2013-05-21, 01:23 | Link #1061 | ||
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Also, here's the first 'news article' I wrote up. Spoiler for ML: DYRL News Snippet 1:
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2013-05-21, 08:01 | Link #1062 | |
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now how would IRG/UN/US/Russia/EU would react to bullet deflection using PB Blade... hahahahah |
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2013-05-21, 09:43 | Link #1063 | ||
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2013-05-21, 11:15 | Link #1064 | |
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But leaving the conspiracy theories aside for a moment (), I have to say this is a good fic. The only thing that I'm having a hard time swallowing is the time-frame. Too many changes happened too fast, making everything seem implausible. And I'm not just talking about the characters' lives and personalities, but the very setting as well - if I got this right, the Valkyries were introduced roughly about 2 years ago, and in that short space of time they not only became mainstream all over the world but also started to replace the TSF in just about everything (). That is not something you would see happening in at least half a decade.
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2013-05-21, 16:53 | Link #1065 | |
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I'll try and get the replies out of the way since I have something more important I want to publish here. I'll refrain on confirming or denying too much becuase since speculation from the readers makes me smile, but there are a few things I can say without spoiling too much.
Sorry to say, for the sake of Nastassja's story arc she's dead as a doornail. Sorry to all her fans! Quote:
Hopefully I can give some good explanations to some of the changers later. Anyway, this is what I want to show you. It's a teaser for another fic I have in the works (alongside a sorta Yukikaze-TotalEclipse crossover that is at 1000 words). I'm just throwing it out there to see what people think of the concept. Spoiler for Dear Yuuya...:
It's a girl reading letters to her comatose older-half brother while getting run over by the trauma train, repeatedly, while trying to come to grips with the fact she has unresolved 'issues' with him. Like it, hate it, please let me know what you think. If the reception is good, I might consider turning it into a full length fic (won't be too long though). |
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2013-05-21, 16:54 | Link #1066 |
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I don't usually make comments about other people's writing (because ultimately, my opinions are biased and subjective, and I don't really think like fixing that problem unless being locked in a formal debate...), but I have to say, that's bloody well written.
I could have seen the sparkles of love in DYRL. Even if I don't watch Macross. Spoiler for AMT~kun's dreadful prediction corner time:
And now, I have to put in Goose and Sasahar into Comet. Hope you guys like genderswaps~
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2013-05-21, 17:02 | Link #1067 | |
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I'll have to put more focus on the F-35 and the F-18 in the next JH to make up for this. Big Oops. Oh yeah, just to clarify: The Shinden II that the Japs have is a TSF, not a Valkyrie. The IRG don't do Vallkyries. Erm, don't forget to give feedback and comments on "Dear Yuuya..." in my post above. I will give presents (not)! |
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2013-05-21, 23:22 | Link #1070 | |
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2013-05-21, 23:55 | Link #1071 | |
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2013-05-22, 04:35 | Link #1072 | |
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- I like it. Needs a bit more fine-tuning, I think--more on usage of terms, etc.
The one bit I think could be rephrased a bit differently is this: Quote:
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2013-05-22, 05:07 | Link #1073 | ||
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Thanks! I’ll take that into consideration when the actual thing comes out (including the part you pointed out). |
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2013-05-22, 05:13 | Link #1074 |
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Yeah, well, I've decided to get with that Extraverse thing I was talking about.
Because, it's not like I'm jealous of "Dear Yuuya" or anything... It'll probably be a tad bit OOC. Because, Extraverse. Spoiler for So, did you think Extraverse was without drama?:
It's actually going to be a tri-shot. The first part is about Yui trying to deal with- and failing to deal with - her love. The next in Yui confronting Cryska. It also contains me, Sasahar and Goose. As girls. It'll be fun. The last part is the Christmas party and (immoral) happy ending.
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2013-05-22, 05:13 | Link #1075 | |
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2013-05-22, 07:14 | Link #1076 | |
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The entrance of the 'thieving cat character', stage right at the very end didn't help matters. Damn I'm mean. Wait, hold on. I'm going to be in this? Where? Last edited by sasahar17; 2013-05-22 at 07:30. |
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2013-05-22, 08:33 | Link #1078 | |
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Yui-chan no ecchi.
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2013-05-22, 08:44 | Link #1079 |
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I should say that the only reason I even know who Azaka Kokutou is, is because I read TV Tropes.
I had no idea it would fit. It was intended to be sort of sarcastic at times, but that's because it's actually Yui's mind narrating itself, pointing out the things that Yui herself would rather keep hidden. Yeah, Yui is a naughty, naughty girl, but then again, it's because she feels so strongly about Yuuya. As for me, Goose and Sasa, we come up next chapter when the narration describes the kind of women Yuuya knows. Yui is convinced that my char is positively insane, and bi, since I have Goose and Ikaruga and Inia wrapped around my fingers. Also, we hang out together and cause colossal damage. There's a reason Latorova will never hold any more barbecues. On serious note, the Cryska bit actually took me a bit to write (it's halfway done now), because it's less about hate, and the sheer despair that Yui feels when she meets her. -- Yeah, I read that fic. As far as Takeru-centric, it feels really good. I hope the writer can keep it up.
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