2011-12-09, 00:30
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@ Box - Why not have her just move to another country or lose the position because Kanzashi has a higher aptitude than her?
Side note - Do all rep candidates have training? If so, does that mean former reps like Maya have it too?
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2011-12-09, 00:51
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@ Meistah - Wait, most of the people in your story are rep candidates, right? Where do they get their training from since they try to get the position while they're only students/idols/regular citizens?
@ Box - As long as it's not destiny 
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2011-12-09, 00:59
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2011-12-09, 01:04
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@ Senpai - Made a post after yours in the same page when I went to sleep
 @ Box - What happened to that detective story? Also, please tell me you changed the downer ending  It's a crack fic, a downer ending really doesn't fit that well. Via Dolarassa had a downer ending, and I didn't mind it since it's premise was dark.
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2011-12-09, 01:05
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2011-12-09, 01:19
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@ Eras
As Blitz explained, it's also a transition between familial love > lusty/ romantic love. They're a late bloomer because... umm, they're supposed to have an extended lifespan. Quote:
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2011-12-09, 01:24
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@ Senpai - Is Louise sexy? Honestly, that's probably the biggest factor to getting the effect. That, and being either a tease or badass.
Madoka and Ichika have extended life spans? As in do they live above 100 or something? Side note - Is the "punks attacking a girl in an alley" thing plausible? I'm not sure if there are any people suicidal enough to do that, but I need it for a segment.
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2011-12-09, 01:43
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2011-12-09, 02:11
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The nameless OC is now not so nameless, simply going by "Sasaki", her first name will forever remain unknown though.
I also changed the unit's name to "Nemesis", her second unit will be "Lilith". 
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2011-12-09, 03:41
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Oh yeah! looks like I'm gonna see page 600!
@eratas: I got 2 plots together for Tatenashi in the course of 18 hours but I'm not even sure if either one fits her well since I was trying to imagine her still being with "a maiden's heart". =)) That and I'm only working with archetype templates. My views on her are along the lines of Too-awesome/sexy-for-you, easygoing onee-san, extreme tease(sleazy on the outside pure on the inside.). btw what do you guys think about the name "Sento Asura"? EDIT: HOLY CRAP LAURA IS RICH! |
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2011-12-09, 03:51
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He may not want her, don't mean she don't want him
@zero: pure from what I understand sento = actually means 1000(sen) blades(to) in this case, but I think it can also be misinterpreted as another character/phrase which means "combat" Asura = I think this is more religion than anything because Asura seems to be a recurring word I see in mythology, buddhist or hindu I forgot which. As far as I know Asura is supposed to be the god of war/combat/ferocity |
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2011-12-09, 03:56
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@ Senpai - So either way she's hated, right? I'm hoping Irish gets negative reactions once I make his forced Heel-Face turn since he's meant to bw an anti-hero. Also, for Louise, you have to be careful not to make her win every mind battle since having her outsmart Chifuyu and Tatenashi just screams compensating for something.
Actually, that kind of life span isn't that rare nowadays with medicine and extended againg, doubly so for the world of I.S. I was planning to make a segment like that for Irish and Maya's bonding day. Maya gets harassed and Irish runs in to try and save her.......then proceeds to get mauled Maya then proceeds to kick ass and tells Irish that she just didn't want to hurt them and give them a chance to leave.@ demino_hellsin - She tried to make Ichika massage her while she was wearing no pants and specifically told him to grab her ass. Not only that, she barged into his bathroom while he was naked and wouldn't leave till he allowed her to was his back. I doubt she's got an innocent maidens heart Sento Asura sounds like the God Asura of Wrath.
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