2012-01-02, 10:02 | Link #16264 | |
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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But he is wise beyond his age, in fact a little self-sacrificing too much. He feels beholden to the Foundation, and has focused most of the efforts on rebuilding his state, while leaving the Foundation government to run his country. And still he feels that he can't be worth anything, not even the girl he aspires to be like (Gin). Until he hires the SHOOTiNG ST@RS to his state as a cover to help flush out separatists intent on disrupting the upcoming Heads of State meeting. But the rest... is another story.
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2012-01-02, 10:05 | Link #16265 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Box - He's more like the grouchy Sensei than a sad one.
@ Meistah - I couldn't help but notice that some of the guys there are older than the girls, Higsby being the biggest example, is the age issue a problem later on?
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2012-01-02, 18:46 | Link #16267 | ||
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Peter gets ribbed a lot by his wingmates for gunning for the cyborg. But the pervert he is does not let it get in the way. I forgot about Hyakuretsu-kun. He's also 14. However, he's about as far removed from combat as anyone, being 'just' an amateur photographer. The way to push Riz's buttons is to see her for who she is, and he does. Quote:
This running thread of "where are they getting all this from?!" flows through all my antagonists, and sets up the appearance of Helios.
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2012-01-02, 21:44 | Link #16268 | |
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Caliphate Commanders Lineup: "Dr. Thrax" : Commander Specializing in Toxins, Poisons, Viruses and Nanomachines. Forces under him carry these deadly payloads and send them against their opponents. "General Juziz" : Commander Specializing in Explosions, Demolitions, Conflagrations and anything that burns or blows up. Thermite Plasma, High Explosives and Napalm are some of the specialties his forces have. "Kassad" : Master of Sneaky. First to employ anti-IS sensor devices in a massive scale, as well as optical cloaking, IR screening, Thermal Blocking and according to rumors, Psychic Blocking via our fourth commander. "'Khaled' the Arms Dealer" : Specializes in combat drones, IS units and Chastity engines. Always looking for people that have a "special organ" to join her ranks- so far she has found none within the Caliphate's huge ranks. Known (by the Caliphate) to be Phantom Task-aligned. Always talks about a "Bureau pursuing her." She also finances the Caliphate's war machine since she joined. So basically the first 3 commanders and the Caliphate itself may be Associated with Helios, with "Khaled" being there by chance. more to come when needed. |
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2012-01-03, 00:03 | Link #16274 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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-_- intended to be as sue as Ginga Bishounen (Star driver).... (He just can't seem to attract the main girls (Sarashiki(s) included).... make it seems like the Haremontic energy theory seems plausible but is actually pure nonsense.
Reason for why the main girls aren't attracted to him: he is a chivalrous pervert with kleptomaniac tendency (for normal girls, his charisma over-write his flaws) and Ichika happen to be a better candidate...being a very good house-husband... His confident-to-a-point-of-pure-arrogant tend annoy other male characters so much to a point where they decide team up against him. A crack story in my head involved him stealing Maya's bra and forcing other Male characters to catch him....or be Chifuyu-nated (Chifuyu + Terminated). First victims being Chifuyu-nated (in the shared universe) are the Sliverback.....Being the noodle incident, nobody know exactly what happen and since the males only heard about that from rumors, the curb-stomp battle is described from: That Dorm-woman(To-aru railgun) being a super-solider, dropping down from nowhere and snapping the neck of the Sliverback to Somebody who can evade gunshot and deflect Gatling canons with IS Katana to Walpurgisnacht(Madoka) level.....capable of surviving everything the Sliverback threw at her without a scratch. Shot-gun, grenade, exploding oil tank, mines, pin-point orbital strike. Either way: their Conclusion: Don't get Chifuyu-nated The problem: He can get away with most something which other male characters can't... such as walking into girl's changing room without being beaten up into pulp.
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2012-01-03, 01:31 | Link #16277 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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I will try.... kind of difficult:
1.)He need to appear as a valid threat to Ichika's harem project.... (which is why he is an Ace) 2.) His role is rival character... (as with all rival characters, they are always better than the heroes.... until the heroes overtake them). which is why I can't make him too much of a joke.... otherwise it undermine his purpose.... Finally: 3) He is meant to be unbearable.....(more satisfaction from beating the crap out of him) Then again, he is still in the draft board.... might modify him as I go along.... but I still need to fulfill the 1) and 2) requirement.... 3) is a bonus though. ==== Note: Yuuya can never be the rival to Ichika....
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