????? __________________

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MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Yeah, Saintess, Spear and I watched it at AFA11. Shit was awesome. That said, stop trying to kill Cecilia. You're only making me want to feature her more. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-20, 03:11	Link #8543
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	I admit, it took so long to come out I forgot what was going on, Cecilia always seems to be the butt of those eh? __________________

2011-11-20, 03:18	Link #8544
wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	Well, my first chapter had someone trying to kidnap Charu, so killing Cecillia wouln't be much of a stretch, would it...?? __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

2011-11-20, 03:22	Link #8545
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	I'm actually not afraid to give her a bigger role in Vandam. After all, the initial plan did call for Houki and Cecilia to appear. I later reduced it in case I caused a canon paradox. But perhaps I should have someone worthy of being called a Representative Candidate do a little more... Houki still gets pranked by Tabane. But in a good way. Laura remains a cameo however. The 'villainous plot' scene I have for her is too cheesy to pass up. I'll just face-drop Charlotte, Ichika and Lingyin for completeness. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-20, 03:23	Link #8546
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Oh... Goddamn it... Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 4 Preview: Uh, yeah, right... Ch. 4 has been pushed back, damn it...

2011-11-20, 03:55	Link #8547
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Chinatown pretty stale today so I got back earlier than I thought I would... Also Jak, writer's jam I suppose? __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2011-11-20, 04:26	Link #8549
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	I see... Well, I have my times too. Back to typing~! __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2011-11-20, 04:49	Link #8550
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I go to sleep for a couple of hours and that's when everyone starts posting!? My sense of timing sucks __________________

2011-11-20, 04:55	Link #8551
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	It's okay, Eratas, that's how I feel every time I log-on here. __________________

2011-11-20, 05:00	Link #8552
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Box - Still sucks though Only reason I went to sleep is because no one here was posting @ Zero - I posted a re-hash of Irish's epilogue on 426. Please tell me if it's okay or not so I know whether I can start on the first part of chapter 5. __________________

2011-11-20, 05:01	Link #8553
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	At least you guys don't have to fight to get modem privilege. Just read the improved draft, Irish POV is so minimalistic isn't it, at least every single words of him are plot important. __________________

2011-11-20, 05:03	Link #8554
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Ninja'd by Zero Anyway, what do you mean minimalistic? Side note - What do you mean "Fight to get modern privelage"? __________________

2011-11-20, 05:10	Link #8557
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Detective - Yes. Yes it does. @ Zero - Now I remember Sorry, I'm still groggy from waking up:P Anyway, is there anything I can do to improve it? I feel something's off for some reason. __________________

2011-11-20, 05:20	Link #8559
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that. Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that? __________________