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2008-07-17, 02:08 | Link #2782 |
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Reminds me of some debates I've heard about D&D sources of powers. To use 4E examples, since I have the book right in front of me (as opposed to Where The Hell Did It Go 3.5E): Wizards have Scorching Burst, while Clerics use Avenging Flame. One uses Arcane while the other uses Divine, but the net result is still lots of fire damage.
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2008-07-17, 02:21 | Link #2783 | |
Sleep beneath the flowers
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I thought they passed him during sometime between A's and StrikerS And I have to disagree slightly. The "main character" of a timeline doesn't need to be up there with the main characters. Since by that reasoning I have to make Rune stronger since she's the "main character" of my Arc-en-Ciel timeline... But she's certainly not. She has strengths yes but she isn't anywhere experienced enough to defeat any of the Aces (She can't even beat Signum) - at least not without potentially killing herself and kind of defeating the purpose. Really I think the only thing a "main character" needs is it needs to be well... Kind of center. It should be ideally told from their point of view or experiences (most of the time). They don't need to be up in the strength of canon characters to get that "title".
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2008-07-17, 02:47 | Link #2784 | ||
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Now I've never read Arc-en-Ciel, but I'm going to take a guess that there are at least a few enemies in your fic that your character can handle on her own, right? The thing is that Comacanon is based strongly on Nanoha canon with a lot of extras thrown in, and there aren't all that many enemies in the canon timeline that anything short of an Ace can deal with. Fate Testarossa? Chrono could've taken her and so could Nanoha by season's end, but not your typical B-rank grunt. How about the Wolkenritter? Nope, too strong even for the Aces at first. The Book of Darkness? You're kidding, right? And Comacanon-specific enemies aren't much better. A partially-unsealed Evangeline is going to pose big problems for everyone who crosses her, never mind what Fate Averruncus and Cyphus Kane can do without even trying too hard. None of those three enemies could be handled by anything less than an Ace, and to top this all off, there's an overarching plot element I'm considering where, when Cyphus shows up in the A's climax to reclaim the Book of Darkness's data from Rein #1, there's a good chance that he'll take the Wolkenritter with him. In canon, their core programs were transferred into Schwertkreuz before Rein passed on (I think....), but she doesn't have the opportunity to do that here, so the Wolks wind up serving a new master with no memories of Hayate (who is devastated by her inability to protect them and hurls herself into Training From Hell with Evangeline that prevents her from becoming a glass cannon). Or more likely there's a backup data file in Rein's data core which could restore their memories, leading to an inevitable Wolks vs Hayate "I Know You're In There Somewhere" match at some point in the future. Anyways, the point is that Alex is equal to the Aces because he has to be equal to the Aces. If he's too much weaker he'll just be an ineffectual tagalong who doesn't accomplish anything, and that's no fun to write.
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2008-07-17, 03:44 | Link #2785 | |
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My Tais is essentially rather useless but he is fun to write (at least when I used to write, no inspiration now). Some people (I hope) find him fun as well with all the wacky hijinks he gets into. You don't have to powerful to have a good time writing your characters. Think about it. |
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2008-07-17, 04:18 | Link #2787 | |
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But Kanka really isn't as powerfull as you make it out to be, its just that the only users we've seen are just freakishly powerfull. will reply to other stuff later, I've been drafted to help out DTPing a large amount of documents. -_- needless to say, making a main character is no crime, and making them on par with the Aces isn't either (hell, its what I do on a constant basis) but you must remember to resist the urge to have your OC solve all the problems. |
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2008-07-17, 05:38 | Link #2788 |
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I'm on fire, so I continued...
Spoiler for 2lt. Kha shovon Touareg:
Basically, I took the heaps of complaints, rolled them up and smoked them. Most surprisingly though, in trying to avoid all the pitfalls of Sueism, and running from out-of-universe Khrack by following the rules of real life, I ended up with a romance storyline! And for those who catch what I'm doing, Creed is awesome. Do note that I don't really have much plans with this Kha, just attempting to build him again, then revisiting him periodically when I dream up something or spot a mistake. However, you guys know how careless I can be in thought... So any trouble so far? Errata: It may look like I broke canon with the TSAB Mage Academy, but I swear everything fits. It's why I said Fate went to a part-time course, and even Kha as a part-timer hardly sees her, which tells of how much time she spends on Earth. I wonder if I broke something else by accident... Please leave any comments here I'll respond to them when I return. I'll also update the errata.
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And on the topic of my own storyline... I suppose its tough to say. Varistans aren't what you consider "powerful" individually. It's if there happens to be a battleship in orbit or something to glass you and the surrounding area... Although a Varistan is also strong enough to crack your neck - but no mage is gonna let that happen easily so I digress. Also I need to point out this ONE line: Quote:
When you make a OC, as pointed out a lot, it's always tricky when they start reaching CC-level strength or beyond. It's not impossible (As Keroko has stated) it'll just cause everyone to scrutinize it that much more. And if I make no sense blame that fact I just woke up
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2008-07-17, 10:37 | Link #2790 |
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With regards to OCs and stuff, I would like to point out something:
As a charecter, as an entity that I have molded and created, Franz is rather dear to me. I talk about him alot. As much as Comar talks about Alex, actually. I can't help it. It's because I created him and I like him. And yet Franz has been one of the most well-received OCs in Cadia. Consider. ....basically I'd post more but I'm tired and have been standing up for hours. And even when I get home I get no rest, since I gotta stand for hours behind my dad and help him with wordpress, blind leading the blind. @Shou: I freely admit I'm not as impressive as I was. Haxxbusting ATC, the emergence of Comar, debating with "Professor" ark and my grandmother's death have apparently rubbed away most of my niceness. I'll even honestly admit that I don't care much for your work... ... ... ... ...except the My Name is Tais. Dude. Seriously. Forget everything. Tais is gold. Pure gold. MOAR TAIS YUI HIJINKS! Besides, if you don't continue wrtiting Tais Yui Hijinks, when are we going to get to Tsuzuki making a human body for Cortana so that she can do battle with Master Chief's fangirls?!
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2008-07-17, 11:39 | Link #2792 | |
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Also gave me an idea for a familiar OC *warps away*
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2008-07-17, 11:44 | Link #2793 |
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PF has just sent me a rather eye-opening IRC conversation, so I'll have to respond to these posts later, once I've fully digested everything that was said about me and come up with some responses. For those who were involved in said conversation... thank you for at least being honest, even if you were being honest about me behind my back. I assure you that there are no hard feelings on this end.
It's... interesting and irritating to know that I'm still pissing people off with my modus operandi despite all the steps I thought I'd taken; apparently I still have that much more to learn before I become worthy of calling myself an Outer Cadian. More to be said, but I'm not sure how to say it. Be back in a while.
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2008-07-17, 12:47 | Link #2794 | |
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2008-07-17, 13:53 | Link #2795 |
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Okay, I’m back.
Now problem #1 as presented to me in the IRC discussion was the way I present my characters. I’m still not entirely clear on what tshouryuu and Sheba mean by my presentation but I’m guessing it has something to do with how I try to hash out details on Outer Cadia before I do anything with them. My response to them is thus: what do you want me to do, crank out a fully-developed idea that gets shot down because somebody important didn’t like a critical detail in the character’s background? Problem #2 related to issues raised regarding Comacanon and how I’m fusing Negima and Nanoha together. The general consensus was that I was “ramming them together with a sledgehammer” so to speak, and I disagree. The only part of the series I’ve come across so far that cannot be effectively ported is the setting in which Negima takes place, which simply replaces the Earth of Nanoha canon. Everything that follows afterwards is being merged into Nanoha canon in regards to the consequences of the Magic World Earth being connected to the TSAB, like the Ala Rubra working for the Saint Church to stop the constant warfare in the Magic World and reclaim the last scion of what they believe may be an offshoot of the Belkan Royal Family, namely Asuna. Some of you will probably say that I’m doing this the wrong way, that I should merge Negima smoothly into Nanoha canon. Believe me, I thought about that too and it didn’t work. There are several goals I want to accomplish in Comacanon which are directly tied into the setting as it stands now. 1. Create an epic story branching across all three seasons and tying their respective conflicts together into one massive grand finale which may or may not result in the resurrection of the Belkan Empire several years after StrikerS. 2. De-shaft Hayate and make her one of the Aces proper instead of a nigh-useless glass cannon. 3. Introduce an OC of power similar to the Aces and get him past the haxxbusters, partially just to prove that I can pull off a believable Ace but also to integrate him smoothly into Comacanon the same way Keroko did in Kerocanon. 4. Integrate Suzuka and Arisa into the story as mages in their own right. 5. Work Negima into the series as full-blown crossover instead of a mere port. There’s more but those are the biggest and most important goals I have for Comacanon. Now the problem comes from moving Mahora and putting it somewhere other than on Earth. I had the thought originally to make Mahora into a civilian school on Mid-Childa but that removes it and the characters residing there from all importance in the plot. First, if Mahora is on Mid, then Eva’s on Mid. If Eva’s on Mid, then there’s no reason to bring in Alex to counter her power while Nanoha is still new and inexperienced and thus no basis for Comacanon. Conversely, leaving Mahora on Earth but taking Alex out means that the first time Nanoha meets Eva, Eva will just snap Nanoha’s neck to get her Jewel Seeds, which she’s using to try to break the Infernus Scholasticus curse. As it is, Alex is going to constantly be on the ropes whenever he fights Eva, but this keeps Eva from having too much of an impact on Nanoha’s battles and interactions with Fate, which proceed more or less as normal thanks to Alex’s status as Eva’s personal punching bag. And on that note… no, Tshouryuu, Alex is not going to be a God Mode Sue any more than the other Aces are. He can and will be defeated as often if not more often than the others are. Second, with a magic-less Earth like we have in Nanoha canon, there’s no way that I can see to get Suzuka and Arisa involved in the fun. With all kinds of magical weirdness taking place on Mahora campus grounds, this is much less of an issue when S&A become Negi’s pactio partners. Third, just putting Asuna in and disregarding Mahora and all the other Negima elements entirely would create a pointless crossover that would leave most people (at least, most people on Fukufics, and I tend to trust their word a great deal when it comes to writing fanfiction) wondering “why put her in at all? Why not just make an OC with identical attributes?” Now I could just port every single character of significance into Nanoha and put them all in the Ground Forces or something, but I really wouldn't have the faintest idea of what to do with them all. The Ala Alba might make an interesting Saint Church counterpart to Riot Force Six, but I don't know...
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2008-07-17, 14:33 | Link #2796 |
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I had some plans for a Negima/Nanoha fusionfic myself before I started working on another scifi story, but I may be able to provide some input for Comar's story (many of his ideas I had been thinking of also, and I had an OC that would make Eva look like a spoiled brat ).
A good fusion should blend the canons seemlessly, of which the devil is in the details. Arisa and Suzuka could attend Mahora's magic school to assist them in magical training, and the Earth magic education system(s) can be considered complimentary to Mid-childa and Belka arts in their instructional capacity. The Magic World's Great War could be considered one of the TSABs big peacekeeping efforts, assisted by talented third-party magic groups such as Ala Rubra. I can come up with some more ideas if need be. One thing about strength in a story, it should be treated as a plot moving element first, it in itself does not make or break a story's quality. Just look at Star Wars or the Culture series by Ian Banks to see how ultra-power is a means to an end for their storyverse. |
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2008-07-17, 18:09 | Link #2798 |
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@.@ well here's the crack that's been boiling in the IRC (both the FFC and the OCC. The ideas came from everyone who was there really. Tempest, I think, came up with the original idea, which proceeded to get bounced around, with apologies to everyone featured .
Monty Khrack and The Holy Flail Spoiler for Here it is:
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